Gud News - ArMan r going 2 b Mom n Dad!!

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Ok i know u'll all click on this post once u c the title of this thread.😆 This is no SBS or SBB news.😆😆 Yeah Yeah ArMan r soon gonna b mum n dad but in my imagination of course.😆
😆After so much dramaa in PR n emotional upheaval on our forum i thought why not relieve ourself from the tension gripping us these days. I've written this short fiction n i hope u'll like it.😳


Manav was busy working when he got a phone call from a hysterical Varsha asking him 2 reach home quickly. Manav immediately understood that something was wrong n felt his blood turned 2 ices in his veins. He stuttered:

- Is something wrong with A..Archana?

- Yeah jeeju. We were shopping when she felt weak n fainted. We r taking her home since it's closer from here n Vaishu has already called for a doc.

Manav didn't wait 4 her 2 complete her sentence, jumped in a taxi n asked the driver 2 rush. The time seemed 2 b going at a snail's pace n he was restless. He lowered the car window n let the air blew on his face. There was a real danger of him not being able 2 breathe n at that moment the fresh air was helping him 2 keep his anxiety at a manageable level. He was tensed n dead scared. He was remembering the day Archana fell sick, the doc's words n them moving 2 the Ks, praying at the same time that there was nothing serious n that his Archana was fine.

He reached home n stormed inside 2 c his saalis around the bed with Archana lying looking white as a ghost with her eyes closed. The colour drained from his face, he moved forward n looked at both his saalis.

- Wat happened 2 Archana? Where's the doctor?

At the sound of his voice, Archana opened her eyes n gazed at him lovingly. He rushed 2 her side n took her hands in his n asked with concern in his voice:

- Wat happened 2 you?

Archana smiled weakly n so did Vaishu n Varsha.

- Kya hua? Will someone tell me? Yahan meri jaan jaa raha hain n u r all silent.

Varsha n Vaishu smiled again n Archana blushed n smiled coyly. After some minutes, Varsha said:

- Jeeju the doc is gone. I think it will b better if ur wife tells u wat happened n dragging Vaishu with her, the 2 sisters went away.

A confused Manav looked at their backs n shifted his attention back 2 his wife who was now sitting in the bed with a big question mark in his eyes. He moved 2 the bedside n started:

- Kya huwa? Wat did the doc said? Ur BP is low, isn't it? U don't take gud care of urself Archana.

Yeah I'm sure it is this!! I'm warning u Archana if u keep neglecting urself like this....

Manav kept going on like broken records that Archana had 2 stop him. Putting a finger on his lips, she finally spoke up:

- I'm fine Manav. My BP is normal n mujhe kuch nahin hua hain. Doctor said I'm perfectly all right

Seeing that Manav didn't look convinced she said :

- Aap ki kassam!!

Manav was now relieved n convinced that Archu was not lying.

She chuckled n Manav looking like an ullu asked:

- Why did u faint then? Was it the scorching sun?

Archana blushing profusely, shook her head n started:

- No' I' I mean, we r going 2 b', I mean soon we'll no longer b alone'

Seeing him gazing at her with incomprehension n a frown on his face, she brushed him aside with her hand n said:

- Aap bhi naa, u r too much!! Do I have 2 tell u everything Manav?

Manav:

- Arrey how will I know if u don't tell me?

A resigned Archu muttered:

- The doctor said that u will be a daddy soon.

Manav stood motionless n stared at her with disbelief. Finally his eyes filled with tears. Archana gazed at him with a soft smile on her beautiful face. His eyes spoke volumes but she needed 2 ask him:

- Aren't u happy Manav?

Unable 2 speak n feeling a lump in his throat, he grabbed her n wrapped her in his arms smiling in between tears. Finally, cupping her beautiful face in his hands n looking straightly in her eyes he spoke up:

- U've given me the most incredible n fantastic news in my life Archana. Falling in love with u n u reciprocated, in itself was just like a dream coming true, marrying u n having u in my life as my wife is for me Bappa's grace n now this!! OMG I can't believe it.

He kept hugging her, talking, dreaming and planning, looking for names n his excitement knew no bound. Seeing him in such a state made Archu emotional n her eyes filled. Manav immediately stopped n looking very concerned asked:

- Is anything wrong Archana?

Archu quickly reassured him by saying mischievously:

- No. Mood swings may b , pregnancy ki side effects n u must get used 2 it. I've never fought with me, may b I'll start n will even throw tantrums.😳

- Oh I'm sure u'll look even more beautiful n I'll end up loving u more.😃

They both hugged n kissed n finally laid beside each other. Archu was quick 2 fall asleep may b due 2 too much excitement n tiredness but Manav was unable 2 sleep. He kept staring at his pretty wife who was looking like sleeping beauty waiting 4 her prince 2 come n kiss her 2 wake her up. He smiled n felt damn lucky when he married her n not even once he had an iota of doubt about his love n feelings for her despite various ups n downs in their life. Now after her giving him this gud news he just can't stop feeling blessed.

Wat else cud he asked from God? May b his family reunion, the most awaited patch-up between him n his aai. Suddenly tides of hope start stirring in his heart. May b yes, may b its God wish after all? May b this new member in the Deshmukh family will b able 2 do wat he n Archana have not been able 2 do.May b aai will melt down seeing her grandchild.😊 One thing he was sure of is that beneath the facade of harshness n rudeness lays an emotional lady n the coming of his n Archana's baby wont leave his aai insensitive.

Archana stirred n opened her eyes 2 c a Manav in deep thought.

- Wat r u doing so late at nite? U thinking abt aai? R u worried?

Manav took her in his arms n inhaling deeply said:

- No! I was thinking abt u, about how much I love you n how lucky I am 2 have such a beautiful princess. I'm sure other men always look at me with envy.

- Wat r u saying Manav? R u crazy?, Archana chuckled with laughter with her eyes rolling in disbelief

- Yes I am!! he screamed. I'm going 2 b a father n I want everybody 2 know it.

Both laughed n embraced each other n went on with their sweet nonsense all nite.

- Archana I'm sure we gonna have twins.

- Manav shut up please.

- No I wont! I'm going 2 b the best daddy on earth.

- I'm sure u will Manav but do u know its hard work 2 look after a baby. The toughest job on Earth I'll say.

- Koi dar nahin.

- Accha!! Most newborns only sleep and eat, and are awake for about an hour a day n ur neend will defo b haraam at nite I warn you.

- No problem. I'll feed him, bathe him n change him too.

- N wat will I do if u'll do everything?

- Give me another baby nex year in case we don't get twins this time

- Dhat!! U r very besharam Manav!!.

She pushed him with mischief n amusement in her eyes n said:

- I think we better sleep since we'll soon b sleep deprived

- N I have a better idea!!

- Kya?

- Cant tell you but will surely show you coz somebody told me that with the arrival of a baby this too becomes rare!!

Ok I'm done. The last part u'll have 2 work out ur imagination.😉

Hope u have liked it.😳




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omshreejaanu thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Ok friends i was planning 2 post it on Friday but cudn't due 2 some busy schedule. A small request from me, just ignore the mistakes.
I'll c ya later😳 coz i'm a lilbit overboard 2nite.
Bye C Ya🤗

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Jaan! 😳
Wen I read the topic I was literally going EEEEE 😆
But nonethless, the excitement was worth it. Fab job babe! 😃
I loved the last line the most ofcourse ☺️ 😛
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Thanks Dewy. Happy u like it n yes the last line is my fav too😛😆😆
I know the title will surely make all ArMan lovers go eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee. I'll wait 4 Soni, Piyu n Company Ltd😉

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Finally ArMan having baby of their own and so much more romance in your story Jaaaanu than the silly romance they show in the serial...Feeding each other...Grrrrr
Serial me nahi to yahin sahi...we will take it...😛
May be CVs should come read your post and learn a thing or two..
Good job..
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Wow mere hosh ur gaye!!! how i wish ur imagination comes true.!😉

Thank you for writing this
u made my day..heheheheh😉
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Posted: 14 years ago
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aww OSJ 🤗 such a cute FF, I can visualise ArMan enacting the entire scene and looking thoroughly droolworthy (coined by Jia I think 😉) I bet they'll be blessed with triplets 😛 and my fav part of course u have guessed it by now 😉 btw bout the title u r a marketing genius 😎 😆
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Posted: 14 years ago
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What a sweet little fiction OSJ. I loved it ..👍🏼
I hope the creatives are also readign this and they also give us soem romance and such sweet moments ..There are none in the show these days .Only rona dhona ....
But your little story was really cute ...😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
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I waz shoked 2 c da topic @ 1st but I hope dis little dream of urs comes true :)
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Posted: 14 years ago
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jaanu...this was the sweetest post...and i had tears in my eyes reading it !!! i hope the CV's copy it exactly as you wrote... thanx dear...especially ..like you said...with all the tension going on these days... 🤔 this was a breath of fresh air...

nice job. 👏

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