'Tedhi Poetry'. New~ We Shall Miss~ pg 22 (:

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sweetsute

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Dazzler

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Posted: 15 years ago

#41

hahaaha....suberb .... for many days i have been missing ur poems............keep it up

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May

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Posted: 15 years ago

#42

👏.....Loved it Simi......Hopefully the writers will be meherbaan on poor Rahul and inspire you to write somthing for him again😊.....

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Nisha

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Posted: 15 years ago

#43

Hi Simi i love both the poems, they were fab, 👍🏼 you really brought a smile to my face, thanks! 😃

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Simi

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Posted: 15 years ago

#44

Thank you all so much for liking my poem.....Manita, Bones,Deepali, Ammu, Rooj, Sana, Manju, Angel, Jyothi, Krishna, Pooja, Shriya, Rafia, Sweetsute, May, Nisha, aditee, Amrita, Woohoohaha, Sayni, Missfilmy, Naveen, Deepa, Shai, Vatsalya!!!!! Love U all:)

And looks like Swapna ji you did also click the like button....!!!! Thanks for taking the time to read your fans' works!!:)

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Simi

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Posted: 15 years ago

#45

Hi all!! Looks like we are all liking the serious turn of events here..me too!!! More meat to chew on!!😃 Hope they give us some intense scenes and dialogues.............! I have written a poem on Shaan's state of Mind.........it's a disease called Shaq or Doubt..

Seed of Doubt

Once you encounter

the Seed of Doubt

It is really tough

To get it Out

It starts to flourish

And spread its roots

It feeds itself

Sprouts new shoots

It manipulates your mind

It poisons your soul

What you hear, see or say

Isn't under your control

The longer you leave it be

The stronger the affliction

Soon there'll be no remedy

From this evil addiction

The only antidote if any

Is to sow the seed of trust

Nurture it with tender loving care

And protect it you must

~~~~~

Its not funny, but its true!!

Please click the like button and leave a comment if you will!😊

Simi

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sweetsute

@sweetsute

Dazzler

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Posted: 15 years ago

#46

wow! such a meaningful poem- shan should read it and consider the last 4 lines specifically...........great!

btw y is d topic-bakwass poetry.........

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Simi

@simikr

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Posted: 15 years ago

#47

Originally posted by: sweetsute
wow! such a meaningful poem- shan should read it and consider the last 4 lines specifically...........great!

btw y is d topic-bakwass poetry.........

Thanks dear...would like to know your name!😊

Bakwaas becoz I really don't consider myself a poet...just poking fun at myself!!😆😆😆

Love,

Simi

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sweetsute

@sweetsute

Dazzler

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Posted: 15 years ago

#48

Originally posted by: simiv
Thanks dear...would like to know your name!😊

Bakwaas becoz I really don't consider myself a poet...just poking fun at myself!!😆😆😆

Love,

Simi

change it ... u r a poet indeed.............i love all ur poems.

btw me Shilpa