Journey Of MaanEet [part11c-pg54]updated[12/4]

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chsweety22

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Posted: 14 years ago

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hello friends...

i wanted to start this fiction story long ago but couldn't align my story in a proper way...now its done...

hope you all like it...rotten eggs tomatoes chappals anything is welcome...😆

here is the prologue

geet bete will you promise me something?

of course dadi anything for you but you calm down and please dont speak anything...you are not allowed to...but she was cut off...

if not now then its never geet...i know i am going to die..

please dadi dont say that..please

geet was crying...eventhough she wasn't her dadi geet shared a very strong bond with her...she felt a part of her being snatched away...

nothing can be done bete...my day has come...

please dadi...she was unable to speak between her sobs...

geet will you please marry maan?

she felt the ground being torn apart...she became mentally and physically mute...how was she supposed to answer this?? she had no idea...

geet bete...struggling with her voice dadi called geet which brought her senses to this transient world...

yes dadi...i will...

with those words dadi passed away with a smile on her face that her grandson will have someone always...

but only geet knew that her life was turned upside down...and she could never ever love someone else...but she had to keep her promise...amidst of all inner turmoil she broke down bitterly seeing the smiling face of dadi...!!!

so friends how is it?

should i continue?

plz leave comments...

thank you all for reading this...!!!!

index below post

Edited by millie_maaneet - 13 years ago

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chsweety22

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Posted: 14 years ago

INDEX

part6-9

part10-16

thank you so much for all the support..thank you one and all...

Edited by millie_maaneet - 13 years ago

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minnie_tweetie

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Posted: 14 years ago

Wow dear its mindblowing...dn think to discontinue it...! Prologue itna interesting hai...continue sooon...!

Or vo daadi's grandson myt be the great MSK...!
Correct me if m wrong so continue soon...!

So nice surprise anyhow for me today...!

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komlika

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Posted: 14 years ago

Awesome ... Continue... Do PM me

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Vibhuti Shah

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Posted: 14 years ago

nice prolgue.

do continue plz.

cant wait for the 1st part.

thx

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chsweety22

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: silkyarora
Wow dear its mindblowing...dn think to discontinue it...! Prologue itna interesting hai...continue sooon...!

Or vo daadi's grandson myt be the great MSK...!
Correct me if m wrong so continue soon...!

So nice surprise anyhow for me today...!

ya you are right

it was savitri devi who died