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Have a good weekend..read the future track for Geet ..as Season 2...if you trust my passion and vision for Maaneet and Drashmeet.
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Episode 157:

Scene 1:Maan remembers Geet and finds Maansi's way of saying yes very similar to Geet where she nods her head and says yes..Maan smiles as he feels good and instead of getting into memories and getting depressed..he holds Maansi's hand and brings her to the center stage...( Maahi in the background as Maan holds Maansi's hand and Maansi feels it is dream come..true..Maansi keeps staring at Maan with a smile and and a still face...)

sScene 2: Maan finds Maansi in her dreams..he brings Maansi back from the wonderland and asks her to concentrate as it was the last time he was going to help her out...Maansi feels excited and agrees to Maan as if she was a student and Maan was her teacher...

Scene 3: Maahi moment where Maansi irritates and makes Maan furious as she enjoys Maan's proximity and the sensous feelings when Maan touches her to teach steps of yoga...instead of actually learning

the steps..Maansi fumbles and makes mistakes making Maan scold her..the scene beginds with some asana related to breathing..where Maansi breathes faster than what Maan taught her...

Maan: Maansi tumhein samaz nahi aata mein kaise kar raha hu

Maansi: Ab ek baar mein koi kaiseseekh sakta hai

Maan: Tumhari jagah koi baccha hota toh woh ab tak seekh kar dusron ko seekha raha hota..

Maansi: How mean...agar aapko mujhe seekhana kam aur insult jyada karni hai toh mujhe nahi seekhna aapse..

Maansi turns her face and later realises what did she said...knowing Maan..he wud not take this nonsense from her...she closes her eyes as she hopes Maan doesnt take it seriously...

Maan over here instead of getting angry...since he feels Geet in Maansi ..he does not react..rather he calms down and comes close to Maansi to apologise and pacify things..

Maan: Accha baba meri galti thi..ab chalo...tum jitni baar bhi mujhe sikhaane ke liye kahogi mein tumhein sikhaunga..

Maansi's eyes wide open as she was left stunned when Maan did not shout and rather was trying to pacify and calm her down ...

Maansi turns back and smiles and asks Maan

Maansi: Promise...

Maan smles and says..

Maan: Promise...ab chalein..office bhi jaana hai...

Scene 4: 2.30 seconds Maahii moment...where Maan is seriosuly teaching Maansi and Maansi is feeling good and in heaven as her love was soclose to her...

Scene 5: The maahi moment and maahi pitch..rises as Maansi while trying to stand on toes..falls down in arms of Maan...and happens a romantic eye lock where Maan isdown and Maansi on top of Maan...

Scene 6: Maansi gets up..and while moving out...as she feels it was getting too late...Maan holds her hand...and begins Maahi as Maansi feels the special feeling when Maan touches her...Maan picks the jacket...spreads Maansi's arms and then makes her waer the jacket...which she uses for jogging...Maansi looks back at Maan and a romantic sensous...feelings...run through eyes as Maansi quietly moves out and Maan still staring at her..thinking...how he shud differentiate Geet from Maansi and how he shud control himself not to come that close to Maansi..a passioante scene where Maan is thinking about how he shud differentiate and Maansi feeling good after Maan coming that close...but unaware that the feelings were not for her but for Geet...in Maan's heart who was finding it difficult to differentiate and control..himself..


Scene 7: Dadi watches Maan and Maansi and feels a bt worried..after a while she goes to Maan's room to talk to him...Maan tells dadi...she was right and it was indeed difficult becoz he was indeed finding difficult to differentate his feelings...dadi tells Maan but such an attitude was not good for Maansi as she was an independent identity..Maan tells dadi he understands and that is why..now instead of worrying he wud rather live every moment with Maansi..before she comes to know the truth..whatever happens after that was not in his hand...Dadi asks Maan not to complicate things and let Maansi know about geet immediately...Dadi tells Maan she wud do it if he was finding it difficult...Maan tells dadi he wud do it in 2 days time as he was going to be busy and he needs free time and space...Maan promises dadi..he wud say soon say it..

Break:Maansi reaches back home and Maansi's mom informs her that next month it was her Maasi's daughter's wedding..Maansi's cousin's wedding in Poona and her nanaji too was coming and nanaji had seen a guy for Maansi as life partner..and wanted Maansi to meet him during wedding ceremony..Maansi feels irritated and tells her mom she knew she loved Maan..then why cant sheask her dad not to interfere..maansi's mom reminds Maansi that her nana loved her alot and even Maansi feels sorry for her words as even she loved her naan alot and knew how much his nancared for her..Maansi feels helpless nad tells her mom she wont come and not meet anyone unless she comes to know about Maan's feelings and decision..

Break:Maan takes the snap..of Geet where both Maan and Geet are together with Reashu and Maaneet..Dadi sees it and feels Maan was about to reveal the truth..she accompanies Maan to supprt him..

Maan reaches office and sees Maansi in her cabin...

Happens a Maahi moment...as Maan with controlled tears and pain of missing Maansi for ever...with the fear of her reaction after she comes to know about Geet...

Maahi continues as Maansi finds Maan in office and looking at her and this time with the same emotion which had always made her feel uncomfortable...

Episode ends with Maan and Maansi looking at each other across the glass wall...

One screen and two pictures..Maan with a feeling as if he was going to see Maansi or his Geet for one last time and Maansi with a look wondering if Maan was again in memories of Geet...
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Episode 158:

Scene 1; Maan enters Maansi's cabin and Maansi who is thinking about her nana and how she shud cope with this problem finds Maan a bit worried as he enters her cabin with one hand on the frame hidden behind...Maan looks at Maansi with the same pain which made her feel uncomfortable everytime...Maan heads towards Maansi and happens a serious Maahi moment as Maan with fear of loosing Maansi after she comes to know he is married and father to two kids and in the process he wud miss and loose his Geet ( Geet in Maansi)...Maansi too worried feeling bad to see Maan like that moves towards him to ask if he was fine...

Scene 2: Maan and Maansi come close to each other and right infront of each other and just when Maan is about to show his family snap...Maansi gets a call on her landline and Maan looks at the ringing phone and Maansi realises that becoz she gets completely lost in eyes of Maan trying to search the pain and take that pain away...Maansi realises she was lost and moves back and picks up the phone...

Scene 3: Maansi is talking to her new clients with her back...facing Maan...Maan is just staring at Maansi and while he is staring at Maansi who is busy talking...happens a maahii moment as Maan takes his steps back and feels he cant and he cant say it just like that...he takes steps backwards looking at Maansi as Maahi runs high in the background and Maan moves to his cabin just wondering how much releived he felt when Maansi was around him...a scene where Maan looks at Maansi from side angles in a manner as if he was peeping and feeling good while Maansi was infront of him..

Scene 4: Maansi turns back and finds Maan missing and wonders where he had gone...Maansi looks at the side cabin but Maan is not there...Maansi rushes out and looks for Maan here and there but she finds him missing...she asks Adi sir if he had seen Maan...Maansi informs Maan was not supposed to come to office as he was going out for a meeting...Maansi informs adi Maan had come...Adi feels surprised as Maan told him he wont come...Maansi keeps silent...and moves inside her cabin...

Scene 5: Maan and Sulagana in the car where Sulagana finds Maan lost in some thought and tries to be cosi and make Maan feel comfortable with her..but Maan who isnt that open with Sulagana informs her he was fine...Sulagana feels Maan wasnt interested in sharing so she baks off...Maan thinking about Maansi...and flash moments when he found Maansi very similar to Geet...all those moments flash as Maan's inner feeling develops that it was not just about Maansi but the fact that she is very similar to geet in nature as well...he was standing the risk of loosing his Geet yet again...

Scene 6:Maansi in her cabin wondering where Maan had gone while she was talking on the call and his body language said he was about to say something or wanted to share something...Maansi recollects the moments in the morning when Maan was sweet to her and did not scold and Maan teaching her yoga...followed by when Maan came in her cabin...Maansi smiles as she feels if Maan had the same feelings for her like she had for Maan...praying and wondering that it shud be true...Maansi wonders if that was the case then why did Maan not stay back...another thought runs in her mind as Maansi feels it might be Geet's thought as welll and as Maan had said her once that she reminds him of Geet..it was quiet possible some act of hers made Maan remember Geet and may be he was in to share something about Geet...Confused between two possible thoughts...Maansi feels why was it that it was only her who reminded Maan of Geet...

Scene 7: Maansi's doubt getting stronger when she realises Maan behaved like that only with her and she never asked him why only her and why was it that it was only she who reminded Maan of geet...Maansi wonders how she shud ask this to Maan as Maan had strictly asked her not to discuss geet's topic and then she loved him alot to even think of taking a risk...to clear her doubt Maansi decides to find out herself as she had decided earlier but this time with a serious effort to know about Geet...Maansi recolects those moments yet again as she always suspected...

Break: Venu welcomes bakul to her new cabin...a new one with all decorations as he throws a surprise for bakul when he introduces her to her office staff as his wud be love...touched by Venu's open and pure love for her Bakul gets impressed and hugs Venu for the first time...Venu feels good as his love was in his arms...he smiles as everyone come close and wish both of them..venu and bakul move in venu's cabin and bakul thanks venu for the gesture...as she was never made feel so special before...Venu who is always in fun mood cools down and looks up as he thanks God...Bakul asks Venu why he did like that...Venu informs bakul he was happy he was the first man in her life...Bakul informs he was wrong...Venu gets a bit worried and Bakul informs there were many who wanted to make her feel special but she never gave them a chance...and it was only Venu who was lucky enough to get that chance...Venu smiles and so does bakul as both hug each other..

Break: Maansi reaches Maan's place...she goes upstairs and finds dadi missing...the servant informs her dadi was out for some work...Maansi..feels bored as it was late afternoonand Maan wasnt there in the office and she was missing Maan...Maansi finds a new frame with Maan's snap in it in Dadi''s room..she picks that up and feels good looking at Maan's snap...

Maansi hugs the snao as she feels bad whenever Maan was upset and in pain and add to it she was missing Maan...

A scene where Maansi dreams of Maan in her arms...as she hugs the frame and feels Maan was actually there with her...

A scene where Maansi feels Maan was in her arms with his head deep in her neck and Maansi giving Maan her warmth and making him feel she was there for him and she wud never ever leave him alone and Maan will never be alone till the time she was there with him...

Maansi in her dream:

Maansi: Maan mein jab bhi aapko aise dekhti hu..jee karta hai...saari duniya ki nazron se,saarein dukh dard se,aapko kahin dur le jau..jahan aap meri baahon mein ho aur kuch naa aur na ho...buss mera pyaar ho aur uss pyaar ki chaon mein aap...Jahan mein aapko itna pyaar duu ki dard ka namonishaan bhi naa rahein...

Episode ends with one screen and one picture...Maan feeling good in arms of Maansi and Maansi feeling like showering all her love on Maan to make him forget every pain of his..

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Episode 159:

Scene 1:Maansi dreaming about Maan in her arms and hugging his snap...

Maahi in the background...

Maansi: Mere hote hue Maan aap kabhi ateet ki unn yaadon mein akele nahi rahenge...mein aapko unn

yaadon ke saath apni Zindagi mein shaamil karungi...mujhe yakeen hai..mera pyaar..aapko unn yaadon

ke saath haskar jeena sikha dega..aapke chehre par ek hansi ke liye Maansi khudko bhula degi...

Scene 2: Maansi realises she was expressing her feelings to herself while she felt Maan's presence

while hugging Maan's frame..she looks at the frame and feels her love for Maan was gaining passion

and she was now reaching a stage where nothing else but Maan's happiness and his smiling face

mattered her the most..

Scene 3:Maansi for a while thinks about Geet and feels it was a great oppurtunity to find out

something about Geet..as no one was there in house..Maansi gets up and reaches Maan's room and

enters his room and begins a background music to add some thrill...

Scene 4;Dadi,Adi and Pinky in offfice..thinking about their plan...a scene in

flashback...where..dadi and adi decide to make Maan himself feel why it was difficult to ignore

Maansi and as a part of their plan they motivated Maan to tell her truth so that he realises what

dadi adi and pinky meant and felt when they motivated Maansi to come close to maan despite knowing

he was married..

Scene 5:All important scene justifying behaviour of Maan and others..

Dadi:Maan bilkul waisa hi kar rahein hai jaisa humne socha tha.

Adi: haan dadimaa..aur mujhe poora yakeen hai Maan Sir kabhi Maansi ko Geet ke baare mein nahi bataa

payenge..unhein Geet ko dubara khone ka darr aisa karne se roklega.
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Pinky: Bilkul theek Maansi toh bilkul apni Geet hai aur phir utni hi pyaari..Pinky with her cute sad

face..lekin sach toh yehi haina ki Maansi Get nahi koi aur hai aur uski apni ek pehchaan hai,dadi

maa baat toh wahi ke wahi hai..hum jo kar rahe hai woh galat toh hai lekin kisi aache kaam ke liye..

Dadi: Galat kiya ya sahi yeh toh Maansi hii decide karegi..agar unhein yeh dhoka laga toh hum sab

gunhe gaar honge aur agar woh such mooch Maan se pyaar karti hai toh unhein yeh kabhi galat nahi

lagega..aur shayad woh Maan aur hamari majboori samajh jayee..

Adi: Haan dadimaa aur sach toh yeh hai ki agar Maansi agar sirf Geet jaisi dikhti aur uska nature

galat hota toh hum shayad usse Maan sir ke saamne kabhi aane nahi dete..

Dadi: Bilkul theek kaha..Maansi ke saath rehkar aisa lagta hai aur vishwas hota hai ki woh Maan aur

unki zimmedariyon ko sambhal lengi aur yeh sirf ittefaq nahi ho sakta..ki Maansi Maan ke saamne

aagayi..Maan ke saath jo hua woh bahut jyada galat tha..ek Geet hi thi jo unhein jeena sikha

paayi..aur Geet ke baad shayad Maansi...

Pinky: Lekin hum aisa kya kar sakte hai ki Maansi Maan sir se kabhi dur na jaaye aur woh unki

zindagi mein Geet ki jagah lele..

Dadi:Karna toh Maan ko hai...humein toh uss pal ke liye tayaar rehna hai jab Maansi ko Maan ke aeet

ke baarein mein patah chalega..

Pinky: Matlab dadi maa..?

Dadi: Maan jitna jyada waqt lagayenge..Maansi utni hi unke kareeb hogi aur Maan ke liye utna hi

mushkil..kyuki jo Maan ke saath ho raha hai woh ek karishma hai..kudrat ka..aur baat agar sirf

Maansi ki hoti toh Maan shayad ab tak Geet ke baare mein keh chuke hote...

Baat yaha Geet ki hai...Maan Geet ko bahut miss karte hai..aur Maansi mein Geet jaisi woh saari

khubiyaa hai..aur kuch hadd tak unki harkatein bhi..jo Maan ko kabhi bhi aisa kuch bhi karne se

rokenge jo unhein apni Geet se ek baar phir dur karde..

Scene 6:

Maan thinking about Maansi..and how and when he shud tell Maansi about Geet..Maan talking to himself

as he plans how he shud say and where he shud take Maansi so that he can express his feelings and

also make sure he can contrl the situation...While Maan is thinking about it..his fear of loosing

Maansi takes over his senses as Maan feels his mind said he shud say it and heart says he shud not

becoz Maansi did mattered alot to him even though just becoz of geet which was selfish indeed from

Maan...poor Maan caught in a dilemma and somewhere down the corner in his heart..hoping for Maansi

to understand him and his feelings..

Break:

Adi;Toh aapko lagta hai Maan Sir..apne dil ki baat Maansi se keh paayenge..

Dadi: unke paas aur koi option bhi nahi hai..ab tak woh iss darr se ki kahi Maansi unse dur naa

hojaaye...Geet ki sacchayi..chupa rahe the..auryahi darr ab unhein Maansi ka dil jitne aur unke

kareeb aane par majboor karega..taaki woh Maansi ko yeh ehsaas dila paaye ki unki kyaehmiyat hai aur

tab shayad Maan itni himmat juta paaye aur Maansi ko yeh ehsaas dila paaye ki woh unse kitna pyaar

karte hai.

Pinky: Aur kyu karte hai? kahin Maansi Maan sir ko galat na samjhe..

Dadi:Yeh bhi Maansi par depend karta hai..agar woh Maan ko samajh paayii apne pyaar ko samajh paayii

toh unhein yeh bhi samaj aajayega ki Maan Geet se kitna pyaar karte hai..bilkul ussi tarah..jaise

Maansi Maan se pyaar karti hai..yeh ehsaas kaafi hai Maansi ko yeh samajhne ke liye..ki Geet ko

bhulapana Maan ke liye kitna mushkil hai..aur phir Maansi ka unke saamne iss tarah aajana unka Geet

sa hona...Maan ko waqt toh lagega na..

Yeh pariksha hai Maansi ke pyaar ki,kyuki khudd bhulakar..woh aisa kuch karengi jo shayad hi kisi ne

kiya ho...ab sab kuch depend karta hai Maansi par ki woh kaise react karengi jab unhein Maan ke

ateet aur unka Maan ke jazbaaton ke saath jo rishta hai uske baarein mein patah chalega..jab unhein

Geet ke aur unka Geet se jo rishta hai uske baare mein patah chalega..

Break: Maansi enters Maan's room and begins the thrill where Maansi searches for some snap of Geet..

Poor Maansi the only frame outside is with Maan which he had taken to show her...Maansi still

searches for the snap...and finds a room just adjacent to Maan's room locked..while all other rooms

were open that was the only room locked..

Maansi wonders if there was something hidden in that room...she tries to search for the keys...

Maan over here...hoping that when he reveals the truth Maansi understands it and Maansi over here

finds the keys to the locked room in one of the drowers...

Episode ends with Maan hoping Maansi understands him and Maansi holding the keys and wondering if

one of the keys was for the locked room..

One screen two pictures..respective emotions..
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Episode 160:

Scene 1:Maansi thinking about the key to the locked room...and feels she might find something..she

rushes to the room...and tries to open it but realises soon that the keys were not for the locked

door...

Scene 2: Maansi goes back to Maan's room to keep the keys back in the same place and sits for a

while thinking how and from where she wud get to know about Geet...

Scene 3: Dadi comes up and finds Maansi sitting in Maan's room thinking something..She calls

Maansi..Maansi gets afraid as she was not supposed to be in Maan's room and apologises to dadi..and

informs she was searching for Maan and then...Maansi is stopped as dadi smiles and asks her not to

worry as she was ok with it...dadi coes clsoe to Maansi and asks her when did she leave office she

was looking for her in the office..Maansi informs she came back home thinking dadi wud be there and

Maan wasnt there in office..dadi realises Maansi was a bit worried since Maan was tense and she was

missing Maan..dadi tells Maansi to relax and assures Maan wud be fine...Maansi reacts and wonders

how dadi caught her feeling but dadi exprerienced enough confirms Maansi was indeed worrying about

Maan being tensed..Maansi lets dadi know Maan waned to say something and left without saying..and

she was worried if he was fine...dadi's lines

Dadi: Ab iske aage jo hoga aache ke liye hoga aur aap usse apne liye aur Maan ke liye kaise aachha

karti hai yeh toh aap par depend karta hai..

A big indirect hint by dadi confusing Maansi..

Maansi: Mein samjhi nahi dadi..

Dadi: Kya aap jaanti hai...Maan aapko kitni aachi dost maante hai...ap Maan ke bahut kareeb hai..aur

sirf aap hi hai..jo Maan ke itne kareeb hai.jo Maan ko khush rakh sakti hai..isiliye...aage jo hoga

aacha hoga..kyuki Maan khush hai..

Maansi feels good after learning from dadi how close she was for Maan...Maansi's smile and her

happiness is felt by dadi but she says nothing more...Maansi feels pumped up and decides not to

interfere more in hope of searching anything about Geet and upsetting Maan...if Maan wanted to he

wud tell her about Geet..or else she wth her love wud make him feel comfortable enough to share

whatever he had in his mind..

Scene 4: Maansi gets up and looks in a hurry..dadi confirms where she was heading for...Maansi

informs dadi she owed something to Maan and wanted to pay back..

Now dadi is left confused as to what Maansi was thinking...and beore she cud stop her Maansi rushes

back as itis late evening and she has to go back and relax and then do alot of work..

Scene 5: Maan reaches back home late night...Maan in deep thought as he was through out the

day...removes snap of Geet and talks to himself as he realises he was feeling the same nervousness

and pain when Geet had left him and he was left with a fear..where his mind said Geet wud never

comeback and his heart said she wud as she loved him alot...

Scene 6: Maan without shirt.practicing his martial arts,,,as he finds way of coping with his

feelings and dilema...as to why he was finding difficult to reveal the truth and why he feared doing

it..and in the process ending up with a guilt of hiding the biggest truth of hislife just becoz he

feared of loosing her forever...a stage where Maan's feelings are hanging between whether he shud

tell Maansi the truth and also a tage where Maan is stuck between a feeling where he is thinking if

he wud do the right thing if he moves on with Maansi..knowing how much he loved Geet even though she

was not around physically..

Song: "Juda hokar bhi tu mujh mein kahi baaki hai" ( Aadat remix song,faster version)

Film: Kalyug..

Description of Maan's feelings and the song...( Special note and request listen to the song to feel

and relate to Maan's feelongs and emotions)

Maan's partial arts stuff begins..with initial alaap in the song takes off ...

One screen and three pictures...

Maan practicing in the center with his emotions exoressed while practicing..on sides of screen

flagging Maan in the center..moments with Geet where Maan is smiling crying and all sweet memories

which make him miss Geet...Maan practicing wud be in colour and memories in flash back...


The wordings begins:

"Juda hokar bhi tu mujh mein kahi baaki hai...Palko mein banke aasu tu chali aati hai"

Maan sees or feels Geet...dressed in white...hair open with sindoor in her maang...hair flying..as

Maan and Geet both feel the pain of bein away from each other..passion pain in eyes of Geet...

Before "Juda hokar bhi tu mujh mein kahi baaki hai...Palko mein banke aasu tu chali aati hai" takes

of again for the second time...

Geet runs towards Maan and hugs him tightly..as if she was granted just few minutes to meet Maan and

then she wud never ever meet him again forget about hugging him again and be in his arms..

( All this in dream or Maan's visual to his feelings where deepdown the heart he wishes Geet some

how returned from heavens back on earth atleast for sometime)

Line: "Kaise inda hu mein zindagi binn tere mein"

Maan looking at Geetholding her face in both hands looking deep in eyes of Geet and geet feeling

Maan's feelings..and how much pain he was going thru without her..

As the line "Kaise zinda hu mein zindagi binn tere mein" takes off..

Line :" Dard hi dard baki raha hai seene mein"

Geet kisses Maan on his heart to give some releif to his pain in the heart...

Line: "Saans lena bhar hi yahan jeena nahi hai"

Geet comes up as if she was Maan's saans or breath...and tries to give soe love to Maan some

relief..

Line: "Ab toh aadat hai mujhko aise jeene mein"

Geet keeps Maan's head deep below neck..

Line: Juda hoke bhi takes off and Maan realises Geet wasnt there and it was his vision his feel but

still he searches for her in hope of finding her somewhere..Maan's worst mental state ever after

Geet dies...( Searching is on during entire musical is running as a filler before next verse)

line;"Saath mere hai tu har pal shab ke andhere mein.."

Maan sees geet sitting on the benchand calling Maan to come close as she opens her arms for Maan..

"Paas mere hai tu har pal ujale savera mein"

Maan smiles as he finally finds his Geet...

Line: "Dil se dhadkan bhuladena aasan nahi hai"

Maan again hugs Geet with his head below the neck and feeling Geet's love and her presence...

Line: "Ab toh aadat hai mujhko aise jeene mein..."

Maan realises again Geet wasnt there and it was his desires which were making him feel her..


Line: Yeh jo yaadein hai...sabhi kaatein hai...hata do inhein mita do inhein...

From this line to the end of the song;

Maan's mind state and what he is thinking will be visualised...

Maan in the center after realising the harsh fact...starts practicing rigorously...

Maan in the center and this time at one end Geet and her memories and on the other side all those

memories with Maansi whch made her look similar to Geet...

A scene showing Drashti as Geet and Drashti as Maansi... and similarities between Maansi and Geet in

Maan's mind making him realise what was making difficult for him to reveal the truth...about Geet to

Maansi...and it was the desire and not fear of Maan...desire of Maan not to miss Geet which he feels

in Maansi again and his inner desire which he either failed to realise or was not ready to accept

that he wanted to be with Maansi for ever...

maan at the end opf the song falls down and comes in dadi...

Break:

Maan and dadi conversation;

Maan: mein usse khona nahi chahta dadi maa..mein ek baar usse kho chuka hu dubara usse khona nahi

chahta.

Dadi; aap maansi ko khona nahi chahte ya geet ko?

Maan moves away without answering as if he wanted to ask himself whom he did not want to miss

again...

Maan goes back to his room...its late night and Maan is still awake looking up in the sky and

thinking something...

he closes his eyes and calls 'Geet'...

Maansi here gets up as if she heard something and Maan had called her...she realises it was 3 am...

break:

Maansi reaches Maan's place for morning yoga and excercise and realises Maan was still

sleeping..worried if he was ok..she rushes to his room...

Maahi in the background as Maansi feels good to finally see Maan sleeping infront of her...she had

seen Maan after 24 hours...and felt happy as if she did not see him since ages...

Maansi moves towards Maan...waves her hand on Maan's head...and kisses him on his forehead..

Maansi feels good to see maan sleeping and calmness on his cute face...she finds Maan sleeping and

hugging a frame...its the frame with geet's snap but the way maan is sleeping it is difficult to

remove it...Maansi tries to but then her attention is diverted by a drop of tear still fresh in

closed eyes of Maan..making Maansi feel bad to see her love still in pain...

She kisses Maan on the drop of tear as if she wud never ever allow any tear to stay in his eyes..

She actually drinks it..and swallows Maan's drop of tear as if she wud swallow all his pain...

Episode ends with Maansi kissing Maan on the drop of tear...

One sceen and one picture...Maansi kissing Maan..and expressing his love and concern for him..


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Episode 161:

Scene 1: Maansi after kissing Maan on the eyedrop finds Maan sleeping on his chest and Geet's snap close to his heart...Maansi tries to remove the frame but relaises Maan might get up and if he finds her in his room he might get badly upset and she did not want him to get upset with her ever...Maansi leaves it and while getting up she once again waves her hand on Maan's face kisses his forehead and moves out...

Scene 2: Dadi finds Maansi coming out of Maan's room and stops her...Maansi informs dadi she was confirming if Maan was fine sinnce he wasnt there to practice...dadi asks Maansi to relax and informs her Maan slept late so may be he wasnt awake..Maansi informs dadi she wud come later on..

Scene 3: Maan gets up and sees snap of Geet and thinks about dadi's question...while he is thinking dadi comes in and informs Maan...Maansi had come to see him...Maan gets worried as Geet's snap was out and she might have seen it...

Scene 4: Dadi and Maan's decisive conversation.

Dadi: Kab tak aap yeh lukha chipi khelte rahenge Maan?

Maan: Mein samjha nahi dadi maa.

Dadi: Humne aapse kal ek sawaal poocha tha aur aaj bhi aap ko usi sawaal ki fikar hai...

Maan: Dadi maa please..

Dadi: Nahi Maan..ab aur nahi.

Maan thinks for a while and then accepts.

Maan: Dadi mein aapse zhooth nahi kahunga...Maansi mein geet nazar aati hai mujhe lekin phir wohi ek sawaal kya Maansi mujhe meri zimmedariyon ke saath apnayegi..kisi bhi kunwari ladki se yeh ummeed rakhna galat hai dadi maa ki woh aise insaan ko apnaye jo shaddi shuda hai aur do baccho ka baap hai.

Dadi: Aap he kehte the na Maan ki kuch faisle kismat karti hai aur kuch ka faisla humein karna hota hai..yeh kismat ka faisla tha ki geet aapse dur hogayi humesha humesha ke liye aur Maansi aapke saamne aagayi,kismat ne apna faisla kar liya hai,aap Maansi ko apne dil ki baat batayenge ya nahi yeh faisla aapka hai,Geet ki sachaayi jaanne ke baad Maansi kya faisla lengi woh unn par chodd dijiye..

Maan: Matlab.

Dadi: Humne pehle bhi aapse kaha tha aur ab bhi kehte hai..yeh aap Maansi par chodd dijiye...pehle aap yeh toh patah karne ki koshish kijiye ki woh aapse kitna pyaar karti hai ...

Maan: Dadi mein jaanta hu woh bahut pyaar karti hai mujhse...uski woh aankhein aur unmein mere liye pyaar takleef aur jazbaat kaafi hai yeh samajhne ke liye...

Dadi: Toh kya aap yeh kehna chahte hai ki yeh jaante hue bhi ki Maansi aapse kitna pyaar karti hai aap Geet ki sacchayi ke darr se dost rehkar aap unhein kisi aur ke saath shaadi kar ke ghar basaate hue dekhna chahte hai aur phir Maan Maansi kab tak aapke saath hogi..jab tak ki unki shaadi nahi ho jaati...

Maan: Toh mujhe kya karna chahiye Dadi maa.

Dadi: Maan aap pyaar karte hai Maansi se...isiliye nahi ki woh Geet si hai..balki isiliye ki woh aapko aur aapke jazbaaton ko bikul usi tarah samajhti hai jaise Geet samjaha karti thi..

A moment of silence as Maan feels dadi was right..

Dadi: Maan be practical...aapko ek saathi ki jarurat hai aur aapka dil Maansi ke liye dhadakta hai..hum aapse yeh nahi kehte ki aap Geet ka pyaar bhool jaiye..lekin aapko yeh nahi bhoolna chahiye ki Geet ab iss duniya mein nahi...hai...aur aap Maansi ko Geet samajhkar pyaar nahi kar sakte..unhein Geet ki nazar se nahi dekh sakte...Maansi aur Geet alag alag hai...

Dadi: yeh aapko decide karna hai...ki aap Maansi ko paana chahte hai ya khona..aur agar meri maane toh Maansi ko Maansi ki tarah dekhne ki koshish kijiye Maan...phir aapko patah chalega ki aap Maansi se kitna pyaar karte hai.. jitni jaldi aap Maansi ko Geet se alag rakhna sikhlenge utna hi aasaan hoga aapke liye yeh decide karna ki aap aage badhna chahte hai ya phir bina koshish kiye jahan hai wahi rehna chahte hai.

Dadi: Maan apne pyaar ko paayiye aur phir aisa nahi hai ki Maansi aapko Geet ki nazar se dekhti hai..woh toh aapse pyaar karti hai unhein toh Geet ke baarein kuch patah bhi nahi.kya aap yeh baat ko ignore kar sakte hai...

Maan: Agar mein zindagi mein aage badhu toh Geet ke liye mera pyaar zootha saabit hoga aur phir sach toh yehi hai ki Maansi ke kareeb mein Geet ki wajah se aaya hu..

Dadi: Kya Maansi se pyaar karke aapka Geet ke liye pyaar kam hojayega ya phir aap yeh samajhte hai ki Geet ki yaadon mein khudd ko takleef pahuncha kar aap apne pyaar ko saabit kar rahein hai...Agar Maansi kalko aapko Geet ki yaadon ke saath apna ti hai toh kya aap unhein Geet ki yaadon ke saath apni zindagi mein shaamil nahi kar sakte..

Maan: Kya Maansi sach much mujhe Geet ki yaadon ke saath apnayegi,aur phir reashu aur maaneet..

Dadi:Apne dil se puchiye maan..agar maansi mein woh gunn nahi hote toh kya mein aaj aapse Maansi ki baat karti aur kya aap unke baare mein iss hadd tak sochte..

Maan: Aap theek keh rahi hai dadi maa..

Dadi: Maan aage badhna hai ya phir jahan hai wahi ruk jana hai yeh aapko decide karna hai,lekin jo bhi decide kijiyega dubara mudkar phir mat sochiyega...

Dadi moves out as Maan is left with a question yet again and this time he had eother to do it or die...

Scene 5: Maan is left with a question which he needs to think for one last time as he wud be breaking barriers and moving faster to win Maansi's heart...

Scene 6:Maansi reaches offices and meets Adi pinky and all while she is passing by..she realises Maan wasnt there in office...she calls up Maan and Maan over here has left his mobile out while he is having bath...

Scene 7: Maansi's call is not picked as she tries again and again...Maan comes out and finds missed calls of Maansi..looks at the mobile and thinks for a while...and doesnt call her back..

Break: Its late afternoon and Maansi sees Maan still not there and calls him up but this time its Sulagana who has Maan's mobile with her while he is giving presentation..seeing Maansi's call she rejects it again and again leaving Maansi misunderstand Maan...

Maan is done with his work and reaches back home and gets a call from Maansi's mother who confirms if Maansi was with Maan...Maan feels surprised Maansi was still not back home..he calls up Maansi who does not respond this time...Maan feels worried and calls up Venu who informs Maansi was not with him..

Break: Maan after confirming with everyone reaches office and finds Maansi still working there...Maan with a angry look moves towards Maansi and asks her why was she still in the office...Maansi does not respond..Maan finds it wierd..he tries to snatch the file and Maansi picks another file...Maan asks Maansi what her problem was...

Maansi tries to move away...and Maan pulls her close to her..just like he does with geet..these days...in real show...

Maansi is very close to Maan in his arms with an eyelock and lips literally kissing each other...Maan looking deep in eyes of Maansi...

Maan: Tumhari problem kya hai?

Maansi: Aap...

Episode ends with Maan and Maansi in each others arms and damn close to excite them and Maansi with controlled tears in her eyes answering to Maan's question...

One screen and one picture..side pose Maan and Maansi and Maan holding Maansi very very close to him..
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👏👏👏👏👏CONGRATS👏👏👏👏

👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏 Vikranth bro... updates...

sooo much bro...
Vikrant bro...
ur the best...
will be waiting for ur next updates...bro...
u deserve a standing ovitation from me bro...

Gayathri...

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