KYA PYAAR HO JAEGA(new ff)

Nish

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Posted: 14 years ago

#531

awwwwwww!😊

amazing update!👏

loved it!!❤️

update soon!👍🏼

thanks for the pm!😆

*anisha

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Posted: 14 years ago

#532

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Posted: 14 years ago

#533

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luv-myur

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Posted: 14 years ago

#534

Hey ...
It's your ff again . Yey!! Haha read all of it today.
When I read the intro I was like "wow- it's all jumbled up n is going to b sooooo interesting" ... Started hating mayanks character but then he was turning good n right then the update ended :(
:D thankyou so much for writing n plz do pm me when u update. Enjoyed reading it up till now :)

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Shafy_Kaira_MN

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Posted: 14 years ago

#535

Originally posted by: alishaL786
hey hazra!! 😊
amazing update! 👏

thanks for the pm and please update soon!! 😊

~Alisha~

please update.... please update.. please update.. please update. please update

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hazra

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Posted: 14 years ago

#536

hi guys..updated 15th part..i hope u like it...dont forget to comment...read n njoy..

samrat felt very bad...he angrily went from there..

g-di...mai bhi chalti hu..apna khyal rakhna..bye..

n-bye gunjan..

gunjan also went from there...

m-nupur..tum bohot thak chuki hogi...tum ab so jao..

n-thick hai mayank...😊

next day...10 sep 2009(thursday)...in room...nupur woke up...she was feeling vry happy...she saw mayank sleeping beside her...she smiled looking at mayank...then she went in the bathroom...after sometime...

n to herself-ye mayank abhi tak soya hai...

then she went to him...

n-mayank...mayank ab utho..subah ho gayi hai..

m-aree jao na..sone do mujhe...🥱

n to herself-of ho...ye to uthne ka naam hi nahi le raha hai...ab mujhe hi kuch karna hoga...

nupur take a glass of water...she splash some water on his face n he wakes up angrily...

m-ye kya kar rahi ho tum nupur..

n-ab tum uth nahi rahe the to mai kya karti..

m-ye kya tarika hai kisi ki nind kharab karne ka..

n-mayank ab itna gussa mat ho...mai bore ho rahi hu..mujhe kahi bahar jana hai...😔

she was going bt mayank caught her hand...she turned back...

m-sorry...😊

n-its ok...😊ab jaldi se taiyar ho jao...

m-😊

other side...

g-samrat...ab kahi bahar ghumne chalte haina...😊

s-ha gunjan..mai bhi yahi soch raha tha...chalo..😊

both left from there...

g-samrat...kyu na di aur mayank ko bhi sath mai...

s-nahi gunjan...aur vaise bhi ham unke sath nahi aye hai...isliye ham dono hi sirf jaege..

g-thick hai samrat...

other side...in hospital...riddhima was in locker room..muskan comes..

mu-hey ridzi...😊

r-😔

mu-mujhe pata hai tu arman se gussa hai par...ek baar uski baat sun to le...

r-mujhe kisi ki baat nahi sunni hai...

she went from there...she went to sonia...

r-hi sonia..kaisi ho tum??

so-hi dr.riddhima...mai thick hu..ap kaisi hai??😊

r-mai bhi thick hu beta...

so-mera dost arman kaha hai??

r-...mujhe nahi pata...

so-mujhe pata hai ap mere dost se gussa hai...

r-beta aisi koi baat nahi hai...tum...

so-mujhe sab pata hai...ap mere dost se gussa kyu hai??

r-sonia..ye tumse kisne kaha??

so-mere dost ne...dr.riddhima..apko ek baat bolu??

r-ha bolo na..

so-arman apse bohot pyar karta hai aur mai ap dono ko sath mai dekhna chahti hu...mujhe pata hai ki ab mai thodi din mai bhagwan ji ke paas chali jaogi par usse pehle mai ap dono ko ek sath dekhna chahti hu..ap dono ek sath bohot ache lagte ho...😊

r-sonia...ye sab tumse kisne kaha...tumhe kuch nahi hoga beta...tum bilkul thick ho...

so-mai bohot khush hu...mai bhagwan ji ke paas chale jaogi...aur mere mummy papa bhi to bhagwan ji ke paas hai to mai apne mummy papa se bhi mil paogi...isliye mai bohot khush hu...😊

r-ye sab tumse arman ne kaha na??😭

so-nahi...ye sab to mujhe pehle se hi pata tha...😊

r-😭

so-ap ro kyu rahi hai??mai to nahi ro rahi hu to fir ap kyu ro rahi hai??

r-kuch nahi...😭

then riddhima hugged her...arman comes...

so-dost...😊

ar-😊

so-arman ye dekho na riddhima ro rahi hai...

ar-kya hua riddhima??

r-kuch nahi...

riddhima went from there...

ar-riddhima kyu ro rahi thi??

so-pata nahi...maine to sirf itna kaha ki mai kuch din mai bhagwan ji ke paas chale jaogi to ye rone lagi...

rahul comes..

ra-aree arman...tu yaha hai...dr.kirti sabko bula rahi hai..chal...

ar-sonia..mai thodi der mai ata hu..ok..😊

so-ok..😊

rahul and arman went...other side...at uday's home...suhana was cooking...

su to herself-ye roz roz khana banana mujhe bohot bore hota hai...kaha fas gayi hu mai...kabhi nahi socha tha ki aisi hogi meri life shadi ke baad...vo diya roz mujhe kuch na kuch sunate rehti hai aur vo uday muh se awaaz bhi nahi nikalta hai...ye kaisi life hai meri...😔

other side..diya was leaving for clg..

d-mom..mai clg jaa rahi hu..bye..

dm-aree ruko diya...vo tumhare mobile par benji ka phone aya tha...usne tumhe phone karne ko kaha hai...

d-ok mom..bye..

diya left frm there...

d to herself-ye benji apne ap ko samajta kya hai...jab us idiot ko maine keh diya hai ki mai usse pyaar nahi karti hu fir bhi piche pad gaya hai..aj use sabak sikhana hi padega..😡

in clg...

b to himself-aj samrat ko phone karta hu..itne dino se baat bhi nahi hui hai...shadi ke baad dost ko bhul gaya...

he calls samrat...

s-benji...😊

b-kya samrat...shadi ke baad tu to mujhe bhul hi gaya...

s-aree aisi baat nahi hai...aur bol tu kaisa hai??😊

b-mai to thick hu..par tu hai kaha??

s-mai...mai vo switzerland mai hu..

b-ohh...samaj gaya mai..honeymoon...chal mai rakhta hu...tu enjoy kar...bye..😊

s-bye..

both cuts the call..

g-kiska phone tha samrat??

s-benji...

g-ohh...kaisa hai vo??

s-thick hai...

(samrat gunjan mayank nupur uday benji diya they all studied in the same clg..but after their marraige they left the clg)...other side..

n-mayank..mujhe maa se baat karne ka bohot man kar raha hai..phone laga dona..😊

m-thick hai...

he calls...

n-kya hua mayank??

m-phone lag nahi raha hai...

n-vapas karo..

he again call..

m-nupur phone hi nahi lag raha hai...

n-😔

m-ab isme udas hone wali kya baat hai...baadme baat kar lena..

n-thick hai...

then mayank saw gunjan standing alone..

m-gunjan...

then nupur also saw her...mayank went to gunjan...

n to herself-jab bhi kuch acha hone jata hai to ye gunjan bichme aa jati hai..😔

mayank went to her..

m-gunjan..tum yaha akeli khadi ho..

g-mayank...vo samrat ata hi hoga abhi...

m-ohh...

g-tum jao...

m-par...

g-mayank pls jao yaha se...agar samrat ne dekh liya to...tum pls jao..😔

mayank went from there...

m-chalo nupur..ham kahi aur jagah chalte hai...

n-ok..

mayank and nupur left frm that place...other side...in hospital...riddhima was in general ward..muskan went to her..

mu-riddhima...😭

r-muskan...muskan tu ro kyu rahi hai??kya hua??

mu-vo...😭

r-kya hua muskan??

mu-riddhima vo...tu..tu chal mere sath...😭

she took riddhima with her...riddhima was shocked to see sonia dead..

r-sonia...😭

she went to her...

r-sonia...sonia utho...😭

mu-riddhima...she is dead...😭

r-nahi...nahi..aisa nahi ho sakta..😭

r-sonia..sonia pls uth jao..pls sonia uth jao na..😭

ar-riddhima..

r-arman..haat hathao apna...😭😡

ar-riddhima...

riddhima went from there...

mu-ab riddhima ko sambhalna bohot muskil hai...😔

after sometime...arman went in locker room...he was very upset...

mu-arman...tujhe riddhima se baat karni chahiye...use sirf tu samja sakta hai...jaa riddhima ke paas...

ar-nahi muskan...vo meri baat nahi manegi..

mu-arman..tu jaa riddhima ke paas..use teri zarurat hai...vo bohot ro rahi hai...

arman went from there...

ar-rahul...tune riddhima ko kahi dekha hai??

ra-vo dr.kirti se permission lekar ghar chale gayi..maine use roka bhi par vo...

ar-kya...

ra-tera phone baj raha hai??

he receive the call..

ar-ha sukriti bolo kya hua??

su-arman...riddhima bohot ro rahi hai..kuch bata bhi nahi rahi hai mujhe...kuch hua hai kya??sab thick to haina??

ar-sukriti mai ghar aa raha hu fir tumhe sab batata hu...bye..

he cuts the call..

ra-kaha jaa raha hai tu arman??

ar-mujhe ghar jaana hai...riddhima ghar pohoc chuki hai aur vo bohot ro rahi hai..mujhe use samjana hoga...

ra-thick hai arman..tu jaa...

arman left from there...he reached home...

su-arman..acha hua tum aa gaye...dekho na riddhima ne kya haal bana diya hai apna...ro ro kar bura haal bana diya hai apna..😔

both went in riddhima's room...

ar-riddhima...

r-😭

su-riddhima kya hua??tu itna kyu ro rahi hai...

r-di...di sonia...😭

su-sonia...kya hua use??

r-di...vo ab nahi rahi..she is no more..😭

su-what...😔

ar-riddhima..ham sab ko bohot bura laga par ab ham kuch nahi kar sakte...use blood cancer tha...aur tum janti ho ki aise case mai patient zaada nahi ji sakta...

r-😭

su-arman thick keh raha hai riddhima...pls ab rona band karo..tum kabse ro rahi hai...

r-par di...vo...bhagwan hamesha ache logo ko apne paas kyu bula lete hai...😭

ar-riddhima...uske nasib mai itna hi jeena likha tha...

su-riddhima...ab bas ho gaya..ab tum aur nahi roegi...chalo ab pani pilo..ye lo..

arman cell rings...

ar-ha rahul...

ra-arman tu to gaya...

ar-kya hua??

ra-dr.kirti tujpar bohot gussa hai..tune jaane se pehle unse permission nahi li...isliye ab punishment ke liye taiyar ho jana kal..

ar-shit...

ra-chal ab mai rakhta hu...

both cuts the call..

su-kya hua arman??

ar-kuch nahi...mai dr.kirti ko bina batae yaha aa gaya isliye vo gussa ho gayi...ab kal punsihment...

su-ohh...

r-tumhe yaha ane ke liye kisne kaha tha...

ar-mujhe sukriti ne kaha ki tum bohot ro rahi thi isliye...

r-arman...mai apna khyal khud rah sakti hu...tumhe nahi ana chahiye tha...

su-of ho..ab bas karo...riddhima..tu chal mere kitchen mai meri help karne..is bahane tera mood bhi thick ho jaega..chal...

both went in the kitchen...after sometime..its 10...in arman's room...

su-arman...tum aj kal mood mai nahi rehte ho..mera matlab jaise tum pehle the ab tum bilkul alag ho chuke ho...mai uski wajah janna chahti hu..

ar-sukriti aisi koi baat nahi hai...

su-arman..mai tumhari patni hu aur mai tumhe achi tarah samajti hu...pata nahi kyu par mujhe aisa lagta hai ki tum mujse kuch kehna chahte ho par keh nahi pate ho...

ar-...

su-bolo na arman...kuch kehna chahte ho to keh do pls...

ar-mujhe nind aa rahi hai...good night...

arman switch off the light n slept...

su to herself-mujhe pata hai arman tum mujse kuch to chupa rahe ho aur mai vo jankar hi rahugi...😔

other side...in room..

n to herself-mayank itna bura bhi nahi hai..mayank bohot acha insan hai..use meri kitni fikar hai..😊par ye mayank ko itni der kyu lag rahi hai...

then somebody knock the door..nupur went n open the door..

n-mayank...

he was drunk...

n-mayank tum...tumne drink kiya...

m-ha...drink karna galat baat thodi hai...

he was nt in his sense as he was drunk...

n-mayank..mayank sambhalo apne ko..chalo mere sath...

then she made her sit on bed...

n-mayank...tum yaha betho mai ati hu...

then he caught her hand and pulled her towards him..

n-mayank..ye tum..mera haat chodo mayank...

he was going close to her...

n-mayank tum...😔

as he was going closer n closer nupur pushed him...

n-pagal ho gaye tum mayank..kya kar rahe ho tum..😔

m-aree ye kaisi baate kar rahi ho tum..hak hai mera tumpar..patni ho tum meri..mai jo chahu vo kar sakta hu...

n-mayank tum abhi hosh mai nahi ho..tumhe aram ki zarurat hai..tum so jao..

mayank stood up angrily...n pulled her towards him...

n-mayank..mayank pls chodo mujhe...😔

then he kept his finger on her lips...

m-chup...bilkul chup...

nupur was silent...both were looking in each other's eyes...then slowly slowly mayank went closer to her n kissed on her forhead...then when he was going to kiss her on her lips nupur pushed him..

n-mayank pls tum...tum so jao...tum hosh mai nahi ho..

m-hosh mai to mai ab aya hu...ek baat sun lo tum...tum meri gunjan ki jagah kabhi nahi le sakti..samji..😡(he shouted at her)

n-😭

then he went from there...

n to herself-maine socha tha ki mayank ab badal ne laga hai par...maine socha ki mayank bohot acha insan hai par mai galat thi...😭

hey guys..here ends my 15th part...i hope u like it...dont forget to comment...so kya hoga ab??janne ke liye wait kijiye mere next update ka..love u all..

hazra

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