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Posted: 14 years ago
beautiful update
flashback was very cute, nice and funny...waiting for next updt...cont soon
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome update Fiza!
luved the flashbacks 😳
continue soon
nd thnx for the pm 😊
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Posted: 14 years ago

Hello guys

Oki this is the second last chapt of this ss'..

Thnks for liking it 'im glad always appreciated n love my work

Thnks mona for such a huge compliment

N ya this one is for a stupid n closest frnd of mine

Aj chalo for a change us k namm layti hoon'

FARIA'..who has bribed the profesoors n scored 3.75+ out off 4'.

Yeah lay'meray rass gollay send ker

Lov fiza

Edited by drfizaahmed - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

CHAPTER :4

Nupur cleared her exam n joined sanjeevni to her luck Mayank was already working there ….n he was unaware of the fact tht nupur is trusty's daughter…..to his good luck now she'll b soo close to her….

Mayank: Nupur….tum mera pecha kerti kerti yaha bhi aagi…..

Nupur: tum…..yeah kaun se janam k badla hai….tum yaha employee …bs aj tu tumhari choti

Mayank: kyun yeah hospital tumhary baap ka hai…beta mein chaho na tu tumhari chuti….per mein tumhary jasa nhi hoon

Nupur: hello…yeah hospital meray baap k hi hai

MB: wht is going on…mayank meet my daughter Nupur…

Mayank: ur daughter….in mind…mar gay boss sausur ….kuch kiya tu larki bhi jay gi aur naukri bhi

Nupur: kyun….tumhain laga tumhar father….dad I cant stand him

MB: Nupur…no fights pls….n yes mayank is like a son….mayank u need to tolerate her impulsiveness….im saying sorry in advance ..n Nupur don't mess…..

Saying so he left a fuming Nupur n grining mayank

Mayank: don't worry sir…I can handle this Hitler,

Nupur: Mayank I 'll kill u ..errrr…ur gonna regrat ur choice of joining sanjeevani ….i tell u

Mayank: v'll c

Nupur: ankhain bachay gi tu dekho gay na

Mayank: yaar tu na WWE join kerlo…..before the fight start u'll b the winner….

Nupur: kyun tum waha per kam keraty hoo

He came close n looked straight in her eyes….

Mayank: kyun her jaga mhjy dekhna chati hoo….he winked n left laughing inside at her scared n weird expression

Days passed n they continue there fights n argument…..he was enjoying evry bit of her innocent fights n she was sumhow amaze to have a person in her life who just don't get effect with her mood swings rather take her like wht she is….there bond was special…apparent was hatred but inside it was deep n deeper

He was siting in his cabin leaning his head back…..watching outside …….he lost a patient today….

She was waiting for him in his cabin it was 1 n he shud have been here to do the attck on her lunch …..

Mayank: yeah khusboo kaha se arahi hai……

Nupur: tum ko tameez hai..kahin bhi moo utha ker chalay aatay hoo

Mayank: tu mera moo meri neck se jhora hai…alag rekh ker tu nhi aasakta na….akal hai tum mein ya nhi….

Nupur: tum se tu naa baat kerna hi bekar hai…..kyun aay hooo

Mayank: mjhy bhook lagi hai aur itna sara khana khao gi tu 4-5 kgs aur barh jay ga….aur phir tum jungle billi se…moti billi ban jao gi …achay bacho ki tarha share keroo ….

Nupur: nhi kero gi idhar do …..

Mayank: nups pls…na….mein breakfast bhi nhi kiya tha..he pouted like a child

Nupur: tu mein kiya kero…. Saying so she strt opening her tiffin…..nhi ddo gi….

He took a spoon ..hmmm…yumi…

But today he didn't appear….she thought of going to his cabin 20 times…but without a reson he'll pull her leg like helll…..

Idea….

Knocked

Com in…

Nupur: mayank yeah kiya hai….

He turn around n she found him so pale ….

Mayank: Nupur pls……aj nhi …mjhy se nhi hoga

Nupur: kyun kam chor…kya hua…gf ny chor diya….

Mayank: he hided his face with his pam…..i failed to safe Rahul…..

Nupur: woh jis ko tum ny bahar ……

Mayank: hmm…I tried the way I can…….

Nupur: tum doc na…sirf pain dayna aata hai bs….u know us ki halat kasi thi but nhi..chemo radio…n than marrow transplant….aur koi experiment bhi rah gaya tha woh bhi kerlay tay…

Mayank: Nupur for god sake…I was just tryig to safe him…mein already itna …khbi tu mjhy …..choro…tum kyun aai thi

Nupur: kuch nhi….dad tumhain lunch per poch rahy tha bs…..

He shocked his head in disbelieve

Ajoa…..kyun k woh mjhy sunay gay…mayank ko tum ny hi kuch kaha hoga….aur mera aj sunay k koi mood nhi hai….

Mayank: tum khabi woh nhi kah sakti jo tum actual mein kahan chati hoo

Nupur: kya????

Mayank: im coming boss

She went away n he smiled at her…..she cared but cant show….Mr.Bhushan is buzy in a brain surgery tht will last ateast 4 hrs….n he must have called her to say as mayank to have lunch ….waooo….how stupid she is……

Next was benji'd sis wedding

It was benji's wedding n the person in touble was mayank …..he just cant take off his eyes from her…..he was there as it was almost hs sister's wedding to…but wht do to his heart ….

Mayank: yeah larkiyoon ko itna taiyar kyun hona hota hai……wasy Nupur tum thik ho

Na tu tum larkiyaoon k tarha taiyar hosakti ho……aur pls pink mat wear kerna I hate it

Nupur: kyun tum meray bf ho jo mein tumhari baat mano

Mayank: he put his file down n looked at her all surprise………kya Nupur k koi bf hosakt hai…han..nhi….kya Nupur us ki baat sunay gi…….ECG lo mera pls

Nupur: such an over acting……

He knew she will do just opposite too wht he said….so now she 'll be ready like an Indian girl wearing pink wht he loves the most on her….

N too his bad luck she came down like an angel with pink anarkali suit…..

He was just staring at her ….n didn't take his eyes off…she came down first proudly thn was feeling a lillte shy under his passionate gaze…today he wants to know wht she felt at his clossnes…so he didn't remove his eyes n let them speak….her steps were turning heavy as he stand at the last step blocking her way

Nupur: she composed her self….rasta dooo

Mayank:

aaina dekh k bolay yeah sawarny waly

Haa…ab tu bemoot maray gay..meray marnay waly

(aaina=mirror….sawarna is= dressed up…..bemoot = ab is ki translation muskil hai….)

She first looked at him surprised but tham lowered her eyes to avoid n nt to show her blush..he slowly made the way n ask her to proceed….n smiled inside…I can make her blush….but mera aj kya hoga…he hold his heart .

It was the time of bidai…n benji's tears where out of control…Nupur ws laughing standin beside mayank…

Nupur: kya larkyoon ke tarha roo raha hai

Mayank: he looked at her…even his eyes where moist …hoa mean behan hai jay gi tu dard tu hoga….aur stupid ja bhi London rahi hai…

Nupur: mayank tum bi…..n she cant contol to burst in too laughter

He looked at her in rage n went away towards his car……she follwed him unknowgly as sum how it hurts to seeing him like this……

Nupur: us ko tu jana hi tha….tum kyun itnu upset horahy hoo…aur kaunsa 24/7 us k sath rehty thy …pehlay bhi tu phn per hi baat kertay thy….

Mayank: he was a bit surprise to hear this voice behind him…she cam to console me….he cant belived

Janta hoon..but koi pass ho sath na hoo….sookon tu hota hai….Ap jab chahy sirf us ko dekh hi lay buhat hota hai……

Nupur: yeah kya baat hoi….jab pass hai tu sath kyun na ho…she said sadly…...

Mayank: hmm ho tu …its ur fortune….bt asa zaroori nhi …..he was lost sumwhere in his emotions….

Nupur: hestinataly ….do u love sum1

Mayank: he suddenly turn to face her….all in surprise..ths question frm her…..y r u asking this….

Nupur: to pray for her patience…bechari life mein kasay kasay logo ko bardshat kerna paray ga……

Mayank: han han ….aur tumhara wala tu bechara maar gaya…us ko tu tum kabhi paper waeight se , kabhi hath se, kabhi zaman se ….sab se maro gi hain

Nupur: nhi woh tu maynk special hai…..she said all of a suddent ….n hit her eslf in mind……I mean us ko kyun kaho asay…yeah tuhary jasay stupid logo k lyan hai

Mayank: Oki im leaving …..tum kasay jao gi….ohh sir emergency attend kerny gay hain….shall I drop u

Nupur: ek tu musbiat ….yeah tumhary sath he jana pary ga,..uff…ab tu God protect me pls

Mayank smile at her n opened his car….

She set beside her n the drov off….he was in complete silence figuring out wht to do now….either to confess or gave her more time…or wht to do …..

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MB: Nupur …don't argue on mayank's decion ..he is always right ..he is more mature thn u..so do as he said…he can nevre be wrong

Nupur cant control her anger he look at mayank all red…he was in a shock he knew she cant tolerate her insult like tht ….n its even nt the way to talk to her whn she herself is vulnerable……

She left the place..i''lll prove him wrong on day ….

He was hell scared he knew she do wht she said…..he was'nt scared of his image rather the future of there relation…he was planning to confess his love not his war with her..now he knew wht can cum acroos him…he made her trust him after so much efforts n ……..

Mayank: sir ap ko asay nhi kahna chaiy tha…she is ur daughter …it must have hurt her self respect…the more u become angry on her the more u will losse her n make her go away frm every1…..

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Edited by drfizaahmed - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
edittttttttttttttttttttt

finuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu
ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhh me tripple happy today

i read 2 of my av update - this ff and ishis ff
and one of my frnd - suja cme back frm home
and another reason u know- my result

yeeeeeeeeeeeee i m really very hapy now
thank u janu for updating this part 4 me
u r such a sweet heat
love u
muahhhhhhhhhhh
yeeeeeeeee le tere rass gollay



dekh pura i pura mithai ki dukan utha kar lyai hu tere lyie- sirf tere liye



ab khushhhhhhhhhhh????????

accha now coming to ur update
dekh barbar mjhe ek baat kehna acchi nehi lagti- par kya karu majboor hu
Finuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu
it was really a mind-blowing update

By GOS i loved mayu loads
he is such a nice boy, full of life,bindas

hahaaha loved mayur convo at hospital

Nupur: tum…..yeah kaun se janam k badla hai….tum yaha employee …bs aj tu tumhari choti

Mayank: kyun yeah hospital tumhary baap ka hai…beta mein chaho na tu tumhari chuti….per mein tumhary jasa nhi hoon

Nupur: hello…yeah hospital meray baap k hi ha



hahahaha lovleyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy

MB: wht is going on…mayank meet my daughter Nupur…

Mayank: ur daughter….in mind…mar gay boss sausur ….kuch kiya tu larki bhi jay gi aur naukri bhi

ppr mayank - fass gaya..........


finuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu- i really loved their sweet and cute fight

it was really entertaining

i enjoyed it a lot

Mayank: mjhy bhook lagi hai aur itna sara khana khao gi tu 4-5 kgs aur barh jay ga….aur phir tum jungle billi se…moti billi ban jao gi …achay bacho ki tarha share keroo ….


heheheehehe- ye mayu bhi na- nups ko itna tang kyun karti hai yaar.

awwwwwwwwwwwww nups also enjoy his closeness.

she also care for her but dont want to express it or i can say accept it.

OMG mayu is too smart

he knew nups will do exactly opposite what he said- thats why he said he dont like pink color

hahahaahaha nups fall on his trap- she wore pink color and was looking like an angel

By GOD- kya demag paya hai mayu ne0 hats of to mayu

i loved the whole weeding part.

veryyyyyyyyyy nice and cute

and then last aprt- oh so that was d reason for which nups wanted to prove mayu wrong

but mayu he is totally gem

he truly loves nups- and he understood that nus was angry and she can do anything to make herself right.


awesome update fizaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa

rockinggggggggggggggggg


loved it to the core

thank u so much for ur fantastic update

waiting 4 next part

wednesday next aprt update kar dena























Edited by -Faria- - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Phew,
finally i complete ur all updates.
it was superb.

lovely
i love mayank :D he's so sweet :D so much dedicate towards his work n his patient :D
nups was so mean :(
she alwaz think abt money :(
i love mayur nokh-jhok.
jangli billi...........LOL.........gud one :D

zindgai k expense se death ke expense are much more cheaper

bt this is d best :D
Esha-nups scene was grt.
lovd it.
nw nups feeling something abt this poor kids.

another gud update :D
ur doing fab job, i must say.
yaar tu sach me dr hai na???? kavi kavi mujhe doubt hota hai😕
wow ..............again mayur conflict.
ye log ladna kab chorenge!!!!
bt i love their ladai............LOL
awwww..........mayank was sad, n nups missing his mischief :(
so sweeeeettttttttttttttttttt..............lovely..............i love her lie.
i knw, nups look stunning in pink ............she's looking gorgeous in every color :D

Mayank: han han '.aur tumhara wala tu bechara maar gaya'us ko tu tum kabhi paper waeight se , kabhi hath se, kabhi zaman se '.sab se maro gi hain

Nupur: nhi woh tu maynk special hai


awwwwww............nups almost confessed :D
love d way u shows their love.
it was really nice to see that Mayank was her secreat admirer :D



i knw it was late, bt u shld name it, colors of life or open secret admirer :P
Edited by SujaLuvsMayur - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
nice part. plz update soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
mai pichle parts parke ati hoon pjir comment karungi🤣
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesomeeeeeeeeee part

loved it alotttttttttttt

poor mayank

continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
fiza api..!!🤗
tum great ho..i mean greatest ho
itne ache ideas atein kahan se hain tumko!!😳

OMG ..kya ss hai😳😳
too good api..it was the sweetest ss i have ever read👏
and speacially the character of mayank..
he's such a sweet heart
i mean tolorating her anger and her rude behaviour ..aww thats so sweet

and the secret admirer part😍
hayyeeee kya kahun..uo wala na best tha😳
kashi kahin mujhe koi admirire mil jaye🤣🤣...joking😆

i also loved the "bidaai" part...nupur na kya kahun
bari strong hai..i mean stone hearted nahi balki strong hai
bohot sweet bhi hai

ok aur uo thesis wala part 😍
that was so so so..like this
😍
i was actually blushing
☺️

the whole ss was best👏👏👏
but i feel sad for mayank...i hope ab nupur apna love confess karle😳
continue soon api

love
tasfia

Edited by vampire_girl - 14 years ago

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