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Posted: 14 years ago

~deewangi~
part 78

he knew her little too well.. he knew she won't be strong enough to take him, knowing himself that he was really hard on her. He was glad that she didn't faint making love the whole day madly, violently, carnally.
She made cute baby face as he tucked the spread around her.
Khurana Mansion
Rano - tumhari Maan se baad huwai
rimi - nahi mama
Rano - aise kasi challenga beta
Daadi - wat can she do? Who uske peecha peecha tho nahi ja sakti na
Rano - humesha tho jaati thi
Daadi - abhi yeh koi bechi thodi hain. Maan ko bhi tho aapni responsibility samjhni chahiya. Actually he is having so many friends outside thats why all this.
Rano wondered when did Maan ever have friends
just then rimi's phone rings. she excuses herself & goes to her room
rimi really scared & nervous - hello
man - how long
rimi - not sure
man - its been more than 8months now, Geet ka college khtam hogaya hoga. If she comes back, then Maan will kill u with his bare hands
rimi gets even more terrified
man - waise tho Geet ke pas passport nahi hain, she can't come here, even if she did.. she won't have any thing to prove she is Geet. Lekin aur kitna der lagega.
Rimi - wat can I do
man - mujhe sab property tumahre naam transferred chahiya at the earliest. Warna!!!
rimi - main try tho kar rahi hoon na.. pata nahi uss Maan ko kaisi ladki pasand hain, I have tried every thing.
Man - try seducing him
rimi - lekin
man - lakin vakin kuch nahi, jaldi se marriage karvalo
rimi - he doesn't even look at me like that
man - I may say u lost ur charm.. I should throw u back from where I picked u...
rimi had tears thinking about her past in that shaded galies of Mumbai as prostitute. She hated her life. It was her luck that Brij spotted her, as she looked so much like Geet. They offered her good money enough for rest of her life. They had spend almost 6months training her about Geet & her family background. Even to sign like Geet. They had arranged to get geets documents & passport for her.
After carefully studying maan's current life they had plotted her to dress up in modern dress initially & also arranged for her modeling assignment, but soon they realized that Maan was not impressed so they decided to change her to be more traditional, but even that didn't seem to impress him, least did they know wat impressed Maan was not dress...but it was ..his Geet's heart.. that only his heart could relate too. Even if Geet would have come wearing modern dress.. his heart would have just loved her madly.
They could train rimi into every thing about the family & Geet.. but they didn't know..actually no one knew how close where Maan & Geet. They didn't know wat relation they shared. It was personal to them very close. Only they knew wat happened between them. Their love .. their passion, unka rutna mana na.. no one knew it.. even the incident like Geet almost jumping off the building's roof was not known to anyone. Only they knew it. There were so many small small secrets they shared ' no one knew.. only their heart knew it... that's why probably their heart never failed them.
Brij - I don't know how u are going to do it, but I want u get me the property papers in one week.
Rimi - that's too early
Brij - well u r forgetting u have been there since 8 months now

Maaneet Flat
Maan serves the dinner in a plate. He kisses her forehead. She smiles & sits up holding the spread. She extends her hand to take the plate, he moves it away. She makes a cute face.
Maan - I will feed u
she opens her mouth.. he smiles & feeds her.
She again brings her hand up, he looks at her angrily moving the plate
she makes a cute face - mujhe bhi khilana hain aapko
exactly the way she said it when he first licked a chocolate from her cheek. He smiled & showed the plate to her. She fed him lovingly.
Geet - aap haasn kyun rahen ho?
He kissed her nose - tumahri baaten ..bilkul tumhari tarah pyari hain.
Next day it was 9am. They were still fast a sleep. Maan's phone rings continuously. She rolls into his arms covering her ears - mujhe sona nahi de raha
she slips still down into him, pulling his hand to wrap around her ears. He turns & switches off the phone. Aab nah tang karega bus.. umm. She kisses his chest & doses off. He doesn't even know, if he has even slept so peacefully in his entire life. It was afternoon 2 pm when he finally woke up, she was still sleeping in his arms. He didn't want to disturb her, he just lend his arm & laid there until she woke up. He pushed her curls & kept admiring her. She suddenly jumps up - aap ki tho meeting thi na 10 bajen
he smiled looking at her. She immediately pulled the spread to cover herself.
Geet - aab kya hoga?
He slowly pulled her closer - aab... umm..aab
he bent his head to claim her lips in a heart stopping kiss. kissing her loving her, nibbling her lips non stop. He loved her slowly and passionately, watching her for every reaction on her expressive features. He was getting addicted to her.. actually he was already.
Maan growled softly - I should keep you here forever, never let you out of this room
she smiled as her breathes coming quicker as she headed for her own orgasm, oh jaan she gasped suddenly as her muscles clamped tightly around him. He gave one mighty thrust and they both cried out in a mutual climax. He lay down next to her overwhelmed by the feelings he felt for her.
Later in the evening Maan & got ready.
Geet looked at him with her sleepy eyes - kanha jaa rahen ho aap?
Maan - main nahi..hum jaa rahen hain, get ready fast. He ordered.
She twisted her lips & went into the shower. He made few calls while he waited for her.
Adhi - good... good...evening sir
Maan - umm
adhi - s..s..sir..woh meeting
Maan - I know.. anything else
adhi - I ..I have mailed u the details
Maan - umm
adhi - sir kuch designs finalize karne hain
Maan - mail the soft copy to me
adhi - ji sir
Maan checked the other missed calls ' few from office, home & don't pick..yucks..creature!!
he was irritated to see the list. Geet just walked in wearing a red suit. He forget everything & kept admiring her. He got up walked towards her, lost in her eyes, her serne beauty..her..just her. She adjusted her dupatta & looked at him.
He cupped her face - bahut pyari lag rahi ho
she blushed instantly. He was never so expressive .. the more he expressed she felt shy & flushed.
PRECAP
so where are they going!!!
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Edited by muskanp - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
wohooo🥳....aaj mera number aagaya...me first...me first...yipeeee...🥳

ab update...mein kahan se shuru karoon...hmmm....here it goes...

man - its been more than 8months now, Geet ka college khtam hogaya hoga. If she comes back, then Maan will kill u with his bare hands...abe brij...kuthae...kaminae...bhool gaya kya..jo saal pehlae maan ke hath se mar kaya tha na..ab tu kya us rimi simi ki bacchi ko darayega...apnae baarae me sooch😈...iss bar to tho gaya😆...lekin i m pakka sure maan se pehlae meri geet-sherni se mar khanae wala hai...uski maan ko sathanae keliyae...ab maan tujae kya karega ye tho tum jantae ho...may ur soul rest in "not" peace😈...

Man - try seducing him
rimi - lekin
man - lakin vakin kuch nahi, jaldi se marriage karvalo
rimi - he doesn't even look at me like that
man - I may say u lost ur charm....seducing..charm..my foot...errrrr

least did they know wat impressed Maan was not dress...but it was ..his Geet's heart.. that only his heart could relate too. Even if Geet would have come wearing modern dress.. his heart would have just loved her madly.....

They didn't know wat relation they shared. It was personal to them very close. Only they knew wat happened between them. Their love .. their passion, unka rutna mana na.. no one knew it.. even the incident like Geet almost jumping off the building's roof was not known to anyone. Only they knew it. There were so many small small secrets they shared ' no one knew.. only their heart knew it... that's why probably their heart never failed them...o diii..i just loved tis....geet maan romance tho☺️
☺️☺️......
75 76 77 nd 78...ek dum chaka chak...tooo gud....awsm...mind blowing.....👏👍🏼😍...

Edited by eiya22 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Waaiiittttiiiiinnnnnnggggggg........ Come on Di..... Be quick or else I will not b able to wake up tmrw.....

U updated.... Luv U ..... Muaaah.... Will comment tmrw.....
Edited by Sameenaas - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Ohhh!!! atlast.. its brij..... they want Geet's money ... wait n watch brij... Maan will just ruin ur life ...😆
Edited by PaintedSky - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
loved it. finally. :) hey i'm a new user. can anybody ell me what is this PM thing. i mean people asking to pm them in the FF.
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Posted: 14 years ago
loved it n hope they go to the temple they got married plz diiiiiii
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome part!
so Rimi is sent by Brij.. I'm sure the truth will be revealed to everyone soon
Maan and geet are so cute. Date night? or Introduce her to the family
con't soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
Ugh! I swear.. I feel like punching Brij so hard that all his teeth come out! 😡seriously! How can he do that too his sister.. just for some bloody money. UGH just UGH!! Least they know what a place Geet holds in Maans heart.. and no rimi vimi can take that..
LOVED Maneet moments.. I swear I want the truth out ASAP.. so dat Maan can kill them.. UGH!
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Posted: 14 years ago
OH my god I expected this But i thought it was mohinders plan i cant imagine brij ploting all this, maan ko ek bhaar hint lagjaye tho poora ka poora team jamin ke andar honge, Love the cute scene of maaneet, I feel they are on their way to handa haweli, if i am not wrong.
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Posted: 14 years ago
ha.. so it's Brij..

Yeah I also thought it would be him only...Now I want Maan to kill both Brij and Rimi...

Loved the Maneet scenes.. I think Maan has started to accept her even if she is meet.. Looks like he is taking her to Mansion to introduce her to Rano and Dadi.. Now Rimi ka Band bajegaaaaaaaa.

Please update sooooon

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