Fiza'a OS gallery thread 1 - Page 46

Originally posted by: SujaLuvsMayur

wonderful ss Fiza.

just loved it.

bt u knw, i took tooo much time to read this two updates.

u knw, i took almost 30 min to read this two updates :(

poor me :(

bt i love this story.

from first update m too attached with nupur...bt dnt think my family that much conservative ...bt still i love this nupur n her self conficence.

feel sorry for her :(

uski shadi k din hi uska divorce ho gya :(...it was really heart breaking for her. bt i love d way she composed herself n become a strong gal, who going to search for her wajood.

bt whatever mayank did was wrong...usse sirf nupur ki dress dekha, uski family walo ka behaviour nahi?????!!!!!!!!!!

bt airport me nupur mayank se hi takra gayi...hayyy

nw waiting for mayur magic.

bdw,thanks k tune english likh diya...nahi to mera kaya hota!!!!

update soon.

thanks for the pm.

Originally posted by: achoose

u r always welcome my sweetheart..u knw what..am so happy today because today is my sis afsha's(afshafreen of our own indiaforums) birthday..but i culdnt do anything special, i dont know how to make a thread even...

Originally posted by: love.mayurarti

superb update

jst luved nupur...

Hi guys,

Yes im here with the last part ' I hope I came upto ur expectations..n sorry dearest to keep u all waiting for it'plss it's a request '.give a serious look to the epilogue'.

Sorry for giving u shock of nt being the typical fiza '.who most of the time made u smile n enjoy'.but its also necessary to make u have close look to reality of lifes n thn to know n discuse how we can handle such situations''.

Thnks for liking n reading this SS'..

Lov ya

Fiza

CHAPTER: 4

Mayank: nupur hum ap se mila chaty hain

Nupur: hum bhi mayank…..

Mayank: really ….hum intezar kerat gay…..he smiled in surprise…..n one step towards his love

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HE WAS ROAMING AROUND THE HOUSE TO FIGURE OUT WHT EXACTLY HE IS GONNA SAY

Myank: ap ko andaza(imagine) nhi hai is waqt humari kiya haalat hai ….humain ny khabi soch abhi nhi tha k hum khabi kisi k liyan asa mehsoos keray gay…yeah ehassa kitna ajeeb hai….ap bulkul wasay hi hain jasa hum ny soch tha…aj k khayalt(thinking) wali…zindagi mein agay barny wali….humaray kadam se kadam milny wali….na k humain over the top azad khayal aur khud kharz(selfish) samhj ny wali….akhair is mein bora kiya hai..yeah humari zindagi hai …tu is k her fasla kerny ka haq bhi humain hi hai

Nupur: was looking in detail ..each evry clause of the paper….going through every right this paper gave her…to her surprise it was holding not much…..

Wah …bara kaha tha …ap ki anay wli zindagi k shorroat k liyan yeah raqam…is reaqam se tu 1 mehna(mth) chal jay buhat hai…..aur humain tu koi haq hi hasal nhi ….sab khd hi apny pass rekha…..shabash ….ise kaaghaz k ek lafaz( evry word of this paper) ..humain aj jo ehassa day reha hai…woh hum bayan nhi ker saktay…

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Mayank: nupur hum jantay hai humara ap ko yah is tarha bulana ap ko kuch ajeeb laga hoga….hum maafi chaty hain

Nupur: hum khud ap se milna chatay thy

Myank: her words gave him strength to say wht he want to ……..hum ap se…..hum ap se mohabbat kertay hai ….mjhy pata hai apny yeah expect nhi kiya hoga…hum ny bhi apny ap se asa kuch bhi expect nhi kiya tha per….

Nupur: zindagi mein buhat daafa asa hota hai mayank jo hum expect nhi kertay wohi haqeeqat hoti hai…

Mayank: hum yeah nhi khatay k aj se ap humray sath ek nai zindagi k aghaz(start) keray……ap jitna chahin waqt lay lain….bus is rishtay ko ek moqa zaroor dain….plss….humari guzarish hai

I request u to pls give me n ths relation a chance

Nupur: kyun bana na chaty hain humain apna

Mayank: kyun ap bulkily wasay hi jasa hum ny apna humsaafr soch tha…bulkay us se bhi kahin uper

She looked straight in his eyes

Nupr: kya asa kuch hai jo ap huamin bata na chatay hain……

Myank: asa buhat kuch hai….jo hum apko baata na chatay hain…ap apny dil ki eke k bat …eke k dharkan ap se baatna chatay hain ..

(there loadsmore I wanna tell u ….i want to share each n evry word n feeling my heart holds for u)

Nupur: kya ap ki zindagi k koi asa pehlo ….jis se humari vaqfiyaat( know how) zaroori hai…..

Mayank: nupur hum samhj nhi pa rah ap kya poch na chati hain

Nupur: kya ap ki zindagi mein koi tha…..

He grinned

Mayank: ohhh…nhi ap se pehly na ap k bad..humari zindagi mein koi nhi tha..na hai

She smiled…

Nupur: ohhh….lagta hai ap ki yaadashat(weak memory) kamzoor hai

He was surprised at her words…..

Nupur: pechlay saal ki 19 dec ki raat yaad hai….

His whole world started to swing …..h his face turned pale

Nupur: kya hoa …cheray k rung kyun ur gaya…..

Myak: ap kahan kiya chti hain

Nupur wohi jo ap samhj rehain hain……19 dec ke raat ap ki shadi hoi thi…..yaad aya

Mayank: us shdadi ki humaray lliyan koi aahimiyaat nhi( IMPORTANCE)

Nupur: er shayad us larki k lyan hoo…..usi raat ap ny us se us ki her khushi bhi cheeh li

Mayank: hum ny un se koi vaada nhi kiya

Nupur: tu nikah kiya hai ap k lyan …..is din apny us se vaada kiya tha …k ap zindagi bhar us k sath dain ga…..

Mayank: wh larki humary kayal se buhat alag thi

Nupur: kitany saalo se janty thy ap us ko…..aj ap hum se moqa mang rahy hain..ap ny us rishtay ko moqa kyun nhi diya…us jany ki khoshih ki apany…us se pocha zindgai k baray mein kya socti thi woh..us k profile hi kya dekha khabhi…

Mayank: nhi..par ami ny diya ny sab ny jo us k bharay mein bataya

Nupur: kya bataya ap ki ma any ..jo us larki ko insaan bhi nhi manti thi …aur us k tallaq (DIVORCE) k din us ki dossri shadi k mansoobay(PLAN) ban rhai thi…..apny maa k kyahalat janti hain ap…un ko tu larkiyoon k bahar jana bhi PasanD nhi hai…us k degree hi sun ker unhoy us k character kay baray mein kafi khubsoorat kayalat tasawoor ke thy9 SHE SKETCH A DIFFERENT KIND OF SKETCH OF HER WHN SHEUR MMOM HURT HER DEGREE N PROFILE)

He was silent shock n have no answer

Ek second mein us ki zinadgi k fasal kerdiya …khud hi soch ..khudi samhja…k woh ap k laqiq nhi ….ur uth ker pehak diya us ko gajray ki tarha sarrak per

Mayank: hum ny asa nhi kaha tha..bs

Nupur: phir choot….apany apni ami se yeahi kaha tha ..k ap apni zindagi us per zaya nhi kerna chaty…..tu us ki zindagi khatam kerny ka haq kis ny diya ap ko …aur aj….aj kiya kiya apny…agar humain yeah sab kuch nhi pata hota …aur hum ap ka begaam kambool kerlya tay tu( N IF I HAD EXCEPTED UR PROPOASAL THN WHT)…yu humari zindagi ka kya ..hann…us bahrossay( TUST) k kya …ek larki kitna bharoosa ker k …apny maa aur baap ko chor ker …us gahr ko chor ker ap k sath chalti hai ..k kam se kam kuch na milay us ko tahfoos(SECURITY) tu milay…per ap tu ap hai…sahi kaha apny…ap un expected hain…..us k sar se saaya hi cheen liya

Yeah jantay hoay k ek talllq yafat larki k sath kya sallok kiya jata hai phir bhi….

(knowig very well wht kind of treatment a divorced girls get)

Phir

…..ek aur chooot…mohabat lafz nhi hai mayank ahmed khan….ehassa hai ..ibadaat hai….aur hum kisi ki ibaddat kyun kertay hain…is k jawab koi sufi koi faqeer ( the God's lover) nhi day sakta…..ap ko hum mein sirf ek asi larki dekhi jo ab ki check list mein pora utharti hai…..per ap humari soch mein kahin hai ….as ap se kis ny kaha

Mayank: dekhain nupur pls ghusa na hoon…hum ny us larki k sath kuch galat nhi kiya…chatay tu woh raat guzar ker us ko chor tay….hum ny taallaq islyan di kyun hum un ko kabhi khushi nhi day saktay thy

Nupur: oohhh…tu yeah bhi ap k demagh mein tha…us ek sath one night stand…tu apny us ko biwi bhi nhi smahja…..woh islayn k ap ki usi raat ki flight thi …warna ap yeah bhi kertay…..

Mayak: asa kuch nhi hai

Nupur: acha tu shadi kyunki thi…

Jawab hai…..shadi se pehaly kyun nhi bhagy hann…..jawab dooo….KOI JAWAB HAI…..dar pook ho tu ……khud garaz…ghar walo k aur us larki k saman kaun keray …parh mein jay us ki zindagi( with hell to her life)…..khin ati hai humain khud se k khabhi hum n yap k sath kuch wat guzara ( I hate myself even if I think I spended sumtime with u )

Myank: mein sab manta hoo…per mjhy ek moqa day do

Nupur: woh hum nhi day saktay…ap woh haq bhi khoo chukay hai….mayank ahmed khan jis larki ko apny apny laiq nhi samhja …aj us k samny sir chukka ker ap ek moqa mang rahy hain…..api ki woh tallaq yafta biwi hum hain…..is say khaty hain Allah k insaaf( this wht we call Gods voice)

His whole word got stoped at the moment …..he was just dead siting there.. but not tht much tht his mind cant find a way

Mayank: nupur hamin maaf kerdin pls…..is baat k hal hai ….hum haala la kerlay gay….larka mein khuda dekh lo ga …smart hai

(Oki haal lala…is way in islam to re marry a girl whom u have given divorced …three times n have passed the 3 mths period without reconsidering ur decision….in haal lala…..a girl marry an other person n share a married life with him ..thn get divorced ….n thn can re marry the ex.husband…but doing so purpose fully ..is huge Sin……it a compensation to make people realiz tht neither a marriage nor divorces r sum fun)

Nupur" MAYANK…apni had mein rahain…..kya galiss insann hain ap( such a disgusting person ur )….bulkay ap tu insaan bhi nhi…..ap bhol gay ..muslaman mein yeah rasam nhi hoti….zinda bhi jalna…aur phir morda bhi jaldain na…aur apt u raq( ashes) ko bhi bhati( fire ) mein utharny per toolay hain…..

Kya chatay hain ap ..k hum ap k lyan phir se shadi kerain…phir kis k sath hum bestari( selpt with him)….aur phir us ko chor k ap k pass wapas ayy….ap itny azeem insann hain kiya…k hum apny ap ko itna gira layain ap k lyan( are u tht amazing person for whom I shud go this much of pain)

Ap ki oqaa( status)t hai kiya….khud ko samhj kiya rekha hai ap ny…Allah ny humari duain sun li …jo hum ko ap se bacha liya….

Kis ny diya ap ko yeah haq k ap akelay humari zindagi k fasal keray…….

Asay janwar ko tu hum bejaray( cage) mein bh na rekhy apny ghar mein…zindagi mein tu buhat door ki baat hai

Mayank : nupur …

Nupru: kya kahy gay app ab…..jo kahan kerna tha woh kerliya ap ny….khuda k shukar hai k us ny haimn yeah moqa diya k hum ap ko bata sekhy k hum kiya hain aur ap kiya ……

Maafi tu mangan bhi maat( dnt ask forgivness)

Mayank: kya ek paal k lyan bhi ap ny hum se

Nupur: nhi..khabhi nhi…..han shayad ap ki izzat zaroor kertay thy….per woh ap ki haqqeet jan ker mit gai….muhababt tu kiya….nafraat bhi nhi kertay…ap se kisi kism k koi ehass ...koi rishta hum rekhna hi nhi chatay…

Ap ko tu khuda hi smahjay……aur khuda her insaan ko ap se mahfoos rekhy …..

EPILOGUE:

~~Wajood-e-zan se he tasweer-e- kainaat mein rang ~~
~~isi ke dam se hey zindgi ka soz-e-daroon~~~

Mean: thw worlds beauty is within the the presence of a woman…

The beauty lies in a woman….not just merly the physical appearance…but the soul she holds…purpose of writng this story was not to make any 1 of u to hate a realtion ship which the most pure n eternal….but also to respect the personality u hold inside….

One thing tht I thought of celarfying ..is the choice of of my religion….one reason was tht in islam its not allowed to re marry….thts it …secondly I told u before I want to write sumtnhing in urdu…3^rd people who r frm Pakistan will agree with me tht there r too many dramas serials going on n off the air abt haal lala…n how easily a girl agress for it….forgeting wht kind of sin ur r provoking….seems like such a easy task to do soo….

As I had walked through my life, I cma across very few girls who belive in there identity ..who belives in finding a "wajood" of her own…..evry day I found a girl taking merly about …" mein tu bs shadi ker k arm kero gi"…." Mein apni shdi per yeah kero gi:"…." Ab mein ny parh liya bs ap tu shadi kerdo meri"….." lark k job kerna ya apny pero per gahra hoon na fasool hai."…..kya keray gi iss sab ka….

Hearing all this at times a rage appear inside me…its not tht im against marriage..its just tht ..i …have u evr thought of wht as a person ur ….have v evr consider our self as the creator of the world…after God almighty ….its a women whos presence made this world going on….

In the start of the chapter Mona ask y it happens always with women….its because sum how we always allow want people to have pity on us….we our self have so many of this inside us for us…..yaar mein tu ek larki hoon mein kaha yeah kersakti hoon….line itni lambi hai….humary liyan allag kyun nhi hoti…. Hum khud logo ko dawat daytay hain k woh hum per tarass kahy ….yeah bechargi ki zindagi kahin na kahin hum ny khud choice ki hai

Whn we go for a job preference is given to boys…y…cause 80% of us leaves jobs due to unprofessional reason like rishtay nhi aay ga…aur my bf or my fianc doesn't like me going out….or blab la……im not saying do job or earn even if its against ur husband or family believes….dont do so…dodnt spoil ur realtuion but before getting into this relation atleast try to get sumthing on ur CV…wht life holds for u in near future nobody knew tht….atleast sum1 will not suppress u saying he pays for ur living ..u have answer to tht…..

Ek larki ke zindagi sirf is bat per shooro ho ker khatam nhi hojati…k usay apny ap ko asay dhalan(mold) hai ..k kal ko woh kisi aur k ghar mein adjust ker sakay….woh ghar us k apna bhi hai…….yeah ehassa bhi zaroori hai

Us ki zindagi mein jo kuch bhi us ny kiya woh us k "ashal(real) zindagi….k bulkul motabiq(accordance) honi chaiy…….

Its true tht ..a relation wants adjustment …n its also true n u shud b proud of ur strength to scarifies ur need for ur loved ones but nt urself…..

Aj agar nupur ny apni zindagi apni hath mein nahi li hoti tu shayad woh maynk k is baat ……..k woh haalal bhi kerly ti ….ya shyad phir kahin kis k sth ek bezarr(piyful) se insaan ki tarha zindgai kizar rahi hoti……zindagi bhar apny ghar walo aur logo k tany sunti…

Har baar ek larki ko hi ilzam diya jata hai…us mein uthny wali sab se zayada ungliyaa(finger)….ek aurat ki hi hoti hain….aur aksar us k pass un ka moo band kerny k lyan us k pass kuch nhi hota…

Shadi zindagi k hisa hia….zindagi nhi……khud ko pehcna khud k tareshna..dicovering urself is utmost important …yeah sab se zyada zarrori hai……shadi ek khubosrat rishta hai….us ko khubsorti si jio na k us ko ek zarrorat bana lo…..is ko zarrorat bana ker khud ko kamzoor nhi kero…aur na hi us rishtay ki pakeezki (purity) per sawal uthao(purity).

Life makes u understand tht its abt acting practical….being a girl of sub continent …..we have been grown with a thought to get married…with exceptional case like my family ..where a girl has more freedom n domince thn a boy….most of the girl live a life in a wait to get married n strt there true life….because of wch they never get a chance to enjoy, cherish or even get a thought tht thy can b sumhthing extra ordinary….except being a marriage material

Its just tht discover ur self…..owe urself …enjoy n feel the power of being a women…..discover the power ur soul ur mind hold…..ur the strongest spices on the earth…as u hold the power of patience, tolerance, love n affection…..believe in ur strengths ..pls get up….mayb u are not the victim but u can be a motivation to thousand

I M SORRY IF MY WORDS HURT ANY1..ITS JUST MY POINT OF VIEW…U ALL R OPEN TO SHRE UR VIEWS…

THOUGHT I WAS A BIT LOW TO KNOW THT HALF OF MY READERS DIDN'T EVEN TOOK A LOOK TO THIS…BUT THN I KNOW DIGESTING SUMTHING HARSH …IS NOT THT SO EASY…BUT MAYB FROM NOW ON….WITH A TYPICL FIZAEST ff AND OS…U WILL ALSO COME CROSS TO SUCH…..BEING A WRITER ITS MY DUTY TO MAKE U AWARE OF WHT I HAVE LEARN IN PAST ALMOST 26 YEARS……

THNKS TO U ALL FOR LOVING APRRECIAITNG N BELIVING IN ME….WHN AT TIMES ..I MY SELF DON'T….

Uff mein kitan bolti hoon…sorry for taking ur soo much time in my lecture…

LOVE YA ALLL…A LOOOT

FIZA

Originally posted by: ridi_onasis

mujhe aisa kyun lag raha hey ki update milne wali hey?

Originally posted by: drfizaahmed

ap ko bulik galat laga raha ...though the update is fully ready but i want to update it 2morow ...takay i shud b here to answer ur coments 😃