||Abhi Nikki Writing Challenge 2|| - Page 25

Here is my attempt at the writing challenge. I had been thinking about this story since they showed this mystery around Abhi and his behavior but never got to actually work on this. I can't promise if I can complete this before the deadline but I am sure going to try.

~*~ Looking through the glass ~*~

Continues after this scene:

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=q6IJYOvtyho

Part 1

So there was something secret and mysterious about this man. Niki thought she always knew. Now she really needs to find exactly what it is and make this man suffer. What does he think of himself, gloating all the time? And why god? Why does he have to be always correct giving him even more opportunities to brag about how right he is and how irresponsible she is.

Frustrated and determined to look for Abhimanyu's past, Niki goes to check on the critical patient that supposedly Abhimanyu just saved.

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As Abhimanyu fiddled with the pen resting his head in the chair and leaning back, he thought about what just happened. He was almost going to open his whole life in front of Dr. Nikita. She was just intern and nobody to him. He got angrier thinking about how she provoked him into talking about the life changing event he so carefully put behind. Now that he thought about it, he got even angrier... Not with Dr. Nikita but with himself. He can't let his guards down and atleast not for that irresponsible, careless intern.

Shaking his head and deciding to lock that secret deeper into his heart he opened his eyes and started working on the presentation he was to give to the delegates coming from London.

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Part 2

Aww Priyanka !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1 , me super duper likes !!!!!!!!!!!!!! do continue soon .

Well done Priyanka 👏...Nice start and quite mysterious...
Glad to see another entry here... Hope k baaki k participants b ab jaagenge aur update karenge😃...

Pri!!! YAYYY a new participant!

Thanks a lot girls.. I am really going to try write next part later today. Recently i rewatched all AN scenes in order and it seems to have refreshed my memory as to why loved them so much :) So caught up in new fever to write something :) I am also making a VM (not related to any of the FFs i am writing) but its fun..

Pri ur ff looks quiet promoising , do write the whole draft/basic story in one go ... as ur still in AN wonderland . !!

amazing start priyanka cont soon

Part 1

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Part 2

She sat with coffee in the cafe and thought about Armaan.. She was helpless; nothing she did or could do was helping him. Dr. Shashank was not ready to listen not ready to see the love Armaan and Ridhima shared.

Dr. Nikita, you are here in your dream land and there a patient is suffering. Can't you even answer to the page?

She looks absently at him still Armaan and his problems on her mind and then quickly snaps out of it after seeing angry Abhimanyu standing in front of her. She wished she could smash him like those angry birds. She wondered what it would take to make Angry Modi version of it instead. She could play it every day. She smiled at the thought but it faded again as she saw him getting angrier. Looking at her page and then realizing her mistake she said

Dr. Modi, sorry I didn't notice it earlier, I will go right away.

She was about to go but he stopped her.

Dr. Nikita, this is limit, how can you be so careless. The patient once again had attack of breathing trouble and here you are in your own sweet dreams. Anyways I have attended him and changed his dosage to 100mg instead of 50mg that helped him.

Now this angered her even further.

Why can't he understand that I am a person and I can make mistakes?

As if he could hear what's in her mind he said

Mistakes, Dr. Nikita, are tolerable only when one learns from them and not repeats it.

She gave him angry look.

He was correct, she thought. She had to be more responsible but why does this guy had to catch her every mistake? It's as if he is waiting for her to make mistake and shout at her.

Sorry. I won't let that happen again.

It was painful to say sorry especially to him. And then seeing him leave after giving her look that almost cried out loud it was impossible made her angrier and frustrated.

She had almost forgotten about her mission Modi Breaking in all the patients rush she had to attend since afternoon and then these Armaan's never ending problems. But now she had to work that on priority.

Duty hours were almost over so I should make some progress after that.

As she walked to the emergency ward, she thought Sanjivani Employee records would be good start. Deciding to sneak in the room later she entered emergency ward to see if the patient, once again saved by Modi, was feeling better.

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Part 3

Khus , pls put my name for beta reader.

Pri, you have a way of building up suspense in the most subtle of ways...and I'm so glad you have the AN virus again so you'll keep updating at this speed, hopefully.