~deewangi~ maaneet ff THREAD 8 PT 70 PG 142 27FEB - Page 20

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ok ..guys wondering why geet didn't call rano??

I did mention.. when she felt maan was not fine..she called on his cell & hawali's number..but they had moved to Khurana Mansion..so only number she had was maan's cell number & home number

why rano didn't call her

uff..geet broke communication with them..when she was told to continue her MA....

BTW Maan didn't have number..she never gave her number to anyone because she was angry.. maan didn't bother to beacuse he thought he could reach her when ever he wanted..but ..i guess he was over confident..destiny..

~deewangi~

part 66

he didn't say anything just drove to their flat. As the car turned she knew where he was taking her, a smiled teased her lips.. he short stern look at her..she held back her smile.

He parked the car & held her by her waist & guided her to the lift.. she promptly pressed the topmost floor he froze...about to ask her.. but then didn't want to question her ..any more..she bit her lips & pressed all the buttons to undo wat she suggested... he got irritated squeezed her waist & pulled closer away from the buttons. Lift stopped at each floor before reaching their floor. He fished the keys from his pant pocket & opened the door. He dragged her in & closed the door behind.

She looked around the flat, tear formed seeing the condition of the house, blood stained walls, dress thrown away, every thing was misplaced. He ran his fingers in his hair not sure wat will he tell her intentions where ..how silly it would be to say my heart wants u, he thought. He watched looking at the house in awe, like she has not seen anything like this before .. she looked so innocent.
Geet - aap yanha rahete ho
Maan - umm
she was not sure.. why would he do that, is every thing fine with him... was he still loving in their past.. or is there something.. or is it like waiting for his wedding with rimi & then move in to stay with her in the mansion


Maan - where were u going?
She made a baby face - warden ne kaha ki job nahi tho main hostel main nahi rah sakti
Maan - how dare she?
Geet - I don't have any where to go
he pressed his arms in anger - u will stay here, only here.
She jumped up in joy - I can stay here !!! thank you & kissed him on left cheek & moved to kiss him right.. & all over but instantly stopped & turned her back to him knotting her duppta.
Every thing in him was jumping in joy.. it was just a soft peck on his cheek, but it was so beautiful, so pure, serene, innocent.
She killed the silence by moving ahead lifting his dress that was thrown all..
Geet - kitne bar kaha aise nahi phenkthe
he lifted his brow
she cleared her throat - mera matlab hain, baden kahthen hain aise nahi phenkthe.
He gave up fighting with his heart & brain. He knew he wanted her.. thats it he is not going to think further. The more he thinks the more it confuses him.
Couple of hour passed, she was busy doing up the whole place, she seemed to know where every thing belonged, every time she bend his gaze followed her, when her duppata slipped he probably just missed a beat.. just having her around, watching her was setting the heat between his legs. He tried to look away but he just couldn't. She was working in the kitchen facing her back to him. He went towards her without thinking wat he was doing. He was inches away from her she turned to ask him something..got scared to see him right behind her. She jumped back ward resting her palm on the hot plate behind. She screamed crying in pain & shaking her hand.. tears flooding down.. non stop. He didn't know wat happened.. he could see her in pain ..he held her shaking hand & tried to have a close look at it... his touch was mesmerizing.. with the pain burning ..his touch burning too..
Geet made a baby face - jal gaya .mera haat jal gaya.. cried... he immediately opened the tap & kept her hand under the cold running water. He kept looking at it.. turning red... something in him was bleeding.. burning....
he yelled - kitni bar kaha hain kitchen main dhyan se raha karo
she looked at him ...he said that.. like always
Maan - wat where u doing?
She turned her lower lips & dipped her - mujhe bhook lagithi
he rolled his eyes & saw wat she was doing, she had made some aloo cury & was about to make roti's.
Geet - main kya karti aapne kitchen pura khali kar ke raka hain
He took the kneaded flour & made balls out of them & placed it under the roller & began to flatten it. She came around & tried to help. He briskly turned - yeh kya kar rahi ho
Geet - mujhe bhi help karna hain..
he lifted her from the waist & made her sit on the kitchen slab... chup chap yanha bheti raho
Geet - aap humesha aise karten ho..
(both where reminded of the first time he made cake for her.. he made her sit on the slab like this..a smile formed in their face..but as the reality stuck..)
he looked at her from the corner of his eyes
she gulped her saliva - mera matlab hain aap humesha aise karten hoo kya
he ignored the question.. .. & continued making the roties.
He took the roti & aloo curry in a plate & went to the table. He waited for her.. when she didn't join him he turned to look at her...invitation dena hain kya she put her hand up in air..like always.. to let her down, he shook his head & went to the kitchen.
He held her from the waist & pulled her down.. every part her upper body pressed against his, instantly hardening him setting the urges.. she could feel her n**** getting hard & pressing against his hard chest through the linen they wore. His grip around the waist tighten & pulled her closer. He took his left hand & pushed her hair behind & dipped his face to hers. She closed her eyes & pressed in. he rested his lips on the side of her eyes & rubbed it..caressing it softly.

Both their hearts cried - missed u
he could stand their for eternity holding her. She softly rested the burned hand on his shoulder & the other hand around his waist. She was little uncomfortable..he took the hand that rested on his shoulder & kissed it very softly - bahut dard ho raha hain
she shook her head. Tears fell from his eyes.. she immediately wiped them - abhi teehk hain
his heart cried ...& hugged her madly.. crying .I can't see u in pain ..I love u a lot...but all she could hear was a slight moan in his voice.

PRECAP
he undid her kurti's zip..
chi chi ..babaji yeh ladkiyan kya kya sochthi hain
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Edited by muskanp - 14 years ago

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