FF Honeymoon retake! pg 3

What should have happen during the honeymoon, after Gauri and the press left. I know a lot of peeps were disappointed, so here is my take on it. I was going to post this on the weekend....but kept putting it off , but here it is!

Words written in italics like 'this' are thoughts

words written like "this" are conversations

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After the press turned and left, Arjun could not contain the evil smirk on his face. This was a fantastic win for him. Now they were even, no he was on top, of course because he was smarter. He turned and locked the door, the resounding sound of the latch clicking made Arohi turn around and look at him suspiciously.

What is that jahilll up to now? I bet he has something else planned up his nasty sneaky two timing sleeve. Aorhi was so busy talking to her self that she didn't notice Arjun walk-up to her until he was right behind her.

He trailed an index finger down her bare arm. "Well wifey, I win this round?"

Arohi almost jumped a feet in surprise.

"Don't scare me like that you donkey. Fine! You win this round." She took a step away from him and face him, he finger jabbing his chest,

"Next time I am going to win."

"Oh really? How are you going to manage that with your loose screw in your brain?"

She wanted to slap the smirk off his face!

"You and I both know all that was lie."

"Yeah, but that don't matter the whole country now thinks everything that comes out of your mouth is nonsense, which is true." She was bearing her teeth ready to tear him apart. "No? You don't think so Aorhi?"

"Look here you conniving criminal," his expression darkened at the word criminal but Arohi didn't notice this. "tonight was your win, but tomorrow will be mine, I guarantee it!"

Arjun grabbed her jabbing finger and pulled her close. "Oh really? Then what's my prize?" He lowered his face down to hers, Arohi started to panic.

Why was he getting so damn close to her, why was her heart beating faster, why couldn't she say anything thing? Why couldn't she push him away???

"Come on sweetheart, your husband just won, won't you give him congratulatory kiss?" His nose was almost touching hers, she looked like a deer caught in the headlights, eyes all big, body frozen in shock unable to move.

Arjun obviously picked up on her frightened person, no matter how many times he did this, the girl never learned. He grinned and pushed away from her.

"Chee, not that I would want a kiss from you, have you taken a whiff of your self? I'll let you have the shower first since you need it more then I do." His off hand attitude, made her completely forget there previews intensity, her rage was boiling again.

"I don't smell!" He turned back to her.

"Yeah you do....or do you really want me to kiss you?" Her eyebrow rose into her hairline.

"I'm taking a shower!" Arohi ran into the bathroom and slammed the door behind her and locking it.

The man was crazy, completely ,utterly, undeniably crazy!

Tbc....

Great scene narration.

This would have been much much better than the actual scene

Disclaimer: Alright I don't own the characters or the show Kitani Mohabbat Hai ' 2, i'm a fan who is obsessed with Arjohi (Arjun and Aorhi paring).

Words written in italics like 'this' are thoughts

words written like "this" are conversations

Chapter 2

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When Arohi came out of the washroom she almost went back in. Arjun was standing right outside the door.

"Took you long enough. Then again it takes time to get rid of all that foul stench." He leaned in close to her.

Arohi leaned back.

Arjun leaned in some more, till Arohi almost lost her balance.

He inhaled and Arohi held her breath. He was too close for comfort.

Arjun took a step back. "Well at least you don't stink that bad anymore." Arohi rolled her eyes and pushed past him.

As the washroom door was locked an idea popped into her head.

"Well dear husband since I smell so much you won't want to share a bed with me now will you?"

When Arjun came out of the shower he saw what Arohi had done, the bed only had been made for one person (most likely her) and on the floor there was a blanket and a pillow.

How generous.

Arohi was admiring her handy work when he walked up behind her and tapped her on the shoulder.

"You know based on Dadi's words we came on this honeymoon." Arohi turned around and Arjun started walking forward, making her walk backwards in order to keep the distance between them.

What is this jhahill admi playing at now? Why is coming so close? Didn't his mother ever teach him manners about personal space? Pfft , how could she? She her self is completely mannerless, along with the rest of his family...expect Dadi...Wait Arohi pay attention! What he is he talking about? Grandkids? Whose Grandkids?

"Dadi wants a grand child from us and..." Arjun watched in satisfaction as a look of utter horror came over Arohi's face.

"However," he continued, "in order for that to happen we would have to," he was ready to burst out laughing because Arohi looked like she was about to be hanged, this was too good.

"...get closer, and I see you have already made such preparations, we will only need one blanket and..."

He is out of his crazy mind if he thinks I am going to, oh shit!

Arohi felt the back of her knees hit the bed and her world turned, she reached out her hand and grabbed on to Arjun and he went down with her on the bed, hard.

CRACK!

Oh no what was that noise?

When Arohi opened her eyes she found her self under Arjun and his nose two centimeters away from hers. The broken bed was forgotten as the two enemies stared at each other.

For a long moment no one spoke.

His voice was like velvet when he started talking.

"Aorhi.... you once said, for romance to occur, proper atmosphere is required. Well, we have the right atmosphere, so for tonight lets forget out last names, and its just Arjun and Arohi. Me and you. Lets forget our past, just for tonight, one night let us loose our selves in each others arms...."

She could feel his breath on her face and the clean scent of his soap was invading her senses. He smelled nice.

He was too close much too close. Arohi remembered the last time they were like this, he was saving her from stray bullets..this time the only danger was, him. Who was going to save her from Arjun?

She had to be honest with her self. He wasn't half as bad when he was saying such nice things...

Is he coming closer? Oh my God of course he is! Well it won't be so bad if I just let him...

Suddenly Arjun was up and off of her in a split second like he wasn't there at all.

"this would have been great, the setting is right, the atmosphere is right, just the ...girl isn't right."

That was mean, and Arohi didn't understand why it hurt, but she pushed aside her anger getting her the better of her as it always does.

"Oh yeah, then why don't you go find some other girl, after you divorce me." Arjun only rolled his eyes.

"No chance sweetheart." He turned around and looked at her on the bed. "We are going have to tell the hotel management how your elephant weight broke the bed.

Arohi struggled up from the broken bed making it creek.

"It wasn't just me who fell on the bed, dear husband."

"Yeah yeah whatever." Dismissing Arohi, who settled her self on one of the comfortable couches.

Arohi watched Arjun call the hotel management and ask for a new bed for there room ASAP.

I just don't understand this guy! Then again what is there to understand he is the worlds biggest kaminay, shaytan, jahiil, bander ahhh just a big, ugly, rude,...

"Monster!"

Arjun hung up the phone and looked at her sharply.

Arohi covered her mouth with her hands.

She said that aloud didn't she?

Arjun was going to say something to her but he was cut off by the knock on the door. He went and opened the door, the hotel manger and his attendant were present.

"Hello sir. I am here because of your bed?"

"Yes this way, follow me."

The manger nodded head to Arohi and stared for longer then needed, she was a beautiful girl, he could understand how and why the bed was broken.

Arjun didn't like the way the manager and his attendant were looking at Arohi, who was in her PJ's.

Arjun walked and stood in front of Arohi blocking the men's view. He could coughed loudly and gave them a dirty look.

"My wife and I would appreciate it if we could be given a new bed as soon as possible."

The dark look didn't go unnoticed by the two other men in the room.

They quickly made there way to the door.

"I will send a new bed right away sir, and a few workers will be in here shortly and will take this broken bed away."

The door shut behind them and Arohi let a chuckle, "What is up with rolly and poly?"

Arjun tried not to laugh, she was right, he had never seen men so round around the middle as these two.

"A match made in heaven."

Arohi laughed at his comment. And then realizing that she was fraternizing with the enemy stopped.

At the hotel front desk.

The hotel manger was talking to a few employees.

"Bablu take your men and get that bed from room 106. The couple in there broke there bed." The hotel staff laughed and some blushed.

"But Manager sir we don't have any king size bed in stock what will we replace it with?"

The front desk worker put her hand up and spoke. " Well sir the couple from 109 just canceled there stay...we can just take there bed for now until the order for a new bed comes in."

"That is a good idea Runa. Jai take your men and get that bed moved, it should not be too much trouble the rooms are close by and make sure you change the bedding."

Jai nodded his head and set out with six other men to take the bed from room 109 to 106.

TBC.......................

omg ! awesum ! ! ! !

Awesome..post d nxt part soon...:)

@Mina_T..thanks for the narration.honeymoon retake.............its marvellous........actual honeymoon was so rushed that we couldnt even get the feel & it was over...........thank god u have made it longer & definitely more romantic...........plz update soon.......

that was great ff, please continue evan after the honeymoon bit. cant wait for you next update.

Honeymoon Retake!

Disclaimer: Alright I don't own the characters or the show Kitani Mohabbat Hai ' 2, i'm a fan who is obsessed with Arjohi (Arjun and Aorhi paring). This is a place where i left my creative juices flow!

Words written in italics like 'this' are thoughts

words written like "this" are conversations

Chapter 3

In room 109

Gauri looked at her husband, Rajveer looked so angry she wanted to stay a mile away from him. He had just unpacked there clothing and was busily shoving it all back in. When she heard the knock on there door, she was only too happy to answer it. At least it would keep her husbands mind off of Arjun and Arohi.

"Hello, what is it you want?"

"Madam we understand you are going to be leaving correct?"

"Yes my husband has just about finished packing."

Rajveer heard the conversation and stalked up to the door entrance.

"What do you want?" He barked at the hotel staff, who hid behind there supervisor.

Jai gulped. "Sir we understand you are leaving."

"Yeah I am, in fact I am about to leave now." He indicated to the packed bags on the bed.

"Well sir, one of my workers will carry your bags to your car."

Rajveer only nodded his head. He watched as all the workers entered the room and started stripping the bed of its covers. It all looked like normal hotel work, until three of the workers, pulled the matters off, and another took out a screw driver and started working on the bed post.

"Rajveer I'm going to get my purse from the washroom." Gauri hurried to the washroom.

Rajveer was curious, was this hotel so rich that they changed the bed for every new customer? That just seemed a waste of money.

"Hey," he called out to the supervisor "Why are your men take apart the bed?" Jai instructed the two men to carry out the mattress to the other room. Then ran back to Rajveer, the guy was blushing making Rajveer raise an eyebrow.

"Sir how do I say this, it is really embarrassing." This made Rajveer smirk, forgetting his bad temper. "Come on tell me I won't tell your boss."

"Alright sir, please don't. What happened is another couple due to there um ah...um eh..well..."

Rajveer smacked Jai on the back trying to get the words out of him. "Stop stammering boy."

"um ah do to there...activities of cough love... broke the bed."

Rajveer let out a roar of laughter.

This was hilarious, he was going to share this story with his cop buddies. Never had he heard of anyone breaking there bed on there honeymoon. Sure he heard wild stores, but this one won first prize!

Jai was blushing red so Rajveer took mercy upon him, he slipped a 300 rupees in his front jacket pocket. "This is for you and your workers. You can carry on." Jai nodded in thanks and rushed back to help move the bed from 109 to 106.

Just then the worker who took Rajveer and Gauri's bags to there car came back with the car keys and handed them to Rajveer.

Gauri came out of the washroom relieved to see Rajveer smiling. She thanked her lucky stars at least his mind was taken off Arohi and Arjun. Although them coming to the honeymoon did trouble her greatly. However, she was sure they were both fighting about her being in that room. A wicked smirk blossomed on her blood red lips.

Rajveer turned to see Gauri staring at him with a wearied look on her face.

"Lets go Gauri. The worker already took our bags to the car." Gauri snapped out of her thoughts and looked around the room.

"What is going on Rajveer?"

"Nothing you should be concerned about." He smirked, Gauri might just faint her innocent mind couldn't comprehend why the bed was moving rooms.

Rajveer was curious as to what room the bed from his room was going to. As he was walking out of his suite, he noticed the doors to suite 106 down the hall open. And workers carrying out a broken bed.

Shit they weren't kidding about the broken bed.

He stopped one of the workers carrying out part of the bed frame.

"Hey tell me who is in that suite?" The worker looked around nervous, this was confidential stuff.

"Um well you see sir, the sir of that suite is really scary and..." Rajveer stuck 500 rupee in the workers pocket.

"The suite belongs to Arjun Singhina sir." The worker then rushed off.

Rajveer stood there shell shocked, he couldn't move, this couldn't be true, it had to be a mistake! His niece would never...there had to be some mistake.

Garui looked at her husband who looked like he was about to explode. He was happy one second now he looked furious, and why was he upset, of course they knew suite 106 belonged to Arjun and Arohi.

She watched as workers carried parts of the bed from 109 to 106. What was going on? She was too scared to ask Rajveer.

However, when Arjun stepped out of his suite in a pair of grey sweats and a black sleeping T-shirt Rajveer's fears were confirmed.

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Arjun stepped out of his suite that he shared with his lovely wife to see if the workers needed any help. He noticed a small worker, the guy was properly only 4"11 carrying a bed frame twice his size and weight and struggling. Arjun quickly walked up in his black flip flops and grabbed an end. Flashing the worker a kind smile, who in turn insisted he didn't need help.

"Don't worry paa-ge , I was half responsible for the broken bed, this is the least I can do."

Arjun looked up and his eyes connected with Rajveer's. Arjun did the only natural thing, he smirked and raised his voice making sure Rajveer heard him.

"My wife would help out, but beechari, what can she do? She's tired so I'm going to let her rest....for now."

Rajveer was ready to kill him, right then and there he was going to murder Arjun Singhania in cold blood and damn it if he went to jail for life!

He took a few steps toward suite 106. Gauri was shocked her face turned ashen, Arjun and Arohi broke there bed?

Inside suite 106

Arohi watched as the workers take out the old bed and others brought in the new one. She noticed Arjun was not in the suite.

Don't tell me that slacker ran off to mingle with girls! Here I am helping, direct the workers and he's out frolicking!

Arohi walked towards the suites door. Of course there was no need to mentioned that she felt uncomfortable with the way the male workers were looking at her...its like they never saw a girl in flannel pants and a tank top! Disgusting!

"Arjun! ARJUN!"

"What is it my lovely wife?" He shouted back.

Arohi stepped out of the suite relived that he hadn't gone far, he was outside the suites entrance.

Hey why am I relived?

She spotted him helping one of the workers with a bed frame. She tried not to laugh, the guy was so tiny!

Well at least Arjun has a heart and is helping the guy. Of course I can be nice too!

"Here let me help you guy's with that." Arohi failed to notice her uncle's steps falter as he watched her.

"No need my wife, I have this under control." Arohi let go of the bed frame and walked up to Arjun and poked his chest with her index finger. Taking advantage of the fact that both his hands were occupied holding up the furniture.

"Hey I'm not going to let you be the only nice person, I can help out too."

"I understand, Arohi. But I think you should rest, you had a very tiering day and just give me and the workers 15 minutes and then you can relax. I'm sure you are sore from earlier."

Arjun looked over Arohi's head at Rajveer, this was too good the guy was ready to explode!

Hmm this monkey is right, I did have to walk a bit and I hurt my feet earlier, and I did offer to help. Let him suffer a little, plus he's the man he can hull furniture around. My body is more delicate.

"Okay dear husband," she turned around to leave then turned back and with a cat like smile added, "BUT don't keep me waiting you know I'm not patient."

Arjun laughed, Arohi had NO idea how much she helped him in pissing off her uncle. He was going to be extra nice to her tonight maybe let her watch one of her favourite movies.

"No one knows you better then I, dear wifey."

Garui had enough. She had to take Rajveer out of here before things got out of control.

"Rajveer! Lets go before it gets too dark, you know I don't like driving in the dark."

Rajveer turned to look at his helpless wife. Sometimes, well most of the time, he wished she had more backbone like his niece. However, even in his bad temper he understood it better to leave Arohi and Arjun alone. He didn't want to think about how that bed was broken or WHY they were so nice to each other suddenly.

Gauri was beyond relived when she saw Rajveer turn around and walk towards her.

Why were Arjun and Arohi so civil towards each other? There had to be some mistake. I'm sure that bed was broken not because of a romantic reason but because of a fight? Yes that has to be it, I mean Arjun would never want Arohi, and Arohi hates Arjun, I made sure of that!

TBC...................

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Mina_T

Great update!!!! Put more up soon!!!!!🤗 more more! 👏 This stuff is great I wish it really happened!!! I wish they would do a "re-take" of the honeymoon bit in show

thanks dear for quick updates .....its awsome, for a moment i close my eyes n i fell like i'm watching that scene.....great job...pls continue soon, i'm waiting for next part....