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Posted: 14 years ago

great update, do continue soon!

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PART 30

Karvachauth

It was a warm day compared to winter chills in Delhi. Maan walked out of his dressing room in his trousers and bare chest. Last night had been much for him. It will take its time to wash away from his mind. He looked at the terrace he could see geet from behind. She usually was not seen at this time she left for college and it was a working day. But she seemed far from going to college. She was clad in yellow plain chiffon sari with silver zari border and small motives of silver making a pattern all over the sari. This was the last thing he wanted to witness when he was trying to remove all thoughts of the girl from his mind. She was wiping her wet hair with towel basking in the warm sun. He couldn't see her face as she was diagonal to him. He bent his own head as if by doing that he could catch a glimpse of her face.


  • She kept the towel on the nearby chair, splashed her air behind her back, rubbed both her dark coloured palms and blew in them to make them warm. She was so simple. Maan instantly turned his back towards her and inhaled sharply. He opened his eyes to the sounds of her payal very soft, walking past him. A small bindi, kohl and a very light shade of lipstick enhanced her beauty many folds. He was in control and walked past her back to the dressing room.

    Geet immediately turned her head to take a full look at him from back, when she knew he wont see her. Handsome she mumbled under her breath after she viewed his bare back. Exercise bhi to itna karta hai.

    Her mumbling drew his attention. When she turned to leave he turned to look at her.

    It was 5 daadi dashed into maan's dressing room to find geet almost ready. She admired her. Her eyes were filled with happiness. Oh how beautiful my angel looks like' my sweetest bahu.

    Geet was wearing a pink lehenga with silver intricate zardoosi work done all over the sheer delicate chiffon. The inner darker lining of satin added the glow to the delicate fabric laden with heavy work. The choli was a tight fitting one with 2 doris at back to secure it to place. The sleeves were short and just drapped of her shoulder. She wore a necklace, paired with beautiful rings and a small mangtika on the forehead. She wore lovely chura (traditional Punjabi bangles worn by Punjabi girls) and broad anklets in her legs which made sound on slightest of her movement. She had put a small bindi and dark kohl to outline her beautiful eyes. Daadi made a beautiful braid with her hair and attached small accessories to it.

    Daadi helped her with her duppata and set it in place. She insisted geet on wearing a nath too.

    look at the second pink lehenga. something of that sort.

    Geet ' daadi wont it be too much. Look u have made me look like a bride.

    Daadi ' that's what I wanted. I had missed pampering u on ur wedding day. It was a hurried affair because of me so I want u to look like a bride.

    Geet ' but daadi it is just a family affair and I look over dressed.

    Daadi ' no u r not overdressed. Its ur first karvachauth every one will look at u and expects u to be the best as u are Mrs maan singh khurana. We will have some family guests too. I will give u the details.

    U have met my sister. Her daughter sujata and bahu tanvi will be here with their husbands. And tanvi's husband and son work for khuranas' sort of coz their business is supported by us. Tanvi's bahu kiya is a little rude types dnt mess with her she is elder to u.

    Geet tried to absorb all the info given to her and make faces of them based on more info of their nature was given by daadi while she made geet wear the nath too.

    Now the bride was totally ready according to daadi.

    Daadi called maan fifth time to remind him for coming home by 6 for puja. He seemed too reluctant not knowing why he is needed for geet's fast. He was not into rituals anytime and was ignorant of his role. Daadi had assumed that geet wud have informed him of his need and explained it as a chatter box she is.

    The puja was begun after basic formalities with the relatives. Puja begins in advance to the rising of moon in que with the expected time of its rising. Geet sat with others for the ritual. It was a splendid sight women adorned in lovely attires sitting around a small water pool. All the men sat at a distance waiting for the moon to rise and the ordeal of the ladies to end. Maan was nowhere to be seen. Puja wud end soon and moon would be also seen. This made daadi very anxious and at the same time angry on maan.

    Daadi went down and found maan lazily sitting in his room.

    Dm ' maan aap yahan hai. Aur mein pareshan hu. Geet kitni udas lag rahi hai. Thik hai ki aapko rituals pasand nahi par vo pure din fast karke aapka wait kar rahi hai aur aap aise yahan baithe hai. Upar jaiye isse pehle ki vo chaand dekhe.

    Maan came up with daadi still trying to gather what has to be done by him.

    By now moon was seen and ladies were completing the ritual one by one. Bari daadi was doing the puja. Maan searched for geet. He saw someone sitting on the ground doing something. NT moved to bring in clear view of geet sitting and arranging her thali. She got up adjusting her heavy lehenga. Maan cud not move his gaze off her. She was looking beautiful. He stared blankly at her. She didn't see him and was standing there with her head bend down. Daadi moved to her side. Everyone had done their part and it was geet's turn. She looked at daadi with teary eyes who looked behind her. She turned to look at maan. She gulped in, one drop escaped the corner of her eye. She wiped it before anyone cud see it but maan marked it.

    Dm ' kissi ne aapse kuch kaha?

    Geet just nodded in denial. She knew if she spoke her voice wud tell daadi. She kept a hand over daadi's and she kept her's over geet's. maan saw how the two women assured each other. Each's eyes had tears and glared at maan in unison. Maan raised his shoulder with a sigh.

    As soon as daadi had left every women had done her bit of taunting on maan's absence. Daadi was the protector as everyone feared her. Geet never back answered so was quite standing in the corner bearing all the wrath silently.

    He was again spell bound by her beauty and was staring at her. He was relieved when she turned to offer jal to moon. But the relief was very short lived as he saw her bare back. Her skin glowed and seemed so seductive when all it had was two strings holding the choli. She raised her hand offering flowers and her back muscles flexed. Maan cud feel his body getting tensed by the view.

    She turned to face him. Daadi stood near them instructing geet with each step. Everyone eyed them or rather envied the gorgeous couple. They seemed so much like made in heaven.

    Geet looked at the moon thru the sieve and then maan's face thru the sieve. She took his arti very mechanically but their eyes met and she cud see some uncomprehendable emotions there. His emotions were becoming uncomprehendable for his own self too. The slight touch of her index finger on his forehead to apply kumkum was so soothing. He stood there silently admiring her when daadi broke his thoughts.

    Dm ' maan paani pilaiye.

    Maan raised the silver tumbler for geet. She sipped in a few sips then he gave her a sweet to bite. She took a small bite. He expected her to feed him in return coz he had seen NT feed dev.

    Daadi smiled ' maan aapne to fast ki nahi ki geet aapko paani degi.

    Maan ' to dev ne fast kiya hai?

    Dev ' haan bro. here 3 of us have fasted for our wives.

    The father son duo had fasted along with dev.

    Bari daadi ' beta ye tradition nahi hai. Fast to larkiyo ko rakhna hota hai par ye nayi pirhi biwi k liy kuch bhi karegi. Dekho mera beta aur pota dono fast karte hain.

    Dev ' daadi aap fir suru mat kijiye.

    Kiya ' haan waise bhi mujhe dekhna hai maan geet k liye kya gift laya hai?

    Maan was surprised that's when dev passed NT beautiful diamond earrings. Each male member had brought some or the other jewelry piece for their wives but everyone was anxious to see maan's gift that too his first karvachauth gift. This was to be given by no other but The Perfect Maan Singh Khurana who has dominated and dictated them for all these years.

    Dev always got best gifts for NT but here NT was also curious for it was first time seeing maan buy gifts.

    Daadi understood maan's plight. She was prepared in advance that maan could create such fiasco. She handed over a beautiful box to him.

    Maan handed over the box to geet. Daadi asked geet to open the box. It was a beautiful diamond necklace paired with equally lovely earrings. Everyone admired it. It was worth the admiration not only because of its cost but its beauty too.


    Dm ' ye hamara hai. Aapke daadaji ne mujhe karvachauth pe diya tha aur mein chahti hu isse geet pehne. She nudged maan to make geet wear it. He picked up the necklace put it around her narrow neck and moved behind her to fasten it. Coming close to her was a long time wish come true. He inhaled her scent. His fingers slowly removed her choti out of the way in process caressing her nape. The caress made geet get goose bumps all over. He saw people were eyeing his each move and geet was also feeling awkward by the poking eyes. KODAK He hurried the process and moved to the front.

    NT was sad that daadi gave such a beauty to geet and not her. She was in her worst mood. Usually her gift used to be the best of all but this time daadi stole her charm. Had it not been daadi maan wud have not given anything and she wud again become the cream.

    Others burned in envy.

    Tanvi ' so actually maan got nothing for geet. Geet but atleast daadi thought for you.

    Geet ' oh he took the pain of coming here from his busy schedule that is the gift for me.

    Her statement was a double sided sword. One side a taunt for maan and the other to stop this bickering by others.

    Maan cud very well understand the taunt which other people were oblivious to.

    hey i know the precap is more interesting than the update. but i think i did justice to the karvachaaut. how was it? plzzz do comment
    PRECAP
    ice breaker

    What is the use of the lehenga after today? So what if I stand over it.

    Get off it I will wear it to my wedding, my actual wedding''.she spat and pushed him off the lehenga.
    Edited by sanjeevani09 - 14 years ago
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    Posted: 14 years ago
    SANJU A BIG HUG 4 U !!!! 🤗🤗

    hayeee u NAUGHTY SANJU u ne GEET ko BACKLESS KURTI pehnai .... ☺️ MERE MAAN pe thoda REHAM karo ..... 😆 uss ka MASOOM sa DIL waise hi RAAT k baad GEET k liye KUCH KUCH MEHSOOS kar raha hai aur u uss ko full time test kar rahi ho .... 🤣

    i loved the DETAILS of KARWACHAUT .... 😃 i dun knw abt the INDIAN RITUALS so it was INTERESTING to read the DETAILS .... 😊
    THANK U SANJU .... 🤗

    first i thought GOOOSSHHHHH!!! y didn't MAAN knew abt the rituals but then i was like pata kaise hga BECHAARE ki pehli SHAADI hai EXPERIENCE jo nai tha ..... 🤣🤣🤣

    aaaawwww MAAN was so shocked to hear that DEV ne FAST kia .... 😲 i knw pata hta bhi to MSK ne yeh FAST rakhna bhi nai tha may b he will in future when he will loose his self fully to GEET ....☺️ u c abi to sirf THE MSK hain na ....😆 per still felt bad for GEET ...

    as always i loved DM ... she is such a SWEETIE PIE .... uummmwaahhh!!! ❤️


    my FAV moment ... u knw the "KODAK MOMENT" uuffhhhhhh ....😍 u knw these small CUTE things make ur UPDATE more INTERESTING & ENJOYABLE to READ ..... 🥳DEV is soo sweet but only in ur FF ..... 😆

    chalo iss NT ko shuru hgai JEALOUSY .... 🤢 well ab to iss ko AADAT dal leni chahiye kiun k GEET KHURANNA KHANDAAN ki BADI BAHU hai n SAB SE PEHLE "THE MAAN SINGH KHURANNA" ki WIFE ..... 😉 so she DESERVES THE BEST ..... 😍

    i hate those people who made my n MAAN'S PRINCESS CRY ... 😡 per hayeeeeee HAMAARI SHERNI ne uss TANVY ko kia ANSWER dia or should i say A TIGHT SLAP on her FACE ...... 🤣🤣🤣

    and know i m gng to c what MAAN is gng to do as he should at least react to GEET'S TUANT..... 😉

    sanju PRECAP is DEF more interesting .... 😲 but believe me this UPDATE was SIMPLY AMAZING !!! 👏 the way u wrote abt GEET getting ready and rituals is simply amazing .... 👏👏👏

    OHHHH MMMM GEEE !!!! THE ICE BREAKER is in the NEXT UPDATE .... *ANGEL JUMPING IN JOY* & MAAN on GEET'S lehnga matlab GEET k kareeb .... *OHHH LA LA LA LA* ☺️☺️

    well sanju now i m expecting a very ANGRY & PASSIONATE MAAN .... 😉 u c first uss ne MAAN k samne kisi sur se SHAADI ki baat ki MAAN ki MALE EGO ko hurt kia aur dosra MSK ki wife k saath kisi aur ka naam jode MSK yeh bardasht nai kar sakta and second she pushed THE MAAN SINGH KHURANNA ...😆 as u knw MSK ko koi push kare itni kisi mein himmat nai but GEET did it ... so knw she should b ready for the consequences ....😳😳😳 and KNOW MAAN SHOULD REACT but u c I WANT HIM to react in a PASSIONATE & NAUGHTY way ....😆😆😆😳😳😳 u knw what i mean AHEM !! AHEM !! AHEM !! *ANGEL IMAGINED & BLUSHING*☺️☺️☺️

    MAAN kuch aisa kare k GEET bilkul aise BLUSH kare .... ☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️ *ANGEL IMAGINING NAUGHTY NAUGHTY MAAN*

    PLZZZZZZZ UPDATE SOON .... 👍🏼 or else mein PAGAL hjaoun gi .... 🤪🤪🤪


    Edited by khansangel - 14 years ago
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    Posted: 14 years ago
    hey nice update dear..............
    but precap was scary................don't separate maaneet soooooooooon..........
    wanna maaneet love track.............looking fwd............

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    precap seems to be little wierd is she sayin to herself or for mann..........karvachauth is so beautiful..............just amazing awating for the precap.......................
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    Posted: 14 years ago
    oh gosh it is getting a little gloomy for me...poor Geet how much can she bear...
    will Maan change show his love?

    precap hmmm
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    Posted: 14 years ago
    Lovely update Sanju.

    Poor Maan, kya haal hogaya uska.

    Maan standing on Geet's lehenga....ahem ahem....😃, Don't u dare write that she has already changed.....at the most ek transparent inner rehne de bas.😃

    TC

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    I loved the details of Karvachauth ; I like these traditional celebrations so am all 👍🏼 for it
    O gosh ! Maan even did not know what to do in that ritual 😲
    Dadi saved his face ; big time
    I liked the part where he was tying the neck piece on Geet * KODAK * 😆
    Also the last line by Geet ; indeed a double - edged sword she used 👏 Love our sherni

    Awesome update , loved it n eagerly waiting for the next .....
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    Posted: 14 years ago
    wowwwwwwwwwwww.................................👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏
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    Posted: 14 years ago
    wowww karvachauth behuth cute tha.
    kya bathavo geet ki bare back...uf maan ki tho ghosh hudaya hoga....
    precap hehheheeeeee actual wedding me pehnenge...hahahhaaaaa maan tho jealousy se mar javunga....

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