FF-Tum Mere Kaun Ho Chp-6 +IMP Note Pg 29

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Posted: 14 years ago

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its been ages that you updated...........pls now update sooooooooooon....

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Arshifan007

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Posted: 14 years ago

#182

Nice concept and surroundings! loved it!!! Plz PM as soon u updated and plz yar, update soon! can't wait!!!

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Geet Malhotra

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Posted: 14 years ago

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hey please add me to ur PM list. i really love ur FF. :)

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Posted: 14 years ago

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Loved your FF please add me to your PM list and update soon yaar cant wait for the next part

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Posted: 14 years ago

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hi. jst found ur ff. its interesting. plz update soon nd could u plz add me to ur pm list

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Aabray

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Posted: 14 years ago

#186

Hey Friends finally my exams are over and now i'll keep updating from time to time
but just wait for one day more as i have an invitation for a party so will update when i get back home OR the next day inshAllah. and plus thanQQ for liking it and esp for having patience. now its my turn to make you guys happy.

Another News is that.
As my ff is on FF gallery so i would like to add one more pair that is KABIR & PIYA from pyaar ki yeh ek kahani, but don't worry it'll still be MaanEeet FF.
So from now this FF will be about the story of two couples KaPi & MaanEet
But don't worry i wont change the concept, but as for KaPi's story will have to think a new concept. But MaanEet's concept will remain the same

to let you know
Kabir is played by Vishal Gandhi
Piya is played by Sukirti Kandpal

Edited by Abray - 14 years ago

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Aabray

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Posted: 14 years ago

#187

before reading the chapter please do read the NOT E above, it's really important

Chapter-6

Geet comes out of the trial room (changing back to her original dress)
Pinky : so geet, how was the dress? now lets try out some more what say?
Geet : no yaar, lets go, i am not feeling well. (thinking of what just happened in the trial room)
Tasha : what happened? are you okay?
Geet : yeah, just tired, lets go home
Adi: alright then, i'll drop you both
Pinky : thanks yaar, lets go

===

On the other hand,
Maan and Sasha reaches home and finds the clients already arrived.
Maan quickly freshened up and joined the clients.
One of the clients started describing him about their ideas of a project. But in Maan's view, it's the same girl he just met in the shopping mall (Geet).

Maan becomes stunned and shocked and at the same time enjoying her explanations. He just couldnt take his eyes off from her, locked in her eyes, face. Heart-beating fast. Breathing stops. Overall it's a strange kind of feeling happening with him.
Client 1 : So sir, this is our plan and i think it'll be very useful for us.
No respones from maan. the client again calls him 'sir?

Maan comes out of his imagination : ummm yeah it's good, so we can start work from tomorrow.
Client 2 : but we already just decided that we should start from today, i mean now.
Maan : oh...ok...yeah we.start.work.from.nnow.
Client 2 (standing up) : okay then we'll see you in the office then
Maan gives a farewell hand-shake to the clients. And the clients finally leaves.

Maan goes to his room. Became restless.
"why the hell i am thinking about that stupid girl? why can't I get her out of my mind? what happened to me?" thought maan

===

Geet was arranging her cup-board, while she finds a bangle (or say a kangan). She remembers her mom said that this was given by her 'to be

mother-in-law' as she wants to make Geet her daughter-in-law.
Geet wonders, " where will he be? does he know about me? does he know anything about the marriage? and is he waiting for me? or if there is some other girl in his life?
Will I be able to find him? Or will he and his parents will come to me?

Babaji, so many answers i need to find, and i don't even know his name. He may confront me in somewhere and somehow but i won't recognise him. I only have this bangle, thats it" (looking at the bangle).Pinky comes to the room saying : "Geet, its 12 o'clock lets go to sleep, you remember na? tomorrow is your first day so you can't be late"
Geet replied : "yeah i remember". Keeping the bangle in her cup-board, she goes to sleep.

===

Next Morning.
Geet and Pinky are about to leave for office. But Geet was feeling nervous. She touches Pinky's Dad's feet for blessings and joins hand infront of her babaji. "Babaji, give me the courage so that i will be able to my job properly and honestly, so that my boss won't get any excuse to complain"

Pinky's Dad hires a taxi and the girls gets into it and leaves for their journey.
On the way, pinky brings out her novel and starts reading it. On a traffic signal (once again) Maan's car stops beside Geet's taxi.
Geet sees Maan and gets irritated : "babaji, why did you showed this akroo's face at this moment? now my whole day won't go properly. i just hate this guy"
Maan too sees her and looks at her with angry eyes. Geet too gives him the same look.
"no way, is she really here? or again my damn illusion?" thought Maan.
But before they could say anything, the green signal shows and both of their cars' leaves.

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Khurana Office

Pinky and Geet reached the office before Maan. Pinky introduces Geet to her colleagues while then a charming, dashing guy comes
and shakes hands with Geet
"hii main hoon Kabir, Kabir Singh Rathod" said the guy
Geet replied : "Geet Handa"
Pinky : "geet kabir se bachke rehna, he is very flirtitious and very naughty yet has a golden-heart."
Kabir interrupts : "aur is golden heart mein sirf ek hi angel basi hain......................."
Geet : angel???
Pinky : Piya Jaiswal, she is a good friend of mine you would love to meet her, by the way piya hain kaha?"
Kabir : bandariya aur kaha rehti hain?? obviously zoo mein
Piya snaps from pinky's back : shut up duffer, hey pinky wassup?
Kabir : don't call me duffer you idiot.
Piya : duffer ko duffer nahin kahungi to kya kahungi? gadha?
Kabir pointing out finger : tum.........
Piya too points out her finger : tum kya huh?? kya?
Pinky interrupts : arrre arree stop it guys now phirse shuru maat hojana, anyways piya this is geet i told ya and geet this is piya.
Geet : hii piya.
Piya : helloo and welcome to khurana industries, i really hope that you will be able to work with MK.
-"and its not that easy to work with MK and me, T" said T
Pinky : oh God, geet this is T urf Tanushree Amborkar.
Geet : hii T
T ignores : whatever........T tum jaise behenji type ladkiyon se baat nahin karti, so just excuse me (excusing herself)
Piya : leave it yaar Geet, ye aisi hii hain, mere saath bhi aisi hi behave ki thi jab mera pehla din thei, hey Mk has arrived.

Maan walks into the office and goes directly to his cabin. Geet finally saw him as Maan Singh Khurana.Her mouth-fell open.
She turned to Pinky : "ye maan singh khurana hain?"
Pinky : "obviously yaar"
Geet : "whaat??? noway" and was going to faint but Pinky holds her.
"are you alright?" asked Pinky
Geet : no i am not, pinky i am dead, he is...
Piya interrupts : Geet Mk wants your bio-data
Geet : now?
Piya : yess now, give it to me
Geet : lekin. But Piya snatches the bio-data file and goes to Mk's cabin.
Geet : babaji abb to mein gayi.

in Maan's cabin
Piya knocks the door.
Maan : come in
Piya : sir here is the bio-data of your new secretary.
There were already few clients in the cabin.
Maan takes the file from her : "thanks you can go now"
Piya : yes sir (and leaves)
Maan continues discussions with his clients while he opens the Geet's file mistakenly, and signs it without reading and seeing the picture.
Maan : here is your project file signed.
Client takes the file and opens : but Mr.khurana it's not out project file, it's a..it's a bio-data of someone name Geet Handa.
Maan : what? takes the file and reads it but didn't notice the photo.
Client : it's ok Mr.khurana, alteast you signed the girl for job. Now you just sign your project that's it
Maan : yeah you are right. (he then calls pinky to give Geet the appointment letter.)
Pinky conveyed the news to Geet and the rest.Geet was shocked and confused as well.
Geet : he selected me for the job? how could this be happen?

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Aabray

Edited by Abray - 14 years ago