Watch

TEAM

Fan Fictions India Forums

SS : THE STRANGER Part-17 updated- Page 25

First Previous

Page

Next Last

Created

15years

Last reply

15years

Replies

Views

Users

Likes

Frequent Posters

preethia

@preethia

Sparkler

Posted: 15 years ago

#241

loved the update...

arey yeh kya yaar har ek update mein bomb girathi rehthi ho...

Quote

jenny

@ajenn

Rocker

Posted: 15 years ago

#242

love ur tanya... keep updating.. u r super fast at times..
OOh my geet.. she so so innocent n cute.love her too much
seriously dear u r jst building my curiosity afta every updates...😕
btw wat maan found in her password???

Quote

Looks like you are new here. Register for free, learn and contribute.

known

@mitzi11

Inactive

Posted: 15 years ago

#243

first ur queen of suspense

geet so naive & innocent

the maan was asking her

question got the hint

maan is good guy

culprit maybe his a

humantrafficking

let see how yu unfold

the mystery

love it

awesome update

pls cont soonnn

thanks pm

thnak yu so muchhh

Quote

Tanya

@tanya_vi

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 15 years ago

#244

Thanks friends for all the lovely comments!! I know the previous updates made you guys pretty confused,but all your doubts will be cleared through the coming updates..Since I began this as a SS,I'll try to wrap it up as soon as possible😊

Quote

RageOfAnAngel

@RageOfAnAngel

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 15 years ago

#245

Originally posted by: tanya_vi
Thanks friends for all the lovely comments!! I know the previous updates made you guys pretty confused,but all your doubts will be cleared through the coming updates..Since I began this as a SS,I'll try to wrap it up as soon as possible😊

We don't mind if you wanna turn it to a FF 😉

Bottom line don't wind it up fast , unless u r coming back with another story for us 😛

Quote

Tanya

@tanya_vi

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 15 years ago

#246

Part - 5
----------

Geet's Apartment
-----------------------

Her passport confirmed his worst fears..

She was there on a 'Schengen Visa' or a visitor Visa, that granted

her a maximum stay of only up to 90 days. After that if not

extended,she will be deported!!

"Oh! ab samjha!! that was why she kept on saying that she didn't

give any test! does she know about this?? Does she know that

she'll have to go back within few weeks?? No...I don't think she

knows..That bas***d must have lied to her..poor Geet,she

believes that she is here on a permanent basis. Should I tell her??

No..maybe I should wait some more...what if she doesn't believe

me?? What if she gets cross and cuts off our friendship?? No...

I can't let that happen!! She is way too precious for me..."

Lost in his inner turmoil,he didn't hear her...

"Maan??" She shook him.."Kaha kho gaye?? Aisa kya hai mere

passport mein ki aap aise khoor khoor kar dekh rahe hain??"

"Tumhari tasveer!!!"

"Meri tasveer?? achchi lagi??"

"sach kahoon??"

" haan.."

"Tumhari tasveer haina??...ummm...bohot..."

"Bohot??? uff..boliyena Maan..."

"Bohot khaufnaak hai!!!"

"Kyaa??? Maaan, you moron..rukiye,nahin chodoongi main aaj aapko!!"

She chased him all over the house till he gave in and let her hit

him with a cushion to her heart's content!!

********************************************************************************

"Geet..I think I should push off now...Thanks for the dinner dear...bye!!"

"No..don't go now!! Wait for Dev na..please.."

"Nahin baba,phir kabhie..actually,mujhe ek zaroori kaam yaad aa

gaya..toh main jaoo??"

"Theek hai.." she said in a small voice..

She looked vulnerable and lost... Her sad face made his heart

flood with unknown emotions...

Unable to control himself any more,he pulled her into an embrace..

Cupping her chin,he gently tilted her face up..

He brushed his lips gently against hers seeking permission..

She gently pulled back from him...her heart beating wildly in her

chest!!

"Geet??"

She looked into those enchanting eyes ,which were now

smoldering with emotions,she didn't want to acknowledge!!

"Maan please...we have to stay in limits..Let us not do something

that will spoil the magical relationship we share...Please don't take

offense and please don't be embarrassed...because whatever

your are feeling now...let me confess..I feel the same..but let's

accept that it's not right!!"

She might be gullible and naive,but very truthful and righteous...

he thought with a smile...but the real problem was whether he

would be able to control himself and act according to her wishes...

because Maan Singh Khurana had fallen irrevocably and

hopelessly in love with Geet!!

He let out a heavy sigh worried over this strange twist of fate!!!

****************************************************************************

Close to midnight
-----------------------

He gently turned the key in the lock and entered the house stealthily.

This had become a daily routine for him..

He would come home late and find her sleeping peacefully in their bed.

He'd take a shower, eat dinner and sleep next to her..

He liked it this way...less interaction with her means less

heartache for both!!

But now things were slowly changing and he could feel it.

He thought he was immune to her charms,but now he knew better!!!

He could sleep next to her totally in control..but not any more..

Every time she snuggled close in her sleep,he held on to the last

thread of his self control !!

Every time she looked at him with those gorgeous doe eyes, he

felt as though his soul was set on fire..

Every time he saw her coming out of the bath,her hair dripping

wet, he wanted her then and there...

He was affected way more than he cared to admit..

********************************************************************************

He stood looking at his sleeping wife...she was sleeping on the

couch instead of their bed...and that surprised him!

He went over to the dining table..She had cooked his favorite

dishes...He tried to figure out what was special about that day!

Failing in the task,he decided to wake her up and take her to their room.

She looked beautiful like an angel fallen from the skies..and he

couldn't bring himself to wake her up..

He gently scooped her up and carried her to their room..

She snuggled against him murmuring something in her sleep..

He paused and listened to her sweet voice..

"Maan..."

*****************************************************************************

Over to you lovely ladies...don't hesitate to write your opinions please...😳 More will be revealed in the next update..till then keep speculating!! Jugnu Maama ki jai ho!!😆 Love..Tanya😊

Next Part : click here

Edited by tanya_vi - 15 years ago

139

Quote

heermeher

@heermeher

Inactive

Posted: 15 years ago

#247

Maan the end was scary hope he does not start humiliating her

Quote

preethia

@preethia

Sparkler

Posted: 15 years ago

#248

loved the update...

omg she told maan's name now dev might b alarmed...

if he gets to know their friendship...he might hurt her...

pl cont soon

Quote

jasraj123

@jasraj123

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#249

lovely update. oh maan fallen for geet and geet confessed tooo. omg geet calling maan in sleep in front of dev. is that means trouble for geet. is dev going to torture her by not letting her to meet maan