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Posted: 14 years ago


Part - 3
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Evening
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Geet's Apartment
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"Oh Boy! I'm so tired"..Maan plopped unceremoniously on the couch!

"Oye Mister ,that was supposed to be my dialogue...look at you!!

...Hatta katta gabroo jawan...little bit of shopping kya kiya ...you

are already whining like a little child???? Kuch toh Sharam

kijiye..."


"Hello madam,Look at the amount of shopping you did!!

Bechaara Dev!!!!

Financial consultant se seedha bhikhari banakar chod degi

yeh ladki!!

Khair chodo,I can't help him there..he'll have to endure

all this and more for marrying a paagal like you !!!

Coming back to me...I'm tired because you made me wait for

hours together outside that stupid changing room...

since I couldn't leave you alone,I stayed there without even

drinking a drop of water...

aaah..oooh...I think I'm dehydrated!!!"

"Maan zyaada Natak mat kijiye!!Aapko bada mazaa aa raha hai

na, mera tang kheechkar??"

"Wait!! I'm not finished yet...wahan se yeha tak yeh saara

saaman main uthakar laaya hoon...main...Ok??

Coolie samjh rakha hai mujhe!!"


"Did I ask you to carry all that stuff?? Nahi na??..You wanted to

act chivalrous and I let you..

Anyways,dont worry..aaj ke baad I won't go anywhere with you..

I'm a big girl and can take care of myself!!"


Totally mad at him,she turned to walk away..

He grabbed her wrist and pulled her towards him.

The sudden tug made her lose balance... She fell on top of him.

She put her hands on his chest to create some distance between

them.

As she gasped and struggled to get out of the compromising

position they were in, Maan was totally lost in her..

The softness of her body, the fragrance of her hair,the warmth of

her sweet breath fanning his cheek...transported him to a different
world...

He eyed her slightly-parted lips..they were so inviting that he

longed to kiss her and explore her..

He lifted his hand and she froze..as his amazingly long fingers

tucked a soft strand of hair behind her ear.

He cupped her cheeks and pulled her closer.

She closed her eyes involuntarily.

As he leaned forward to kiss her..."Trrr..iiing..Trrr...iing..."

His mobile rang ,bringing them back to harsh reality!!!

She mumbled something about dinner and ran off into the

kitchen.

Making sure,she was out of ear shot,he answered the call!

"Hallo, Ja?"

(Hello,yes?)

"Ja, ik ben naar haar huis."

(Yes, I am at her house.)

"Nee, haar man is niet hier."

(No,her husband is not here.)

"Ze vertrouwt mij volledig."

(She trusts me completely.)

"Ja. I weet wat te doen."

(Yes, I know what to do.)

"Oke"

(Ok)

Giving a backward glance towards the kitchen,he stealthily

sneaked into Dev's study!

******************************************************************************

The phone call brought him face-to-face with reality, the

reality from which he had slowly drifted away..

He was supposed to use her for his mission,instead he was falling
hard for her,completely forgetting his goal..

In his line of work,tender feelings were considered as weakness...

and... all weak men ended up dead!!

Shaking off the nagging thoughts, he concentrated on the task at

hand!

He methodically searched through the drawers and cabinets,

making sure that nothing was out of place..

None of the drawers were locked...and that surprised him!!

He did a thorough search and was frustrated by the end...

"Nothing??? Am I barking up the wrong tree??"

There was one more almirah left...but that seemed full of finance

related books and journals..

He decided to take a look ,anyway.

As he pulled it open...

"Maan,what are you doing in Dev's study???"

*****************************************************************************

Okay ladies..will update more later...got to go!!😊

Next part : click here
Edited by tanya_vi - 14 years ago
mangona thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
so maan is special agent pooor geet aways get wrong guys anyways owsum update
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Posted: 14 years ago
yeah yeah yeah...can u see me patting my back😆...so Maan did have an ulterior motive...but so sad...i genuinely liked them together...u made me remember Gangster...were Hashmi sang such beautiful lines all to trap her😡...and it was Shiny Ahuja the gangster whom bonded with.
but lovely friendship B/w MAan nd Geet hope it will sustain, and become real in every sense!
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Posted: 14 years ago
ok now i am confuse😕
so dev is not involve ...
it is only maan
i am confused.😕..ahh...ahh😡 ...i hate mystery when i don't know anything about it😆
even when i read mystery book ...first i will read last chapter😆
anyway
thanks for pm
please update soon😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
wowww loved it
but y is maan after dev???
n he is using geet
Edited by hinal_maaneet - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome part...

so maan is after dev...but y??

is he doing something wrong??

or do they want something that he has??

loving the suspense...

maan is falling for her...but in the end...her trust in him will break when she will come to know the truth,...

cant wait for the next part..

update soon...
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Posted: 14 years ago
Good...so Maan is starting to work on his mission finally...what does he want from Dev??waiting to see how he covers up himself before Geet...
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Posted: 14 years ago
great update..
but ohh so much suspense.. maan is after dev.. & dev married geet for a motive..
continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago


Is Maan an undercover agent 😎 He's here to get Dev & the entire gang to their rightful place ❓ ❓ ❓ just a wild guess ... don't mind me , my guesses are usually bad 😆
But Maan's pretense is failing big time with Geet around 😉
Already drooling over her ; let's see how long he can contain himself 😈 😳

Loved it 😃 ...
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Posted: 14 years ago
great part
ahh they almost kissed!!
con't soon

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