THREE THEATRICAL TALES

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Wednesday's episode shows the three degrees of diraama... extreme and contrasting. It's heightened theatrics at Takur's center stage that continues until Sajjan Singh heads out on a solo mission to stop his ladla Krishna after he stormed out with a loaded firearm. Across town at MMGJ, it's a sulking sobfest at the Saxes. Naina turns on the ocular taps while Adarsh broods with tightly knitted eyebrows as Komal's annoying buzz in his ears prompts him to shut her up. (WORD COUNT: 1664)

TAKURS - TEMPER, TIRADE, TAUNTS AND TRIPS

Krishna storms into his room and demands that Prats give him the details of Raade's offensive behavior with her. But Prats maintains her silence and turns on the water works. Prats, what's your problem telling Krishna the truth? He's not going to let up until he gets to the bottom of it. He's already heard Takurain and her love for spinning tales when you are at the heart of it. He's heard Kesar's truthful disclosure about what transpired and believes her. Wouldn't it be better if you confirm the truth for him for both your sakes? Does he have to pry every word out of you every time?😲😒 How come you gives him an earful when he wants peace and quiet but zip your lips when he asks you to speak up? Talk about cross signals in fundamental communication issue between these two.

Come on Prats, Krishna loves you and will always give you "saat dena". The predictable silent treatment and weeks of holding back until the dam bursts is getting a bit stale. Ultimately it's Krishna who is part of the solution, so let's see you handle this a bit differently the next time for you know he always believes your word and trusts you implicitly once he gets over his initial outburst. Yeah, we know you said you'd never trust Krishna again. If that's the truth what are you doing still staying married to him. Don't waste your time with this faltu talk. I'm calling your bluff young lady! I dare you to walk out if that's the truth and nothing but the truth, so help you Lord Krishna!😉😛😆

Krishna grabs Prats's by the wrist when she walks away. Prats squeaks in pain and just one look at the band-aid, viola! Krishna is on to the truth. Maybe the size of that band-aid was a secret code of some kind?😉 True to form, he loses his cool, grabs his keys and a gun off the wall on his way out to aim the gun at his rogue relative Raade's kopadia. Krishna refuses to heed Prats's warning about the dire consequences of acting in a fit of fury.

Takurain tries to pry the gun away from him beseeching him to stop from acting rashly in the heat of the moment. This woman's abhorrence for Prats runs deep for her to pin the blame on Prats and her pride for being the cause of all Takur troubles since the day she came into their home. How does Prats's pride fit into her agenda to nail a relative she's met for the first time? Who in their right mind would go around slapping relatives just for the heck of it? She still manages to point a finger at Prats even in this heightened state of distress and diraama unfolding before her. Doesn't Takurain see that all three generations of Takurains were making the same plea to Krishna to cool down? They have more in common than Takurain's jaundiced eye could see, the limitation is in her thinking and not caused by those around her. SS is right "tum nahi sudharogi Takurain".

The adrenal rush fuels Krishna and he is a man on a mission possible. He manages to shove his mother aside warning her not to pin this one on Prats. He disregards Ganti Dadi's plea declaring his intention to pay Raade pay for misbehaving with Prats in his own home and storms out. He turns a deaf ear to Prats's desperate pleas and rides away. A helpless Mom unable to control the situation Takurain rushes out to stop Krishna. She watches Krishna leave on his motorbike and warns Prats she'd make her life a living hell if Krishna does anything that lands him in trouble😕. How's that Takurain? Come again! You're looking for any reason, even one out of thin air, to be rid of Prats from Krishna and your lives. Talk about jealousy and insecurity all bec' Prats has managed to live life on her terms and you never could manage it in spite of crowning yourself Queen Sumitra Devi of Takur Niwas. Seriously, Takurain, you think Prats's pride would make her egg Krishna on to go after a relative she's never met before Holi day? She only found out he's related after she slapped him for groping her. Where's the logic in that?🤔

BLOOPER ALERT! Did you see the pillar outside the Niwas move when Prats rushes back into the house to grab her purse and phone before going to find Krishna? GD volunteers Raade's address. She gives Takurain the slip and sprints out of the Niwas to stop Krishna. 😆

Is Kesar having second thoughts about spilling the truth to Krishna seeing the ensuing diraama gathering wind that matches a cyclonic storm?

SS's expression of disappointment is Lallantop when he realizes his worst nightmare is a familiar face😆 ...his Takurain who wakes him up just as he reaches Shimla in his dreams. Can't blame the buzurg, his reality is turning into a ongoing nightmare. Afew hours of dreaming is a welcome respite for him. It's ironic that Takurain helps SS find his slippers, the very weapon he used to physically abuse her regularly and has stopped soon after Prats came into their home. She stands up to SS now without punishment, thanks to Prats.🤓

Lazy launda KN is still under the influence of bhang and refuses to trade in his sleep for roaming around town looking for his little brother? He blames Prats for it all and claims he doesn't give a hoot about Krishna's life🤔. He's is the bull brain behind Raade's gatiya action who is a clueless pawn in his ongoing plan to terrorize Prats for putting him behind bars. Is KN turning into a pimp? 😲 Takurain tells him to die sleeping. So much rage, no wonder her chest hurts. Long time since some high diraama happened at the Niwas. It's a brilliant performance by Asmita as an agitated mother helpless at her sons' indifferent and impulsive actions.

Takurain vents her frustrations at KN's behavior on Kesamma her partner in taunting Prats. Takurain and Komal have unpredictable moods. Kesamma, welcome to the life under the Takur roof, better get used to being Takurain's punching bag, especially when things go Prats's way as they often do. The damadh you are proud of was once a ruthless criminal but also a hardworking man and an obedient son. Today he focuses on his new hobbies of terrorizing Prats, eating and sleeping whenever he fancies and rejecting to lift a pinky finger to help his parents. His attitude spells father and brother be damned, he's ruined some lives and snuffed out others and lives to tell about it some day.

A raging SS yells at a sleeping KN he'll pay the price for his action some day for being indifferent about his little brother. This after Takurain informs the Takur that their firstborn bear prefers to hibernate in his den than help find his little brother. A few days in jail and the lazy launda has changed his spots.

Kesamma advises SS to eat nashta and relax.😲 Krishna is a kid with a hotbed of raging hormones and will cool down. Kesamma you must be hungry. Trouble is you won't get a bite to eat until Takurain's mard and his mother eat first. With all the diraama and Piasiya missing since holi who's doing the cooking amidst all this theatrics now? Instead of giving SS uncalled-for advice how about making yourself useful and fixing a nashtha for the timorous, tormented Takurs? Weren't you brought over to take care of your daughter instead of joining Takurain in taunting Prats. She needs no echo in her corner in that matter.😛

SS explodes at Kesamma "Have you ever given birth to a boy to know what a son's love is?"👍🏼 Lallantop line Takurji.👏 "He's my Baba and he'll shoot". One thing for sure, SS knows his children particularly Baba who along with the grief still manages to tug on his heartstrings. SS and his ladla Baba share a deep father-son bond that's priceless. In spite of his vile ways, his love for his children redeems SS of his many unfavorable traits. Such a heart capable of love surely stands a chance to reform for the greater good!

"Feed that son in law of yours and teach him what a son's responsibility is" scoffs SS on his way out to find Krishna. Kesamma got a taste of what she can expect from the Takurs along with their hospitality in the coming months if she dares to stick her nose where it isn't welcome.

Will it be SS who finds Krishna first or will it be Prats?🤔 Got to empathize with the buzurg who's saddled with the pair of immature brats that refuse to grow up and share in the responsibilities at home. 🤓

Let's hear from you now.🤗
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Posted: 14 years ago
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wonderful post sis......agreed with u in every aspect
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Now for the two Sax tales (Word Count: 875)

MMGJ - MOO JUICE, MOPEY MUSINGS & MESSAGE

Across town in MMGJ, melancholy Mummy's mind is mulling over her first born's mistake as the moo juice continues to boil over. For someone who's supposed to be dazed Naina's body language shows she's aware that the milk's boiling over. Maiden Sax runs in to save what's left of the moo juice. Of course! Her good deed for the day.👏

How ironic is it that teary-eyed Naina tells her youngest born that her big bro Adarsh didn't do right by hurting his Papa's feelings and making him a Sad Sack? That too to the one who still pretends her crime is just a teensy weensy mistake. "Your father was so proud of his children. He taught them the right sanskars and the strength to fight for those sanskars with the truth. But today Adarsh has broken our trust in him. We can't understand." Maiden assures her "Mummy, why do you worry? Whatever Adarsh said I'm sure his intentions can't be to hurt Papa's feelings". You're sure? But how would you know that? Pray do tell. He is your brother but let's just say we don't buy it. Fact is, it's in Saxes DNA to do things motivated by a thirst for revenge and switch label on a crime and call it an error.

"You watch, Adarsh will soon realize his mistake on his own". Yeah, right🤔! You do realize he's following your trail not wanting to be left out, never had it in him to ever be a trailblazer😛.

Naina doesn't buy it "Adarsh will never regret his mistakes. He is standing with the people who's sanskaar and thinking doesn't jive with your Papa or this family's school of thought. If only we hadn't gone there these things wouldn't have happened." Now that's how you show faith in your children😛. Naina, didn't anyone in your family tell you "don't throw stones while living in glass houses". All three of your sanskaric, educated kids exercised their free will and made a beeline for and married the three siblings, the unpud, gawar, jahill residents of Takur Niwas. It's not like they were the last three residents available for matrimony in all of Allahabad. 🤪

It's a mea culpa moment for maiden in MMGJ. Awww! Mistake making maiden tells muddled mummy of mard moving around MMGJ Mahal in mufti. The bayil buddhi spoke while he went looking for mehraroo #2 in a drunken state, didn't she recognize his voice after spending all those weeks with him stalking her? Are we expected to feel sad for maiden who commits a "mistake" and returns to maike to make up for her moork(foolish) moves.

KOMARSH - MOODY, MISERABLE, MOROSE, MONEY

Adarsh isn't in the mood to go to work today. Guilty conscience, with a dash of shame ruins his mood. He voices his regret over hurting his father's feelings, concerned about the secrets he may have revealed after imbibing too much bhang. Komal rambles on unable to grasp what she believes to be Shamu's jealousy over his son's promotion and and his reasons for refusing Adarsh's contribution to the family's expenses. "It's not like you stole or earned it illegally, it's honest, hard earned income." Yes young lady it is! Notice his silence and burfi expression on his face. Komal is adding fuel to his already guilt-ridden conscience and declares "I have no qualms about telling the truth" after he snaps at her "just shut up". Will Komal be proud when she learns Adarsh is becoming more of a Takur leaving behind Saxes sanskaric lifestyle?🤔

Komal continues to brag about her money managing skills😲. When did she ever get a chance even at the Niwas? Now that Shamu doesn't want the Takur tainted earnings "Adarsh fork over your earnings to me and I'll double it. What do you say, am I right track or what?" There we go! Komal never lets ignorance stand in the way of being authoritative. She gives a little pillow talk (did Takurain train her in such tactics) "Don't listen to Shamu's words too much, you'll neither make it walking on land or flying in the skies". What do we have here? A one note wonder babe! Isn't this the same warning she gave Kesar when she was reluctant to recall the FIR against Takurain and KN? At least Komal doesn't make any bones about being a self-absorbed, selfish little girl whose behavior spans a wide spectrum leaving us scratching our heads in confusion.

For an introvert who is just stumbling his way towards the Takur way of life, Komal's rambling irritates him for deep down inside he knows he doesn't have what it takes to sustain this journey for the long haul. He may make a few impulsive moves but his nature will always be to look over his shoulder wondering when the legal system will catch up with him. His formal education hasn't prepared him for the risks that the Takurs have taken of living life on the edge, dodging traps and surging ahead. Adarsh may still follow SS's lead and head down that path for a while but his upbringing will always stand in the way of who he is and who he wants to be ''against his true nature.

Now let's hear your views.

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Posted: 14 years ago
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good read mera di, 👏 👏 👏
Particularly enjoyed thakurs .............all were excellent 👏 and as u said extreme darma 😊 ha, and u mentioned sucksenas too .........so kind 😉 😆

So it is a proven truth that hurt his precious babu, baba will announce death sentence, be it anybody............angad was forgiven , and when he knew abgad's double game it was too late and angad died an easy death.................aman was rescued by P and amma working for the first time together, and now radhe is going to be saved by a host of people ranging from his wife to his father............ 😕


Next in line is katra naresh babu sakthi singh, SS and amma...............he may spare SS and amma, but sakthi............. , while u r busy sleeping and listening to ur dear saasuma, don't forget to grovel at P's feet and thank her as u r still alive bec she chose not to disclose ur mean act of scaring her with ur fire nautanki.😡


So today's episode underlined the breaking news which was hovering in the air for sometime.......'TN is breaking.............and dangerously so'...................with kesamma at the root , sakthi is going to do the most stupid thing ever which could cost him his life, either at the hands of SS or K.............so the walls of the ever unified family is crumbling, thanks to kesamma............SS didn't fall for her trick, as he knows K very well.............for now...............maybe SS will never know until the ground is swept off beneath his feet...............but why is amma ignoring kesamma😕...............amma, she is breaking up ur home...........jaago😡............in her hatred for P she is not seeing anything.😡


As they say there is a draupati in every woman............and we saw it in Pratigya .............for an infinitesimally small time ...............she was not literally fighting tooth and nail to stop K....................somewhere in her consciousness she wanted him to avenge her, a sort of feminine pride defeating her voice of reason and righteousness................. then she pulled herself up and decided to do what is right ie go after K and stop him before he does any damage...............


Thakurain , what can we say to her? She is a gone case...................they way she was blaming P and ordered her to say that she did the mistake of slapping radhe and he didn't do anything except putting color on his elder sister, deliberately refusing to acknowledge the truth , was , well, disgusting.................but she wanted to stop K any cost.😊


And very cleverly she didn't tell SS the real problem until he phoned and warned radhe of the upcoming danger to his life .............bec I have a feeling that if SS knew what actually happened he would never have spoken to radhe like that.................instead he would have told K to go ahead and I will manage the rest...................😛 😆


And radhe, why was he sitting outside his house? Bec K has gone to get him at his house.............obviously he won't find him there as radhe is already out of his house.................will K see him on his way ?😕


And will P get hurt in some way which will open K's eyes of what he was doing in his blind anger.............that his rage caused her more damage...................


And although the GH was a waste of time....................it did show two valid points..............1 ) arushi don't know who came inside the house...................there must be something in it for the future 2) adarsh is still not admitting his act of bribery ............instead he shut komal up angrily (guilt ofcourse) when she was saying repeatedly that his money is hard earned and by honest means ...........


Kesamma, don't know what she is getting into.............she thinks that K is a child and is not serious.............well, she will have her due dished out to her very soon................just continue verbally bashing P when this so called child is around and u will wish u never came to TN..



Edited by dhakarn - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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loved reading it dear👏😛thanks a ton for separating that saxena bakwaas all bs nonsense i dont get it they are reacting strongly on adarsh matter but for that silly daughter her marrying a married man hwr ruining kesar life kesar was about to kill because of her no reaction one silly bunch of educated idiots let them go to narak and especially that dadi getting on my nerves home wrecker 😡
now coming to krishna arhaan was at its best yesterday loved every bit was scared seeing his anger well done👏👏👏👏kuddos to him for such a top notch acting he is always the best⭐️(btw meera i can write 5000 words on arhaan can beat ur post)😆pooja was too flat yesterday did not liked her dont get one thing such a contrast in acting some times she is out of this world sometimes too bad yesterday was not expecting these expressions😕anupam ji and ashmita were brilliant hmm so pratigya went out at radhays place see if creatives wanted they can stop krishna at home but krishna went out and prats too so they will show something and as everyone says big twist coming i think that prats will get injured while krishna was beating radhay and she will b in life and death situation this all will help krisjhna to realise that with anger matters will go worse but not being solved yaara saw that piller bloo[per also 😆loved the way ss said to kessama that he knows krishna will shoot radhay that shakti is a bunch of idiot
p.s btw one quick thought ykw and radhay makes a good jodi what say?😳
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Originally posted by: telstra

loved reading it dear👏😛thanks a ton for separating that saxena bakwaas all bs nonsense i dont get it they are reacting strongly on adarsh matter but for that silly daughter her marrying a married man hwr ruining kesar life kesar was about to kill because of her no reaction one silly bunch of educated idiots let them go to narak and especially that dadi getting on my nerves home wrecker 😡

now coming to krishna arhaan was at its best yesterday loved every bit was scared seeing his anger well done👏kuddos to him for such a top notch acting he is always the best⭐️(btw meera i can write 5000 words on arhaan can beat ur post)😆pooja was too flat yesterday did not liked her dont get one thing such a contrast in acting some times she is out of this world sometimes too bad yesterday was not expecting these expressions😕anupam ji and ashmita were brilliant hmm so pratigya went out at radhays place see if creatives wanted they can stop krishna at home but krishna went out and prats too so they will show something and as everyone says big twist coming i think that prats will get injured while krishna was beating radhay and she will b in life and death situation this all will help krisjhna to realise that with anger matters will go worse but not being solved yaara saw that piller bloo[per also 😆loved the way ss said to kessama that he knows krishna will shoot radhay that shakti is a bunch of idiot
p.s btw one quick thought ykw and radhay makes a good jodi what say?😳



Well Nazia

I say she is a gunda magnet, always was and seems always will. Angadwa is history, KN not quite her past yet still trying to stay present in her life and "paan lips" Raade could be her future she may help him find a better shade of lip shick like she helped Komaliya on rare occasion of friendly co-existence. Raade may be a long term character given that he had quite a bit of dialogue on his first appearance. Any man Prats slaps sticks around long enough to pay the price. Me thinks Raade is combo of the Takur bros........ naivete in that he followed KN directive like a blind man and lusted after Prats like KN does her sister. His presence may hold a major twist of events to come.

Silence from POPS usually brings a cyclonical twist, esp, if there is no hint of track direction, not even a speculation or whisper. They are waiting to see how we receive the presence of this Takur relative. Viewers not resisting his presence like SCAM or Mathurs means he'd stick around for a while. POPS probably realized viewers don't want a third family to follow hence this guy happens to be a Takur relative.

Wouldn't it be wonderful if a Sax relative, one who is a happy go lucky kind of guy with the right perspective on the sanskaar, riti riwaz and usools of life. He could teach the Prof and family a thing or two with his interpretation of things finally opening their eyes to their hollow beliefs that doesn't hold value in their lives. This guy could be someone who hits it off with Krishna and SS like a house on fire, someone who knows how to bridge the differences in Sax and Takur worlds. He knows the KNs of the world and sets Mr. Bayil Buddhi back on his heels easily. BTW, he will in no way interfere with Kriya or allowing Prats to ban jayeeeeeeeeeeee. We need new infusion of a decent fun loving character in the picture. Someone whom even Takurain can't diss.

Ok, just pulled the reins in on my runaway imagination goda. 😉

Ok, just pulled the reins on my runaway imagination goda.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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wow dii wounderful agree wid u thanks dii for seperating that boring sax,s and thakurs were awsome and mindblowing yesterday episode was so energetic and in action r us k uper hmra bab kya kahna love him he was mindblowing so amazing love him and love kriya as pratigy awas also good in running excellent job love them
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Mera I'm so glad you've started your threads again!
You're feeling enthusiastic about the show agian?
Whatever the reason we are benefitting from it😊
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Originally posted by: yummimommy

Mera I'm so glad you've started your threads again!

You're feeling enthusiastic about the show agian?
Whatever the reason we are benefitting from it😊




Thankoo Humaji. Yes, I am having fun writing now, the show is coming back to the two couples Kriya and Komarsh with contrasting lives, one on the path to becoming a better man while the other is falling prey to the social evils. Will they shed light on what contributes to the direction of their respective marriages?

I do hope they show what motivates Adarsh to take this turn in his life just as we get to see love for Prats being what motivates Krishna to become a better man. He still has to go through a rebirth in some ways to become a mature man. As long as POPS stick to the young couples along with Kesar's showing her inner strength to stand up to the Takurs, I'm sure I'll have fun writing. The three generations of Sax women can be seen fixing breakfast, lunch and dinner and an occasional mishap in the kitchen like the boiling over moo juice. 😛

Six months with MMGJ maiden and Bayil Buddhi track killed the joy of writing. All that negativity about characters we couldn't relate to or even like for that matter was painful. Let's hope their track doesn't get a second life and Saxes are seen sparingly.

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