~deewangi~ maaneet ff thread 9 - Page 64

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Posted: 14 years ago
plzz update kero naa 😭
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teri raho me khadey hai dil tham ke . hai hum to deewange update ke........................... muski dear update fast .............................
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WAITING...................................😍
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yipeeeee...

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yeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee bale bale so happy cant wait for longbut give long update
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me to waiting that tooo eagerly
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intehaa ho gayi
intezar kiii.....😭😭
aayi na kuch khabar deewangi kiii......😲😲
ye hume hai yakeen😊
bewafa muskii nahi😉😉
phir wajah kya hui😆
intezar kiii?????😡😡
hurry up yaar😊
dekh yaar wait karte karte😳
kya kya likh diya😳😉😳
monika can't wait anymore jaldi karoooooo😭
Edited by mons_bhatia - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
~deewangi~
part 76
Where she might have been overcome with nerves, she was relaxed and extremely excited by the touch of her husband. Her mouth curved into a dreamy smile. Her husband! What a simply wonderful phrase that was.
Every moment was beautiful, every touch was magical, how he touched her, claimed her, how is hand knew exactly were to to touch & how to make her feel wat he felt. His hands cupped each of her b****, and his fingers tweaked her n****..soon his fingers were replaced with his lips & then teeth. As each one hardened into a tight little bud, he would draw it into his mouth to suckle lavishly. He again went back to her face, his kisses moving across her cheek to linger at her mouth.
He kissed her throat and her neck, moving across and then down the hollow of her throat. He licked the swell of her b**** again, and tickled her n**** with his tongue. He entered & waited patiently for her to adjust to him, to his length, he took her to the edge of the orgasm pushing in deeper & deeper..He pulled back so suddenly. All Geet could do was give a sob of anguish and look at him with bewildered eyes.
Geet - umm ??? she demanded brokenly as the tightness in her **** slowly began to unravel.
He looked at her with dark almost desperate eyes.
Maan - tell me you won't leave me! he said softly.
Maan - tell me that you will stay and never leave me again.
He swallowed back some deep emotion, and his eyes glinted almost with tears.
Maan - tum meri ho
she looked at him in surprise & nodded
He kissed her once on the mouth, and then with one powerful thrust he entered her body again.
He rammed his p*** as far into her as he could get and then pulled it almost all the way back out again.
Meri ho..sirf meri he ground.
umm she sobbed again.
He thrust savagely into her and geet grunted from the force of him.
Maan - sirf meri
Geet - umm
She could feel him swelling inside her, feel the throbbing of his **** as he built up for the release she was driving him to with hers. one more viscous thrust.
Maan - mujhe kabhi nahi chodke jana he begged as he gushed into her, flooding her with his ...
he remained in her until their heart lowered in rhythm. They were one..after 11yrs of long wait. They both knew it was the most desirable moment of their life. She hugged him & so did he. She felt complete. She felt truly his..she looked at the ceiling as he lay on her with almost a soundless sigh of contentment. She bit her lips to stifle the sob that rose in her throat ..she didn't want to disturb him by letting out a cry..as he was relaxing into sleep hugging her. It was silly to cry because it was the most wonderful thing in her life had just happened.
But he was Maan...her jaanoo.. who sensed her every little sigh os hers even in deepest of his sleep. His head lifted abruptly & he surveyed her brimming eyes in anger. He kissed away the tears one eye & then the other & a soft peck on her forehead. She knew he could see through her.
He rumbled - is it because I hurt u?
She quickly shook her head - aap tho mujhe hurt nahi kar sakten, woh main aise ..pehli bar..lekin...she didn't know how to express herself..it was just so special...another tear escaped her eye. He took it in with a full mouth kiss...
Maan - I want u again he said it ever so passionately.
It was a bright afternoon & nothing to hide their passion. She reached his neck drawing him into her umm..she said simply, because she could never deny him. There was not even a moment during the hours that followed when she could think, since most of the part she was over taken by the unstoppable waves of desire. He knew her, her body, how to please her, how to drive her to insanity..again & again to heart-stopping peak of pleasure.
She knew he had gone through so much of pain, coldness.. she wanted to heal him with the softness & love of her body. He was wild, hungry sometimes almost violent but with her love she absorbed the bitterness from him, soothing away the loneliness of his isolation. Without words she accepted his passion and gentled it with unquestionable trust. She tried to show him their love was still alive, safe.. he could be safe with his feeling with her. ..only her .. that he need not have a wall that he had built to keep himself apart from the rest of the world.
It was later in the evening..they dossed of finally giving in to the nerves tiredness ..she hugged him from back.. she watched him fall asleep..again felt like crying..but this time it was in thankfulness...that he did trust her tiny miny bit some where. He looked so peaceful now. He seemed as if he was fighting a war within which just was victorious one..but seemed to have drawn out everything.

PRECAP
I am sorry!!

~PREV PART 75 NEXT PART 77~
Thanks guys for all ur love & support...
hope u like this update as well
Please please do comment

love
muskan
Edited by muskanp - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
adorable update. just hit the spot 👏

tell me that you will stay and never leave me again......
.........aww that was soooooo janu.
i hope maan finds out the reality soon so he can feel victorious .

thanx for a scrumptious read..yum yum😉
all jokes apart, it was more beautiful then lustful.😍
Edited by basicquestion1 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome, romantic, part. loved it.
finally they became one.
they knew each other very well, with out any word both understand each other pain.
maan again take promised from geet to never leave him.
hope maan will know the truth also soon.
I know in his deep inside the heart know who is real geet but he wants prove that will help him to expose that creature.

precap is nice👏 but will say it when u'll update. cause precap is misleading😆.
update soon.
Edited by PrithviSanyo1 - 14 years ago

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