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Posted: 14 years ago

hey muskan

you will update when the waiting and updating requests end the thread
on page 150😆
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Posted: 14 years ago
time to open a new thread...well v r here to complete this one..
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Posted: 14 years ago
please make it a happy one and bring back their old magic.. cause the last update broke my heart 🥺😭
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: muskanp

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Waiting.............
Muski.....,open new thread nd post the update there,as tis thread has hit 147 pages.
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Posted: 14 years ago
jaldi kar yaar muskan
waiting badly.....😡😡😡
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Posted: 14 years ago
hmm

not happy with this update

geet changed totally..

poor maan.. :(
cant see him like this
want our cute geet back..

cont soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
waiting .
muskan pls update truly magica also.
waiting for that also. pls pls.
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Posted: 14 years ago

~deewangi~
part 55

Maan - tired hogi, I will speak to her tomorrow ..breakfast table pur!!!
Rano was surprised breakfast table..wat change in him thanxs to Geet she thought.
Maan - usne dinner kiya?
Rano - we all had
Maan was surprised his little wify won't have without him.
Rano - did u have
Maan - umm
Rano patted his back lovingly & left. Maan was restless again. His heart was not able to feel those feelings for her. He thought he was just over reacting, may be this image of little Geet was too deep to undo. He gulped down few more pegs & tried to sleep.

Next day Maan wakes up with a hang over. Bad head ace. He swallows his usual tablet & goes to his gym works out a bit & gets ready to office. He reluctantly walks to the break fast table. Geet sat there in the opposite side to Daadi. Usualy Daadi sat on the head of the family while Maan sat left of her & Geet to the left of Maan. So that Maan could play around holding her right hand since she a lefty. But she sat exactly opposite to Daadi. He walked greeted Daadi & sat on his usual place after 4 long years having breakfast in the house..actually meal.

He cleared his throat - u still have a year to go right?
She choked with his sudden question. She drank some water & wiped her mouth - actually got a good modeling offer from some clients when they visited my college in London. They liked my work & also offered me a photo shoot.
Daadi definitely didn't approve of it - Khurana's ke bahu & modeling no ways
Rano - yah sab kya naya sock hain?
Rano was really scared of Maan's reaction. He would have lost his head on this. Here rano wanted her to wear suit to make up their realtion..aur yeh jhali..kapte utarke modeling karna chati hain
Maan was quiet, he didn't seem to say much about it.
Rano showed her eyes to Geet to seek his permission
Geet - Maan main modeling kar loon?
Maan..she just called me Maan...he couldn't believe it.. his wify never addressed him anything but jaanoo. Wat was wrong with her.. did she just forget every thing between them. He was too lost, Geet asked again .. maan main modeling karloon?
He snapped out of his thought - jaise tumhari marzi
he didn't feel he had any rights on her, neither did he feel possessive about her.
Daadi - lekin beta
he shot a stern look.. no one hurts Geet. But for his misery she is been hurting him ever since she has landed not intentionally though but everything about her was just provoking him.
Rano was also shocked at his approval.
Maan - make sure u don't use Geet as screen name.
Geet jumped in joy - thanxs Maan she said promptly. He thought had it been his little wify she would have to run to him, hug him & kiss him all over. Well she is not little any more. He tried to look at her, she really looked happy. Geets happiness is all wat he wanted. But why was he not feeling happy the way he did seeing her happy. How much he felt he was lacking.
Geet - Maan why don't u suggest some name
he couldn't have thought of any name..the only name he knew was Geet...& he cannot accept Geet modeling. But her modeling was fine, he wondered wat kind of logic was that. But kind of suited him. How stupid he thought.
Geet - how about Rimi
he smiled probably he didn't even register wat she said.
Daadi & Rano were not liking all this.

After Maan & Geet left, Rano & Daadi sat moaned over children decision.
Daadi - yeh sab kya ho raha hain
Rano - sach kahon maa ji , main ne socha tha Maan aateh hi usse lekan HM challa jayega
Daadi laughed
Rano - hasiyen mat .. bachpan main tho ek mauka nahi chod the the aur aab..uff
Daadi - I guess their priorities changes as they grow.
Rano - lekin aise bhi kya
Daadi - they r more matured now
Rano - inki jaldi se shaadi karvado
Daadi - aur kitni shaadi karni hain?? both of the laughed loud.

It was a month since Geet had returned. Maan avoided going home. The more he saw her, the more he felt he was incapable of giving her wat she deserves. His love, his life..something in him just tore apart when ever he tried to go close to her. His heart bleed with the thought of not feeling that love he had crazily in him. How can that be..he still madly love Geet, but just not this Geet. His heart, soul, every thing in him illogically didn't accept the fact she was his little wify. He even went to an extent of fishing her bag checking her passport. He read her name & other details on the passport.
Rano stood at the door crossing her hand over her chest
Maan kept it back immediately feeling guilty.
Rano - kya baat hain Maan?
He looked lost - ji kuch nahi
Rano - yeh sab kya hain Maan. Jab se Geet aaye hain tum badal se gaya ho
Maan - nahi mama aise koi baat nahi hain
Rano - koi aur hain kya
he was shocked at her question - nahi mama..main Geet ke alwa kisi aur se kabhi nahi pyar kar sakta
Rano - phir kya baat hain ki, tum usse baat bhi nahi karten
he was worried now - usse ne kuch kaha kya?
Rano - woh bhi tho kuch nahi kahti, mujhe kuch samjh nahi aa raha
he realizes her stress & hugs her - nahi mama I have been just busy with work
Rano - yah & she is been busy with her new modeling assignment.

Geet just walks in with red envelope. Maan just tries to slip away while she was talking to Rano.
Geet - Maan
he closes his eyes ...takes a deep breath & turns - umm
Geet - I have my first show tomorrow
Maan - umm
she reluctantly said - will u join me?
He didn't understand why was she so reluctant in asking him anything. She just needs to order him, he will just do it for his Geet. He just smiled weakly
Geet - there is also a party after that..it will be great if u could join me for that too
He wondered since when did she like parties, she really did grow he thought & he was still probably living an imaginary life that doesn't exist anymore. He had to move on with her, they were married. She was Geet. If he can't accept her that is his problem which he really needs to fix it soon before she actually starts feeling the difference in his behavior. Wat shocked him the most was how come she never realized it until now.

Oh man..too many questions..every thing unanswered..how can some one be so different. But Daadi & Rano didn't find anything different. They loved her unconditionally. He thought deeply & decided to give the relation a chance. He can't let things spoil between him & Geet just because of his heart feels differently.. it is definitely not logical. She is been nice, sweet, understanding, never complained OK she is not her type..jumping around always telling how much she loves me.... but she is grown up & she is a lady now, smart behaves herself but why did she have to be so smart smart type..why can't be sweet sweet type the way she was... probably that's wat London does to people change them to the worst..he cursed everything every one. But he was sure to do every thing within his control to get every thing right no more running away from things he thought.
Rano & daadi were happy that atleast Geet was taking interest in moving closer.

PRECAP
Partying together..tho dance tho hona hi hain

~PREV PART 54~
Thanks guys for all ur love & support...
hope u like this update as well
Please please do comment
Love
muskan
Edited by muskanp - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome part.
but still in confused about this is geet or not?
if it's geet then is she changed or not? is she faking or anything?
everything confusing.
my mind say it's not geet, cause of her behavior towards maan.
update soon.
Edited by PrithviSanyo1 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Thank u for the update,Poor maan uske dill me uski chotisi little wify he busgayi he is feeling hard to accept the grown up changed wify , even feels like geet does she remember anything at all i have a doubt yaar, she too is behaving different. lets wait and see what u have in store for us.
Edited by ytanuja - 14 years ago

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