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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome awesome
and brilliant
api you rock🤗
this one is just fab!!!!
continue soon😳

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Posted: 14 years ago
lovely one yaar
do cont soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
HEY GUYS
thnku soooo much for liking the start...sorry i didnt rply to u all...btu surly next time
faru...tujhy tu mein batti hoon......samhj nhi asakat MBA fince ko.....us mein proofit jo nhi hot ..aur Suja tu bhi.....Allah...dost dost na raha
aur meray payri behano..aur agar koi bhai hai tu
i ask u to sugest a title...wont update now untill i'll get one from u all😡😲
love
fiza

Edited by drfizaahmed - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

CHAPTER: 2

His words where echoing in her ears…the victory she always wanted….. is felt just a peace of trash to her……she though he will fight shout or argue…but will resign tht she didn't thought …..she knew very well wht his profession n moreover his patients mean to him..he cant leave them…but she made him do that….

She look at last time to his resignation letter enveloped…..she didn't opened it….was paining her sumwhere…..than took her steps out and for the first time entering to any ward of her hospital…

She move forward to enter pediatric cancer ward…tht was under mayank's supervision

It was beautifully decorated …with loads of color toys n a pet area….she smiled remembering ther fight at this part of ward

Flash back

Nupur: pet area..ward k andar..dr. shram finally u have lost it completely ..yeah hospital hai zoo nhi

Mayank: no sweat heart I haven't….. yaha jungli billi kyun ghomati rahti hai

Nupur: wht..wht do u mean

Mayank: array baba..dkho…yeah children's ward hai..bacho ko acha lagy ga jab jaha un ke treatment horahi hai. …..Us area k mahool bulkul fun ho..they 'll feel comfortable n happy

Nupur: tu bahar bano n pet area …ward k andar kyun…

Mayank: uffu…yeah cancer patients hain…isolation mein hotay hai …zayda ter…bahar nhi jasakaty..is lyan tu itna close hight tech area ban rahy hain…

Nupur: tum ko tu na pasay urany k shooq hai..itna expensive glass or arrangement hona zaroori hai

Mayank: tum ko pata hai nupur..tumahri jab shadi hogi na ..tumhara hubby doosray din sucide kerlay k complex mein

Nupur: annoyingly kyun?

Mayank: kyun tum ny sari raat mein… us ko is baat k lyan tu convince ker hi liya hoga ka zindgai k expense se death ke expense are much more cheaper

Nupur: tumhari tu….she threw a paper weight on him

Mayank: lag ja tat u….

Nupur: zammen se ek afat talti …cum to point wht so much money needed

Mayank: yaar tu kya tumhari tarha jannwaro ko khola chordo…takay isolation k patients ko 500 aur bemariya hojay aur tumahra hospital asay hi chalta rahy

Nupur: wht do u mean …tum ny mjhy janwar kaha

Mayank: haan jungle billi..shukar kero wolf nhi kaha

Nupur: aur tum kya ho….sheikh chilli (day dreamer) hospital ko pata nhi kiya bana rahy hoo

Mayank: ek tu mein tumharay khandan (family) walo ko itna hight tech accommodation provide ker raha hoon aur tum ho k

Nupur: dekho meray khandan per maat jao warna

Mayank: warna kya…naukari se nikal do gi..nhi ker sakti asa….

Nupur: don't challenge me…ek din tum ko yaha se bahr send kerdo gi ..abhi jao aur steek holdears k samany presentation k tayari kero

Mayank: tu kya ms bhushan mera idea maan gain….wah Hitler kab se itna diyalo hogaya

Nupur: she took paper weight in her hand..ja rahy ho ya

Mayank: asa maat kero ….employees k treatment k expense hospital hi dayta hai..nuskan hojay ga tumhara…

Nupur: mayank….

Mayank: acha acha ja raha hoon

Sneak in again

Mayank: thnks hilter….

He left n left the place

Flashback ends

She to smile at the moment. ….how she always use to argue on his rightist decion n always use to become angry on him…but with loads of fun he always made her agree on his decion….

She moved inside the ward…finding children all over sum playing with toys with there parents n sum looking n enjoyin the pets…..sumwhere her heart felt pain looking at them ….weak, dark eyes, mostly without hair….but still smiling unknown to there fate….she was broken from her thought by a man in mid 30s

Hello ma'am …I am esha's father….i just want to request u sumthing …if possible can esha stay here for 2 more days as its her birthday n Dr. Mayank promised her to threw a party for her..so she want to spend time with him mm

She was lost in his word how to tell tht she threw him out..she cam out when a little girl was pulling her dress to get her attention

Esha: mayank kaha hai….hogi un ki koi girl friend haina..busy hongay un ka sath..bara kahty hain meray elawa un ki life mein koi nhi ….yeah sary larky na ek jasy hotay hai in per bahroosa kern hi chaiy

Nupur: she laughed at her innocent word…han woh asay hi hai…realizing wht she was saying …n ..not wanting to broke her heart ……tumhara mayank kisi zarrori kam se urgent gaya hai…ajay ga

Esha: pakka

Nupur: mm…paka

She herself didn't knew why she said so…why he left she cursed sumwhere herslf….

She smiled n turn rapidly wch cause her a bit dizziness….her mother rash d n grap her in her arms…

She is getting week to tolerate such harsh medicine these days …he said with teary eyes…n Nupur couldn't stop her tears to drop from her eyes

She turned around n found benji grining over her….she rushed out of the ward n found her father standing in the middle of her way

MR.Bhushan: Nupur came in my cabin…I wanna talk to u …

Yeah kiya kiya tum ny….mayank resigned……..u made him do tht n…. u did'nt stoped him…n above all u ddint even feel to inform me ya tum us k resignation meray any tak accept na kerti tu

Nupur: dad….i just don't want to disturb u…n there was no record of those expenses …n he even wasn't able to clearfy anything

MR.B: records are nt there as it was off hospital expense…n Mayank he is stupid whn it cums to his emotional attachments….he will nt tell the truth ….

Nupur: I m nt getting anything

MR.B: ms Nupur..dr, sharma is a voluntarily doc here…his pay goes to patients welfare he is the most biggest contributor of charity here….ur arrogance n stubbornness …we loss a gem…he was wrong tum zaban gi nhi dil ki bhi sakaht ho…mein ny yeah tu nhi sekhaya tha tum ko….if u feel a bit guilty tu ask him to join back…this hospital cant run without him ….

She was left shocked at her place….she has still nt recovered from all tht had happened in a day

First mayank left without an argument……she knew sumwhere he was questioning her trust on him…he was complelty satring at her throughtout his hearing…..n whn thy ask if he wants to explain ….without removing his eyes frm her he said no…..she never ever want him to resign n left like tht….she just want him to be proof a bit low….moreover enjoy another argument….

Thn esha's pain was all over her…this pain after a long time was growing agin inside her…the pain he always run away frm

N now her fathers revealing the truth…her world spine around n she hated her self for doing all this just to satisfy her ego n ziid……

Nupur: for esha n hospital I might talk to u dr.sharma else Nupur bhusahn never bow in front of any1

Benji: tu nay thik nhi kiya….tujhy pata hai woh kasi hai…kam as kam tu tu control kerta

Mayank: yaar mein kab tak ker…..it has been 5 years she knew me..n she thought I sell organs..wao….mein itna gira hoa hoon us ke nazar mein …itna…. His eyes were showing immense pain…....her words have hurt him a lot….log mjhy kuch bhi kahtay I give a dam but woh …us ny kaha yeah sab…mjhy pata hai zaban k bori hai dil kin hi….ziddi hai….but mjhy bhi farq parta hai yaar

Benji: aur us silent admirier k kya

Mayank: he laughed pitfully…..us ko khamosh hi rahny day….i was never able to make her understand myself…I think I don't desrve her….bus tu khabi …. He turned around to face benji n forund Nupur standing at the edge of door shocked…….

Edited by drfizaahmed - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

Mayank: tum ko pata hai nupur..tumahri jab shadi hogi na ..tumhara hubby doosray din sucide kerlay k complex mein

Nupur: annoyingly kyun?

Mayank: kyun tum ny sari raat mein' us ko is baat k lyan tu convince ker hi liya hoga ka zindgai k expense se death ke expense are much more cheaper

Nupur: tumhari tu'.she threw a paper weight on him

Mayank: lag ja tat u'.


that was mind blowing dialogues.........loved it to da core.......🤣🤣

docc u have done a gr8 job......😃

nupur was really harsh.....she should have been regret......😡

how can she think so negative abt mayank......😔

poor mayank.......he sooo down to earth......👏


loved it doc............🤗


update soon doc........😊


but i was shocked mayank like her..........😲


cant lie to u.......will definetely update plshh give few dayzzzz..........😔

love ya dear........🤗

Edited by drmaha - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
lovedddddddddddd it finally nupur realized it and what a shock mayank loves her am soooooo happy plz update it soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
chalo... at least usse yeh toh pata chala ki she was being too much sakht

thnx for de pm

do continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago

thanks to MR.Bhushan for knocking some sense to nupur...

their past scene waas so cute
but the last made me schoked.....
mayank loves nupur?/ am more schoked than nupur....
great update dear..loved it soo much
love yah fiza tc..............
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Posted: 14 years ago
editttttttttttttt

Finaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa

nups felt guilty for what she did with mayank
she didnt think that mayu will resign frm this hospital after all he is the jaan of this hospital.

awwwwwwwwwww the flashback part was too good
mayank was as usual in jovial mood and nups was in her arrogant mood.
both had such a cute fight
By GOD myu called her as jungli billi- By GOD mayur tou gaya kaam se
ye tu mayu se nups ko barbar hitler kyun bulate hai....... :(
dekh ye acchi baat nehi hai

OMG .she threw a paper weight on him(coughing waise ye adapt Hitler se kuch milti jhlti hai.lol)

awwwwwwww nups went into the children ward she found here all the cancer patient were playing with toys who were unaware abt their fate.......

her heart felt pain looking at them- ahhhhhhh it was a very sad part fizaaaaaaaa

I felt really sad for them…………L

Loved the convo b/w Esha and nups- she is so cute and nice

Thanx GOD nups realize her mistake . mr Bhushan make her understand that this hospital cannot run witht mayank

So nups decided to bring him back- that's like my Nups…………..

Oh ho my mayu was hurt………. BY GOD he loves our nups

Mayu se ye heartless, arrogant nups se kaise pyaar hogaya?????????

Strange??????????/

Wonderful upadat januuuuuuuuuuuu

Too good

Amazing

Loved it to the core

Pls update next part 2moro


Edited by -Faria- - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: achoose

thanks to MR.Bhushan for knocking some sense to nupur...

their past scene waas so cute
but the last made me schoked.....
mayank loves nupur?/ am more schoked than nupur....
great update dear..loved it soo much
love yah fiza tc..............


hahahahahaha i loved this line- it was really very shocking
LOL LOL

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