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Araina

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Posted: 15 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: sindu555
nice start khushi ... cant wait for the 1st part

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Sana

thnx sana darlin. so glad you are eager.

love, khushi 😛

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Posted: 15 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: simi91
cong shongo i hope

with many thread

& success

khushi its damn

good intro love it

my sweety

super mindblowing

so when is the

update

pls cont soonnnnnnnnnnnnn

thank yuuuuuuuuuu so muchhhhhhhhhh

thnx kate. hope i can continue this ff that far.

glad you liked the intro so much dear.

thankyou!

i said na, i had to go with mom. so ud will b der wehn u wake up :)

n my pleasure dear. 😛

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Araina

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Posted: 15 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: simi91
np khushi we i'll be waiting go with mom

thnx for understanding dear.

just got back and edited the posts. have a look...

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Araina

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Posted: 15 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: shah10
awsome start.

do continue plz

cant wait for an updte.

thx

thankyou dear!

i'll continue tonight.

will let you know when i ud thru pm. 😊

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Isha

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Posted: 15 years ago

#15

Seems very very interesting...

Wonder how the story will play out..

and love the pic of Maan..so hot.

and loved the people you picked to play the characters...

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Araina

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Posted: 15 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: PurplePetal
Seems very very interesting... thank you isha!

Wonder how the story will play out.. khushi's wondering the same thing😆

and love the pic of Maan..so hot. i know ryt! found it after searching the net for half hr!😛

and loved the people you picked to play the characters... thnx :)

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thnx for ur lovely comment dear isha

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Posted: 15 years ago

#17

Chapter one

USA

Like every morning Maan was in deep sleep. He came late at night from the club and now he was deep asleep when sun rays came on his face through the open curtains. That was something he hated. The rays coming on his face. He always forgets to close the window curtains before he goes to sleep. He turned his face on the other side but it was of no use. slowly, the room was lit with light. He opened his eyes slowly, and looked at the window and said 'Why dose this sun rise so early it always disturbs me when I am in deep sleep' (khushi says, how is it early morning at 11:30??) and threw away the blanket and got up like everyday and went to take a shower.

His room was simple considered to rest of the house. A bed with blue sheet and a blue blanket. There was a table where he put his files and a laptop. His room was full of his pictures and his fav actor and actress and his daadi's pics which he took himself. After a while he came out in towel, his hair wet, (he looks so hot😳) went to closet and took his black shirt and his blue jeans (offff black he Is going to kill every girl on road😆) and he was ready to be off for office.

He went and stood in front of mirror and stared to comb his hair. When he was finished, he said 'Wow maan, you looking dashing'. He never used to have his break fast because there was no one to make break fast for him he usually had his break fast in office.

Like always he locked his house and went to the left where a middle age women was sitting. He smiled and went to her and said, 'Hi sexy.' naughtily.

'Hi hotty.' said the women. 'You look happy today. May I know the reason?'

Maan laughed and said 'No reason, but I just feel something good is going to happen today'.

Her real name was Jane but maan always calls her sexy.

'Really!' said Jane. 'May I know what is that good thing?'

'I don't know I just get the feeling. Ok I getting late for office. (isn't he already late!🥱 ) I will go now. Here are my keys. ok bye sexy.' said maan. he always used to give the house keys to Jane in case some workers come by and they need something. (As i mentioned, he trusts people easily.)

'Ok ok don't tell me. But I won't give up. Bye, take care.' said Jane.

Maan looked at her and waved with a big grin.

While he was passing a few girls were standing on the corner with opened mouth. (with a hot guy like that ho wouldn't) They were staring at maan but he didn't notice and took his bike keys and zoomed off. He didn't really fancy cars. For him, bike's are the best even though he owned about 3 cars, he preferred his one and only bike. He sat on it and started going to his office. He didn't know this day would be the best day of his life.

Precap: Geet's World!

Short, but sweet ud. Next part at night. so, work with this much for now. Hope it was good enough. commnt/criticize. if you have suggestions, let ke know. it will help me a lot. Press the like button 😉

Love khushi

Chapter 2

Edited by Princess_Khushi - 15 years ago