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Posted: 14 years ago
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Ok everyone😛😃😳😉...............first surprise in the beginning of the update🥳.............................Well aaj se.....This will no longer be an OS but i have decided to convert it into a FF......so plzzzz all those who want to add themselves to pm list do tell...............

Doosra surprise..............well woh iss part ke end mein milega!..............Sabr kaa phal meetha hota hai................

PART 05 .........Tasha n surprise ..............
Dutta interrupts saying----NAKKU ABB YEH MATT KEHANA????.. KII WOHH HAR DUKH HAR DARD JO MEINNEY TUJHEY DIYAA HAI USSMEIN MERAA PYAR CHIPAA THA!...............

Dutta looks at naku with a helpless look and nakku grins as she recalls when dutta had slapped her and come to apologise she had told him-----MERE kO DARD NAHIIN HUA SAAB???.ACHCHA LAGAA KII AAPNEY MUJH PAR HAK JATAAYA!...........Uss thappad mein aapka ppyar chipaa tha????.

Seeing Naku smile.............all tiredness and pain seemed to vanish as dutta's lips to curl up into a smile................

Naku helps dutta stad up..........and as he stands dutta feels dizzy and takes the support of a near by tree lest he would fall down................

He knew he had lost a lot of blood and he was feeling weak.......but he also knew that abb there was naku too by his side to take care of..............isliye forgetting all his pain...............he tries to step forward...............and his leg was hurting too...............

Dutta winces in pain and looks up at naku looking at him concerned.................

As the two walk around..............dutta's energy was draining................the blood loss was taking a toll on him again................and he knew it was a matter of time.................after which his body might give in to the injuries.....................

Walking lost in his thoughts he hears naku call out to him----saab...........

Dutta looks at her and finds her face brighten up as she pointed her fingre somewhere and when dutta sees what it was................he too felt relieved...............

Little distance away.................there was light from a fire coming and they knew they would find help soon...............

Together dutta and naku reach the place..............and as naku knocks on the door..........A tired dutta leans against the wall.............his body was giving up...........he could not hold himself anylonger............


He looks up and finds naku looking at him concerned..................and he says----Nakusha.................mujhey kuch ho gayaa toh...............toh yaad rakhnaa..............(everything begins to spin in front of his eyes as dutta says on weakly...................)...............Tu merii zindagi kaa sabse khoobsurat hisaa hai................aur main..................


Everything blacks out and dutta falls to the ground............unconscious.................


A terrified nakku goes down on her knees by his side and tears well up in her eyes as she tries to wake dutta up...................


Just then the door opens..............and u see.................Its none other that JAGTAAP DADA STANDING IN THE DOORWAY!...................


He sees dutta lyng on the floor and naku kii back hai unkii taraf...............


Naku looks up crying----Mere saab ko bachaa lo..................


Naku realises it was jagtap.......naku looks at him stunned............the next instant...................she gets up saying----dada.............dada dekho naa saab ko kya hua hai..................


A confused jagtaap looks on...........recognising nakusha's voice but wondering where the black innocent naku was..............and how she turned into a beautiful wife of the akdu dutta he met in the jungle....................



Precap-----Dutta is lying on a cot and jagtap ready with his indtruments to take out his bullet...................


Nakku looks on concerned.................



Ok second surprise kaisaa lagaa😳😳😳😳😳................



Edited by MishalLeoSheeba - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#82

Hey Sheebz🤗

wow surprise toh bahot accha hai😛😛😛FF.....👏👏👏...n second one ........wah jagtap dada aagaye👏👏👏😛😃.....nice idea dear.....kaash ye murad CV sunn leh😳😆........very nice update dear...awww Dutaa hurt n aarhhhh......
jaldi thik karo isse..... CV u too....plz listen to us.....😳😳😳.......soo..........
Nw tasha in Japtap dada ki kutiyan me..."Bahon ke Darmiyan do pyar mil rahe jaane kya bole mannn"😳😳😳😉...first tym wen dey ws here dey start der new luv lyf.......😳😳😳n nw again......sooooo whts in ur mind? m i right.......😳😉......again new beginning of relationship😳😉hai naa........😳😳😳 ok wil wait for ur update.........
Take care🤗
Edited by --SONEE-- - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Reserved ........... me second............ thanx fr the 2 good news u gav this morning😃......... please add me to PM list.........
First good news to convert ur OS into FF👍🏼...........superb idea👏.............looking frwrd..........
Second one was so fabulous...............JAGTAP⭐️ baackkkk👏.......yipeeeeee👏 ........ he is going to help tasha again to cum 2gether😉.........
Dutta gets some relief with Nakku close to him........oops! Dutta fainted bcoz of loss of blood......the words to Nakku bfore fainting touched my heart deep😭........nothing will happen to Dutta...........now that nakku, nakkus bappa and Jagtaap was with him..........
Awesome yaar😃............simply outstanding.👍🏼............continue sooooooooooooon.........looking frwrd... do PM...Thanx once again fr the double bonanza ⭐️............... hav a wonderful day😃🤗..........Cya...........
Edited by ushankitvc - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#84
Very nice update. please add me to your pm list. thanks.
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Posted: 14 years ago
#85
hey so glad u turned your one shot to FF really excited to read further on😍 please do add me to your PM list thanks
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Yaaay this is an FF now.. well add me add me add me lol... Hailaaa.. dutta fainted.. aww atleast he told her shes a beautiful part of his life before.. JAGTAAAAAAP? omg... woohooo.. n lol he was wonderin if that is really nakku or not.. well im soooo happy jagtap is bak atleast in ur FF.. loved him in LTL... ab ayega mazaa...
Awesome update... Continue soon n pleaseeeeeeeee pm me :)
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Posted: 14 years ago
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OH sheebu !
2 dhamakay ! i sooooooooooo love them
wowwwwwww its going to be FF yayayyyyyyyy
and Jagtaps back :D

so xcited for next track
really enjoyed Jagu dada confusion :P
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hey Sheeba thanx alot for the wonderful update yaar🤗Wow double dhamkaa....😉 Really awesome ....Thanx for it turning to FF ....and Jagtap is back🥳.....i loved his track in LTL ....He was fab ....can"t wait to see it in FF ..iam really excited for nxt part ...pls jaldi update karna.. u take care and see ya around....👍🏼👏🤗
Love and Hugs suhana🤗
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Posted: 14 years ago
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hey nice FF dear.........
i read all updates today............it was nice...............wow!!!!!!!!!!!!!! naku finds dutta n tasha searched for help n they found jagtap😳.................it was great............i loved it..............
looking fwd.............


add me in ur PM list................

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Posted: 14 years ago
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thanks Sheeba
What a lovely surprise to start my morning .
congrats for converting this OS into FF.
It seems like u brought jagtapdada by some magic ,thanks for bringing him back.
Pls add me to ur PM list.
Lots of Hugs🤗🤗
Pooja

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