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Posted: 15 years ago
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hahaaha....suberb .... for many days i have been missing ur poems............keep it up

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Posted: 15 years ago
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👏.....Loved it Simi......Hopefully the writers will be meherbaan on poor Rahul and inspire you to write somthing for him again😊.....
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Hi Simi i love both the poems, they were fab, 👍🏼 you really brought a smile to my face, thanks! 😃
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Thank you all so much for liking my poem.....Manita, Bones,Deepali, Ammu, Rooj, Sana, Manju, Angel, Jyothi, Krishna, Pooja, Shriya, Rafia, Sweetsute, May, Nisha, aditee, Amrita, Woohoohaha, Sayni, Missfilmy, Naveen, Deepa, Shai, Vatsalya!!!!! Love U all:)
And looks like Swapna ji you did also click the like button....!!!! Thanks for taking the time to read your fans' works!!:)
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Hi all!! Looks like we are all liking the serious turn of events here..me too!!! More meat to chew on!!😃 Hope they give us some intense scenes and dialogues.............! I have written a poem on Shaan's state of Mind.........it's a disease called Shaq or Doubt..
Seed of Doubt
Once you encounter
the Seed of Doubt
It is really tough
To get it Out
It starts to flourish
And spread its roots
It feeds itself
Sprouts new shoots
It manipulates your mind
It poisons your soul
What you hear, see or say
Isn't under your control
The longer you leave it be
The stronger the affliction
Soon there'll be no remedy
From this evil addiction
The only antidote if any
Is to sow the seed of trust
Nurture it with tender loving care
And protect it you must
~~~~~
Its not funny, but its true!!
Please click the like button and leave a comment if you will!😊
Simi
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Posted: 15 years ago
#46
wow! such a meaningful poem- shan should read it and consider the last 4 lines specifically...........great!

btw y is d topic-bakwass poetry.........
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Posted: 15 years ago
#47

Originally posted by: sweetsute

wow! such a meaningful poem- shan should read it and consider the last 4 lines specifically...........great!


btw y is d topic-bakwass poetry.........

Thanks dear...would like to know your name!😊
Bakwaas becoz I really don't consider myself a poet...just poking fun at myself!!😆😆😆
Love,
Simi
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Posted: 15 years ago
#48

Originally posted by: simiv

Thanks dear...would like to know your name!😊

Bakwaas becoz I really don't consider myself a poet...just poking fun at myself!!😆😆😆
Love,
Simi


change it ... u r a poet indeed.............i love all ur poems.

btw me Shilpa
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Posted: 15 years ago
#49
Simi darling.....👏👏👏👏👏.
Lovely words and so true....doubt can only be killed with utmost trust..and trust needs a lot of TLC (tender loving care)
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Is dis wat u call bakwaas??b/w if posible plz try ur hand in SS.??..u'll b one hell of a writer dre aso!!😊

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