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Posted: 13 years ago

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Shruti 🤗.....Lovely update.......Pari talks so much 😲.......Maan being rude to her.....is there a reason behind that?.........was wondering......glad Geet is settling down to her new life.......Maaneet moment was sweet......loved the way u described the house and Geet' s room.....plz continue soon ......thank u for the PM .......TC 😊

Edited by PerfectYaRav - 13 years ago

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Part 19

warning: before moving to another update hit the like tab 😆else i will never give continuous updates😡

Pari came in by now she has calculated that Geet was some one important, a girl who is so friendly with MK Sir and for whom SD specifically asked her to refurnish the room that to just in 1 and a half day. She sure was some one close, may be a relative or friend's daughter.

P: may I come in

G: come Pari

P: how was the tea madam? Hope you enjoyed it?

G: madam, do I look that old

P: pardon

G: how old are you?

P: 21

G: and I am 18, so as it goes I should call you madam, right

P: I did not get you

G: why are you calling me madam? Call me Geet,

P: but MK Sir will not approve

G: why will he object?

P: you are the house guest, and I being an employee should

respect you

G: good thinking, firstly I am not a house guest I am a member of this family, is it clear

P: yes

G: secondly, yes I would like it if you respect me, but please don't call me madam, call me by my name, it's very melodious

P (surprised)

G: you don't like my name

P: no, not that definitely you have a nice name just as melodious as your voice

G: thanks, and your name is just another synonym of you, you look exactly like a Pari

P: thank you, thank you I know I am just like a Pari

G (so she's back to normal): sit with me here, I am so bored, Maan is not a talker and his vocabulary seems to be limited to umm yes, no, ok

P; but he was talking to you

G: you call it talking, wait Pari you should be eavesdropping bad manners

P: actually I saw him smiling and I were curious, he looks so cool with that smile

G: smiling? Don't give lame excuses

P: no, it is not a lame excuse, I have been working for 3 yrs and have never seen him smile and above all he never talks to any women in such a comfortable way he was talking to you

(G remembered how in past when ever they met Maan was always lecturing her about how weak females are and how they use their tears to mould Males)

And you know he only talks to SD and even his staff he only shouts at them the only two women he talk to are Sasha Madam his head architect and Pinky Bhabhi his receptionist. And you know he does not even talk to NT and talking is far off he never even acknowledges her presence

G (interrupts): yes but NT is not his type I suppose she has got a lot of attitude

P: you know her, she lives in Canada she is Dev sir's wife. Though I don't like her she is sorry to say a complete bitch

G: Dev is no saint

P: yes you are right, this couple I don't know hwy they got married, they are always in these extramarital affairs oops

G: its ok I know Dev can not keep his hands off women

P: yes but NT is the same, how many times I have seen her in arms of various men ; they are the made for each other couple; none is faithful

G: the only thing they like is money; no doubt NT came alone from Canada

P: yes she is with SD but Dev had also come

G: when

P: in the morning

G: he was not their for the tea

P: yes, he is sleeping, jet lag

G: he is in the mansion

P: yes, in his room

G: but DM threw him out

P: yes, but he can't stay in the out house as MK Sir is there, so he was allowed to stay, he is here for a quick visit

G: quick visit?

P: yes, some legal issues, he is going back day after tomorrow with NT, and as I gathered this time he will not be called back

G; why?

P: don't know, but I assumed it because SD called yesterday to take the advocates number and also asked me to tell Adi veer ji to pull on some accounts

G: Adi?

P: my bro, he is KC's financial advisor

G: oh! That's how you landed here

P: yes, fool proof source and you know MK Sir is his friend also.

G; oh so you know Maan from long

P: not that, but I remember when he used to come to our house he was not so rude, veer ji and he use to play jokes and he even helped veer ji to woe Bhabhi who was her receptionist since then, but when I joined in he was a complete different man, so arrogant so angry and he always shouts on me and many times says that I must not try to take advantage of being Adi's sister.

G; may be his marriage with Sameera made the difference

(making a wild guess)

P: may be that Sameera yuck she once came in for dinner just after the marriage she is such a snob

Just then the phone rang

G: hello'. Ok'. Just coming

Pari lets go DM has arrived she'll be here in no time

P: it will take as much as 7 mins for her to reach the Mansion that call was sure from the entrance

G; are the premises not too big

P: they are and giggled

G: let me call Maan, what number shall I call there seem to be 3 numbers here in his name

P: none, he is in the out house, so you have to press #21#1

G: #1 why?

P: outhouse has its own codes like #1 for his room, #2 for kitchen, #3 for living room,

G: wait some other day, or better give me in writing

P: ok

G called Maan

M: hello

G; hello, did I disturb you?

M: yes

G: how rude?

M: what's rude in it, you asked and I answered, I were sleeping and you disturbed me

G; at this hour it's just 7:30

M: yes, I know; 'm tired and did you call me to argue with me

G: sorry, just wanted to tell that DM and NT have come

M: 'k, call me if DM wants to see me

G: dinner

M: yes, I'll be there, you are so bossy

G: maybe, ok I am hanging

M: take care, and don't talk to NT

G: thanks

She hangs the phone

so that man is Maan he is sleeping as he has been tired with driving for last 3 days

and to make Pari spill the beans Geet smartly played I no every thing game

this will continue and Pari will tell her many things

as for now you maust have had some idea about what DM has planned for Dev, Pari told it is some legal matter

also the fact that Pari is Adi's sister will be an important part, and Adi being Maan's friend will help Geet find more about Sameera

also remember that this is her first day in the KM once these two days are over I will take a week's leap then 6 months leap

does Pari know where Vicky is?

waiting for your responses write soon

i will try one more update today

pls post your comments you know you all are my motivations

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part 20 https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/1606573?pn=124Edited by smj1977 - 13 years ago

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Ratna

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Shruti 🤗.....thank u for the lovely update......could not wait for your PM 😳.......loved Pari and Geet's convo....many doubts were cleared in this update.....waiting to see what DM does to the evil duo.....plz continue.....TC 😊

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Posted: 13 years ago

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does Pari know where Vicky is?

yaaaaa surely she will know [just a guess]

tht vicky n pari r dating or smthing like tht

n luved maan n geets phone conversation

n hoping geet n pari bond more n more n become best frnds

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KrishnaSourav

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Brilliant part. loved it.
loved geet-pari scene and conversation.
I knw pari's talkative nature used by geet.
til now I found pari is really sweet, lovely caring.
she will be good friend of geet.as geet know a female friend .
so adi is pari's bro. cool.
pinky bhabi.loved it.
so dev is there.
May be dm making some plan and throw dev out from km.
I want to see dev rot .
yes nt-dev made for each other .
loved maan-geet cute conversation .
yes maan is right geet is bossy but I loved it and I guess maan also loved it.😆😆😆😆😆😆😆
update soon.
Edited by PrithviSanyo1 - 13 years ago

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Originally posted by: rsroopali
does Pari know where Vicky is?
yaaaaa surely she will know [just a guess]

tht vicky n pari r dating or smthing like tht

n luved maan n geets phone conversation

n hoping geet n pari bond more n more n become best frnds

match the ages (refer part 17)

Maan: 26

Vicky: 20

Geet:18

Dev: 22

Pari: 21

and Pari is not Vicky's GF but the idea is tempting 😆shall I go for it?

but I had a guy for her in my mind😉

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kahkashansakina

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Awesome update ...

loved it .....

geet took more information from pari..

that man is maan..

loved it maan and geet phone conversation..

pls update soon waiting

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Audiwalia

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Ok nd after how many updation u gonna take 6 months leap.... dat she would be 6 or7 months pregnant dat would be so cute to see how maan would handle her mood swings nd carvings.....

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KrishnaSourav

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Posted: 13 years ago

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updated my comment on page 122

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