Fiza'a OS gallery thread 1 - Page 33

very nice update

thx alot for the pm

plz update soon. cant wait more plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz

os pg 25- part 1

My god fiza...How can i miss this for so long...Yaha 4 updates ho gaye and i just noticed now...Shayed mere aankhe aur dimag dono kharab ho gaye hai...
It ws soooooooooooo amazing...Effected like drugs on me...Just read all four parts and ws wanting not to finish...Par khatam ho hi gaya...Vo bhi at this crucial point...😒
Loved the concept dear...Mayank as a secret admirer...So cute....But nupur ws really very rude to him before the resignation thing...
And the tactic mayank played to see her in pink.😍😍😍..That ws fab...She blushed at his words, went behind him to console him all these r signs that she also feel for him...Dnt know what will happen now...
Now cont sooooooon...Cant wait and sorry for not commenting for so long...🤗🤗

Hi guys

Again I m sorry 'I havet rply to u'but at the end of ths SS I will'.for sure'

Thnks faruu'itni sari mithai k lyan'kasam se rass gollay dekh ker tu moo mein pani agaya..yumi'meri taraf se tu khalay

Suja ke'kaha hai tu'kaha hai'..coment ker..ab kiya coment ker'ab tu end hogya hai SS'epilogue tu likh day'.

Maha'agar reserve ker k mjhy yaad dilana para comment kerna tu BY god tum gain'.

N ridi 'ur waiting waiting waiting is over'it was power cut thts y im late'sorry ..so now comment comment n comment'.a long one

N thnks to all my janu n manuss

Here is the last part

Luv fiza

CHAPTER 5

Present :

MAYANK: I know how arrogant she is ….i know how good at heart she is….i know her like no body did…I never argue at her decion of nt providing funds…as im doing so n sir will sign papers…I know she find chemotherapy a touchier to patient ..she has seen her mom dying of pain in it…but she has forgotten tht we need to make there lifes as livable as much as v can…n thy r children chance of cure are more in them…..but she feels a sin sponsoring there painfull dead..n sum how I respect her for tht…..

I know u fights with evry1 she is scared to loss her self n thn bear the pain of betrayal….but she doent know sum1 is dying to serve her for eternity …..

But today wht she said abt me…...was beyond my heart can tolerate..if she think so abt me I don't deserve her … I really don't….it made my existence complelty unimportant…it hurts yaar…it dam hurts….i do have a heart …n her words do effect me aloot….i thought she will stop me now…now..now….but never……

. Benji: aur us silent admirer k kya

Mayank: he laughed pitfully…..us ko khamosh hi rahny day….i was never able to make her understand myself…I think I don't desrve her….bus tu khabi …. He turned around to face benji n forund Nupur standing at the edge of door shocke…….

Beenji left closing the door behind

Nupur eyes where welling up…..she never thought mayank was the one..she herself was in delima whom SHE hav feelings for mayank or the unknown one…but evry time mayank made her effect more but thn she feel betraying the other more….she stod ther n he was standing numb wwht to say n how to say

Mayank: Nupur woh

She shock her head n opened the door n rashed away frm there….walking as fast as she can wiping off sum tears….he run towards her shouting her name n finally grapd her .,,,

Mayank: meri baat tu sunao

She jerk off his hand from her arm…

Nupur: kya sun ….kya…jo suna tha sab suna liya….buhat taras ata hai mjhy per haan..merin halat per….ya buhat maza ata hai mera mazak urny mein …..mjhy vuknerable dkh ker….bolo

Maynk: Nupur kya bool rahi hoo…tum janti hooo..mein asa nhi sochta…

Nupur: kya mayank…u really don't desrve me ..u don't desrve me at all…..wht u made fun out of me..u where playin with me…..with my emotions….u laughd at me….i am hurt or nt…I need u or nt…whtever I though u just don't care…….u where just playin around ….ohh so yeah larki itn vulnerable hai ..haina…mjhy asay dekh ker khushi hoti hai…oh tu is bechare k pass koi hai nhi ……

He grap her hands n pulled her close

Mayank: I don't care han…I have been around u frm past 5 years…..madly going around u….sending u letters make myself a fun…..insulting myself

Nupur; ohh so u find my word insulting for u

Mayank: do u think so…I have always heard ur unsaid words…I was the one who never questioned ur aarogance….i had been there for u no matter wht….i made myself do whtever u wished to…..

Nupur: so …ehassan ker rahy thy mjhy per haina

Mayank: he pulled her more close…nhi pyar ker raha hoon tum se….hamesha se kiya hai aur hamesha kerta rahoo ga….

Nupur: keraty tu asa mjhy chor k na aatay

Mayank: tum ny ek bar bhi awaz di

She kept struggling n his grip was turning firm

Nupur: di tu thi,,….if u have known me tum u shud have know…tht whn I calld u frm back I wnt u to stay…..

Mayank: Nupur mera bhi dil khabi tumhary moo se suna chahta hai….kyun rkhna chati thi mjhy bolo…..y my absence hurt u ..why r u here…kyun asoo hai tumhari ankhoo mein…why my tocuh my words effect u ….

Nupur: cause I Hate u….i hate every single bit of u …I hate ur presence around me…I hate ur closness..i hate each n evry moment spended with u…

A tear drop frm her eyes……he smiled n hugged her tight u struggled to free her self" leave don't u dare touch me" but he tighten his grip on her…she struggle got lessen a bit …n thn he diged his face in her neck….she couldn't stop her self n slided her arms around him….he touch was melting her…..he but his lips on her ear….

Mayank: n thts y I soo love you..he kept her in his tight embraced until she submitted her ego n her self to the only person who has taken her… loved her… herself the way she is …n encircled her arms tighly around him

She came back in her sense n jerked him away ….n went away..he stood there leaning to wall …. ..smiling

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Nupur: chorooo naaa….

Mayank: uff Nupur tum soti hoi hi thik thi..chup…

Nupur: tumhain mera bolna itna bira lagta hai …tu shadi kyun ki

Mayank: takay ghar mein alag alag kis k janwaro ki kami na mahsoos hoo…u bit like cat…u fight like wolf…..u scream like tiger….wah Nupur tum tu chalta phirta zoo ho….

Nupur: mayank tum aj tu maroo gay…..

Mayank: shhh..kasi manhoos baatein kerti ho larki….apny pati ko shadi ek din bad hi mardo gi……

Nupur: aur tumhari baato se tu phool char rahy hai hain…..mjhy zoo boltay hoo…..

She pouted resting her head on his chest……

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Yes thy got married ….wht do u thought..im nt a tragedy queen…..

Thy fought n he manofy her…she cant resist as she herself loved him a loot…did she confessd …no she didnt….he tried to made her do this also..the way he always make her do wht her hearts want to……

Mayank: nupur if u didn't confess im gona jump off here…..

This the 30^th try he is making

She was siting on grass…..n was eating chana…..n make "im nt interested" face..

Im telling u im counting till 10…..

9

8

7

Nupur: jump na or mein aao Dhaka dayny….bol tu asy rahy ho jasay kisi building se jump ker rahy hoo…monkey bar se jumb kerk mjhy daro ga

He jumped off…n said putting his hands on his waist

Mayank: kya guarantee hai building se jump ker to tu meray samany confess kero…

Nupur: hmm yeah bhi…mar jao gay tu tum se kasay confess kero i…dosara dhoond lo gi….

Mayank: nupurrrrr….yeah cheating hai…pls naaaaa…..kyun tang ker rahi hoo

Nupur: mjhy 5 saal se ker rahy hoo mein tu sirf 5 dins ker rhi hoon….cont cont….

Mayank: errr…Nupur….

It was esha's birthday …n there was no costume part ….as expense manger had say no no….wht u thought the touch of love had made her a daiyalooo….no…no…he is fuming in anger…as she has finally found tactics to irritated him….as he cant do so…his salary has been…stoped by her….so it's a delay …hah..n to her success its simple birthday party ………

Esha cut the cake n ..feded him..she was standing far way …still cant interact with al of them…he took a piece n walk towards her…after kids where busy enjoying ther moment …..

Mayank; yeah lo…..brthday aprty mein free milta hai..he grin

Nupur: she passed a dead glared ….wch was turned into " wht the hell" …..

She looked at the cake wch was around her uperlip …n she was locating it agin with one eyes closed…..he laughed at her ….she cant chnge

Mayank: now u look like my Hitler..cute…saying so he pulled her nose….

Yeah lo…he gave her a tissue…..she was busy wiping off..the..cake …didn't notice ….how lost he was…..

Nupur: kya hua…..

Mayank: he hugged her tight..surprising her a bit….broke …. ….asay hi rehna …he said lovingly ….

Nupur: she smiled….kasay asay cake k sath…..

Thy laughed…..

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nupur: still her head place on him…..n his hand in hair…(kitna porana scnce hai)…mayank

mayank: hmm

nupur: y u love me….

Mayank: deemagh nhi hai islyan

Nupur: mayank…..she raise her head to look at him….seriously na….matalb mera tu koi asa pass bhi nhi aana chata phir y…u tred tht much

Mayank: I don't….intially it was love at frst sight so…I tried to find out abt u…finding u a very close person I took the way of admirer..but I always want u to fall for me nt fo him…..

Nupur: but im so aarognat

Mayank: mkhy jungle biliyan pasan hai

Nupur: uffu…tum DON nhi hoo….

Mayank: kaha na pata nhi…mjhy tumhari insab harkato ki becha jo larki thi us se pyar hai….jis ulta kahti hai….hurt hoti hai tu gusaa kerti hai…pyar ata hai tu…khub larti hai….kuch ajeeb hi hai…

Nupur: matlab mein ajeeb hoon

Mayank: Nupur…bs hogi na galti tum se pyar kerny gi…ab kya jaan lo gi…wasay tumhain mjhy se pyar kyun hoa

Nupur: mjhy tu tum is islya payar hai ..kyun kkk

Mayank: nuprrrr…he scream ….scring her…..u said tth…finally tum ny confess kerhi diay….

Nupur: no no…I didn't …I didn't mean tht

Mayank; he stood up…yes u do..mein tum se pyar kerti hoon is k aur kya matlab hota hai…..u lost the bet …u confessd …

Nupur: dint

Mayank: u did sweet heart…ab tu man lo…problem kya hai…

Nupur: nhi mano gi…she was abt to leave …whn he graped her n hugged her tight..

Mayank: whispering in her ears.. I love u too…..

Nupur: but I don't

Mayank: han han….meray sath time pass ker rahi hoo…..shadi mjhy se revenge k lyan ke hai….aur bachy galiti se hojay gay

She broke apart

Nupur: is sab ko tum ny galti kaha…..mayank………… divorce papers lao abhi k abhi

Mayank: ek sharat per tu alimony k amount nhi mango gi

Nupur: haaaaaaaaaaaaaaa….thik …bilkul thik hai….us k badlay mein tumhari jan lay loo gi….she hit him with a pillow

Mayank: Nupur..kasai biwi ho apny pati ko marti ho

Nupur: ex ..pati….

He graped her droping thmself….huging her frm back

Mayank: uff….pagal..islyan ki hai shadi…itna sara adventure kisi k life mein hoga….kal se soch raha hoo…diet increase kero….

Nupur: kyun

Mayank: roz subha itni exercise…1 hafty baad tu mein nazar hi nhi aao ga…..ouch …lagti hai yaar….

Nupur: tu bakwass band rekho……..saying so she closed her eyes agin ….feeling the closness inside her ....

has has k mere peth mein dard ho raha hey...doctor k pass jana hey...paisa de.........😆

yaar it was out of the world.......aur wo part monkey loop se mayank ka jump karna........nupur k puchne par why do u love me......dimaag nehi hey isiliye ands dena......... was just amazing............loved it.....😃

blind love-

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Fiza Wah What an Amazing Part/End..