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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: simi91

welcome kate.
muuhaa.
thanks dear. yes I seen ur comments.loved it.


love each part

cant believe susana
didnt tell yu better
update when get up
from the want read the update
i'm talking like MSK ha ha ha


thanks dear.
aww sorry dear, don't worry next time when i'll update I'll pm u😳
yes I'm loving it ur msk like talking😳
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: simi91

oh ok,
ok ok,I'll not laugh😳

thanks sweetheart

i think di is cooking
something damn good


welcome darling.
yes me too thinking like that
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Posted: 14 years ago
thanks dear.
aww sorry dear, don't worry next time when i'll update I'll pm u😳
yes I'm loving it ur msk like talking😳


by the way do yu know susana i think yu know
her by sharmake11
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Posted: 14 years ago
welcome darling.
yes me too thinking like that


np my dear sis today ur enjoying ur day off ha ha ha
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Posted: 14 years ago

~deewangi~
part 77

He looked so peaceful now. He seemed as if he was fighting a war within which just was victorious one..but seemed to have drawn out everything. She watched him as he slept, his powerful body curled around her. His strong arms still held her tightly. She smiled remembering seeing him as a 15yrs old boy, fighting on defense stand when he was too fast & best for an attacker. But the innocent boy has grown into a hard cold person. Wild person. People were scared of him, feared when he walked in, felt timid in his presence. She looked at the scars... her heart ached to see those scar marks on the. The thought of him being hurt made her clench painfully. She couldn't bear it if he were ever hurt again, just knowing that this is wat happened to him in her absence..it hurt her more. Knowing that he had already borne wounds was almost beyond bearing..no ways she was going to let anything touch him again. She leaned forward & touched her mouth lightly on the scars on his left side of the chest.
His skin cramped under her touch, but he didn't awaken. She moved on to the other scar close to the previous one. She tried to softly kiss away even the memories of those wounds. She kissed on all the scars on after the other again & again. She could feel him quiver under her lips & knew that he was awake. But she still continued to kiss him lovingly.
Maan warned biting his teeth - you should better stop.
She didn't stop instead she moved lovingly lower kissing him, snaking his abdomen. He groaned loud clinching the sheets. She lingered lower, more intense building the tension in him. He loved her assault.. reminding him of the moment how he used to feel when she used to sit on him kissing his face with driving him to the edge.. his control broke & he reached for her more carnally, swept he over. He held her still for his sensual assault. Her petite body submerged under his deep into their peak.
Afterward he cuddled her against his side. She curled deep into his strong body with a sigh reflecting her exhaustion. His hand stroke her hair, smoothing her damp face.
Maan - I am sorry, I hurt u when..
she slide upward to his lips & kissed him. I am urs..only urs..
his arms went around her & hugged her tightly.
Maan - I don't want u going anywhere without me
Geet giggled - so u will take me where were I want to go
he had his guarded look on - when ever possible
she sat up crossing her legs without realizing that she was giving him a clearer view.
Twisting her lips cutely - when ever possible!!!!
he looked at her in amusement, how she was still innocent like a 10yr old girl & borne a full women hood. Very deliberately he let his gaze wander over her noting the soft flush that their love making had left on her. Her swollen lips, her b***** where pink with the constant sucking & biting. As he stared at them he noticed it peaking. He immediately glanced at her face, he was more amused to see she was blushing. How could she? She had laid naked in his arms for hours but still it just took one tour of her curves & she was blushing like a new bride.
Another surprised hit him, when his manhood was hardening & aching to be with her. How could he even think of s** again now? Just five minutes back.. he felt contentment.. like he may not be able to think of s** for next whole week..now his body just proved him wrong. She looked at him waiting for an answer.
She patted on his arms - javab do mujhe
Maan - humesha bus!!!
she smiled - umm
he got up to wear his jeans. She suddenly felt odd sitting in the middle of the bed wearing nothing. She took the spread & covered herself.
He short a piercing glance at her - don't u think it is little too late to hide ur self
she snapped - right ..let the sheet lose & bend down nak** to pic her dress. He briskly held her waist leaving his jean & turned her into his arms, pinning her on the bed. He kept her intent
Maan - yeh kya kar rahi hi tum
he b**** flatten against his chest. She shivered under him ...woh main..
before she could ..his mouth carnally took in her lips for a full mouth kiss.
With a little grunt he adjusted himself & held her in place. He pushed his miraculously impressively hard p*** right into her. Geet whimpered and he pushed. She gave a little groan and he thrust. He moved at her as hard as he could, desperately trying to push each other to the edge. She bit her lip as he gave a violent thrust and it was too much for her as she called out in agony jaanoo. It was enough to send him over the edge as he came in her once more. He fell on her shaking all over, his breath coming in short sharp gasps. As their breath began to flow normally he cupped her face
Maan - are u sorry it happened?
She put hand around his waist & rubbed her cheek in his warm palm
Geet - no ..I am not..how can I be. I.. I love u...she wanted to say I am ur wife but at last moment words choked & she just simply said I love u. she wanted to give him every thing, every small happiness that he deserved. She wanted to let him know with her love.. because he didn't want words any more.
Maan - I don't want u to get hurt.
She knew he was trying to warn her about his engagement with Rimi. That really didn't mean anything when they were married. Not for a year or so..but for 11yrs now. She knew that no one could come in between them. Interestingly he never wore any engagement ring either.. all that was enough a proof to her that he never got engaged it was just some crap. Which she didn't even want to discuss until she sees him happy like he used to be with her. Least did she know he was only happy with her.. not with anyone else.
Geet - I love u.. nothing else matters. I don't want anything else
he closed his eyes & hugged her.
Geet - mujhe bhook lagi hain
Maan - kal se kuch nahi kaya na
she nodded making a baby face.
Maan - kuch bana hain? I don't want u to cook anything now, we rather order
she kissed his nose - parata bane hain.
Maan - aacha ruko I will heat & get it
she wrapped the spread around her & went behind him. She felt really weak & tired she fell just walking few steps from the bed. He held her & made her lie on the bed.
Maan - kanha na I will get it, tumhe ek bar khane se baad samjh nahi aati
he knew her little too well.. he knew she won't be strong enough to take him, knowing himself that he was really hard on her. He was glad that she didn't faint making love the whole day madly, violently, carnally. She made cute baby face as he tucked the spread around her.
PRECAP
MORE ON RIMI!!!
~PREV PART 76~
Thanks guys for all ur love & support...
hope u like this update as well
Please please do comment
love
muskan
THANXS SIMI91 FOR THE POEM
knew i love you from when we was small,
We didn't seem to know a thing about love at all!
I had a crush on you for years and never did tell you,
But i played stuck up ,embarrass and really did reject you.
Age difference didn't matter to me
I am glad we are together ,now I'm free.
In your eyes i am the only girl in the world,
Who soothes your heart and makes you twirl.
I am glad i met you, you turned my life around,
you pick me up when I'm feeling down.
I wish our love will never part,
Because you are not only my lover but always my childhood sweetheart!

Edited by muskanp - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: simi91

thanks dear.
aww sorry dear, don't worry next time when i'll update I'll pm u😳
yes I'm loving it ur msk like talking😳


by the way do yu know susana i think yu know

her by sharmake11


yea I know her as sharmake11

me and she sometimes talks in pms😳.
loved her comments, loved her poems.she is so nice and lovingly.

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Posted: 14 years ago

well

I came here and found you just updated
but had no time to read
so just reserved a space for my self😆
now I hurriedly completed my task and snatcheda window to read and write
but you left me speechless
wow 😳
but still adat se majboor hoan kuch to likhna hi padega
Drunk as Drunk
Pablo Neruda
Translated from the Spanish by Christopher Logue

Drunk as drunk on turpentine
From your open kisses,
Your wet body wedged
Between my wet body and the strake
Of our boat that is made of flowers,
Feasted, we guide it - our fingers
Like tallows adorned with yellow metal -
Over the sky's hot rim,
The day's last breath in our sails.

Pinned by the sun between solstice
And equinox, drowsy and tangled together
We drifted for months and woke
With the bitter taste of land on our lips,
Eyelids all sticky, and we longed for lime
And the sound of a rope
Lowering a bucket down its well. Then,
We came by night to the Fortunate Isles,
And lay like fish
Under the net of our kisses.
Edited by smj1977 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome part. loved it.
they r really know each other more than any one. they loved each other madly, deeply.
there is no place of rimi or any one.
both feel peace in each other.

update soon
Edited by PrithviSanyo1 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
ufff marr daala teri update nay muskii ... *thud*

it was fantabulously awesome .... loved the raw Maan and the soft Geet....

they are bind together in an unbreakable bond...

they dont need any one else ...

total deewangi...

loved it

continue soon

love
Sana
Edited by sindu555 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: simi91

welcome darling.
yes me too thinking like that


np my dear sis today ur enjoying ur day off ha ha ha


yea today off.
I'm enjoying😳

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