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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: maaneetfanatic

Lovely update!!!!😍 Feel better soon!!! It was getting hot while Geet was undoing his shirt!!! Thank you and do continue once you get well..okay dear😛

thanx a ton sweeetttyyy...
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: avani_9

hey 1st of al sry i wasnt able 2 cum ol so hvnt read ur updated juz read ur update frm 5th part n loved all d update...geet had so much pain in her past...bt m happy dat maan is there to comfort her to sooth her pain...n ya thnx 4 d pm...

its ok swweettyy...
dats really sweet you read all in one go...
thank you...
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: swetha10

Awesome update... luved it.. continue soon


thank you soo much...
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Posted: 14 years ago

PART 17

She looks at the door and found Maan standing at the door'. "Maan" she moves toward him which makes Sasha nervous looking at Maan'. Maan felt something fishy'. "What's wrong" geet turned to look at Sasha, smirking at her terrified face'. She turns toward Maan... "It's nothing'' is your work finish'. Then let's go from here" '.. Maan nodded, came in cabin took all his things and make his way outside, but before that he last time look at Sasha, he thought of asking geet later about it'.. Going outside geet turn to look at Sasha and gave her a warning look'.

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Both Maan and geet were in car. Maan decided to ask geet about Sasha... "Geet... What was going on in the cabin?" ''. Geet look at him, she was not sure to tell him or not' he is really possessive about her and he will not even think once before firing Sasha'. "I'm asking something" '..Her thought were disturb by his question'. "Uh... Oh... Hmmm...Maan it's nothing...she was just you know" '' Maan could feel she is hiding something... "Geet speak up now" '' she surely can't hide anything from him' "Maan. It's not that serious...she told some worse thing...but let it be" she turns to look at him and saw his serious face... She thought of lightened his mood... "You know Maan...it's not her mistake if she has a crush on you" ..... Maan frowned and turn to look at her... "Crush" '' she giggled at his face and pulls his cheek hard' "You are such a cutie Maan" ...he jerks her hand away in pain..."Aaahhh geet... And don't you dare call me cutie" he gave her an angry glare. "Fine then...you should also stop calling me mishti" she cross her arm and turn her face away. "Uuffhh'' fine... You can call me with whatever stupid names" he said with irritating face... She leaned forward and kisses his cheek... Finally she was successful to make him forget that stupid topic...

It was fine evening when Maan came home from office... He finds all mansion empty which was unusual... He went to geet's room but didn't find her... Then he went to Savita room and find her sitting in a rocking chair... he went toward her. "Mom...where are all?" ..... "Maan geet took Annie to the hospital for the final check up... Vicky also went with them" ... Maan nodded and headed toward his room. He was tired so changed and slept for some hours... he wake up after few hours and decided to meet geet, he went downstairs and saw Annie Vicky and mom there but geet was not there... He frowned and went toward them... "Vicky when did you all come?" ..."Bro just few moments ago" ... He nodded "so how's Annie now" ... "Bro bhabhi told she is fine but just need some little time" ... "Where's geet" Annie sit beside Maan... "Bhai she went to outhouse" Maan become alert with the name of outhouse... "WHAT" he yelled'. "What do you mean by outhouse? You know there is no light there... Its pitch dark" he yelled all of them which make them confuse about his sudden anger...

Without wasting anytime he ran toward outhouse, he was scared to even imagine what she might be going through... He entered there but couldn't see anything due to dark' he shouts her name to gain her attention... "GEET"... "GEET" ...he went wherever he could but didn't find her... his heartbeat was beating very fast thinking about her... suddenly he hears some sound... He immediately went toward the sound... he came near the sound which turns in to sobs... he took his mobile out of his pocket... with the help of light he tried to find her... he froze in his place when he saw her sitting in a corner, hugging her knees tight, sobbing hard and mumbling something... He went toward her and sat beside her..."Mishti" he whispered and put his hand to her shoulder'...she moved toward the wall to avoid his touch... she could feel the pain, the sound of hunter hitting her skin hard' she wince feeling the pain'. "Don't touch me... please" she whispered frightening'..."Mishti... it's me... Maan... Look" he again tried to touch her... This time she didn't move away and move her head upward to see him' although she was unable to see him but his touch told her he was him..."Maan" ... He put his hand on her cheek... "Yes Maan... your Maan" ...she move her hand to touch his face and the moment she touch his face, she felt safe, she felt now she can be safe from those horrible sound and pain... she hug him and start crying very hard... "Im scared... I'm scared...it's too dark... Too dark... it's hurting me... please take me away" '. She was sobbing very hard now'.. He rubs her back to calm her down..."Bus mishti...I'm here now... stop crying" ... He didn't waste any time, carry her in his arm and took her to the mansion... She hugged him tight hiding her face in crook of his neck, still crying. ...

He lie her down to the bed but she didn't lose her hold around his neck... "I'm here mishti...don't worry" but it didn't affect her'...he sat beside her and she put her head in his chest closing her eyes...Vicky, Annie and mom were standing at the door looking new side of geet' they were scared to look at her like this... Maan tried to free her but she holds his shirt tightly from back with one hand and with another holding tightly his collar not letting him move an inch..."They will hurt me... its dark...very dark... Don't leave me" she mumbled'.he hold her tight... "Mishti look at me... no one is here... It's not dark" ... She was still holding him tight not opening her eyes...Maan put his hand on her cheek and moves her face toward him..."Open your eyes mishti" he kissed her eyes... She slowly opened her eyes to find Maan face near her...her eyes were burning read due to continuous crying, face full of tears...he gently wipe her tears and caresses her cheek lovingly... He saw her slowly calming down... "I'm here now... nothing going to happen" he whispered... She was just looking at him without blinking... He looks forward at the door and eyed Vicky to come near... "There's a medicine in a drawer"... Vicky nodded and search in the drawer... When he find the medicine he handed it to him... he was taking a tablet when geet put his hand on his cheek and turn his face toward her... she didn't say anything but just starred at him as if confirming he is with her...he just smile and kissed her forehead.. He took the tablet and the glass of water which Vicky gave him... He put the tablet near her mouth... she didn't said anything and swallowed the tablet with water... while drinking water she didn't once move her gaze from him still holding him tight... she again put her head on his chest... he caresses her cheek and soon she dozed off to sleep...

It was an hour she was still sleeping in his arm peacefully... mom came after sometime with food for them... She sat other side of bed and strokes her hair... "How's she?" ' "She will be fine... why did you guys send her to outhouse?" ...mom was looking at geet brushing her hair... "She wanted to see the outhouse... we didn't know she is scared of darkness" ...she looked at Maan with questioning look... Maan told her everything about geet'. That night she didn't let go of him... it took her two days to come to her normal form... Maan was with her every time she needed him, in these two days she didn't talked to anyone in the house but only wanted Maan near to her'

"Here..it's done" she finishes the tie and fixes Maan collar. Vicky came there wearing a suit... "bro... plz I don't want to go.it's a business party... What will I do their.and I don't like that rahul's business parties... They are so boring" '.. Maan goes to bed take the coat ."You will have to go to all business parties when you will join KC" ...Vicky's eyes popped out... "Joining KC'.. Bro' me' but" '.. Maan wears his coat stood in front of him... "You are going to join business soon'. And no more discussion" ...Vicky turns to geet and then Maan... "Soon mathlab" '.. "After the wedding" saying so Maan leaves the room'. "After wedding'. Means after only 15 days" he looks at geet indicating to help... "Bhabhi you know Na I don't want to join business so soon' please tell bro" he holds her hand with his pleading eyes' "Vicky its better for you to go to business party other than you're that night club parties'. And you better join business otherwise you know I have your that night secret" she smirked at him folding her arm'. "You are blackmailing me?" she only smiles and went out leaving him with no other choice'..

"Geet beta' I need to talk to you" Savita entered geet room and sat beside her in bed. "Mom' you don't have to ask before speaking" ' mom smiled' "You know only 15 days left for your wedding'. So I invited some of our relative' but Maan don't want them here" ' geet frowned... "Why he doesn't want" ''. "actually geet they are friends of Maan dad from childhood' so few years back Maan father and his friend decided to turn their friendship to relation' means Maan and their daughter's marriage'Every thing was finalized' even that girl was also ready' she loved Maan'. But Maan rejected the marriage.in final time" '. Geet was silence for sometime thinking the reason why Maan didn't told her about all this' "Beta Maan wanted to help his dad in his business that time and second he didn't like that girl so he simply refused" '' she looks at geet who was listening to her in great concentration' "What's her name mom" ''. "her name is sameera"'' but now every things are changed' they are not at all angry with us and wants to come to wedding' but Maan is not allowing me" '' geet thought for some time and finally spoke up ' "you can call whoever you want mom'. I will talk to Maan" '.. Mom smiled widely and patted her cheek''..

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Precap: ooopppsss wedding guest'.😕😕

NEXT : PART 18

Edited by zoha25 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
wow awsome one yaaar
me first to comment !!!
am wondering wat tht guests gonna doo
Edited by mrk_1 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome part...👏

glad that maan already knew that she is afraid of dark...otherwise geet to pata nahi...

he took such good care of her...,,her uncle was right...he is the only one who can treat her...

bechara vicky...being blackmailed by his bhabhi...😆

omg...sam ki entry hone waali hai......ab kya hoga...lets c whether she is a positive or negative character..??? n y r they i mean the guests seem so keen to attend the wedding?? kuch gadbad to nahi?? ho sakta hai they just want to get their relations back the way they were...,..i think too much...😆...will wait for the next part...

update soon...only 15 days left for the wedding...😃
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Posted: 14 years ago
loved the update...
love the way maan cared for her...
but y this sameera now...
hope they dont create any prob now...
i think maan is right by not letting them come...
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Posted: 14 years ago

Brilliant part dear!

Though there is not actually sameera in the story (yet), she seems to be quit popular amoung us fans as a black character lol

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Posted: 14 years ago
wooow awesome part...awww maan is sooo caring...loved it...really he's such a cutie...😉
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Posted: 14 years ago

she so trusts Maan, very well written. lets c Maan's reaction on guests

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