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Waiting 2 see how the fact will unfold.....Devika thnx 4 the beautiful post...
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Change is the rule of life and those who live in present & past will surely loose their future , i am glad that are our lovely couple understand this before its too late .. thank u for writing this awesome part .
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Change is rule of life and those who live in present and past will surely loose their future , i am glad Dev understand this , hopefully radhika also , thanks for writing this awesome part .
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Devika
waiting to travel with Dev to find Radhika
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oh my god.how one person can thought this story yaar.and ya way of writting ,some at beginning some at end.of course we are waiting for starting the journey with dev for sure yaar
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thank you kscjk, sweetfamily, AditiD, ruchibabbly, 5armad, prakri, Nabesa, imissouri, khus1973, sweetrose92, shalinikanagu, sugarandspice, vinianil, radhika5, radha_bilahari, sonia122, JustShanta, DAIRY25, v3gradev09, suwin, -priyanka-, radev_forever, gauranitai, bvs7691, nycsweetie, chalhov, for liking part 84. Thank you radhika5,nycsweetie, suwin, any17,vini, sweetfamily, sonia, v3gradev09, radev-forever, radev1000,diary25 x2, chalhov, and ekta-bajaj for your precious time to comment on this part. so i hope all had a nice weekend, especially after getting a break from me. Its a nice feeling , right. Even I am also learing to slow down now. atleast a break on weekends.. 😆 and today was enjoying the first Radev meeting, awasome , loved it so much.. there was innocence, there was shyness, there was words, there was beauty, and there was nature... superb, simple but very creative... very cute..
so i don't know how you will be able to come back to my state of mind now. I am totally in a different world with Radev, made them to seperate and trying to revealout a reason for that witout my Radhika in picture.... and there our cute couple is meeting for the first time,and the visuals are ready for the eyes, here i am trying to bring it through my limited writing language.. ha ha.. Cv team and me are at the edge of two different poles... 😆
so no clue, whether you will be able to come back to this. But I am going to do my part.. coming up soon, part 85.... hope you all will like it.. take care devika.
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Before proceeding with reading, i want you to know that my Radhika is not in picture, so i can unfold the mystery thru others eyes and their thoughts, so thru their thought i want you to know how things changed, or happened. So it may start from the beginning, trying to say her state of mind, and then how gradullay it got changed. Nothing happened in a day, so hopefully you will be able to get thru me, I need this driver too, first i thought he is just a driver, but he is coming up, and they introduced themselves as strangers, so their strange talk will come, he is just a driver, so his mannerisms will be like a driver, but he is aged too, so his talk will be like that way. Thanks......
Part 85

Resting her head back, Suchi closed her eyes rethinking Radhika's letter that she just read. That happened to be the first letter that she send to Sushma from U.S . Suchi tried to recollect Radhika's words, the new Radhika she just came to know.

Dear Sweety...muwaaaaa..

How are you? It s been a week here, and now only i got time to write to you. You know me well , right? Yes I was trying to see her, very close.You know that I was curious to see her, to know her. First time when i saw her she was glittering under the artificial lights. She was smiling nicely, and I saw his dreamy eyes beaming when he showed her to me. He is liking her very much. Her hair is short & looks blonde in color and it is soft and silky whereas mine is wavy, long and thick. She changes color and texture of it whenever she likes, but I keep it same all the time.

Her arms are long and slender, and she paints her nail so neatly, things goes very fast through her, and there is hardly any block. She loves fast movement and people made it easy for her to move forward. Whereas me, stopped over many times to look around, to get my path clear, to say one hai to the smile that aimed at me. She has narrow vision and she sees only her, and she is giving opportunity for him to move on smoothly, clearing his way easily, whereas it is always a question mark that blocks the opportunity for me, and I get confused easily. ......

............No wonder he is liking her more, as she is always trying to give him something new everyday. She is keeping herself neat and tidy whereas I may have to pass thru the dust most of the time......

.....but she happily crush the soft petals saying it as a weed, whereas I was enjoying those wild flowers of my angan and smiled with them. She replaces the nice big pots with new ones and new colors and grooming it with a professional touch and call it as landscaping and people stop by to see admire its beauty, whereas mine was scattered all over as it wished to grow and people passed by wihtout acknowleging the natural beauty of it....

.......She has a vision for his action, whereas I just take what he gives me. we two are so different.I am feeling jealous of her now, why she look so beautiful, why she is smiling at him, why she is giving him the opportunity, I am walking thru it, holding his hand, maybe tomorrow I will also love her just like him and say sweety, come over, you will love this place, where life has some value, come and see it, then.... will you come?'

Radhika, It took me a minute to realize the she reference was U.S. what was in your mind, you tried to love that place, but then what happened? Why did you run away like this? Is that your papa said, why he prefer you over any other girl for his son. You should have told me what is haunting your mind, when it comes closer to your heart, why you kept away from me? Why you didn't feel that freedom, with me. I thought I am so closer to you, but I think I am just a mother-in-law. But you didn't say it to Rohini either, You took the decision, all by yourself? Why?

The car just moved forward aiming at Delhi and Suchi tried to looka t hose street with her open eyes and closed mind.......

Sushma was keeping the letters back in place. Randomly she grabbed one, and opened it to read her mind, with a smile her eyes moved on those words..

Dear Sweety, ... muwaaaaa......

I told you how beautiful his campus was with the palm trees lining the roads and the red flaming petals of those geraniums, last weekend we went to Grand Canyon,

He had last Friday off memorial day , they call it 'long weekend' and Ramesh and him planned for outing. I met Sarah during this trip. She is lucky, all her family is here. She is smart and it was hard for me to communicate with her, i was understanding her well, but she was not getting me easily, but she knew few hindi words, that she learned from ramesh, she love bollywwod movies, our dance, adn so many things about us.

... we went to see a natural wonder and my first one after coming here, something nature left for me to watch it in the midst of manmade wonders.. How can stones look this beautiful and colorful.
The Colorado river just flowing smoothly thru it, connecting Us to Mexico. or separating two countries beautifully.. how can she flow so smoothly so deep, yet over the ground....
Hiking part was really hectic towards the end, but you should have see Sarah's spirit, she was the most energetic person on our group.
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As usual Dev was capturing the beauty of nature in his new camera and clicked many of my pics with it. We did camping too, a unique experience near the river. in the midist of this wonder... we spend our time.... as if we are living inside a large cave, where sun can reach easily...... we played in that water, it was cold , colder than our chandenpur ........
and I tried few new American dishes along with Sarah, and we talked about Indian food and she said how much she loves Indian curries. But as we returned I realized if the nature decides then it can just split and stay apart from each other, and as it deepens, it can bring colors to its hard part too..... will you come one day here to see this wonder.....

Sushma taking a deep sigh, folded the letter thinking "why should i come, I can see the wonder thru your words dear... I jsut want to see you, nothing else can bring the joy to my heart... come back with Dev , i only need that, without you, there is no beauty in all these wonders dear"... she went and kept everything back in order.

It has been one hour past and Dev was standing next to the taxi, looking at that odd place. Very few houses were noted that also very closer to roadside. The driver came running towards the car with a small bundle in his hand.

Driver with a smile; as you said it may take a day or two or five, I also need to be prepared , right ?. Saying that he went and put that in the dickey. But then one lady came running behind with a bottle of water and handed that to him... and said something softly and left in same speed

Driver with a smile: now they are worried about my water and food, I told them , I have a stranger with me, he will take care of it.

Dev smiled thru listening to his comment.

Driver: ok then, let's start

They got back inside the car and it made its roar sound.....
Driver: you work?

Dev: ha

Driver: my son too then proudly : he is in abroad, in Dubai, have you heard of Dubai?

Dev smiled and nodded his head

Driver proudly: um, he is un Dubai, you see that girl, who brought the water , is his wife. He has two kids too.

Dev smiled listening to him

Driver: are you getting bored, listening to me...

Dev again smiled and nodded in disagreement

Driver: ha, but my son...., he is very busy there, making so much money, he told many times to me , to take rest, but what to do, I got used to this from my adulthood, and sometimes he get angry too, I tell him, now I am healthy enough to feed for myself and my family, when I become disable you take care of all us. Saying that he laughed loud. Then went into silence but repeated one more time : but he is very busy there and ha, he is in a highly reputed position too.

after few minutes,

Driver: what do you do?

Dev: I work with computers

Driver proudly: my son also knows computer.

Dev smiled

Driver: he makes lot of money, you too maybe, right?

Dev smiled again

Driver: your parents maybe proud too. are you sending money to them?

The smile disappeared from dev's face and he looked out at the passing street. Driver went into silence seeing his reaction and thought: he maynot be, or maybe he is, he looked back at the posture of Dev doubtfully...

Dev thought to self, they were proud, even I was proud, am I not ? I was so happy when we successfully launched our project, and I got the recognition I wished for, everyone congratulated me, I was so eager to share it with Radhika, thought to lift her up in the air with joy, and circle her around, but where is she? Why she decided to go to this place? And who is there for her?....... How it all started Rahdika? When did it started? I don't know.

As far as I know, everything was going fine, you took your afternoon nap mostly everyday and opened those doors with droopy eyes. ....He slowly rested back his head and closed his eyes. The driver turned his face and smiled seeing him resting with closed eyes, he turned the music on and continued to move forward to the destination.

Dev's mind flew back into that glassy building , to the seventh floor, to his cubicle. He was totally into building work of new project. Santi came in with the news

"Dev did you hear the news of the day?"

Dev jerked and turned his revolving chair to face santi : what is it?

Santi: our project lead , resigned as he got a better position in another company..

Dev got stunned to listening to santi's talk: what!!! How can he? that also at this crucial time...

Santi with a smile: ye, I think our profession is back in demand, with a giggle she left to next cubicle..

Dev felt so uneasy thinking how can he do that? This is a crucial time and they need to present it in front of the clients, next week to discuss the initial steps and the team is working hard to get this all going and at this time. How could it be, so possible.

He overheard santi saying "ya, he is moving out to east coast area, his family is there, so he has his own reasons, it seems like he was trying for this long time and now only he got the opportunity what he wished for."

Dev went back home with thinking how irresponsible people can become, when it comes to personal.

Radhika saw him so upset. Sipping onto hot tea he told her the issue, she passively listened. And she shared a happy news that Heena is getting engaged soon and she was so excited about the groom and showing him the picture.

The tension at work place slowly started escalating as the person in direct contact for any question happened to be the manager on site. They tried to look for a quick replacement by hiring someone but failed, but then checking back the progress and work done by the next level , Dev has been selected as the new project lead. It was almost a shock for him to listen to the news and soon he accepted that post because he loved doing the project so far and many times he wished to proceed with his instincts but got blocked related to prior approvals from the lead, now he get that freedome, he felt so happy and that day was one of the happiest day in his work life and he and Radhika planned to drive out that weekend, that got cancelled due to pressure to finish pending work before the presentation and satisfied with a dinner at Olive gardens.

That was Radhika's eat out with noodle experiment. She sipped onto the vine they served as compliment and looked at me with her grinned face. Holding the special spoon on her left hand she tried to roll the soft noodle with that fork, and it went on as a never ending process, and she looked at me with rolling her eyes, she looked at others how easily they are handling it, but she took it as fun and a learning thing, and smiled as she saw another woman struggling the same way, and she laughed out seeing a little one eating it so smartly.
As we returned I sat back to check on my work thing as new post demanded his attention. Radhika stayed closer to me, holding onto my upper arm and resting her head passively on my upper back. She was with me , all those time, listening and understanding and was near and closer when I was at home.

"let's stop here for a coffee break?'

The driver's request, awake him from his thought.

Dev: ha wiping of his face down, and stretching out little bit.

He looked at his watch and then asked : How long it may take to reach there?

Driver: by tomorrow morning

Dev: um, and took deep sigh

He parked the car near the road side and went near the coffee shop. Dev also accompanied him.

*********

Meanwhile at Chandenpur

Mohan and Birju was coming in. Rohini was was about to ask something

Mohan: Rohini, did anyone called?

Rohini: nahi tho, but then remembering :ha, Radhika

Mohan: Radhika betiya phone kiya!. What she said? When is she coming?

Rohini: she didn't say anything about coming? In a disappointed tone

Mohan: you know something, today when we were about to start back, after the meeting this Birju was telling he saw Dev in town

Rohini stopped for a second: what?

Mohan: ha, near the post office, the meeting was near to that place only, and he said he saw flash of Dev getting into a car and passing by. I laughed to my death. Dev is in U.S and how can he seeDev here, that also in our town.

Listening to that Birju walked in with a childish face: I can recognize him easily, babuji or dadaji didn't trust me, I am sure, he was exactly looking like Dev only.

Rohini: then why you didn't stop him,

Birju: that because I saw him, right before he was getting into the car, and by the time I recognized, the car already disappeared from that place, then what will I do?

Mohan: why you took that long to recognize him then...

Birju scratching on his head: vo, I got shocked seeing his image, it came unexpectedly na, and my mind went blank for few minutes to comprehend it ......what I will do, by the time I checked back, they already left.

Mohan: see, now you only deal with him,

Rohini: actually Suchi came today morning, she came to meet Sushma and left quick too,

Birju: see I told you

Mohan: Birju, that is Suchi, not Dev , thum bhi na

Birju: i am telling the truth, I saw Dev.

Mohan: um.... um, ... now come, llet's go and check on the filed, come

Birju came running towards Rohini and said: I really saw him, it was Dev bhayya

Rihini secretly: I trust you and next time when you see him na, invite him to our home ok. Is Radhika was with him too, or he was alone in a teasy tone

Birju: so you are also not believeing me na, next time when Dev comes, I only will ask him

Rohini: Birju, that is a good idea.

Birju affirming himself: um, I will , then you all will trust me na.

Mohan: BIRJUuuuuuuuuuuu'.

Birju jerking; ha, coming and ran towards outside.

Rohini just watched them going, but then suddenly Birju came with a bottle in his hand: maaji, Daadi keliye. This is the one you asked for , right.

Rohini: hum, maaji feels better relief after applying this one. So let me try. Ok.

Giving that to Rohini he went to jeep and they drove away.

Rohini went up to Daadi's room, Chameli went and warming littlebit of oil from the bottle came to daadi's room.

Rohini was telling about Birju's talk to daadi and then taking the oil from chameli's hand she started applying it on daadi's leg.

Daadi: next time when she calls, tell her, I want to see her. I don't think I can live any longer without seeing her.

Rohini: she will come maaji, with Dev. We all know he is too busy and Radhika only told us, how important his work is and... interupting her

Daadi: I know.... I know, but is he the only one, this been two years now, everyone gets leave and all , right?. This is like, he is the only one who does all the work for his company and only he is existed for them.. I am glad at least Radhika doesn't have any job to take care, otherwise she will also start saying some excuses, and stop calling too. Now at least we can listen to her sound. Then with a sorrowful voice: sometimes I feel like, why did we let her go, and then looking at Rohini, we only made the mistake, we should have told Dev first itself , that every year he suppose to visit us... dadi's talk continued...

Rohini didn't say anything, just listened to Daadi's talks, her mind was flying back to few months.....

Rohini: Radhika, maaji fell from the steps and she is in hospital

Radhika: KYA!!!

Rohini: ha betiya, her feet got slipped and she fell down from the steps, and they are doing the x-ray and all, Birju and your babuji carried her to the hospital.

Radhika's tearful voice reached her ears: can I talk to daadi

Rohini: no beta, she is inside, they are doing tests, I will get back to you, ok.

After that she called every one hour to ask about daadima, and saying I am coming right now. Then only I realized my mistake, and I got nice scolding from her babuji too, for scaring her. at that time, i never thought how Radhika will take it and she is all alone. I was fool to just tell her right away. She cried when she heard about Daadi's hip surgery . she was unable to sit comforatably back there. Her babuji also scloded her saying we all here with Daadi. Surender bhayya and Suchi also talked to her, comforting her that everyone is near daadi.

Days was passing by and she started telling her wish to come, wish to see her daadi, Dev also wanted to come, and he said he will try too. But after the hip surgery daadi felt much better and she got discharged and everyone started telling her not to worry as everything is coming back to normal here...

But then slowly slowly Radhika's tone started changing, she wished to come here at any cost, she wanted to come alone, how many times I tried to tell her that here everything is fine but she was not taking it completely, she was crying loud, and then with so much scolding that got stopped, towards late she started talking less and she just hear what I say from here. I tried hard to make her understand that she needs to be with dev, and how can she come all alone leaving him alone like that,. Especially when he is so busy in his work. She should first think about him, then only us.

"rahdika wil come soon na"

Daadi's hopeful question brought Rohini back itno reality

Rohini: um maaji, now you take rest, let me check in the kitchen

Daadi: um, I hope when she comes, I will be able to walk and run around with her in whole chandenpur.

Rohini walking away: you will maaji, now you take rest, ok.

Daadi opened the Ramayan and started reading it.

********************************* Now Dev and the driver knows where they are heading to, and that will open to us only when they reach there, till then let's see what these charactors have to say about Radhika.. OK. let see whether they can give as a good reasoning before Dev reach his destination.. and the time is just one night away, so what will happen in this one night, it has more than 12 hours of time, so by then I need to reveal it, and i hope i can ... thanks for your precious time to read it. Again, Radhika's mind and what all was going in her mind is still a mystery, this is what Dev , Rohini, or daadi thinking, so don't draw any conclusion from it. it needs to be revealed soon... so
Thanks for reading my post, have a good day.....

part 86


Edited by Devika. - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Like the way the story is moving!
Waiting to see what has happened!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
Devika with every update, I get restless.. I simply cannot wait for the updates, though I know u would do it the next day bt dat 24 hrs also becomes unbearable, I keep checking the forum for ur updates the moment, the moon comes up...
The story was very kiddish at the the start bt I must say wat a Lovely Turn u have taken and wat a Grip u have got of it... so diff, so unsual and so Unique...
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Posted: 14 years ago
good story but u know what,u move very slowly,u write past moments more than further.although imagination ,thoughts of urs are superb.its a g fairy tail.keep writing

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