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Posted: 14 years ago


Part - 6
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Geet's Apartment
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"Maan.."

Her lips mouthing another man's name was too much for him to

bear!!

He felt a pain in his heart as if he had been stabbed!!

Controlling his fury, he gently lowered her to the bed and climbed

in next to her.

He lay there..unable to sleep..planning and re planning!!

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Morning
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"Good morning Dev!"

"Good morning sweetie!"

"Main yahan kaise??main toh couch par so rahi thi!"

"Haan,par kyun??"

"Woh,I wanted to talk to you...par pata hi nahi chala kab aankh lag gayi!"

"Achcha, koi baat nahi..ab bolo.."

"Woh kya haina,Dev? I've made a friend here!"

"Friend?? Yeh to bohot achchi baat hai! Par kaun hai woh??"

"Unka naam Maan hai and guess what?? He lives in this complex

only!! He is an architect..Woh India se hai!"

"Very Good!! Well,when will I get to meet this special friend of

yours??"

"What about tonight Dev?? Shall I invite him for dinner?"

"Dinner is fine,I'll come early..Theek hai??"

"Ok,Thank you!"

She rushed off to the kitchen quite unaware of the inferno raging

inside him !!

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Evening
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"Hi Maan, Come in please..."

She turned towards her husband.."Dev,meet my one and only

friend,Maan!"


"Good to see you Maan."

"Same here Dev.."

They shook hands and exchanged pleasantries, for the sake of

the sweet girl before them,who looked pretty happy seeing their

bonding !!

The dinner went well with Geet's constant chatter and the men

teasing her over something or the other..

Dev sat back and watched the unique camaraderie between Geet

and Maan...

They were constantly cracking jokes and were very much at ease

with each other..

"Dev,aap kuch lenge??"

"No,thanks Geet! I'm done."

"Maan, ek paratha aur lijiyena.."

"No,No Geet,I don't want to become a Sumo wrestler like you!!"

"Kya?? Main aur sumo wrestler??"

She gritted her teeth and whacked his hand..

"aaw..ooh..kya hai?? mera haath thodne ka iraada hai kya??

..apna yeh Sunny Deol wala dhai kilo ka haath mujh par mat

chalao,please.."

"Dev dekhiyena..kitna tang karta hai mujhe.."

He plastered a fake smile on his face to show her that he was

really enjoying their silly banter.

In his mind he imagined the pleasure he'd get while

strangulating the cheeky man before him with his own bare

hands!!

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"Geet, come sit here baby..." said Dev pulling her on to his lap.

"you've done so much..Now relax...I'll clear the table and wash up

the dishes!"


Geet was surprised at her husband's rare display of affection!

She smiled at him while Maan choked on his drink!!

"Nahi Dev..It's okay!! aap Maan ko company dijiye..I'll be back in a jiffy!"

"If you insist sweetie..". he pressed his lips on her forehead.

Maan felt his insides boil..He had never felt this jealous

before..suddenly feeling claustrophobic and nauseous,he excused

himself and went to the balcony..He dragged in a deep breath of

the cool air to calm him down...

The devil had managed to rattle him,but he needed to have a tight

leash on his emotions or else he'd end up doing blunders...and

blunders were the last thing he'd want at this stage of his mission!!

********************************************************************************

He helped her in clearing the table..making sure that she'll be

engaged for a while,he walked into the balcony!

"So,Maan Singh Khurana,we meet AGAIN !!!"


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Well ladies, I hope you are happy that Dev didn't harm our dear Geet..Like us,he too loves her a lot! After reading the last sentence,Madhu would want to pull out more of her beautiful hair..but relax honey,I'll try to post the next update as soon as I can!! Got to go now,till then Take Care !!

P.S: ladies,don't forget to leave your comments, please... and...haa,jhoothis are also welcome..😉..love Tanya😊

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Edited by tanya_vi - 14 years ago
ninand thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
ah! a very interesting update.. glad to know Dev is decent enough.. the disguised animosity between the two(mainly regarding Geet) is absolute wicked fun😎...
Do update soon..
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Posted: 14 years ago
so they know each other?????? cont soon dear
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Posted: 14 years ago
Tanya... its getting interesting.
So its confirm even Dev is in love him Geet.
Was he jst paying around wif geet showing his affection when maan was there...
Or he was really showing his affection.
Thou he like geet.. i think he was jst trying to make maan jealous..
D last line... Does tat means Dev knoe maan???
Me really getting excited on d story progress...
update soon... i knoe dis is too much..
but i cant help it... 😉

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Posted: 14 years ago
ohh no...they both know each other...
cliffhanger😡

plz plz plz continue soon...
its getting too grippy to resist...
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome one...Dev and Maan already know each other 😲
and a jealous Maan is always gud to read but Dev loves her too...what is going to happen now?
can't wait for the next one...the suspense is killing me...
tanya_vi thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: ninand

ah! a very interesting update.. glad to know Dev is decent enough.. the disguised animosity between the two(mainly regarding Geet) is absolute wicked fun😎...

Do update soon..



Yaaay!!!Finally,, I did manage to extract a comment from
you !!
😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
loved the update...
so dev has got this feelings now for her...
maan and dev know each other from b4...
wats these guys been upto...
pl tanya jaldi se update kar do i am getting more and more anxious...
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Posted: 14 years ago

u want to give us all haert attack hain na

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: 9n9i9s9h9u9

u want to give us all haert attack hain na



Exactly!!!! That is MY MISSION
😉

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