SAAVAN---A journey Together !!!

maris

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Posted: 15 years ago

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Dear all below is my first attempt to make a collage of our beloved Saavan...
Accompanying it is my signature poem,of my journey along with them..

Hopefully you all like them both and enjoy ..Thanz for taking your time to read this post😃😉😆

SAAVAN---A Journey Together

We will grow old together slowly

Like trees reaching across an old stone wall

Entangling roots & crossing slender branches

Till one can barely tell which comes from where

You are now part of my life wholly

As the music thats often played in my heart

Shaping the surrounding to its beauty & glory

Mirroring the sanctum of its source and course

I have realised all this slowly

As saavan you've enraptured & enthralled me magically

Like the sun ever rising & setting over a tranquil valley

You both have filled my heart and core more than it could hold

PS: Kumar waiting for a suitable shayeri from you, for this collage😳😃

Edited by maris08 - 15 years ago

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Jahnvi

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Posted: 15 years ago

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A beautiful collage accompanied with beautifully written poem👏. Would love to see more collages from you, Maris!!

PS: Kumar, I'm also waiting for your shayari on this😉😆

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Aanchal15

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Posted: 15 years ago

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Superb collage,Maris!!!👏

The poem is awesome. Aptly described......n simply charismatic... 😍

Eagerly waiting, for a befitting shayeri, from Kumar

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pam

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Posted: 15 years ago

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lovely collage and a beautiful poem

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..-Niru-..

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Posted: 15 years ago

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lovely collage !!!
splendid poem !!
maris !! u really make my day !!!

kumar ..... i guess we all r waitin !!!!😉

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chammak_challo

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Posted: 15 years ago

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really nice collage maris ! 👏 kumar we're waiting for your shayri 😳

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kchitra77

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Posted: 15 years ago

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wow superb first time collage Maris n what a touching poem...beautiful...Kumar its ur turn to surpass Maris...come on...

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Mr.Zk

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Posted: 15 years ago

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Maris Wonderful Collage...U have Created Wonderfully...And a Very Heart Touching Poem...Lovely Maris...👏

I am Very thankful to all of you for asking and waiting for my Shayeri...I am going to miss you all a lot...And Can say this Forum is Excelled the Talent Hidden in the Forum Members...Thats why I love this Forum and All the Members....U all are Truly Awesome..The Most Beautiful and Amazing People Which I have never Met in My Life...U all always Stay in My Heart Ever and For ever..Love you all...

Here are My Shayeri for this Wonderful Collage and to the SaaVan Whom We are Missing a Lot...Hope u all Like it..Thanx For Being with me in SaaVan Journey...

Ye Dil tere liye beqarar aaj bhi hai,
Meri aankh ko tera intizar aaj bhi hai,
Tu aayegi ye umeed hai mujhe'..
Tujh ko pane k liye ye tera deewana aaj bhi hai. ..

Humare zakhmo ki wajha bhi woh hai
humare zakhmo ki dava bhi woh hai
woh namak zakhmo pe lagaye bhi to kya hua
Muhabbat karne ki wajah bhi to woh hai

Tum(SaaVan) Hamaare dil mai rahengee ek yad bankar,
Tere lab pe khilengee muskan bankar,
Kabhi apne se juda na samjana,
Hum tere sath chalege aasman bankar.

SaaVan Ke Liye Har Dil Yisa Thadapta Hai Aaaj Se (At least Me)

Kaun ho tum?
Jo Hamaare dilo-dimag par
Is tarah chh gaye ho

Kaun ho tum
jo is tarah chupke se
Hamaari jindagi me aa gaye ho

Kabhi door lagte ho , bahut door
Kabhi paas , ekdam paas
Pal men hota hun khush
Pal men udas.

Hari ghas aur hari ho gai hai
Aur neela aasman aur bhi
Neela ho gaya hai
Phir bhi kuchh hai
Jo kho gaya hai.

Kaun ho, tum
jo Hamaari neend udathe ho
tum jo Hamaara chain churate ho

tum jo Hamaari dhadkanon men sama gaye ho
tum jo is tarah chupke se
Hamaari jindagi me aa gaye ho

kaun ho?
Kaun ho tum

Edited by ZZkumarZZ - 15 years ago

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maris

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Posted: 15 years ago

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Superb Kumar and thanz a lot for coming up with an excellent shayarie..

jo Hamaari neend udathe ho
tum jo Hamaara chain churate ho

tum jo Hamaari dhadkanon men sama gaye ho
tum jo is tarah chupke se
Hamaari jindagi me aa gaye ho

kaun ho?
Kaun ho tum

This brings so much emotions in me... thanz once again but plz contiue coming here, till we find another new show to share all our good and bad...May God bless andgrant u happiness always

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Mr.Zk

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Posted: 15 years ago

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Originally posted by: maris08
Superb Kumar and thanz a lot for coming up with an excellent shayarie..

jo Hamaari neend udathe ho
tum jo Hamaara chain churate ho
tum jo Hamaari dhadkanon men sama gaye ho
tum jo is tarah chupke se
Hamaari jindagi me aa gaye ho

kaun ho?
Kaun ho tum
This brings so much emotions in me... thanz once again but plz contiue coming here, till we find another new show to share all our good and bad...May God bless andgrant u happiness always

Thanx for your Wishes Maris..I definitely come to the Forum Daily and I dont leave this place until its Blocked...Will Share Everything with you all Maris....

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