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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: TinkJia

my mom cuts mine and my sisters nails too when we et into a cat fight.

I love your FF, it is simply amazing!!
PLZ add me to the PM List!!!!!!!

thank u....
i no its irritating... com on its not like they grow without any effort... you gotta file them regularly, n whole lot of other things... but mommy's dont understand that... it takes them 1 minute to spill water over all our hardwork😭
my nails😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭
now it will take another three months to grow😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭
Edited by 7thHeaven - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Awesomeeeee update
loved it
amazing part
awhh geet yash bond is soo cute
love how he called her princess hehe
adorable
and maaneet are soo cute and funny haha
yaa geet the sherni..lol
but poor her..awhh
maan should be little calm towards her..lolz angry man hehe
loved the part
plzz continue soon
Thank u

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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome update...
loved it very very much...
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Posted: 14 years ago
lovely yaar sweet muski......... no words to express........ 👏👏MSK changing☺️☺️ i love deir self talk.....😳😳 i shud say self realisation 😉😉 plzz update jaldi........😊😊 waiting impatiently......😍😍 ohhh gawd plzzz i can't wait..........
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plzz pm me ur next UD's plzz ...........
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rolf 🤣 🤣

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Yay!! I was abt to ask for the update.. and you already are.. Bingoo.. 😃
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Posted: 14 years ago
yippe waiting
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me waiting too.........😍
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Posted: 14 years ago

My sincere apologies for short update I know I promised a longer one but I had a fight with my sis and she deleted my files in anger😭... had to write it all over again... since I promised I'll update today hence I did😳... I tried writing it all again but just too tired😭.

Really very very very sorry...😳

Recap: "Ms Handa your job here is done, you may leave" Maan said.

She looked at him dumbfounded. What did he mean by you may leave? Didn't she come here with him? Wasn't he supposed to drop her?

"Don't look at me like that; if you are thinking you can sit in my car in that messy state you're sadly mistaken. Go find a conveyance of your own"

Chapter 8

"COMPLETE MESS"

Geet scanned herself from top to bottom as she realised she was indeed a mess. Her hair, which just an hour back, were perfectly tied up in a voluminous ponytail were completely ruffled then. Her lavender blue shirt was no longer blue rather it was brown with dirt all over. Her heels were broken, her face was flushed and worn out; she was a complete mess. From no angle was her appearance even tad bit similar to what she had looked in the morning. In the morning despite of not getting a sound sleep she looked fresh because of her enthusiasm and zeal to face yet another challenge but now forget about looking professional she wasn't even looking decent.

Maan looked at her victorious as he saw her flushed face--exactly what he wanted. But even in that messy look, Geet looked so cute. With mud on her nose and cheeks she looked all the more innocent. Innocent...huh... now that was a joke, Maan thought.

Being a gentleman there was no way whatsoever he would leave Geet all alone in that deserted area but he sure as hell will be hard on her. Until, that cat apologises to him he wasn't going to budge an inch from his stance of not giving her lift. To tease her further, he moved towards his car opened the door but didn't get in. He looked at her face from the rear view mirror and it was a sight worth a million. Maan could not contain himself and broke into laughter.

Geet shot him a glare, how she wanted to eat his head off, but she could do nothing of the sort, much to her frustration. But she had a car; she knew her car and her body guards followed her all the way from Delhi.

She looked around and saw her car waiting on the road side, parked some 50 metres behind Maan's car. Then she looked at him, why on her earth was he not leaving. How was she supposed to get in her car if he would keep standing at there? He wasn't budging an inch; he just kept standing with his car door open. God damn that man.

Great... he won't take her with him and he won't leave her alone.

She decided to voice her thoughts "what are you waiting for...Leave"

Maan looked at her shell shocked, did she actually ask him to leave her in the middle of a deserted road. Then Maan saw a car parked behind his own and he realised she was planning to take lift from that car may be. He wickedly moved towards the car all the while looking at Geet and as he reached in front of the driver's seat, he knocked at the window.

Geet was keenly watching the exchange between Maan and the driver though she did not understand a thing of what Maan was trying to do. He was smiling slightly and saying something to the driver.

Maan was trying to bribe the driver so that he wouldn't give lift to the messed up girl standing by the road side near the construction site. But much to his hard luck, the driver didn't accept the offer. However tempting the offer was, how was the driver suppose to agree to not letting his employer use the car. The driver had been instructed not to tell whose car was it; hence, he did not tell Maan that it was that girl's car itself. He just politely refused the offer.

Maan was shocked, he'd offered that driver five thousand bucks and he refused. Well, maybe not everyone is corrupted in India, he thought.

Maan came to the side of his car and was about to get inside when it hit him, she not taking lift in his presence. She was waiting for him to leave. Well, whatever the reason behind that strange behaviour of hers, it didn't bother him as what mattered was that it served his purpose; Geet was still at the same spot so turns out it was serving him quite well.

He sat in his car but did not drive away. He was testing her patience big time.

She wondered why he was still there and it was then she realised his intentions. He was waiting for her to beg him for lift but that sure as hell was not going to happen.

She looked up at the sky and started her non-stop blabbering "god, ek baat batoa, aapki aaj us magambo ke saath koi setting hai kya... I am a good girl, i always pray first thing in the morning. Ok, sometimes I forget but I don't forget intentionally. I never prayed badly of anyone, ok, except when I wanted a bus should hit magambo but that was just once. How can you be so harsh on me?"

Maan was looking at her through his window, amused at her stupid tactics. She was literally taking to god; she was definitely one antique specimen. But even then, he could not help but adore her cute and child like gestures, she made while talking with the sky. The way she made a cranky face while saying something and moments later while saying something else her expressions change to a frown, then smile, followed by another cute face. She was something.

Geet prayed as she closed her eyes as tight as she could "Please send him away, please please please please please please--

"Instead of disturbing god, why don't you accept your defeat? I'll drop you but before that you will have to say something. Nothing much, just a few words of heartfelt apology will do the job. Well, something like this: I act like a cat and I smell like a pig and I am unbearable but Sir I am very sorry for my wild behaviour. You're the best, no one can win from you and you are not an insufferable, unfeeling, inhuman jerk. I am all that. Please can you drop me" Maan replied as he came in front of her.

She looked at him with her jaw dropped; he did not really think she would say all that "in your dreams"

"Well then, enjoy your stay on this deserted road" Maan had, had enough of her stubbornness. She wanted to stay there, so be it.

As he drove off and when his car was no longer in her sight she moved towards her car. The driver opens the back door for her and she got in.

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It had been only 10 minutes since Maan left Geet alone at the construction site when he felt guilty. However irritating that cat was, he cannot leave a girl in the middle of a deserted area.

And then--

Panic grew inside of him as he then started to doubt the intentions of the driver. What if that guy tried taking advantage of her? What if this was the reason behind him rejecting Five thousand rupees. He did not even tell him why he was waiting outside the site. Why should he wait? That was KC owned site and there could possibly be no reason for that guy to wait there. He felt like a jerk, how he could leave a girl like that. Sure, he despised her but he had his ethics. He immediately took a u turn and saw that car coming his way. He saw her sitting at the back seat and without warning he pushed his car breaks, parking it sideways on the road, blocking the other cars path. He got out of his car, angrily made his towards Geet's car, wrenched open the door and pulled Geet out.

Geet was flabbergasted; she could not comprehend a thing of what was happening.

Before she knew it, she was being violently pulled by Maan as he pushed against his car. He locked her writs in his hands and pressed them against the car door as he looked at her with sheer anger and shouted "Do you even know what you were doing. How can you just take lift from anyone? Do you know what his possible intention could be? Did you even once think about what was that car doing in that deserted area?"

He ran his hands through his hair as he looked away and said rather calmly "Geet... you have to be careful about such things. You should not take lift from people you don't know"

"He wasn't that bad after all" Geet thought.

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The scene is incomplete, will continue in the next update. 😳 probably tomorrow😳

Precap: geet's bodyguards (dont forget they were there when maan was pulling geet... now think what will happen)

i know its very dry but i am pissed... i am hell annoyed at my sis... i couldn't even remeber half of whati had written earlier😭
once again i am very sry...
i am feeling really guilty... i made you guys wait for so long and now i give a short update... i am sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo sry (holding my ears)
Edited by 7thHeaven - 14 years ago

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