Amor Siempre! tnr fic (new PART 2 PG-4)

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Posted: 19 years ago
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Amor Siempre - Tia y Ranveer!

wat does that mean ??? well its means.. LOVE ALWAYS - TIA N RANVEER ! .... Its my new fic...based on almost the current situations.. only a lil ahead of time.. just creating curiousity right now.. if ur curious enough will continue soon! 😆

Here's the introduction

Tia cant believe that things went this far.... when she sees ranveer in shyla's arms she realises how silly she was to even bother about ranveer being trapped into shy's tricks. It was horrid that ranveer was lying about tia breaking up with him to top that he was gettin all cozy wit shy fry!
Suddenly tia noticed tht ranveer was about to say something ....
Rany: aap ko pata hai shy, hum tia ko apne jaan se bhi zyada pyaar karte hai... lekin woh to humein samajna bhi nahi chati.. hum thak gaye hai unke samne strong rehkar.. har bar hum unke saamne aise react karte hai jaise hume koi farak nahi padta... par hum hi jaante hai ki humara dil kitna rota hai unke humse dur dekh kar..
SHy: ranveer tum use itna importance kyun dete ho?? aakhir usne tumhe itna dard diya hai na..toh, tum-he..
Rany: nahi shy... tia bahut immature hai... woh kabhi hume hurt nahi karna chahegi.. woh to sirf ziddi hai....
Tia smiles on hearing this... she cant help but see that ranveer truly loves her... jsut then she sees some prof coming that way so she slips out of there..
she thinks "but then why did ranveer leave her this way.. helpless... alone... hurt!?? why.....??"

😳 some credit to veo darling... for probing to write a tia n ranv fic.. so if and when my creativity takes a short vacation ..im gonna squeeze out some ideas from the ardent tnr fan VEONAL!

NEXT PART - 1 pg.2

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Posted: 19 years ago
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es muy bien.. es excelente!!!!!!!!
lol lo me gusta mucho!!!! 😃
contina por favor
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Posted: 19 years ago
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its relly nice namita...cont asap 👏 👏 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Momma,, U no how pathetic I am in French 😆 Je na parle pas francais 😆 . Je deteste Francais 🤢 😆 So I will comment in English as "unpadh" people like us dont know French😆. So it is best if I comment in English😆.

Momma,, it is great👏...Pleej continue😃...

Edited by ashiandyuvirock - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
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😈 hhehehehehehe luks like me inspiring my frends 2 write fan fics 😆 first lamina den namita 😆 gud gng girl i luv the start 😳

and yeah it would be better if u onli continue the fan fic if i go 2 write a fan fic ill end it there nd there 😆 there would be no further parts
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Its toooooooooooooooooooo gooooooooooooooooooooood
👏
plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz continueeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
fast...... 😆
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Nams start writing re. Me eager to see what is gonna happen 😳. The introduction was really very good 👏 👏 and Nams I don't know Spanish 😆 so mujhe maaf karna. COntinue writing yaar 😛
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Posted: 19 years ago
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PART 1.....

Ashi is going craZy thinking about yuvi's silly excuses.. she knows that he cant handle the presi's post at all... but obviously he will never accept the reality...
A: psycho tum kal raat ko kya kar rahe ho..
Y: kyun sweety? date par jana hai kya?
A: haan.. i was thinking.. ki tumhe date par le ja kar.. aur tumhara death date wahi par declare kar du..
Y: ya rite! waise bhi main tumhe jaise wackos ke saath date pe nahi jaata..
A: acha? is it? ... lagta hai .. a decade ago tum mere bhoot ko date kar rahe the.. stares at him with lot of anger
Y: Ashi just let go of it.. i dont wanna talk about something that ive lost long back.. its no use thinkin about something that u can neve have...
A: ah-h...
Ranveer walks into the common room very disturbed but tryin to look normal..
Ashi goes up to him and..
A: hey thakur ...12 baj gaye hai kya?
ranveer looks at the watch n is confused its only 7pm ...
A: du-uh tumhare chehre par 12 baj gaye hai..hehe
R: aap bhi na..


tia is walking in the room slowly lost in her thoughts n she passes the three of them n when she reaches the exit of the room.. she is about to clash with the wall instead of the gettin out of the door..


yuvi.. rushes to help her as she has tripped.. at the same time ranver is about to help her but stops realising that uv has done the needful..
Tia looks at ranver n remembers how things were different before when she had tripped once n he was there for her .....
Tia is about to walk out of there as shes really embarassed but.. yuvi stops her n..
Y: hey babes tum ja kaha rahi ho ... u;ve forgotten us kya???
T: sory yuvi, tia yaha rehna chati hai lekin tia ko kuch zaruri kaam hai..
Y: ya?? like? maurya ke rounds karne hai? jaise mitra sir karte the? silly girl stay na ..
A: timbo .. ab zyada bhao mat khao ok... hum yaha band ke bare kuch discuss bhi kar sakte hai phir..
Tia looks at ranveer as to whether or not he is telling her to stay...
She looks really hurt... n then
T: nahi .. sorry tia ja rahi hai..
n she walks out really fast..
Yuvi: Ranveer i think she's really worried about something kya tum usse baat kar sakte ho?
A: (whispers to uv) du-uh un dono ka break up ho gaya hai.. timbo aur thakur agar baat karenge to...
Y: (whispers in response) just relax ashi.. wait n watch
R: banna hume assignments complete karne hai hum yeh discussions baad mein kar lenge..
and he is out of the common room..
A: maine tumse kaha na .. u loser kya mila in sab se..
Y: ashi.. babes tum kya jaano pyaar mein no ka kya real translation hota hai..
Ashi looks bewildered ...

Ranveer doesnt know what to do .. he cant just leave tia alone so sad n worried, he goes to her room ...
tia opens the door.. they are both quiet jsut lookin at each other...
R: tia aap wahan se is tarah kyun aa gayi?
T: puh-lease... from when did tia have to justify herself to you?
Ranveer is getting bugged but still probes her to say wat she wants to
R: dekhiye tia.. hum aapko force nahi karna chate hai... hume laga ki kuch nahi to ek friend hone ke nate aap hume apne problems bata sakti hai..
T: Kuch nahi ?? kuch nahi ka matlab friends bhi nahi na ranveer ??? tumhe lagta hai ki jo kuch tumne tia saath kiya uske baad mein tumse politely baat karu??
R: kya? humne kiya kya hai? aap hume kis cheez ke liye itni saza de rahi hai?
T: (shocked) Ranveer? tumne to kuch kiya hi nahi hai na.. bas jab mann chaha tia ko apne pas rakha.. aur jab mann kiya to apne life se uttha kar phek diya..


Ranveer cant believe she's sayin all this when she was the one who dumped him... he;s really angry.. he puls her closer to him and hold her really tight at the arms..
he says
R: aap kehna kya chati hai tia??
T: ranveer tia ko chod do...
R: pehle humare sawal ka jawab dijiye..
T: ranveer tum tia ko hurt kar rahe ho..


ranveer leaves her..
R: hurt... hurt to aapne hume kiya hai.. humare feelings ke saath khel kar.. hum aaj tak samaj nahi sake ki aap humse chahti kya hai.. kabhi aap hume kehti hai ki aapka aur humare rishta khatam .. to kabhi aap hume aap ko akele chodne ke liye blame karti hai..
hume lagta hai yahan aakar humne galti ki... tia ahuja.. im sorry
and he goes out of there

tia is crying... n is so confused
oh tia's god yeh kya ho raha hai..
ranveer itne weirdly kyun act kar raha hai... n then sees the letter at her desk .. she takes it in her hand n is reading parts of it... remembering how hurt she was.. n she realises that when she was talkin to ranveer that day.. he was wanting to talk to her.. wat was he tryin to say at that time....
T:kahin aisa to nahi ki ranveer tia ko sorry kehna chata tha.. aur tia ne use chance hi nahi diya...
just then raghu comes to her room
RAGHU : tia .. woh kal ka asign....(sees tia's tears) tia.. tum ro rahi ho kya?
T: nahi raghu tum bolo kya bol rahe the?
RAGHU: tia tum us bewakoof ranveer ke wajai se kyun roti ho..?? Usne tumhare feelings ke bare mein kabhi care nahi kiya na, aur itne rudely tumhe dump kiya.. phir bhi ...
Tia is amazed that raghu knows that she was dumped rudely.. she is about to say something to him but she decides to jsut listen,
RAGHU: dekho tia ... tum use pyaar karti ho par woh to tumhe bas use kar raha hai.. sabko dikhana chata hai ki uske saath tia ahuja hai! he doesnt really care tia..
TIA: raghu dekho ab bahut der ho chuki hai pls... tia ko akele chod do.. bye
raghu says ok and goes

tia is remembering everythin raghu tells her.. n she remembers that after the break up she received flowers.. she remembers him tellin her taht she is blind in ranveer's love.. shes starts to think of the possibilities......

wat next???😳
I DUNNO WHY BUT i FELT THIS PART WAS BORING... HOPE THAT IF U GUYS STILL WANT MORE.. THE NEXT WIL BE MORE INTERESTING!

PS:
thnks to remixer (sori dont knw ur name) for correcting me.. ive used "main" at some places for tia... so ive corrected that now.

PREV - INTRO pg1. -- NEXT - PART 2 pg.4

Edited by aasma_remix - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Momma..Its very nice 👏 👏 👏 ...Waiting for da next part 😉 😳
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Momma...Still cnt c da pics 😕 ...Pleej upload dem agn 😃 ...

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