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Posted: 14 years ago
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🤣 waiting for more and longer updates 😕😛 it wasn't crappy .. just short 😉 Its getting quite interesting!!

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Thank you all for reading/commenting/liking it!😃

Chapter 6: Wait, what?!


"No Bhai, I swear my idea will work! Once it happens, then bhabhi's family won't be able to stop the two of you and just think about it I'll become a chachu! And you'll become a dad! Everyone will be so happy! and bhai.....", Romit insisted as everyone burst out in response then.

"Oye, pagal hai kya?"
"Do you want to die?"
"Marvayega hum sabko!"
"Shut up you idiot"
"Tumhara encounter kar dunga main!"


"But, bhai...." Romit insisted, undeterred by everyone else.
Arjun decided it was time for some old fashioned bro-bro talk. Romit could be so lost in his own world sometimes. He wasn't aware of anything except his 'wonderful' idea. He put his arm around Romit's neck and grasped him tightly.

"Tujhe chachu banne ka bohut shauq hai na? Agar tune apni bakwaas band nahi kari toh mein teri woh haalat karunga ke tu zindagi mein kabhi dad nahi banpayega! Understood?!" arjun whispered, his voice low and deadly.

Arjun sarcastically smiled then as he asked Romit loudly, "Do you have anything to say to your bhabhi?"

"S-ss--ss-sooo-rrr-yy b-habbb-i", Romit stuttered as he watched Arjun's death glare fade.

Arjun watched with satisfaction as Romit than ran excusing himself. He knew that would do the trick. He could feel someone staring at him then and he turned around to be face to face with their questioning gazes - what had he said to Romit?

"Just some bro-bro talk, y'know", he replied winking at Arohi.
Oh really? Well, he wasn't getting out of this so easy, Arohi thought naughtily.

She came near him so that only he could hear.
Her eyes twinkling, she cocked her head to one side and whispered seductively, " You know.....it wasn't such a bad idea", she said winking back at him as she made her way over to Shefali.

Arjun didn't know how to respond to what had just happened. Wait, what the?! Did Arohi just say....what he thought she just said?!

"Koi mujhe batayega ke yahan pe ho kya raha hai? First he says something to Romit and Romit runs away and now he's standing there with his mouth open like he'd just heard the most shocking news in the world? What's with all the whispering? Koi mujhe bhi toh include karo!", Shefali cried out loud.

Arjun closed his mouth, but didn't have time to respond as they all heard the sirens then.
The sirens of a police car.


😳I'll update as soon as I can. Please comment or press the like button! Thanks for reading ⭐️

Edited by butterfly_16 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#93

Originally posted by: piamist

yeh sweeti i like ur FF..it keeps us light and interesting...when ever there is a problem u even give us light moments of fun...i am loving ur writing...plz continue..and do pm me..i clicked the like button of tht post



😳 Done and thanx for reading :) Hope you all like the new update ⭐️😉

Edited by butterfly_16 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: mIsHeZ.x

gr8 update sweetie ...haha da ideas dey wer all getin wer fyny espesh romits!! hes 1 of a kind lmao

wonder was instore 4 us next
thnx 4 such a sweet update love..continue soon.x




Thanx sweets :D Yeah, Romit is a nut😉 but a lovable one at that😆


Edited by butterfly_16 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: KaShBaarish..xx

🤣 waiting for more and longer updates 😕😛 it wasn't crappy .. just short 😉 Its getting quite interesting!!



This one isn't long, but I'll update soon 😊 maybe😛😆 Todays Arjuhi episode left me dazzled I just couldn't concentrate on work🥱 - I have an essay due monday and here I am updt my fic😆
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Posted: 14 years ago
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A big thank you to everyone that reads and comments :D! I really really appreciate it and enjoy reading your comments! 🤗

P.S. Any guesses about the cops?and who likes naughty aro? 😉
Edited by butterfly_16 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#97
I felt d same as Arohi, Romit's is not such a bad idea😉..we wud have go to see some haut scenes b/w arhuhi...😆

P.S. Any guesses about the cops?😉

my guess.. may be cheeku brought them😕
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Posted: 14 years ago
#98
very nice......i like naughty arohi...😉
well cops... i think chiku..


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Posted: 14 years ago
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Woww awsome part, loveing the suspense,.... Im writing an FF too, and this totally inspired me to write more, thanks!
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Posted: 14 years ago
loved it & thnx 4 d pm
i lyk naughty arohi

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