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Posted: 14 years ago
Loved the updates! ⭐️The sari scene while Gaurav on phone with Vikash and Vidya's self-thoughts of how a woman in a cliched movie says that she stopped loving her ex the day she got married and wondering whether it was the same with men! 👍🏼I'm curious as to how she would fall for Gaurav after discovering this truth of his past. Vidya is a village girl but her thinking is modern and I'm glad that she did not hyperventilate on seeing the pics of the other woman like the Vidya in the series. 😛

I'm in love with this ff and the quick updates help in continuity. Good going, Devi! ⭐️
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Posted: 14 years ago

Thee! two women are insecure about one man...interesting!!!

"I stopped loving him the day I married you"... can you truly ever stop loving anyone!

With all three of them: It's not about love anymore, it's about doing the right thing, and what really is the right thing!

It's like I thought drama was when actors cried.... but drama is when the audience cries... and you are leaving no room for mercy!

Loved it!

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Posted: 14 years ago
Your Vidya is a way too mature 24 year old😊. Do 24 year olds have this amount of self-reflection? While she has not formed any attachments to Gaurav shouldn't she be sad at the loss of the possibility of a happy married life?
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: nikipuki

Your Vidya is a way too mature 24 year old😊. Do 24 year olds have this amount of self-reflection? While she has not formed any attachments to Gaurav shouldn't she be sad at the loss of the possibility of a happy married life?


Lol... are all 24 year olds in the same category?
Do they all take up journaling when they are younger and write about their thoughts and feelings in the form of fiction?
Do they all protect a woman from her husband at their wedding reception?
Do they all pass with distinction in BSc.?
Do they all pass the muster of someone like Devyani who knows her son well and handpicks this one to be his wife?

Just thoughts... maybe she is way too mature... ;)

-Devi



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Posted: 14 years ago
Oh my god Devi, it's 17 chapters already?Oh i am so behind, reached only the 7th so far plus i still have three chapters of Eden left..... seriously, how much do you write a day? I wish i could do that too... but i am stuck with exams and study hols...🤢
I have managed to find some time off, hiding in my room in front of my laptop in the guise of preparing my project report... or else i will be dragged away to light firecrackers with my little brother, and ah.. i hate to admit it, but i am seriously scared of them...😳 Well, i can bear the noise, but in no chance can even come close to lighting them myself...😆

Talking of crackers, Wishing a very Happy Vishu to you and ur family... Hope you have a prosperous year ahead...😊

Okay, i better go back to reading the updates now lest i be left further behind. Knowing you, a chapter 18 might be coming anytime now... (it's not a complaint ok?)😆
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Posted: 14 years ago
My heartbroke when she found out only because living with the unknown is so much more safer than knowing the failure of a "marriage". I hope obviously with childlike hope that he falls for her before she for him. A marriage built on friendship can only last so long....
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Posted: 14 years ago


Chapter 18 – A Brush with Water

It had been exactly two and a half months since he had last seen her. Now he was almost positive that she had planned it out this way.

"Was this your intention all along? Wait until I marry and then you can let me down easy?"

He was looking at his text stream with her from last week.

"Ha! Which one do you peg me for? A mercenary or a martyr?" she had written back.

"You tell me." Had been his reply.

"Gaurav, my world does not revolve around you." She had written back and he had been surprised at the bite in her response.

"You have made that abundantly clear time and again, Salome. The fact that my only interaction with you for the past two and a half months has been through this stupid device that I am starting to abhor should be evidence enough."

"Do you want me to apologize for being rude, Gaurav? Alright, I will. My mother is…well, let's just say that in some people, narcissism knows no bounds."

"Do you need anything? Any help from me?" he had written back.

"No.. no.. I am alright.. I likely won't be able to see you for another month or so. Don't hold it against me."

"I am still not convinced that you are not purposely avoiding me." He had told her one last time.

"Oh come on Gaurav. You have cut yourself off from my body. What else is there?" She had replied.

He had been too angry to answer. And a half hour later, she had sent him one last text.

"I am sorry. Truly. You didn't deserve that. Treat your wife well, Gaurav. It's easy for a woman to fall in love with you. You don't make it hard at all…"

He had not replied to that one either. He hadn't known what to say.

It had gotten him thinking though. Was his wife in love with him? He didn't think so… she was so… different from what he had expected. She was not flirty or coy or any of those things. She read a lot and she was evidently very very good at math. They had a routine now where he would get home from work and as he was settling in, he would look to her for her math puzzle of the day. Most of them were not as complex as the infinity paradox, but just hard enough to puzzle him through dinner when they ate together. After dinner, she would tell him the answer if he had not gotten it yet. He found that such routines were so easy to establish; why had he never noticed before…

He took her out to see the city during the weekends. She liked to it a certain degree, but he could tell that it fatigued her quickly. She was someone who liked parks or gardens or nature much better, although she did like going to movies with him. And he was discovering that she had a liking for foreign films. He had teased her and told her that her English was not yet good enough to understand all the subtitles – which required him to translate occasionally when a word was completely foreign to her – but she had answered that most foreign films had less dialogues and that it was all about reading the body language and the subtleties in expression. He had thought that interesting and had taken to watching some with her – she liked the Cantonese ones the best. There was one movie in which he timed 20 minutes without a single utterance – it was incredible!

He walked out of his room as he thought of what had brought on his particular line of musings… oh yes… whether he thought his wife was in love with him?

He returned to the same answer…. He didn't think so…

For one, she never made any demands on his time aside from when they were together by chance or by routine; she never sought him out otherwise. And secondly, she never asked him why they slept in separate beds - they have been married for more than two months and she had not shown the least bit of curiosity about that, which he thought was strange. Thirdly, well… she just had no tell-tale signs of a woman in love; no coy looks, no flushed skin; no change in her breathing around him… no eye-batting – which he doubted that she would ever do - he smiled at the thought. In fact, there were times when she didn't notice him at all… not that he was complaining… it was just an unusual experience and one that made him feel comfortable with her in a way that he has never felt with anyone before.

He walked into his parlor to grab something out of his modest library and then noticed his father standing on the balcony looking down.

He couldn't stop the expletive that escaped his lips as he rushed towards the window and looked down as well. Imli, who had evidently been watering the garden, had just turned her water-hose on his wife who had been passing by.

Even though she tried to run away from Imli, Vidya was completely drenched in a few minutes and he saw her turn around with laughter to lunge at the hose in Imli's hands to return the favor to the other woman.

He looked back at his father and could only imagine what was going through his head. It was enough to make him run out of the room and down the stairs and out of the house, but he slowed himself when he was outside. He saw Imli grab the hose from Vidya with force and in the process pull off the pallu of her sari. He shook his head in disbelief; everyone in this house was hell bent on taking his wife's clothes off. At the sight, he broke into a run and rushed in front of the hose just as Imli sprayed the water again at a now completely wet Vidya. And sure enough, he felt the force of the water on his back, pushing him towards his wife.

The only thing that concerned him at that moment was the fact that his father was still watching his wife from the balcony. He grabbed her hand in his and ran back into the house, forcing her to run with him.

"Gaurav…" she started, but he did not pause to listen as he rushed up the stairs. Her sari was dripping everywhere and her bare foot slipped on the stairs as she tried to keep pace with him. He turned around and pulled on her hand with greater force before she fell.

"What..?" she started again, but he could hear his father's footsteps from upstairs. He picked his surprised wife up in his arms and turned into the hallway of the wing on the right to rush to their room. She looked at him, perplexed, and he tried to not look at her. He didn't know how he was going to explain his behavior to her when they reached their room. But then he saw her become distracted by something behind them and scoot closer into him just before she put her arms around him.

He hadn't known that his wife was afraid of his father…

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Edited by sridevi27 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
"You have cut yourself off from my body"...meaning no human-contact and losing sense of reality! But Gaurav's mind is seeking something more...

It seems like the Gaurav & Vidya are not the main leads!

Why do I feel that SSP will lead to Gaurav & Vidya's togetherness, which is so needed!

Edited by night13 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Vidya is keeping up well even after locating those secret stash of pictures.
Honestly, I need to know Vidya more to comment about her. She and her reactions as you have mentioned is not that of a typical 24 yr old. I'm really looking for the parts where you will give more insight to her character and her expectations from this marriage.

She has jumped the college wagon for now,right after he presents her the opportunity. I'm sure that's got her drugged up enough not to let her think about the of their marital affairs...Well how long can you be in denial?

Gaurav...Tsk..Tsk..not an ounce of guilt, even after two months of marriage.
Salome is giving him the cold shoulder too.

Supposing Salome feels he has proven his love for her, then what? What really happens to Vidya?...This is more of an open deal they are going for...
😕
They are all on Shaky grounds.

Great Updates Devi...You got me hooked now.

Hasini

PS. The Paradox of Infinity - A pleasant journey in the park...good one. But her reaction - totally not sure.
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: 6thElement

Vidya is keeping up well even after locating those secret stash of pictures.
Honestly, I need to know Vidya more to comment about her. She and her reactions as you have mentioned is not that of a typical 24 yr old. I'm really looking for the parts where you will give more insight to her character and her expectations from this marriage.

She has jumped the college wagon for now,right after he presents her the opportunity. I'm sure that's got her drugged up enough not to let her think about the of their marital affairs...Well how long can you be in denial?

Gaurav...Tsk..Tsk..not an ounce of guilt, even after two months of marriage.
Salome is giving him the cold shoulder too.

Supposing Salome feels he has proven his love for her, then what? What really happens to Vidya?...This is more of an open deal they are going for...
😕
They are all on Shaky grounds.

Great Updates Devi...You got me hooked now.

Hasini

PS. The Paradox of Infinity - A pleasant journey in the park...good one. But her reaction - totally not sure.


To Hasini and others who are wondering the same,

Thanks for all your comments. I really enjoy them :)

In answer to some questions that have been raised.. well, I don't know if it's answers as much as trying to see if we can thing about this in a different way...

Firstly, I don't know that it's absolutely necessary to define the boundaries of a person's repertoire of responses merely by age. Besides, VIdya is 24, not 17 or 18, an age range where some of the developmental grounded-ness is still emerging (although not impossible... once again, I think you have to allow for individual variation...)

Secondly, I think by what is known of Vidya thus far, it's evident that she is more on the rational side rather than someone with stars in her eyes who went into this marriage with great expectations. In fact, from the earlier updates, it is evident that it was not a match that she was particularly keen on due to taking her away from her village... so she was by no means blown over by anything about the groom or his family...

Thirdly, this is related to the above point, I think some of the difficulty many of the readers are having in connecting with Vidya is that she is so matter-of-fact about the state of her marriage. As I noted earlier, this is not a girl who had any specific expectations from marriage - yes, there is certainly a hope that it will be a good one, but given that the whole process was not decided upon by her and was rather through the arranged marriage route, she knows that the cards can fall any which way. And there is a time when she compares her plight to that of Uttara or Devyani and remarks that rather what she has with Gaurav than what they have. She gathers that arranged marriages do not always result in love - just as love marriages don't always sustain love.

The disclaimer of course - at this juncture - is that it is easier to be so rational when your feelings are not involved romantically, or when you have a different notion of romantic love... If and when her feelings become involved, things may be different (or not.... Vidya can be a bit of a surprise ;)

(p.s. Vidya is not really in denial. there is no truth that she finds so disheartening that she has to deny it... - except maybe the one about her father-in-law, but that's more naivete and lack of experience rather than anything else, although she is intuitive enough to fear him - I think she is trying to understand what her relationship with Gaurav could be given that he is very likely in love with someone else. she doesn't blame him for it, although evidently she wonders why he did not get to marry the other woman, but then again, it's not a conversation that she will have with him unless he brings it up himself...)

Overall, the girl is acting a bit like her husband is a close friend that she rooms with ;) which is a better option that moping around trying to change things that may not be changeable...

As for Gaurav, not an ounce of guilt? I think that's a bit unfair in this case... In fact, I think that' all the man has... both towards Salome and towards Vidya... but it doesn't change his feelings for Salome or his circumstance with Vidya... so he tries to protect them both in his own way... even though Salome obviously has her own lover's prerogative to needle him about it... and Vidya... well, Vidya seems to strangely be okay with it... on the flip side, he could be a total boor about it and take it out on Vidya or Salome...

They are all taking it one day at a time now.. but of course, nothing remains the same way forever and circumstances inevitably introduces changes that you have to either accommodate to or withdraw from...

-Devi


Edited by sridevi27 - 14 years ago

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