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Posted: 14 years ago
very nice update and i think they want to catch nt so that they could punish her and dev
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Posted: 14 years ago
this one is for jyoti
Part 9

Next day morning,

Every one at Handa house gets ready to go to Amritsar, they took 2 cars,
Maan joined them in his Jeep along with DM,
Darjee suggested that DM sit in the car and Brij can accompany him in the jeep,
but Maan insisted that it would be nice that Mohinder accompanies him and as Brij has to drive one of the cars the other was driven by Brij's father,
so Mohinder accompanied Maan.

Previous night DM has made few calls and have arranged for certain things,

and Maan has called Dev and sternly told him to do what was asked of him else should be ready to face consequences and he also told him that he as well as DM knows that NT is on her way to India;
Dev had no other choice but to follow what he was asked for else Maan warned him that Mr. Mehta will not spare him.

On their way to the golden temple,

Maan talked to Mohinder about Geet;
M: Mr. Handa, I wanted to talk to you about Geet, that's why I asked you to accompany me.
MH: (scared): Geet, about Geet, why not? After all you are going to marry her
M: sorry to say Mr. Handa but I have no intentions to marry her
MH: what? I mean then why all this?
M: you will know, but I should say one thing that your daughter definitely has more guts then you.
MH: I did not get you
M: I know every thing about her fake marriage and by every thing I mean every thing, even the things that you don't know
MH (dumbfound): even I don't know
M: yes
MH: may I know what things
M: first I want to ask you something
MH: what?
M: is Geet a burden on you?
MH (hangs his face low)
M: do you know how much she scored in her exams?
MH: no
M: how can you, that day you were busy welcoming a random guy for her marriage alliance, I will tell you she scored not 70% or 80% but 93.6%
MH: (in shock) what??
M: yes, you have a brilliant daughter and you chose to ignore her intellect just because she is a female.
MH: no response
M: ok you thought that marrying her was right then why did you not check that guy properly?
MH: no response
M: do you know he is already legally married?
MH: what???????
M: yes, NT is his wife
MH: how do you'''?
M: I told you I know more than you, though I have not told Geet, she is already very disturbed, and do you know one more thing that your daughter, I mean your 18 yr old innocent daughter, who is a child herself, who has not yet started to live her life, do you know what more you all have done to her?
MH: I am not getting you
M: sorry that it is me who is telling you instead of the ladies of your house, but you should know this before we reach Amritsar,
MH: please do not talk in riddles
M: she is expecting
MH: NO, this can't be true; she was just with him for one day
M: I would hate to correct you but, to be specific one night!!!
MH (closes his eyes in disgust)

Meanwhile in the car

Tayaji was driving the car, next to him was tayji, and on the back seat were DM, Rano and Brij's wife.
DM: I will come straight to point, I wanted to talk to you all about Geet
T (m): yes ji why not after now that Maan ji is to marry her, you can talk about her
DM: you are getting it all wrong Maan has no intention to marry her
T (f): what?
DM: yes
R: then why are you taking us to
DM: she is a nice girl, but she deserves marriage not by force, you have once forced her to marry and you have seen what you got her into
T (f): some one must have
DM: don't blame others for what wrong you all have done?
T (m); but
DM: look, you all are in no position to say anything now and remember unless Geet is ready no will force her for abortion
R: (shocked) pardon
DM: ask the other two ladies
R (looking at her Bhabhi and bahu) what is she saying
T (f): yes Rano, sorry for not telling you, but she is expecting and we have gone to the midwife to get pills for her
Rano and Tayaji were horrified
so now Maan and DM have cleared it that they have no intenton in marrying Geet and Maan,
then what are they up to?
why are they helping her to meet NT?
what will happen to Geet later?
will she abort her child?
will Maan be able to tell Geet the truth?
pls post your comments you know you all are my motivations
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Edited by smj1977 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
thats an awsome one yaar...me first to comment ..so happy !!!! i guess now they gonna confront the culprits and take geet with them for her further education ..
Edited by mrk_1 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

THANKS SHRUTI

SMARTLY WRITTEN.................. SO WHAT WILL NOW MAAN'S HAS NO INTENTION TO MARRY HER ......................... POOR GEET.................... TAYA JI OR BRIJ WILL NOT SPARE HER FOR TELLING THE TRUTH TO MAAN..........................MUCH SCARED FOR GEET NOW .................... R U UPDATING TELE AND FATE ALSO TODAY BY ANY CHANCE............................
Edited by maansee - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesomeeeeeeeeee so no marriage on d cards for maaneet continueeeeeeee
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Posted: 14 years ago

so no plan for marriage i think they will take geet with them for further studies n all that as they know its khurana waaris in geet.

Good one.

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Posted: 14 years ago
u updated...thank u...🤗
loved it....
now everyone knows the truth ...except for the relation betwen dev n maan...
and as for the Q occuring in our mind..we cant ask them😡...coz u alredy have put up those Q...😳


so now Maan and DM have cleared it that they have no untenton in marrying Geet and Maan,
then what are they up to?
why are they helping her to meet NT?
what will happen to Geet later?
will she abort her child?
will Maan be able to tell Geet the truth?
Edited by jyoti_l - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

Hey Shruti...

c am here for U!!!
kahan gayab ho gayi thi?
swati
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Posted: 14 years ago
very good one nxt update soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
Quite a different story one thing is clear u r not gonna start there love story any soon...... So wat do u want exactlly????

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