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Muskan

@muskanp

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Posted: 14 years ago

#891

~deewangi~
part 63

She crushed into his arms crying....he held her tight...like his life was in his arms.. tighter than he held her ever before..every thing around them just stopped. It was their heart talking...brain failed yet again to understand anything...she cried..he cried..they cried.. they just couldn't stop themselves. It was happiness of being where they always wanted to be...sadness of missing it, craving , pain every thing that they longed for in last 5yrs...it was HELL!!

I hate u ..I hate u....
she cried hitting on his chest meekly with all her strength that she could gather at that time...it felt so soothing to all the pain his heart went through in last few months... his heart had lost all the hopes of ever feeling anything like this.. especially after the engagement night. After almost stabbing it...after believing he was really a heartless fellow for so many months, after giving into the continuous torture of his brain to fail to recognize his Geet.

She didn't know wat she was doing..she couldn't think..in fact she couldn't think anything since she felt he was hurt, she was losing all her senses... she wanted to be sure he was fine, her probably had stopped beating...every thing seemed so perfect, she in his arms.. every one around good feel the love in them...arjun & arohi hugged each other with tears in their eyes...tears of happiness..

Maan & Geet remained consoling their bleeding heart, their pain no one else could feel except them.. Geet say the reflection of rimi walking towards them.. she instantly pulled out of his arms & cried, he didn't let go of her, he held her arms looking straight in to her eyes.. his heart could explode any moment seeing those tears now... for he knew it meant some pain.. she immediately wiped her tears & tried to look away. Maan didn't know wat was it ...why did she hug him like this.. why is she crying now.. a big war between brain & heart.. this time heart no where to listen to his mind. & mind fears the pain he may have to go through if his heart is wrong again...

He was blank & his blankness killed her, she didn't know why he looked so lost.. he wanted to ask ...if she was Geet.. but couldn't put the wits together,....a fear ..if she is Geet she will just die that moment ..& if she is not Geet..that can't be..he probably just couldn't think straight. Every thing about her was Geet.. then why was she crying after hugging him... WHY IS SHE CRYING...he was losing it now..he couldn't take the pain of seeing her like this..he held closer..why are u crying? & the wrong question just followed..who r u?? her expressions changed ..she was blank... her face turned pale all of sudden.. like someone just sucked out all her blood along with her soul..

Arohi just turned her back when Maan lifted his head to see who was with her..arjun rushed towards them..wearing a dr's coat that he smartly grabbed on the way.. wat are u doing here he asked pale & almost dieing geet !!! She didn't respond...arjun was mad at Maan ..how could he just forget everything between them...how heartless he was he thought.
Arjun - she just lost her family..excuse us & tried to drag Geet out of the situation.
Maan roared like a Lion when he tried to take her away.
Arjun didn't seem to get intimidated. He really cared for Geet, her feelings, her happiness, he could never see her in pain. After all he has only seen geets deewangi for last 5 years..never knew the madness that Maan harbored.

Maan still didn't let go of her.. not after seeing her pale face ..after his heartaching question.. which was just thrown at her randomly to satisfy his brains quest which now seemed have just ruined every thing. Arjun guided her towards himself, Maan wanted to hold her tight in his arms .. no one could take her away from him.
Maan yelled - u can't take her like this
Arjun was wild seeing the plight of Geet, she was heart broken, worse than wat he was seeing her for last few days. He could punch Maan probably hit him to bleed...but again that will hurt Geet more..
Maan - why is she crying? Why is she like this?
Arjun wanted top spit it on his face its because of u. but he calmed himself
Arjun - she is my patient here.. not in her senses for last few days.. he so much wanted to say deewani hain.. how did it matter to this heartless man he thought. As they walked away..her hand was slipping out of his... like his soul was slipping away with it... he couldn't let that happen again .. never again.. he couldn't take the pain of her being separated from him. This time he may just die... he tried to hold her she just took her hand away & walked dipping her head in pain. He didn't know it was me.. he couldn't recognize his Geet.. he didn't believe his heart.. that hugged me so lovingly. Or probably he didn't want to .. he preferred not to because he didn't want her to suffer the pain of his engagement.

Her walking away woke the brutal fight between his brain & heart. How could I just think of her as Geet..to add to his misery rimi is just came with the dr. Maan lost his mind seeing her & thought of just killing her & himself. He took the dr scissors & went charging on her to kill her. She was frightened she couldn't hide herself.. the scissors were inches away from her when all the nurses, dr & attendants held him back. Dr immediately gave him an injection to put him to sleep. Rimi requested dr to keep him under seductive since he showed all the symptoms of depression.

When they sat in the car Geet was lost.. she was still not understanding anything.
Arjun - so ..here we are.. exactly wat I expected..hurt & heart broken..iss liya main mana kar raha
arohi - next week graduation hain.. lets go back
Geet - nahi I am not going any where
arjun - No man.. u got be kidding
Geet - pata nahi I feel his sadness.. I feel he is dieing inside' I cannot leave him like this & go
Arjun - yanha rah kar bhi tu kya kar le ghi
arohi - he doesn't even recognize u
Geet - that 's even better
Arjun - tu pagal hain kya?
Geet smiled naughtily I am going to stock him again
Arjun - Geet u can't he is not a 15yr old boy.. he is the Maan Singh Khurana... usse milne ki liya 10-15 din ki appointment chahiya...I guess only his personal associate would know wat he does & where he goes..geet had a twinkle in her eyes
Arjun - no no.. u r not going to work in KC
she nodded delightfully...

PRECAP
Geet in KC...aab sochu Maan ke dil ka haal... dil still will enjoy..wat about the brain..
oh man thats going to be fun... Angry young Maan & bubbly chubbly Geet in office...& the attraction between them
-PREV NEXT PART 64-

Thanks guys for all ur love & support...
hope u like this update as well
Please please do comment
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muskan

Edited by muskanp - 14 years ago

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anupam

@shining_moon

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Posted: 14 years ago

#892

oh no yeh dilemma me maan ne geet se kya blunder ques pooch liya

but I just love geet.........she will definitely set things right

n for office romance I m eagerly waiting

but now maan will b more tortured............but still geet will b there to sooth him😉

update soon

n yes me first.............😆

Edited by shining_moon - 14 years ago

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-eiya-

@-eiya-

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Posted: 14 years ago

#893

oh diii....ye kya hai ...ab mein kya karun ....maan ke saval sunkar geet keliya rovun 😭 ya geet ki deewangi ko dekkar muskuravun😊....uff di aap bi na...(vaise meinae dono kiya 😭 😊)

lovely update....precap 😍 haiiiiiii....i m expecting lot of office romance....😍😍😍😍😍😍

Edited by eiya22 - 14 years ago

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Tinu

@007jindal

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Posted: 14 years ago

#894

Oh my god. That was grt part. Maan ye tune kya kia. I lovd u geet 4 stayin in india. Precap is beter givin hope

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muskaan_cute19

@muskaan_cute19

Dazzler

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Posted: 14 years ago

#895

oooo this is just amazing loved it will elaborate further bt later
omg just loved them their separation once again brought tears in my eyees
i was just so sad nt again bt
then u just made my day by ur precap o god she z gona work with him ahahahah they will b 2gtder 4 whole day how will they resist each other would love 2 see them n office
loved at the end her twinkling eyes nd arjun saying no wayz hahahah😆😆
loved arjun the way he cares 4 geet hes a real sweet hear
i would like uu 2 delay their meeting like him knowig her as geet wanna c their restlessness more
as on part of maan more that would b real fun😆😆
loving it
was waiting 4 this part eagerly now will wait 4 nxt more eagerly 😳😳
so du post soon😉

Edited by muskaan_cute19 - 14 years ago

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Dhara Singh

@Dhara_s

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Posted: 14 years ago

#896

Oh man, you are the best story teller I have evr come across...story ko kahan se kahan ghumaya hai.....lovely....👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏

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zaara2212

@zaara2212

Sparkler

Posted: 14 years ago

#897

ahhhhhhhhh muski what is happening 😭

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Tanu

@ytanuja

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#898

Thank u for the wonderful update👏

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heermeher

@heermeher

Inactive

Posted: 14 years ago

#899

Muskan that was quiet hard to digest he couldnt recognise her i mean thats wierd i m not able to take bu luv the second part of the precap so keeping my fingers cross