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Posted: 14 years ago
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hello Fellow Forumers :) :)
This is an attempt to write an in-depth poetry.. The topic is wind Chime. It was written when my dog got scared of the wind chime sound and I noticed a very beautiful wind chime on the threshold of my house.
Have a read and do the needful ( a.k.a criticism and appreciation always welcomed).. If you want to let me know you were here... Please do hit the like button!

Ananya
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Wind chime

My chords jingle...
and you are all ears!
I bewilder you with you my song...
but please you anyway.
My voice diffuses with my paramour,
the air...
Ah, the sweetest of all pleasures!
You turn towards me at the time of despair,
and my exuberance melts away your hardness.
Appreciate me today, master!
Let your ambiguity be mine,
I will serve you with my music forever,
I am your precious, Wind chime!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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wow
really amazing
i so loved the depth with which u have written it
love it

love
pooja
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Awwww!!!!! nice poem jee ... 👏 I liked it .... hope you will post your next poem very soon ..all the best 👍🏼 keep up the good work going ...Ananya jee 😃🤗
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Posted: 14 years ago
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hiiiiiiiiiiiiii
beautiful poem yaar
loved it
thanks 4 sharing
thanks 4 da pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
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WoooW..really nice
keep it up:)
thnx for the pm

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