Breaking Free - inspired from a true story

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Posted: 14 years ago
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I had only intended to publish the story for a short while, so I'm taking it down now.
Thank you for commenting Radzy 😃 I understand what you mean about it being casual. I can be quite lazy when it comes to writing. Can't wait to get to the end. Hopefully my next venture will fare better. I really appreciate construuctive criticism and I intend to take it very seriously. And I love happily-ever-after stories! I am a complete chick-flick chick 😉
But I guess not all stories are such stories. This one was about Sheena's self-realisation, not so much about her relationship with Aryan.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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RES
Will just be back after reading =D
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The story was so normal, but quite good. Written quite nicely. Definitely had to the strength to hold back the reader till the end. And especially the last part. It was lil casual (dun take me wrong, but hav been into "and they lived happily ever after" stories more, so it's a new thing for me. LOL) But liked the ending.
Do write more.
-Radzy
Edited by PinkSugars - 14 years ago

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