Piya ke rang...Rangdini odhni!!AR(note-pg58)

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hey guyz its Arshia and rashmi here ...😊


after
Armaan...My Desire!!! we are here with another mini ff , hope u enjoy reading this...
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intro...

This story is about a south indian girl Ridhima shetty and a punjabi boy Armaan singh mallik, its about their life after marriage, and how Ridhima adjust herself in a totally new environment...

i will post the character sketch in a while


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character sketch.



Armaan singh mallik--- The most handsome and dashing guy living in mumbai. He is the only son of Mr. and Mrs. Balwinder singh Mallik. Armaan was working in the Canada till recently, but is back now to join his family business. He is extremely rich and powerful. He is the prince charming of every girl. he is the most wanted and the most eligible bachelor . He enjoys his life to the fullest...


Riddhima Shetty--- Riddhima is a sweet and bubbly girl for whom her family and friends are always the first priority. She is very friendly and caring. She is a software engineer currently working in a reputed software company at hyderabad. Elder daughter of shashank and padma shetty and has younger sister Muskaan shetty...


Balwinder singh Mallik- A punjab based businessman settled in mumbai, loves his son to the core, a powerful businessman and chairman of Mallik empire, he worked hard to reach the position where he is today, he dosen't want his son to go through the hardships of life which he had to face, he wants his son to get everything he desires in his life....



naina singh mallik- mother of Armaan, loves his son to the core, her life revolves around her son.

Rahul singh Mallik--- Armaan's cousin,completed hia mba along with Armaan and ready to join him in his business

nikita singh maalik---- a sweet bubbly girl studying her mba in mumbai, sister of rahul..


Shashank shetty- a solicitor by profession, working for a multi national company in hyderabad, adores his both daughters ...



Padma shetty-- wife of shashank, A strict religious house wife, who wants her daughters to be independent , confident as well as religious...



Muskaan shetty-- 20 yr old, studying her last yr medicine, being younger in the family she is pampered by everyone...she is talkative, filmy and stubborn.
Edited by Rapunzzel - 13 years ago
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INDEX

part-1-------------- pg-2

part-2 ---------------- pg-9

part-3---------pg-21

part-4---------pg-33

Edited by Arsh_Arshia - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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interesting concept

liked it

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Posted: 14 years ago
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interesting concept
Do pm me when u update
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nice idea... cant wait to read part 1...
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two states ???????
okie ...! include me in all ur lists ...
but please please update hate or love as soon as possible ..u kno ..a whole wk is quite a long time ...
please update that one ...
**** puppy eyes ****
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cnt soon.
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Continue soon
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part-1



"Muskaan uth na, mummy yahaan aagayi aur tujhe abhi tak sote hua dekh liya to bahut gussa hongi" Ridhama said shaking her..


"hmmm, dii... sone de na" she said and buried her head in the pillow..

"muskaaan???" Ridhima warned her snatching the pillow...

"Riddhi, muskaan aarti ke liye der ho rahi hai, jaldi karo" padma said knocking the door

"ayyo... muski uth mummy bula rahi hai" frustrated Ridhima dragged a sleepy muskaan and pushed her into the bathroom and ran to open the door to see padma standing with a frown on her face...

"mummy, hum bas aane hi waale the, wo meri wajh se muski ko bhi shower lene mein der hogayi, wo aati hi hogi " Ridhima said covering for muskaan..

"Riddhi tu aur tere paapa hamesha use bchaane liye mujhse jhoot bolte ho, tum logon ke lad pyaar ke wajah se hi wo itni bigaad gayi hai, meri to is ghar mein koi sunta hi nahi" she said frustrated with her husband and daughters... while Ridhima just hung her head down



"hey bhagvaan is ladki ka mai kya karun, apni koi bhi cheez theek terha se nahi rakhti, pata nahi doctor kaise bangayi iske patients ka to bahgwaan hi malik hai" she said arranging muskaan's books...

Ridhima hugged padma from back and kissed her cheek, she very well knew how to melt her mom's anger " mummy aap na gusse mein bilkul acchi nahi lagti"

padma smiled and placed her hans on Ridhiam's which were holding on her waist "tu shaadi karke apne gahr chali jayegi to ye ghar soona hojayega"...

"toh phir kyu itni jaldi kar rahi , un logon ko manaa kyun nahi kardeti" she said tightening her hold on her mom as her eyes welled up...

padma turned and cupped her face in her palm "beta ladkiyoun ko ek na ek din apne ghar jaana hi hota hai, tere liye itna accha rista hai toh hum use manaa kaise karden, wo log punjabi hai, mumbai mein unka apna business hai, aur tumhaari shaanti aunty bataa rahi thi ke unki family bhi bahut acchi hai... aur phir ek baar tu apne ghar chali gayi toh tujhe ye ghar paraaya lagne lagege"... "aisa kabhi nahi hoga" she said embracing her mom tightly while padma caressed her head with love...

"lo shuru hogaya maa beti ka emotional scene, akka main to kehti hun ke shaadi ke baad tum mummy ko bhi apne saath hi lejaana, aur unlogon se kehna ke yeh fevicol ka mazboot jod hai tootega nahi" muskaan said started laughing while Ridhima also rolled in laughter...


padma moved to her and caught her ear "aww mummy chodo na dar ho raha hai" muskaan whined... "dinbhar tum dono bas masti soojti rahti hai, aur koi kaam seekne ko bolo to hazaar bahaane banaati ho" padma said scolding both...


"chalo dono aarti ke liye der ho rahi hai" padma said while both followed her stiffling their laughter...


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After aarti muskaan Ridhima and shashaank were sitting on the dining table while padma was busy instructing the servants...

"toh aaj kya bana rahi hai breakfast mein" Ridhima asked mukaan...


"kyun main kyun banayun????" muskaan replied munching an apple...


"bhool gayi aaj teri baari hai khana banane ki" Ridhima said with an evil grin, and muskaan stopped chewing apple...

"kyaa????, aaj muskaan khana baneyegi??????" shashaank asked horrified, but seeing muskaan's glare he again added "are waah, aaj muskaan khaana bana rahi hai, ye baat sun kar to meri bhook aur bhi badh gayi hai" he said buttering muskaan while Ridhima giggled her father's expressions...


"dii tum bhool rahi ho aaj, tumhaari baari hai khaana banaane ki, pichle sunday maine hi banaya tha" muskaan said again muching her apple...

"dekh muskaan cheating nahi, ajj teri hi baari hai khaana bananeki" she said pointing finger at muskaan


"dii tum...muskaan was cut by her mother coming from the kitchen
"tum dono phir se shuru hogaye, saara week toh tu studies aur Riddhi apni job mein busy rehto ho, ghar ke kaam sekhne ke liye ek sunday hi milta hai, usmein bhi tum dono bahaane banana nahi chodti, pata nahi sasuraaal jaakar kya karengi" padma said scoling both...

"are padma abhi bacche hai dheere dheere seekhlegi" shashaan said... "bacchehai???? kal apne sasuraal jayegi toh wo to yahi kahenge na ke maa ne kuch nahi sikhaaye, aap ko to koi kuch nahi kahega... shashaak dug his face in news paper seeing padma not in soo good mood...

"aur muskaan aaj tu banayegi khaana, aur koi sevant teri madad nahi karega" she orderd muskaan ... she left kitchen huffing and puffing she stuck out her tongue sowing to Ridhima... while she giggled in victory...


after having breakfast, all of them settled in the living room, muskaan was lying in padma's lap, Ridhima came with their tea and setttled beside her dad...

suddenly landline started ringing... padma answere the call and talked for a while and cut the call...

"padma kiska phone tha" shashaank asked

"wo shanti ka phone tha, keh rahi thi ke ladke waale agle sunday ko aayenge" she informed everyone... while Ridhima excused herself blushing.


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precap: Armaan's entry


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Edited by Arsh_Arshia - 14 years ago

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