Fiza'a OS gallery thread 1 - Page 37

😊lovely part

Originally posted by: SujaLuvsMayur

Phew,

finally i complete ur all updates.

it was superb.

lovely

i love mayank :D he's so sweet :D so much dedicate towards his work n his patient :D

nups was so mean :(

she alwaz think abt money :(

i love mayur nokh-jhok.

jangli billi...........LOL.........gud one :D

zindgai k expense se death ke expense are much more cheaper

bt this is d best :D

Esha-nups scene was grt.

lovd it.

nw nups feeling something abt this poor kids.

another gud update :D

ur doing fab job, i must say.

yaar tu sach me dr hai na???? kavi kavi mujhe doubt hota hai😕

wow ..............again mayur conflict.

ye log ladna kab chorenge!!!!

bt i love their ladai............LOL

awwww..........mayank was sad, n nups missing his mischief :(

so sweeeeettttttttttttttttttt..............lovely..............i love her lie.

i knw, nups look stunning in pink ............she's looking gorgeous in every color :D

Mayank: han han '.aur tumhara wala tu bechara maar gaya'us ko tu tum kabhi paper waeight se , kabhi hath se, kabhi zaman se '.sab se maro gi hain

Nupur: nhi woh tu maynk special hai

awwwwww............nups almost confessed :D

love d way u shows their love.

it was really nice to see that Mayank was her secreat admirer :D

i knw it was late, bt u shld name it, colors of life or open secret admirer :P

thnku so much

Part 4:

I'm so sorry for d late comments

d update was so amazing

loved it

cont soon

Wow

d last part was so cool

loved it

really sorry for d late comments

do write more

Oyeeeeeeee Finu
where is my update
dekh update it jaldi jaldi-warna????

hello guys

thnku soo much for loving this ss tht much

i have been trying to write its epilogue frm past wks but just cant...ask faria ......

but today i have cum up with sumthing .....i hope u digest tht....

its nt tht gud....but i just wasnt able to do more.....im sorry for tht

rplyd to u all

thnks

n sorry for errors havent even done the spell check

lova ya

fiza

epilogue

Days pass life chnges .... things changed...... people chnge .....the only thing tht reamined the same is the love n honesty a perrson holds for another .................

same is with the......thy fight they love together they nt only rock the world put there home too....her voice n his run aways all where there...nthin gstoped them living there usually unique love live......

neither there work ....reposibilities.....

nupur: tum apni harkato se baaz nhi aao gay

mayank: nhi jan

nupur: yeah galat hai mayank

mayank: mein ny kya kiya......innocently

nupur: tum ny dhokay se in papers per sign keray aur expense clear keray

maaynk: no way.....choot....wht i did ....cuming close he said misheviusly

flash back:

mayank: u cant read n sign a doucment if i want

nupur: haa haa.. i never ever did sign any of doucment without reading .....if even it just last min of death i will read n sigh

mayank: bet

nupur: bet

mayank: oki here is pen...n now start reading ....try reading

she looked at him with surprised .....he strt moving close ot her

nupur: wht

mayank: wht wht ...read ur document......

nupur: im ...she lean down to read..whn she felt hands saked around her ...she shiver but composed herself ...nupur bhuhsan sharam has bet...no she cant get lost.....he put his chin ion her shoulder...hiding his face in her hairs.....sliding his finger on her face ...delibertly trailing them slowly n more slwoly charseing her...he moved her hairs.......

her hand start to shiver.....n she closed her eyes.....he smiled..n whispered in her ears .....sign jan.....

nthing more she did ..she smily did wht he asked.....n the second he left her n move back .....crosoing his hands he stood grining at her

nupur: mayankkkkkkkkkkkkkkkk

flashback

nupur: u r playing with my trust

it wasnt true ....it was nt a big thing ...she would have sign but as usal she love irriaitng him as much as he enjoy doing to do.......

maynk: u thing so

nupur: but...this isnt fair....she pouted......

mayank: he hugged her frm back...wht i made u sign ....or a have left sum unfinished businees

she smiled turning n hiding herself in him

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neither there fights where stoped by there children

rahual: mam ur sach a janu hitler

bth of them where hell shooked nupur a bit embaresed..mayank was having tea which spited out of his mouth ....this was sumtihng maynk call her in private..nevr in frint of his son as he didnt want him to mis behave with her

mayank: wht kind of language is this rahul

rahaul: wht i was parising mom..whn ever u say so she smile so widely....i wonder how hitler can smile

nupur: rahul....tum ny apni mam ko hilter kaha

rahual: pyar se mom.....ur soo sweet janu hitler

mayank: rahul its the last time u said tht......

mayank was trying hard contolong his laughter

rahual: wht janu n sweet /....so i can call her hilter.....she is nt giving me my PS back ....

myank: becuse u havent done ur homework..hilter ' son

rahaul: mom dad called u hitler agin...now twht shud i do...i though its sumthing gud na

mayank was helll shocked whttt

nupur: myank,,,,,atleast dont say so infrnt of ur son....do u have a litte repect for me....

rahaul: lets go mom we wil play PS together

nupur: yes son..lets go

he run towards thm n swept rahul frm ground.....

mayank: he was calling u hitler ....n see such a nupurs son cleaver........ he hits him playfully......mam ko man liya .....aur dad ko phasa diya

rahul: he was lauhg as he tickle him.....dadd....u always get stucked....it so easy to make u bakra

nupur: rahuall......

rahul: ok sorry baba.....im geting my PSP back

maynk: no

rahual: plsss na

nupur: homewrok frst

rahual: promise i'll do it after it

maynk: ok go

rhual : thnks dad......n janu u to he threw her flying kiss

mayank burst in to laughter

nupur: yeh bulkil tum per agaya....dekho rahy ho abhi se flirt kerta hai aur bagur do tum us ko bh apni tarah

mayank: tu tum hona humain sdharny k lyan

rahaul"omg he shouted at top of his voice

bth of thr rush

kya hua

OMg mom look....PS 2....dad i soo love ya

maynk: lova ya to...enjoy

nupur: mayank ..tum hara deeamgh karab hogaya itna expenseve gift...

bth of the shrams hit ther head with hand.....

nt again moommm..thy said in union

nupur: wht nt agian....zaroorat kya hai thi bolo mayank....

mayank: dkho meri janu hitler....shram hai woh the shrama

nupur: ahnn tu khandi bemari hai .....pasay urany ke....

mayank: he laughed a bit......tum aur tumahri kanjossi....

nupur: hato door .....daafa hoo

uff.....24 meins 26 ghantay larti hai......hitler ....rkh.......

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girl: wao dad ....u use to fight with her so much .....i just cant belive mom was like tht...so arrognat

mayank: lol.....hmmm she was nt use to lke tht she still the same....n ths one thing tht has bring us here ....25 yeasr of togetherness.....

girl: ji nhi ...my mother in law is nt like tht ....

mayank: uff.....tum sary bachy ......meri side mat lay na khabi.....jahy woh tum logo ko kitna daat lay but jao gay us ki pass../.

girl....lol.....dad y u called her hitler

mayank: she puted like a child .....initilay she behave like a hitler.....thn i start loving the expression wch she gave me after lsitening the word......still she can beat me black n blue on this word.....aur na bolo tu bhi problem hai

riya: lolz.....god dad.....i so adore ur realtion ...unique ......but y u called it veiled off

mayank: hmm.....there was a veil on nupurs imagine...nupurs personlity ..neagtive one.......though she allowed me to enter but ...she didnt take it off.......but thn i just want to take it off....to know people ...tht at times people r after to show thereself ...as thy never get a person who can take thm as them self.....

riya: ohhh.....soo u made the veiled offf.....wao...acha i thought u where rembering the day....she said mishevoul

mayank: oye .....ur taking to ur dad...

riya: so ...

mayank: expect th un expected ...u wont belived wht she did.....my madam ...hilter did tht honur by herself

riya: wht ..matlab

mayank: u cant imagin e wht she did

i entered n she threw the veil.....n said ...uff deamgh karab hogya ...ek tu itni garmi uper se itna sab kuch....yaar kam as kam pani tu pilado ....n she cross her leg b sit

he stand at the door puting his hand on his waist..

u suppoese to birde madam

riay: burst in to laughter....i just cant believe it......OMG

mayank: comon in warna ur hitler 3rd world war shoor kerday gi..

he enter in the hall.....n fwd his hand to take her hand in his.....puting it around his arm...n secure it with his hand ...moving to center....the look at there cake n burts in to laughter

happy wedding aniversry

MRs hitler..n mr ....:)

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life as beautiful as we made.......n as worsen as we think ...............

i hope i did justice

reserved

Edited
Mindblowing epilogue................can't be any better than this...................how u cannot do justice...............never under estimate urself....................n THE VEILED OFF description 😆..........By God................u r amazing writer............Thankyou so much for this wonderful epilogue🤗...........!!!