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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: untamedtigress

keyams u ,muski,and mina superb best at all tat ahemz wala part love u lottttttt😆😆😆

i miss esoteric love so bad ................................................😉😳

same here dear...i love u all....
and i miss tremble of luv badly.....😭
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: untamedtigress

MUSKI jaldi yaar me GTG toooooooooooooooooooo😭

hey sana ...how r u....missing u dear..😭😭😭
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Rocks.Dhara

hey sana ...how r u....missing u dear..😭😭😭

having my poratical exams dear im fed up ov my life already it sucks studying all the time gone nutssssss
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Posted: 14 years ago
poor babe. how is it?
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Posted: 14 years ago
ugh… i will read it when i am bc i have to run now 😭
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Posted: 14 years ago
koi nahi sana...ab doc aivehi thode na banegi...lolz😉
bt misssed u a lot these days...!!!
keya jaldi kar na....m waiting deperately for remorse...!!!
mushki pls yaar tum log jaldi karo...m still waiting in off...so that i will leave after reading update..
else i will keep think bout that whole way.....lolz😉
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Posted: 14 years ago

~deewangi~
part 54

He stood their gulping the drink wondering friend...umm he didn't even know wat her name was. Wat a shame he thought. He sighed & went to his study to continue his work. He had to !!! his little wify won't like if the business goes down. She wanted KC to be number one. And she deserved nothing but the best. Even she topped her course. Now her MA..he knew she will top it too..thodi nervous hoti hain bus.. deewani jo hain..he kissed her snap that kept in his table's drawer. Miss u ..jaldi aajvoo

Next day Rano was walking restlessly arranging every thing. Maan never had his breakfast at home, actually didn't have any of his meals at home, after Geet left. He was hurrying out he stopped by
Maan - kya baat hain mama
Rano was shocked Maan actually noticed, didn't just walk away the way he is been doing for last 4yrs. He never spoke to any one.
Rano - dehko na kuch bhi ready nahi huwa, na breakfast na lunch, na uske fav dishes kuch bhi nahi
his heart suddenly paced faster & faster ..is she talking about his angel, he tried to put words in his mouth to make sense od wat rano said all he could say was - lekin
Rano - achanak se kal uska phone aaya ki she is boarding the flight
he couldn't breath in excitement, he trembled & checked his watch for the time - kab ki flight hain, lekin mujhe kyun nahi phone kiya he complained
Rano - 10am.. abhi bhi gussa hogi tumse
he smiled - woh mujhse gussa ho hi nahi sakti
he immediately went back into the room changed his dress & checked himself in the mirror 1000000000th time.. Maan Singh khurana was nervous actually trembling, shaking. He wore a full suit in the hot summer because she liked him in full suit. He was anxious, he felt buterflies running in is stomach. He couldn't wait to see her. These 4yrs don't know how it went but these few hrs seemed like ages. He was hurrying every thing probably tripped couple of times, his own room seemed like a new place, he was so excited & hurrying up he couldn't find his watch which was where it was always still!!! he couldn't get his purse..it all seemed so weird..actually no...that was the effect she had on him... simply maddening!!!
Rano smiled - challen
he suddenly became the 20yr old boy whom they were used to. How much they missed his this side.
Maan - mama main teehk lagraha hoon na
Rano - umm
Rano couldn't believe the change in him since morning. He has spoken more in last 40mins than wat he spoke to her in last 4yrs. She was not wrong in realizing his depression she thought.


They reached the airport an 1 hr early. He paced restlessly checking the time again & again. He had picked up all the flowers & chocolates to welcome her with. Rano & Daadi smiled looking at him behaving like a teenager.
Rano - pata nahi kaise lagrahi hogi
Daadi - 4 saal hogaya, mujhe us din itna gussa nahi karna tha
Rano - maa ji mujhe bahut excitement ho rahi hain
Daadi - mujhe bhi
Rano - pata nahi main usse pahechan pavongi ya nahi
Daadi - Maan zaroor pahechan lega
Maan - dehkna mama, aatahen hi kahen gi..hate u hate u hate u

the arrival of the flight was announced. Maan kept looking at the exit gate it felt like his heart may explode any moment in anticipation. Suddenly they heard a voicemama..mama..daadi!!! his gaze scanned the crowd to meet the source of the voice, he looked at her lovingly, little taller, slim fair young girl deep almond eyes...he looked at her, she smiled & his smile slowly faded. He didn't know wat was it. May be that she wore short skirts.. OK she was in London. Her hair was shoulder length streaked light brown shades little loud lips stick. He stepped back & turned away with the feeling that poured in him was unrecognizable.

He heard her hug Rano & cry mama I missed u missed u a lot & then hug Daadi. Then she tapped on his shoulder .. her touch irritated him. He didn't like her touch. He faked a smile & turned controlling his urge to snap. She extended her hand hi...missed u. she smiled sweetly. He reluctantly extended his hand & smiled sadly. Her hand felt no where like wat he thought it would feel. He immediately pulled away his hand. Rano did notice Maan being uncomfortable. She thought may be they need to spend time together.

When they reached home she opened her suitcase & took the gifts she got for them. She took everything one by one & gave to them. Rano's hand fell on the perfume bottle - yeh
she blushed
Rano - khud hi dedo
Rano pointed at his room
She walked gracefully to his room. He stood their facing looking out of his window. She knocked the door. He turned to look who it was. He couldn't relate to it. His little wify would have never knocked. He maintained his calm - umm
she smiled - this is for u
he yet again faked a smile - thanxs
He wondered why did she felt like creatures to him. Those creatures who clinched to him. He was very uncomfortable with her in his room. He took the perfume & kept it in the table & left to the office. He remained really restless the whole day especially with the fact why was he not able to relate to her. Why didn't his heart skip a beat when she touched him. Wasn't he supposed to feel high just with her mere touch. Wat was it??? why was he so numb to her. He hated himself. He couldn't believe he was so heartless that he couldn't love his own little wify. He took out her picture & looked at her again to test himself. Yes he did love her off course he did. He couldn't even once take his eyes off that little angel then wat was it with the grown up her!!! probably her dressing & hair do he argued but his love was not so shallow. It was beyond all this. He remained wild through out the day. The whole staff was getting scared to even answer is simple question.
He reached really late at night after a party drunk. He didn't like to enter the house with her in their. He heard her sound loud & clear catching up with Rano & Daadi may be. He told nakul to shift his dresses to outhouse & dragged himself to the outhouse. He made another drink for himself & stood their looking out of the glass window. He recollected every small thing about Geet the first time she gave him the chocolate, hugging him telling him she loves him, he smiled ..she following him to his house.. tuition ..he couldn't stop smiling .. Rano came & slowly tapped his shoulder. He was shocked no one ever comes this late, he looked at her image in the glass & instantly turned - sab teehk hain na?
Rano - kya baat hain? U look worried?
He kept quiet.
Rano - is anything bothering u?
Maan - it may sound odd.. but Geet looks different to me
Rano smiled - woh badi hogayi hain .. hain thodi alag dihkti hain, she has gained height ..shayad thodi patli bhi hogayi hain..
Maan - lekin koi itna kaise badal sakta hai ?
Rano - itni bhi tho nahi badali hain woh, bus badi badi baten karne lagi hain
he smiled weakly
Rano was little shocked why he didn't insist to stay with her now they were legally married. She didn't know how to ask him that why did u move in here she asked instead
he couldn't have said wat he felt that would hurt her & probably just kill Geet. He fumbled with his words
Maan - shaadi ka wait..he paused & closed his eyes wondering whom was he lieing to??'
Rano was impressed at him being so traditional for once. Knowing him they would have been in their honey moon already.
Rano - tumne usse baat ki
how could he, when he can't even bare her sight. He didn't know wat to reply.
Maan - tired hogi, I will speak to her tomorrow ..breakfast table pur!!!
Rano was surprised breakfast table..wat change in him thanxs to Geet she thought.
Maan - usne dinner kiya?
Rano - we all had
Maan was surprised yet again; his little wify won't have without him.

PRECAP
Geet wanting to do Modeling

~PREV PART 53 NEXT PART 55~
Thanks guys for all ur love & support...
hope u like this update as well
Please please do comment
Love
muskan
Edited by muskanp - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
ehhhh…. i will comment when i am. bc…
read the last few lines. getting hisky.
hmm…
idk what to say… after so many years… it was expected. of course geet would change. its his fault in the first place.
i have feeling of a big strom… a big big one :D
xxxxxxx
more later :D
xxxxx
Edited by FIRESafiReFIRE - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

part 52 : it was sad to see them separating😔 but i actually wanted to see a little separation ....😊 this was fabulous update really👏👏👏👏 ....

nd when rano saw them kissing ...awkward moment for both😳 ..........

nd maan paying for arohi's degree too cause he dznt want to send geet alone nd no1 knows this .........overwhelming .....❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️ 😍

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Posted: 14 years ago

oh godddddddddddddd i knewwwwwwwwwww aap aisa hi karengiii uffff u gave us da biggest shock i was fearing dis only dat geet will be changed ufffff dis is not our geet we want our old deewani geet back plzzzzzz awww poor maan wen he touch her now der is no spark now oh god uffff and den now geet want to do modeling now wat will be maan reaction do continue soon

Edited by Anu_sajan4ever - 14 years ago

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