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Posted: 14 years ago
Wow!

Hi Everyone!

I'm writing the update right now. So give me until Monday morning [EST...not IST 😆] to have it up :)

Thanks for being so patient!
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Originally posted by: Naina2127

Wow!

Hi Everyone!

I'm writing the update right now. So give me until Monday morning [EST...not IST 😆] to have it up :)

Thanks for being so patient!
~Naina


@Bold - Who said we were very patient? 😉 So glad you're going to update Naina!
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Posted: 14 years ago
Well Hello hello everyone!

How have you all been?! It's been two months. It's forever. I know and I'm sorry.

But I'm back with another update. And hopefully this one has the romance that most of you are looking for, along with a possible twist in the tale. 😉

I hope you like this update!

And I wanted to thank you all for being so very patient with me, the pms, the scraps, the posts, everything.

And I wanted to thank you all again because this story has reached 100 pages, and I am more than shocked and pleasantly surprised😆 Maybe I have dragged out the story, now who knows?😉😆

Lol, just kidding. But thanks soso much to all my readers, those who leave comments, those who like the posts, and those who simply read. Means a lot to me :)

Cheers!
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Chapter 14:

Taking a deep breath, Maan stepped out of the bathroom, hoping that seeing Geet once again wouldn't send his heart racing. But he should have known otherwise. His eyes fell upon the figure on the bed, as he saw her sitting on the bed, the covers pulled up to her neck, as she stared at Maan, her eyes widened as she waited for him to do something, to do anything.

Maan's breath hitched in his throat, two options. That's all he had. He could either run around and race back into the bathroom, or he could step outside of the room. But either way, he could definitely not stand there or go towards his wife. He wouldn't be able to resist pulling her into his arms, touching her, feeling her. He stifled a groan as he imagined himself holding her, but he just didn't know what to do!

Meanwhile, Geet stared at the man in front of her, her eyes wide. "What are you doing just standing there? Aren't you going to come here?" she asked, her voice husky and just calling out to him.

Her eyes widened as she quickly clasped her hands over her mouth, Had she really just said that out loud?! Two faint circles of red appeared on her cheeks as she saw a smirk slowly creep up on Maan's face. And she saw him moving forward, one step at a time. Oh!Oh! What had she just done? She hated this man! She didn't want him any closer, or did she? Those thoughts were floating around in her head just as he reached the bed and sat himself down

Maan didn't know what came over him after he heard her words. He seemed to have no control over himself as he walked towards his wife and seated himself next to her.

Before either of them knew it though, he had pulled her into his arms and fitted his lips right over hers. She closed her eyes in response as she pressed herself into him, running her hands along his shoulders before allowing them to completely slip around him, envelope him as she pulled him closer towards herself.

He slowly pulled away, breathless, and looked down to see deep pools of brown staring back at him, holding his gaze, intense with desire as she slowly parted her lips.

"Geet" he whispered hoarsely, "You're so beautiful. So tempting. How am I supposed to keep myself away from you?" Maan trailed his finger along her jaw, slowly moving towards her lips, as a shudder ran down his back. Before she knew it, he he bent his head down and captured her lips once more, in a more powerful kiss, one that left no room for a misunderstanding, as he showed her just how much he wanted her.

His hands slowly made their way to her little black number, ready to peel it off of her, when they heard the telephone in their room go off.

Maan and Geet quickly came out of their trance as they pulled away and just sat, staring at one another. Another ring pierced the silence, the uneasy tension that had settled in, and this time Maan nearly jumped out the bed as he ran towards the phone on the other end of the room.

Geet quickly pulled the covers over herself once more as she fell back onto the pillow and turned to look at him, watch the man who had literally just kissed her senseless moments ago.

"Hello?" he snapped, annoyed at being disturbed. "It's 12:30 in the morning. Couldn't this have waited?"

"Woah there Mr. Angry Man, calm down. I forgot it was that late for you. Gosh. And I thought I had good news for you" answered back the ever so familiar voice of Armaan, a cheery Armaan nonetheless.

Maan literally growled. "Good news? That needs to be delivered now? Armaan. Can you be any stupider?"

The poor guy was confused as to why Maan was so angry, "But Maan....I just wanted to tell you that the order for the Edible Chocolate Body paint hadn't gone through. So that's why you probably couldn't find any in your room. You're happy right?"

Maan immediately gritted his teeth as he closed his eyes and took a deep breath. Control yourself now. You can do this. "Armaan. It's my honeymoon. I'm in freaking Switzerland you idiot. Spending time with my WIFE. Or I would be if you didn't call me at 12:30 IN THE MORNING!" he yelled, unable to control himself as he lashed out at his best friend over the phone.

Geet's eyes widened as a blush appeared on her cheeks. She couldn't believe he would say all this, that too to Armaan!

And with those words, Maan slammed the phone back on the receiver and slumped down into the chair next to the dresser. He glanced up to see Geet staring at him, and he offered her a faint smile, before waving his hand in the air, telling her to get some sleep.

The moment was broken, and neither of them could do anything about it.

And with one last glance at him, Geet turned around, pulling the covers over her head as she attempted to catch some sleep.

And Maan? He took one of the champagne flutes and poured himself some of that complimentary wine that was sitting there. He needed it, needed it to distract himself from the thoughts of his beautiful wife who was lying in his bed.

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The next day, Geet reluctantly opened her eyes. It coudln't be morning already, now could it? As she lazily glanced over at the clock next to her, she was shocked to see it read 1:00 PM. Her eyes widened. One in the afternoon already?! And where was Maan? She quickly got out of bed, only to find her husband uncomfortably situated in the chair, with the empty glass still in his hand and the open champagne bottle sitting on the table next to him.

She narrowed her eyes as she took in the sight of him, and with a *hmph* she stomped away into the bathroom. She knew just how to wake up her husband, and she would do so properly.

And with those thoughts, and a huge smirk playing on her face, she quickly got ready, humming songs, as her evil plotting mind took over. She saw that Maan was still not up, in fact, he was snoring away even louder now, after she'd come out of the bathroom, all dressed and ready to spend her first day in Switzerland.

And she hurried over to the table, pulled off the lid covering the water jug and emptied all that water, directly on her husband's head, all that cold, icy water. And his reaction. Of course he woke with a start, a loud scream accompanying that as he seemed to jump into the air, and instinctively he reached out to grab her, pulling her down as they both fell to the floor.

"Geet?" he questioned, wide eyed, as his anger shot to the roof. "Did you just dump water on me?!"

And his wife, his coy, extremely intelligent wife, knew how to toy with him perfectly well. "Maaaaybe. or Maybe not-"

"Oh shut up" he growled, before flipped her over, and pinning her to the ground, her two arms firmly held in place and his entire body completely covering her own, as he looked her in the eyes.

And she let out a howl of pain.

"Maaan! My stomach! The Baby!" she screamed, as the pain appeared in her eyes, and Maan quickly let go of her, terrified, as he pulled away and picked her up. She had closed her eyes tightly and was clutching her stomach, as she whispered "the bed...Put me on the bed" and he complied immediately, as a mixture of panic and fear shot through him. The Baby! Oh god! What had he done?! What if something happened to the baby?!

As he turned to run towards the dresser, ready to grab the phone and get in touch with a doctor, Geet grabbed hold of his hand. "Maan, my stomach!" Her face contorted into an expression of pain, as she held on to his hand tightly, and beads of sweat immediately broke out on his forehead.

His wife and the baby.

They were both in danger!

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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome update ...............do continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
"What are you doing just standing there? Aren't you going to come here?"hehehehheeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
ye armaan bhi naaaaaa......nice update
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Posted: 14 years ago
DUDE U UPDATED!!!! WOW!! CELEBRATION TIME FOR ME!! ....will comment more once i finish reading this! i was too excited whn i saw u updated to even wait for some time to comment :P
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome update
do continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
ok, done! well, as usual....GREAT ONE!! need i say more? 😉...umm one thing though..... do u think we gotta wait 2 months this time too for the next update? 😆 just kidding!

ok now, whn's the next update? can't wait!


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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome update ...
do continue soon

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