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Posted: 19 years ago
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oh my god 😆 leaf!!!towel!!!!!! 😆 😆 😆 this is so funny.you gotta continue fast yaar 😆 😆
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Posted: 19 years ago
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kutie in the end they will b paired dnt wryy!! 😉
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Posted: 19 years ago
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ranveer is shocked tht aashi aksed him 2 dance n he asks aashi if she iz ok or does she hav sum disorder 2day!!! 😆 then he cums 2 know tht aashi iz jealous of yuvi n pri n tht iz y she iz asking so he sayz tht he needs 2 go 2 the restroom n he will b back.....in the meanwhile shyla wth the broken leg takes her own form again n cums in the party acting az tough shez luking 4 sumthing!! 😡 ...yuvi the sweeto welcums her in and pri goes 2 sit wth tia n meher hu spot raghu!! 🤢 tia tries 2 hide bt then raghu cums n says tia tum mere sat dance karoge n timbo justs walk away n sayz she g2g 2 the restroom bth timbo n ranny r walking angrily n fast n they bang into each other n tia falls down n ranny catches her! 😳 😳 then they stare at each other 4 like 10 hrs n shy n raghu r staring at them like owls!! 😆 ...then they bth cum 2gather n decide 2 make a plan 2 separate them so they start dancing 2gether thinking tia n ranny will b jealous bt no effect they just keep staring!!...n shy n raghu r trying their best 2 get their attention bt no reaction!! 😆 .....then aashi cums running 2 ranveer n shouts thakur!!!...........to b continued!! 😆
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Posted: 19 years ago
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hey samar cont fast its just too good!!i love it wow! 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
#15
plz continue soon

its very nice n funny 😆 😆

Divya
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Posted: 19 years ago
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continuation............
aashi sayz thakur the drinks r over!!...then he finally stps staring n thnks in his mind u stopped my starring 4 this!! 😡 😆 then he sayz(the smart dude!) tht they will get new 1s(u cldndt think of tht awat??!)!! n aashi sayz ok!! 😆.....then shy suddenly pukes on the floor as she danced wth raghu 222 much!! 😆 then ranveer asks her iz she ok n 2 get attention she does over acting n falls on ranveer!!! 😡 🤢 😡.....then raghu asks tia 2 dance wth him n timbo sayz she iz nt in the moud n before raghu cld eat her alive yuvi cums n saves her by asking raghu 2 cum wth him 2 eat!!(superman 2 the rescue!!!!!) while ranveer n aashi r treating tht witch tia iz luking jeaslously at ranveer n tells her angels tht she wants 2 keave bt they dnt wanna leave n they take tia away then ranveer n shy cum out (shy haz finished her acting!!) n shy asks ranveer 2 dance wth her!!!................continued later!!! 😉
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Posted: 19 years ago
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its very nice plz continue n i m new here! 😃

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