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hey shruti
will read all the ffs of urs and comment
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Part 28 

 

Arjun was on his way to Delhi with NT as tomorrow was the first hearing of the case; Maan has made arrangements for them at the KM, though Arjun was not comfortable by the idea but Maan insisted.
 

Maan called Geet to the study

 
M: Geet, tonight Arjun is coming with NT
 
G: (surprised, the name sounds quite familiar) Arjun who?
 
M: he is my friend and NT's bro
 
G: um
 
M: Geet look at me
 
G (looked at him)
 

M: tomorrow is the first hearing

 
G: um
 
M: Geet won't you ask any thing
 
G: no, I trust you.
 
M: thank you but you need to know about the case
 
G: why?
 
M: we kept you away from the whole deal, you did not question
and now
 
G (interrupted): I know you kept me away for my own good, and will not ask any questions on this issue
 
M: ok don't ask but I want to share this with someone, will that someone be you?
 
G (gave him a surprise look): really
 
M: um (making a baby face)
 
G: (smiles) ok
 
M: sit, comfortable
 
G: yes
 
M: NT has charged Dev on grounds of firstly Dowry, secondly domestic violence and thirdly betrayal
 
G: betrayal??
 
M: yes, after their marriage also Dev has been having a series of affairs, and many girls who willingly went with him are now helping NT
 
G: but if they went willingly then why?
 
M: Geet you won't understand this is life people here do things not for justice but for revenge and many other things
 
G: what things?
 
M: some day I will tell you, but not now you are too small for all this
 
G: me small?
 
M: yes, just a kid
 
G: hey, I am carrying
 
M: yes, but still you are a kid, how is your college? (diverting
her)
 
G (excited): great, you know every one out there is so helpful, they don't even taunt me from being from a small town; and you know I have made friends also, and my principal oh! She is a darling she even said that no one will tease me for my condition and ……….. She went on and on and on
 
He listened to all her talks patiently
 
After a long time the intercom buzzed, DM was calling for lunch
 
DM: so when they will be here?
 
M: may be for an early dinner
 

DM: is it necessary for them to stay here

 
M: DM Arjun is my friend and even before he had been staying here whenever he came to Delhi, you never objected then
 
DM: it was when you lived here
 
M: no response
 
They had their lunch and DM retired to her room with a gloomy face
 
G: Maan
 
M: um
 
G: how long will they stay?
 
M: tonight and tomorrow, after the hearing they will leave
 
G: can I make request?
 
M: yes
 
G: can to for tonight stay at KM or say till your so called friend leaves
 
M: why?
 
G: DM is not quite comfortable with their staying here
 
M: will my being here make a difference?
 
G: you are forgetting that he is your guest and NT is not welcomed in DM's home
 
M: she told you this
 
G: it's pure common sense, did you not see her reluctance
 
M: ok, ok I will happy, ask Nakul to clean my room
 
G; he already had
 
M: what?
 
G: DM asked him when he was arranging the two rooms for them
 
M: you knew that NT is coming
 
G: yes
 
M; and you pretending that you did not know, you were making a fool of me
 
G: no how can I dare make a fool of you? (smiled)
 
M: look I told you, you are a naughty child (laughed)
 
NT and Arjun had a quite dinner with the three, Arjun was not aware of Geet, he now and then glanced at her as if relating her as who she is, Geet also now and then stole gazes
 
Later after the dinner while he was talking to Maan
 

A: Maan who is that little girl

 
NT stiffened
 
M (looked at NT): who?
 
A: that one, NT what was her name?
 
NT: Geet
 
A: yes, very sweet little girl, the name seems quite familiar
 
NT tightend her fist
 
M: she, she is DM's protg
 

A: protg

 
M: yes, DM has brought her from HSPur and now is helping her settle
 
A: HSPur, I lived at that place for 2 yrs
 
M: 2 yrs
 
A: yes, when I was doing my graduation Papa send me to HSPur at his friends house
 
M: friend?
 
A: yes, Mohinder Handa, nice man; but their family was very conservative and orthodox, their his nephew Brij OMG he was such a ruthless man
 
M: you know Handa's
 
A: yes, even NT knows them
 
M (oh that was how NT knew about that land issue and how well they can be trapped): but they did not seem to know NT
 
A: how can they? They have never met them; she knows them through me and Papa
 
M: this Geet she is Mohinder's daughter
 
NT closes her eyes in fear of being caught
 
A: oh that's why I was wondering where I have seen her
 
Just then Geet came in with some snacks
 
A: Geet, you have grown
 
G (looked at him in surprise): pardon
 
A: you did not recognize your Dada, remember you used to call me Rajasthani Dada
 
G: Rathod Dada, OMG you sure have grown old
 
A (stands up and hugs her): me grown old and you grown big
 
G: Dada you have look (pointing on his hair) this white hair
 
A: only one
 
G: yes but you started ripening
 
A: my child, how are you?
 
G: very good
 
A: but how come you are here?
 
G: ask your baby sister, she should be the one explaining all this
 
A: NT, but how do you know her?
 
G: Dada ask her, else she will blame me for quoting facts to strengthen my side
 
A: NT what is all this?
 
NT was cornered
 
M: yes, NT why don't you tell, I was surprised as to how you knew so much about Handa's and now I seem to understand, explain NT
 
NT was like why does this earth not tear apart and she bury herself in it
 
 
I wondered why no one questioned that why NT chose Geet?
how does NT know about the property?
HSPur is a very small place, why did NT and Dev come to such a unknown town?
but no one asked, but I was like dying to tell you how things are related
 
what do you say  about the whole episode?
 
what will Rathod's do once they know that what their daughter  has done?
 
 
today I was to tell you about the case, but before  that I wanted you to have this thing cleared out.
NT is a daughter of Mohinder Handa's freind,
 
Arjun has a soft spot for Geet, he adores her like a sister
 
I also want to remind you that Arjun and Maan were togather in MBA course, and MBA studenst of same batch belong to different age groups,
 
Arjun is older then Maan, the two are not of same age
 
 
the coming update will tell you how NT filed the case and how Arjun took her with him
you will also know a little about Anvesha 
 
HOPE YOU AGREE WITH ALL THIS
if not feel free to tell so
 
 
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part 28
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Posted: 13 years ago

can u believe I am first

  
 
thanxs for the wonderful update
that was sweet to see maan calling her child..  
 
u know wat I like abt this ff..is the characterisation of maan & geet  
 
both are like complementing eachother..  
 
 



Edited by muskanp - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome ... Love geet- Arjun bonding 😳 ... Let see how things goes from here... Thank you for update 🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesomeee diii
n thanks for making our brains work a bit
i nvr gave a thought 2 y geet n hspur out of all d villages n cities in india
update is cuteee
luv maan n geet bonding
n arjun rathod dada😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
I wondered why no one questioned that why NT chose Geet?BECUASE SHE NEW HER FAMILY WERE OTHORDOX DONT BELIEVE IN LOVE MARRIAGE  THAT WHY SHE WAS THE TARGET
how does NT know about the property?THEY WERE FAMILY FRIEND
SHE KNEW THEY WERE CONSERVATIVE FAMILY WHO CAN KILL THERE DAUGHTER FOR PRIDE
HSPur is a very small place, why did NT and Dev come to such a unknown town?BECAUSE NOBODY I'LL RECOGNISE THEM
but no one asked, but I was like dying to tell you how things are related
 
what do you say  about the whole episode?LOVE IT
 
what will Rathod's do once they know that what their daughter  has done?HE I'LL DISOWN HER
 
Edited by simi91 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Superb update and yes...you have pulled up the connection b/n NT and choosing Handa family very well. There are still many many points in the serial which they conveniently overlooked. I think this ff is completing that void. You have dealt situation in total new aspect...continue soon Edited by scorpiodreams - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
LOVE IT
FANTASTIC UPDATE
PLS CONT SOONNN
THANK YU DEAR
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Posted: 13 years ago
yu know why i'm so
hooked with this FF
di
because how yu describe
each character important
specialy maaneet
love how maan called geet
child so cute
& the way they compliment
one another
so sweet the bond btw arjun
& geet
omg geet family & NT family
friends that why she was target
wonder what i'll arjun do when
he find what his sis did to geet
love it love it
the story shaping up good
fascinating update
pls cont soonnn
thank yu so muchhh