Ashi- yuvi marriage & d accident!!(FIC)-3

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Posted: 20 years ago
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THANX FOR ALL THE COMMENTS HERE THE 3RD PART. HOPE U LIKE IT.

Ira takes Arjun for the blood donation. Arjun donates and the blood is supplied to tia immediately.

Ashi: hey bhaggu, us arjun devil ko duniya mein torchure badhane ke liye rakha hai aur timbo aur thakur ko itne pain mein. plz i don't wanna lose my friends.

Yuvi: ya. pata nahi ye sab inke saath kyun ho raha hai.

Sonia: mummum, yuvi sabra karo. everything will be ok. tia jaisi angel aur ranveer jaise gentleman ko kuch nahi hoga.

The blood comes out of the ICU saying that tia is unconcious and all should be well. Ranveer was now out of danger and had come back to his senses.

Ashi: bhaggu, thanx sooooooo much.

Yuvi: really thank u so much. hum sab to dar hi gaye the.

A day passes but tia still dosen't come back to her senses. Sumeet talks to the doctor. The doctor examines her and ira says tht all will be well.
But all is not well.
Tia dosen't wake up from her slumber. Now ira is worried. She does some tests and finally breaks the news that tia is in coma. There was very little hope of her rising from this sleep. And the rest was upto lord almighty.

Ashi and yuvi try very hard to hide this news from ranveer but he comes to know from ira. He is heartbroken.

Yuvi: dude, i know tia will survive this and she will wake up.

Ashi: ya, timbo is actually very strong, trust me.

Ranveer is very upset. He feels that his world has come to an end. without tia life was so meaningless. Ranveer picks the knife kept in the fruit basket and places it on his hand...

Ranveer: tia humne vaada kiya tha, hum sab kuch ek saath karenge, maut ka samna bhi...

He swings the knife accross his hand and the next there is blood all over. Ira walks into the hospital room..................

( if any of u missed the 1st and 2nd parts they will be on page 5 or further).
Thanx plz post ur comments.

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Posted: 20 years ago
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good attempt but very senti pleazzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz do continue soon asap.
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hey bhaggu !!!!!!!!!!!!!! 😆 😆 a good attempt!!!!!! 😉 😉 cont soon
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👏 awsummmmmmmmmmmmmmmm work plzzzzzzzzzz cont
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sad.......... 😭 😭 😭

written very nicely.....
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awsom when u post d next plz b fast i can't wait

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continue soon its very nice. 👏
this was a sweet part but a senti one 😳
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cant wait any more for the next part----please write soon
It has been long since you have written the last part.

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