~deewangi~ maaneet ff THREAD 8 PT 70 PG 142 27FEB - Page 38

Created

Last reply

Replies

984

Views

275.4k

Users

239

Likes

3.3k

Frequent Posters

592851 thumbnail
Posted: 14 years ago
di u no what the best way to tease is by writting updating and making us refresh like maniacs... but we dont mind at all...
luv ya
592851 thumbnail
Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: sarita21992

Finally, after passing one n half hour since geet aired, we hav an updating status.muskbn acting pricey;-) No one warned us before tht deewangi can make us deewanis too. Next tym put a disclaimer before writing a new ff tht it can turn ppl insane;-)

yes... she really needs to write that disclamer😆
muskanp thumbnail
15th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 8
Posted: 14 years ago

~deewangi~
part 67

Tears fell from his eyes.. she immediately wiped them - abhi teehk hain
his heart cried ...& hugged her madly.. crying .I can't see u in pain ..I love u a lot...but all she could hear was a slight moan in his voice.
He made her sit on the chair. Placed the plate next to her. She made baby face - main kaise kahovongi showing her burned fingers. He rolled his eyes & fed her. How silly of him he thought..he knew she eats with left hand & she got hurt too in her left hand. After the dinner he went in to change. She just walked in behind him to see him bare chest..she went breathless with the sight. It was no more boyish..it looked so well formed & manly. Her heart beating against her chest. She so much wanted to feel ..she just walked towards him..her cheeks turned pink... kept looking at him inched closer & closer...he was kind of man who knew the effect he had on girls with his looks..but her reaction was making him aroused. He so much loved to show off himself to her..wanted to please her, like it was meant to be hers, like he was just waiting for her one grace look. She was inches away when she realized was she was heading into...she cleared her throat
Geet - aap ne meri suitcase kanha rakhi?
He snapped - u don't expect me to get it now
she moved close to him make him lose himself totally & took the shirt from his hand - main yeh pehen longi.. he skipped a beat as her hand sensuously caressed while pulling the shirt away. He held her plat & pulled her closer. She tried to snap only until she realized wat his intentions were. He opened her plats & dipped his head in them.
He pulled the kurti string in a jerk.. she turned into his embrace hugging him.. her hand burned not more than her body under his touch. He felt every part of his was alive as her palm snaked his back & her lips rested on his chest fanning warm breath. She softly bit his abs moving to his neck. His hand undid the zipper & tore it away exposing her back & shoulder. She shivered under his gaze. So much she longed for it that much she felt shy. He showered her shoulder with wet kisses & followed with bites claiming it be his.. only his.
His hand slipped into her lose hair & held them to view her face which already looked flushed. She felt dazed his smell was intoxicating & seducing. She seemed so vulnerable. He leaned closer to take in those lips. His phone rang. She couldn't even hear the first couple of rings lost in his spell. But the restlessness in him she slowly opened her eyes to meet his. He was looking irritated. She smiled teased her lips knowing how much he hates when someone disturbs them. He got angry & snapped the phone.
It read don't pick. He immediately ran the fingers in his hair hating the feel..don't pick...creature...yuck..he smashed the phone on the bed & walked into the washroom wat he was upto with meet. But he didn't regret it. He didn't feel guilty. He was strangely happy & excited to like a teenager. He knew only she could make him feel like this. When he came out she was dressed in his shirt & picking the cloths.
Maan - yeh kya pehna hain
Geet - aap mera dress nahi laten tho main kya karon.
Maan - don't try all this seducing stuffs with me
she wondered ..if she really needed to.
Maan - u r the kind of girl..man want not love
she sensuously ran her fingers on his chest..so u want me..
his heart wanted to kick his mind to manipulate his meet. .. but jumped in joy seeing his meet answering back to him proving him wrong yet again...
Maan - u can sleep outside on the couch.
She smiled naughtily & went out. He turned restlessly cursing himself. She peeped in & saw wat he was doing. He immediately closed his eyes & pretended to sleep. She slowly came into the spread, pulled his hand & slept next to him.
Ek tho itna pyar se yanha..wanha kiss karten hain phir ..couch main so ja...umm..twisted her lips. Couch main soyee meri juti... main tho yanha soven ghi..he smiled & hugged her closer...
she knew he still loved her, wanted her but then why is he running away from his feelings. Why does it seem like there is something wrong between him & his fiance. Then she turned to see him.. the stab marks on his chest.. wat was is it..wat happened to him in last 2yrs that he is so disturbed.. why is that even after being with his fiance he losses himself to his wife. She kissed his frowned forehead.. kya hal bana rakha hain.. she cried inside. Instantly the frown disappeared. She knew wat she needed to do now.. she needed to be by him. He needed her more than anything else..he accepts it or not. She had to bring the love back in him..which seems like lost some where & turned him so rude.. but she seemed to love even this side of his.
PRECAP
naughty naughty maan
~PREV PART 66 NEXT PART 68~
Thanks guys for all ur love & support...
hope u like this update as well
Please please do comment
love
muskan
Edited by muskanp - 14 years ago
angelinc thumbnail
Groupbie Thumbnail Engager Level 1 Thumbnail Fascinator 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 14 years ago
WAITING WAITING WAITING WAITING WAITING WAITING WAITING😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊

UPDATE KARO NA DI WAITING MADLY.......................
nisharoyce thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail
Posted: 14 years ago
i totally agree with sarita21992
so true
yaar i wanted to ask u the very moment u posted truly magical ki
u have 1 hr time give me atleast a sketch of what we will b getting
but c its more than an hr now & we ve not got anything
i guess v ve crossed 48hrs now
but still i love waiting

JayaR thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail Networker 2 Thumbnail
Posted: 14 years ago
yiipppeee !!!!!!
Muskan is updating....
hey Muskan I have been listening to this song for a long time.....n it just crossed my head that it totally suits Maan's situation in this FF's n also TRULY MAGICAL....atleast i think so.......

WELL i think you must have heard this song...its from the movie BANDIT QUEEN.....SAANWARE TORE BINA JIYA JAYE NAA.....

if not im uploading d link if you have time chk it out n let me know if im rite about what i said.....

n just in case you couldn't make out the lyrics....im also putting up the lyrics for you....
just play the song.....


Sanware Tore Bin Jiya Jaye Na

Jalu Tere Pyaar Mai Karu Intezaar Piya, Kisi Se Kha Jaye Na

Sanware Tore Bin Jiya Jaye Na

Dhunde Meri Preet Re
Tu Hai Kha Meet Re
Aansu Bane Geet Re
Ahan Sangeet Re

Sanware Tore Bin Jiya Jaye Na

Yaad Dihari Pura Mann Tadpaye ,saari Raena Neend Na Aaye -2
Birha Ki Maari Dekhu, Raah Dihari ,do Naino Ke Deep Jalaye

Jalu Tere Pyaar Mai Karu Intezaar Piya Kisi Se Kha Jaye Na

Sanware Tore Bin Jiya Jaye Na

Dhunde Meri Preet Re
Tu Hai Kha Meet Re
Aansu Bane Geet Re
Ahan Sangeet Re

Sanware Tore Bin Jiya Jaye Na

Doob Chale Meri Aans Ke Taare ,
Kaise Pahunchu Pee Ke Dwaare -2
Toot Gaye Sab Sang Sahare
Bole Naiya Door Kinare

Jalu Tere Pyaar Mai Karu Intezaar Piya Kisi Se Kha Jaye Na

Sanware Tere Bina Jiya Jaye Na

Dhunde Meri Preet Re
Tu Hai Kha Meet Re
Aansu Bane Geet Re
Ahan Sangeet Re

Sanware Tore Bina Jiya Jaye Na
Tore Bin Jiya Jaye Na -2

Sanware Tore Bin Jiya Jaye Na


AVKKG thumbnail
15th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail Networker 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 14 years ago
Fantastic update, Muski!
Can we get greedy and ask you for a second update too, today??
You seem to provide 2 updates sometimes to your FFs, so how about giving us 2 updates for Deewangi!!
You are driving us nuts with this story!!!!!! Totally deewanis!!!!!
angelinc thumbnail
Groupbie Thumbnail Engager Level 1 Thumbnail Fascinator 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 14 years ago
lovely update di toooooooooooooo good
Ramhari thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail
Posted: 14 years ago
Fantastic update. thank you. cant wait for the next one.
007jindal thumbnail
16th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 14 years ago
Wow wow just amazing. Loved it fully.luking 4ward 4 precap part. Jst cant wait 4 ur next upd.

Related Topics

Fan Fictions Thumbnail

Posted by: Koeli

5 years ago

Comment Migration Request Thread #1

Hey guys, This is the place where you can request for comment migration. Please know that FFEs are going to migrate your comments. Rules - You...

Expand ▼
Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".