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Posted: 14 years ago
#81
loved geet vicky n cookie scene 😊
nice post
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Posted: 14 years ago
#82
WOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOW SUPERV STORY I LIKE THIS STORY WAITING FOR YOUR NEXT UPDATE
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Posted: 14 years ago
#83

Originally posted by: DrashtiDhamiNo1

man geet is too funny 🤣

awwww poor vicky he was expecting to get a hug
i love how cookie hates vicky sooo much its sooo damn funny
she keeps on barking at him and eating his shoes
love how geet and vicky act like kids
they both sound sooo cute and funny
boy maan must get a major headache with those two around
cont soon hun
really cant wait till the next part

haha yeah i know too bad after what Vicky did he doesn't get a hug lol
glad you like Vicky's character lol
will update the next part soon 😳
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Posted: 14 years ago
#84

Originally posted by: MaansMishti

Aww tht was a cute update...loved it!!! Cont soon :). Oh and congrats on the new thread!!

aww thanx Mishti...good to see you here again lol

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Posted: 14 years ago
#85

Originally posted by: divareena

Lool geet wants to use her bat on Vicky. It was so funny the way geet was hugging cookie and Vicky thought she was going to hug him. lool

Loool geet telling maan about Vicky and meera, langoor ke saath angoor...😆

Love how geet and meera get along so well. Lool she has still not forgiven vicky.

Bechara maan is also jealous of cookie.

haha thanx so much Divareena
always love your ocmments lol....
Maan is always jealous of anything and anyone tht comes in Geet's way lol
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Posted: 14 years ago
#86

Originally posted by: mchopra

Simi..i missed COOKIE the most..sacchi...

ahah I know I missed cookie too...I had to bring her back lol
unlike Ekta show where the character disappears lol...
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Posted: 14 years ago
#87

Originally posted by: jazzerette

Really cute part!! Geet and Cookie rock together😆 Poor Maan....he has so much on his hands now.....drama queen Dadi....Adi-smitten Pinky....weirdly-concsious-of-maaneet Arjun....tough competition from Cookie and Vicky and Geet's never-ending tug-of-war!!🤣


"Maan attack him" This line was hilarious!!🤣

ahahaha I know he has it tough..I wouldn't be surprised if Maan becomes crazy later on lol
tht would be hilarious!!!! 😆
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Posted: 14 years ago
#88
Hey guys...I won't be updating for a while now...I am going thru some personal problems and I just don't feel like updating until everything is resolved..idk when but am sorry...I will TRY to update in between when I can but no promises...

P.S. Sorry if the update is boring or if you don't like it..its the best I can do...😭 (Am not happy with it either 😭)


Chapter 40

Geet was sitting in her room getting ready for mehendi ceremony to begin...she puts her bangles...she shakes her hand to make a jingling noise...she adores her eyes with kajal...Geet puts payals on her feet...Meera comes from behind and puts gajara on her hair...while Pinky fixes her dupatta...she looks at Geet through the mirror...both smile at each other...Geet stands up and puts Meera on the seat...
Meera: Geet what are you doing?

Geet: This is also your mehendi ceremony as well

Meera (confused): What do you mean?

Geet: Listen we are like sisters now right..I want my sister to go through all the proper functions that she missed (Meera has tears in her eyes) Don't cry now...I have talked with Arjun already...he has your outfit picked out

Pinky: Geet bhabhi is right...proper functions to banta hai

Geet: Pinky don't worry your time will come also with Adi (Pinky blushes and runs out of the room while Meera and Geet laugh at her)

Arjun (comes in then): Anyone thinking of me?

Geet: Did you get Meera's dress?

Arjun: Yeah...let me tell you Maan bhai and Vicky bhai will go crazy looking at you guys

Geet (becomes sad): Come on Arjun give Meera the dress...(Meera takes the dress and goes inside the bathroom to change) Arjun did you talk to Maan?

Arjun: No I couldn't get hold of his cell (Geet is sad hearing this..Arjun puts his hand on her shoulder) Don't worry Geet am sure he will make it on time...he knows the function is today

Geet: I know...anyway you go and see all the function arrangements...we both will be down shortly...(Arjun leaves...Geet sits on the bed)

Geet pov:
Maan where are you? It has been a week since you left and not once you called...(she looks at her hand and tear forms in her eyes) you promised that you would be the first one to put mehendi on my hands..I won't get mehendi done until you come...please come back soon today...I miss you..you promised to be with me all time...today is very special for the both of us...please come soon...(Meera comes out of the bathroom getting ready...Geet quickly wipes her tears and goes near Meera)
Geet: Wow Vicky will go crazy after seeing you tonight (Geet puts finishing touches on Meera)

Meera (looks down): Does he know about this?

Geet: No he doesn't...that is the fun part (both laughs)

Pinky (comes back up): The ceremony is about to start...

Geet: Ok we are coming...(All three went down the stairs...Geet looked down the stairs hoping to find Maan standing there...Vicky looks at Meera and almost drops his glass...Meera notices and looks down...blushing profusely...Vicky extends his hand for Meera as they come to the bottom of the stairs...Geet looks at the entrance searching for Maan...Dadima brings Geet and Meera down to the center of the room where all the women were sitting...one of the women started applying mehendi on Meera...Geet stands up walking little bit ahead looking at the entrance...Arjun knew why she was upset...he decided to lighten up the mood...

Arjun: Guys lets enjoy...after all Maan Singh Khurana is getting married soon...(everyone applause...the lights go off...the music starts)

[YOUTUBE]https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=3ZArepWXfZA&feature=related[/YOUTUBE]

Mera mahi bada sona hai
Sone pe dil khona hai

(Everyone claps as Geet starts dancing...Arjun tells the camera man to start recording...)
Mere yaar sa, dildaar sa naa koi hona hai
Mera mahi bada sona hai
Sone pe dil khona hai
(Meera looks at Vicky while her mehendi is being applied but quickly turns her head when Vicky looks at her...Pinky and Adi both stare at each other smiling oblivious to their surroundings...)

Aaja, aaja ve mahi aaja
Aaja ve channa aaja
Aaja aaja ve sajnaa ve
Geet looks at the entrance of the mansion...
Aaja, aaja ve mahi aaja
Aaja ve channa aaja
Aaja aaja ve sajnaa
(Vicky smiles and sits next to Meera slightly brushing his hand on her feet)

Haathon ke choodi khankaa de
Mehndi ka rang khilaa de

Vicky pretends to get something from behind Meera...and brushes his hand on her back..Meera moves a little...Dadima saw this and tells Vicky to leave...
Bindiyaa meri chamkaa de
Barson ki pyaas bujhaa de
Meera holds her laughter as Vicky stands away from the place looking at Geet dancing...
Mera ang ang mahekaa de
Haathon ke choodi khankaa de
Manmeet ke, mujhe preet ke sapnon ko sajaana hai
Geet remembers all the moments spent with Maan...

Mera mahi bada sona hai
Sone pe dil khona hai
Vicky tries to come close to the place again but Dadima stands in front of him...he surrenders and moves away
Mere yaar sa, dildaar sa naa koi hona hai
Mera mahi bada sona hai
Sone pe dil khona hai

Geet looks at the entrance again...hoping for Maan to come back...she feared if he left her as well just like her dad...she controls her tears as she moves with the music...
Aaja, aaja ve mahi aaja
Aaja ve channa aaja
Aaja aaja ve sajnaa ve
Aaja, aaja ve mahi aaja
Aaja ve channa aaja
Aaja aaja ve sajnaa

Jogi kaisa rog lagaa, peed sahi naa jaaye re
Jogan ban main bhayee banwari, jog bada tadpaayi re
Aas lagaaye, naina bichaaye, tars rahe hai raahon mein

Aaja, aaja ve mahi aaja
Aaja ve channa aaja
Aaja aaja ve sajnaa ve

Doori sahi naa ab jaaye
Pal pal judaai tadpaaye
Tears start forming her in eyes..no longer able to control them...
Tanhaai dard bhadaaye

She goes near Dadima and makes a sad face...Dadima pats her face
Tan mann mein aag lagaaye
Koi jaake usko samjhaaye
Doori sahi naa ab jaaye
Ab to mujhe mehboob ki honton ko bhigonaa hai

Maan comes to the function wearing his sherwani...Geet sees him and smiles with tears in her eyes...Dadima and everyone gets happy...she comes near Maan and starts dancing around him...
Mera mahi bada sona hai
Sone pe dil khona hai
Mere yaar sa, dildaar sa naa koi hona hai
Mera mahi bada sona hai
Sone pe dil khona hai

Maan hugs Geet...
an mera dil keh raha hai
Mein sar se le ke paa'oun tak
Tere sandali badan pe mohabbat likh doon
he brings her to the center where Meera and everyone was sitting...
Mera dil keh raha hai
Mein tere surkh larazte honton ki laali pe
Apne labon ki shabnami shararat likh doon
She holds out her hand...Maan gets the mehendi tube and writes his name on her both hands...They both look at each other..."I promised that I will be here on time didn't I?" (he whispers...she looks down...she moves her feet a little..making chan chan noise...Maan looks down...)
Han mera dil keh raha hai
Teri pajeb ki jhankar pe
Teri baahon ke chandan har pe
Apni beicheniyon ki haalat likh doon
He moves her hair that was on her face to the back of her ears...
Mera dil keh raha hai
Tere uljhe geinsoon sanwaaroon
Geet and Maan both look at each other...making silent promises with each other for lifetime..they both smile...
In aankhon ke aaine mein
Tera dulhan sa roop nihaaroon
Iss mehekti zameen ki sej pe
Apne armaanon ki chaahat likh doon
Mohabbat likh doon, Mohabbat!!!
Adi pulls Pinky to dance in the middle of the dance floor...Vicky pulls Dadima...everyone starts joining both and dance away...
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Maan: Geet please listen to me...I said I was sorry (the function was over...Maan was walking behind Geet...as she walks fast ahead of him in the outhouse)

Geet: No!

Maan: I will explain

Geet: explain what! You left for a week without telling anyone anything...

Maan: I know but

Geet: But what...what was so important that you had to leave so suddenly

Maan (runs in front of Geet and stops her...he holds her shoulder): You will find out tonight at dinner...

Geet: I don't want to find out anything...I have to go (she tires walking away from him..Maan holds her hand)

Maan: Please...you will get your answers at dinner...

Geet (looks at him): Ok...(she punches him on his stomach) Don't EVER do that again!

Maan (goes down on his knee..holding his breath): ok (he said weakly...) You know for a girl you know how to punch...

Geet: Thank you...now I have to go and get ready for dinner...I will wait for your explanation...

Maan: ok see you in few minutes...


Precap: 😲

I will move the story fwd when I come back...sorry again!
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Link to: Chapter 41
Edited by mrs.msk - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#89
Take care simi..we will wait..no probs darling..
nice update by the way..
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Posted: 14 years ago
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loved the part.loved the song too...
its ok...take ur time and update..

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