a poem on prida-untill i met you...

hi guys....i wrote a poem on prida well this is the first time i have ever tried to write a poem😊....i myself am not a fan of poetry😛 these are some random thoughts...wasn't trying to really write up something😛.....my whole physics lecture was free😉 so decided to use up some of my brain.😆enough of my bak bak here is it enjoy.

Damini's POV

UNTIL I MET YOU.......

I was all alone

until i met you...

was strong and could stand alone

until i met you...

I felt the need of no one by my side

until you came and stood by my side...

I felt i was strong enough

until you came and became my weakness

I felt that i can walk on any path alone

until my path betrayed me and lead me to you

But after the day you came along

I was walking on the beach alone

I felt the need not to be alone

I felt the need to have someone by my side

I felt i was not strong enough

To fight with the game of love

And then as i raised my eye

I saw you with your bright smile

As it stretched upon my face too

I realized all my needs vanish

When you took my hand into your's

and walked with me across the shore

I thought that love didn't exist

until you became my reason to live

I was all alone

until i met you......

P.S: okay guys so how was it?? do leave your precious comments....good bad anything you feel...plz do comment it will help me improve.

thanks

-Baz😃

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Originally posted by: Komal_Chaudhary

Wow Superb!!!!!!!!

thanks so much😃

Originally posted by: priz_da

right

they ver supa strong untill met each other😃

well even after meetin, they ver strong enough to drive us crazy😆...hehehe yeah....they did do that and were haven't still not recovered from the consequences😆

but really sweet....thank you

verz ma Priz?..he is on vacation😆

next part mein?...humm....maybe😛

thanks for the comment😃

Originally posted by: Gunseerat

lovely piece of writing i mus say buddy....thanks so much pal.....
loved it to the core...am glad you liked it

sum fresh prida 2011 stuff truely a treat....so sweet of you...thanks a ton for those kind words..they mean alot😊

thanks for your rocking comment😃...i loved it

Originally posted by: sofsunmannee

nycc poem dear...thanks so much...
really amazing & awesme....awww..thanks...am glad u liked it...⭐️....yay 4 stars

thanks for the comment😃