~*~FF: Shadow of Geet.hui sabke pyari, Complete~*~ - Page 35

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Posted: 14 years ago
great update
i liked geet response to sasha 🤣🤣
happy pongal 😳😳😳😳
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Posted: 14 years ago
wow wow wow wow wow super.......brillint update....pls update fast.....want d nxt part soon....
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesomeeeeeeeeeeee wowwwwwwwww
geet got 15 % extra profit tht was soooooo coollllllll
n hopefully sasha gets 2 knw tht maan n geet r married in d next part
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Posted: 14 years ago
loved it to d core
cant wait to see what happens next
do continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
wowest..update

geet made it..:)
sasha is the dumbest lady..

maan and geet dancing and she still didnt make out..

waiting for sasha to know geet is...geet maan singh khurana..

cont soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
loved it
sasha's face had the very expression I was dying to see...........wish could actually see it....though I can imagine it😆
keep writing
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: avi4rubi

As Tasha felt a lump to spit it out the name, she just nodded her head extending her arm out in an L shape along with flaring her fingers out'

Sasha stopped for a second, seeing Geet walking in'with two other guys following her'

Sasha first stood in shock but then comprehending back as Geet neared her..: ye, where are you going?.. stop!.. in a harsh way..

Sasha smirked and then took a circle around her , watching her from head to toe'

Sasha in a very sarcastic way: oh.. so you got married.. seeing the sindoor on her head.. so you found somebody to fall in your jaal' and then clapping her hands once and rubbing it together: nice blue designer saree Geet' so did your husband took away those bahanji dresses' nice.. wow! Nice necklace' looks like fake pearl.. and wow.. matching earring and bracelet too' great'and you learned to walk on that heels too' nice change Geet'

Geet stood with patience..

Sasha came and stood in front and blocked her way: I said , nice change' that doesn't mean you can walk in just like that.. then again with a smirky winning smile on her lips: remember how the boss drag you out from here.. did you forget it, that soon.. oh ya, its been over an year now, but still Geet, this is KC, you are thrown out from here'. She laughed loud for others to hear it..

Sasha read it, her open lips closed right away. her eyes were going at its maximum wideness... . her color faded from her cheeks.. suddenly she felt her mouth went dry.. she was trying hard to get the word out..

Sasha sweating to say out the name: ha, MSk , but'

Sasha I total confusion: ha M..S..K..

Sasha in mind first time : .oh My God.. what will I do now..

Sasha sat on side chair and Geet went and sat on the main middle chair where CEO of IP written.. like sitting straight opposite to Maan's seat' Pandy came sat next to Geet.

Manisha was walking in, he stopped by at Tasha and said: if Geet's husband knows about this na.. you all will learn a lesson, he will close this company' I will try not to tell him, don't tell me afterward sthat i didn't tell you.. ha...' saying that he waved his hand and went to sit near Geet.

Sasha standing on her heels: this is absolutely not possible.. you are asking 15% extra. No way.. you are only a bigginnner..

Suddenly Geet: Geet Madam.. I am the CEO of a company..

Sasha cleared her throat one more time and said: Ok Geet maaaadam.. let's confirm the deal.

Pinky coming with an ear to ear smile: tell me all about it na.. so how you became the CEO

Panday: you don't know.. IP is Geet madam's..

Pinky : what?!!

Manisha: Geet madam's husband..

Pinky: so your husband is a business man..

Manisha: um.. and his na..'.

KC got an invitation from the IP for the party to celebrate the deal.. Sasha totally tried to avoid it by giving excuses.. but finally it went on to Maan's table and Mann said , I am free let's go for it.. and as the incharge and making all these decision you also need to attend it.. so we two can represent KC..

especially when it comes ot business who made MSK to pay extra 15%..

Let's start the music... everybody on the dance floor.. Romeo without thinking just joined Gaat and Maan's hand together and signeled the to be on the floor.. Sasha stood there in shock again... but Romeo just went on..

Maan: So Ms. Geet, are you ready..
Sasha felt giddy seeing Maan and Geet... the dance got over and everyone congratulated them.... Sasha kept her ears deaf and was listening t her raised beats only....
It was dinner time.. Geet went near Sasah, Sasha looked at Geet in question..... Geet called out Panday and requested him to show sasha her table' Sasha sat on her chair, her eyes were wandering over Geet .. and surprised to see calm MSK satnding near Geet' but where is her husband? Whom did she marry? Oh God. Why should I bother'

just edited parts i liked the most
the jist
love your writting
👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏
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Posted: 14 years ago
hi dear all...
thank you so much for the great response. even though i am speeding up with updates, i really look at the response to post the next... ok.. so Nilu you wanted Sasha to beg , right.. that is a very good scene. I wanted Geet to handle it tackfully in her own way ... but yes, the other way also sounds good... and smj.. wow... thanks.. but after reading ur edited part, i found all that spelling mistakes yaar... sorry guys for all that... going to update the next part within one hour.. hope all will like it...
Thnak you so much for the like button and comments.. I really appreciate it.. thanks...
Devika
p.s: the update may be unexpected . but predictable. as i said, i don't want to conclude in one. its only my take, don't know how you will .. so the response will be greatly appreciated...
Edited by avi4rubi - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: avi4rubi

hi dear all...

and smj.. wow... thanks.. but after reading ur edited art, i found all that spelling mistake yaar... sorry guys for all that... going to update the next part withi one hour.. hope all will like it...
Thnak you so much for the like button and comments.. I really appreciate it.. thanks...
Devika
i don't want to conclude in one. its only my take, don't know how you will .. so the response will be greatly appreciated...

thanx dear for liking it
mistakes are inevitable
at least yours have no grammatic mistakes
some FF I try to read have so bad grammer that I find it very difficult to read
may be their contents are good but still I dont like having head ache after reading terrible english as well as hindi
yours is nice no criminal errors just silly mistakes which happen even with me when I write mine
your FF has a lot of potential explore them
no need to End, you can carry on you have matter worth 50-60 parts you only need to explore it
ALL THE BEST
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Posted: 14 years ago

Part- 22

Days passed by'.. one day morning as they were walking down the stairs'

Geet stopped by holding her hands on her forehead.. Maan noticed it.. and within seconds he saw her eyes closing and she is going off her feet'.

Maan: GEEEEETTTTTTTTTTT'..

Time ticked by'... Maan sat near the bed holding her hand, looking into her closed eyes.. with the most lovable face, with few tear drops in his eyes..' He remembered the day , he sat in same position holding onto her hand, she was in same state, unconscious. But that time the tears were rolling up inside my eyes.. and now too'... how will I say this to her, how she will take it'... he brought her hand near to his lips and pressed his lips hard on them'... he waited impatiently'

Few more minutes passed.. Geet's hand moved in his hold.. Maan looked up to look at her face . He saw the tightening of the forehead and then few lines appearing near her eyes corner'... her other hand just moved up to her forehead.. touching her forehead she slowly opened her eyes'... Mann moved his face near to her face.. Geet looked up as she opened her eyes . and then to the side.. Found Maan sitting next to her'... she tried to sit up'

Geet: what happened? Maan is everything OK?

Maan tried to smile , he felt the tightness of his throat muscles to get the word out.. he kissed her hand again..the rolled up tears gave up on him and it started rolling down his cheek..

Geet got anxious and she tried to sit up' :Mann? What happened?

Maan slowly moved her hand towards her lower stomach and then looked at her abdomen lovingly'... and then looked back at her eyes' ....the happiest loveliest look ever..

Geet looked down at her stomach and then looked into his eyes.. she tried to read his eyes'... everything was clearly written there'... her eyes started feeling wet too.. her lips shivered'... all she could do was nodding, bringing her chin down to her upper front to confirm it.. and yes, he nodded his head in agreement' ... Geet tried to feel her stomach again'.. she squeezed on his hand' ... time ticked by, but the silence covered the atmosphere, out of joy'.

Daadi came in: Geet, how are you feeling beta?

Geet tried to sit up and Maan supported her back..

Geet: I am feeling better..

Daadi went and sat next to her and stroked on her head back : I am so glad to hear the news'... and tell me what you want now.. anything everything will be available for you...' how many more months at college.. you want me and nakul to sit for listening to your presentation we are ready.. Nakul and I can help you with all your home work.., or not we can make Maan to do it.. then IP, I can take care of it completely' I am back to my younger age now' fully energized.. but only want to see you happy and healthy..

Geet: I am fine daadima.. I will be fine.. I know you all are there with me'

The talk went on.. they shared their happiness.. Maan was extremely caring for her' with everything, he was at the finger reach of her.. he followed her to college.. he made frequent calls to guards, to make sure she is fine'

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One night'

Maan was sitting on the bed resting his back on the head rest'... Geet was resting her back on maan's and was reading a book.. his arms wrapped around her..

Geet closed the book: so finally MSK is going to face the students..

Maan: your Principal, just put me in that situation.. he called me few times from last year.. i excused myself easily but this time no excuse I found.. may be he also learned how to deal with me... um...

Geet: I am sure the students will be thrilled.. but one thing, I am also sitting among the other students.. But there I am just Geet. Are you afraid to face the students?

Maan: never.. Mann Singh Khurana kissise dartha nahi hum..

Geet: because all are preparing questions to fire at you, you know we are different groups, and the lecturer's are evaluating our questions and we get credits for it.. and it is you.. for most of them you are a role model.. so they are dying to get a chance..

Maan: let them ask.. I don't care..
Geet: um' I am excited too.. I was listening to this students excitements too.. You know Kanika.. she is all prepared.. she is like , their group will get the highest points.. You know what she says to everyone'

Maan just looked into her eyes..

Geet: she says, she has the few boldest questions that MSKwon't be able to answer

Maan: are you worried..

Geet: why should I? she is going to ask you and you need to answer.. not me'

Maan: I am not asking about that.. you are still worried about that Kanika's words,..

Geet trying to bring a normal tone: no I am not.. I am absolutely fine.. Ok

Maan: ok..then i am also fine..

Geet then with a doubt: Maan do you want me to get my books for you, so that you can read once and answer tomorrow..

Maan: Geeettttt

Geet: sorry, just kidding..

Maan: ok, it is too late and it is not good for my baby.. so you better sleep , right now..

Geet smiled and cling onto his neck as Maan turned the light off'

*********

The students were very excited to see Maan Singh Khurana in a short period. The auditorium was occupied by the student groups in different colors.. The lecturers took their seat near the stage corner. Principal made sure everyone inside before MSK walks in.. He went personally with Abhay to welcome MSk in.. Students sat with their patience.. with the faster heart beats.. Kanika kept a smirky smile at her corner lips, as if she has something secret to ask him, and getting his attention by making him feel uncomfortable in front of the group...'

The students aroused from their seat as Mr. MSK entered the stage along with the principal. He kept his head high and his eyes were looking straight'..

Principal did the introduction part and welcomes MSK to the college and then gave the mike in his hand to proceed.. He talked to the students first ....and finally he said .. he stood from the seat and walked towards the center and starched his one arm out as if welcoming them to question him....

Maan: so it is an interactive session, now I give the mike to you'... so welcome

Each group asked one or the other business question. And MSK tackled everyone with his experience and also gave some witty answers to those who tried to pull his leg..

Finally Kanika raised her hand up..

Maan looked at her..

Kanika: can we ask you something personal too..

Maan: I thought this is an educational program. What is the deal here for my personal life.?

Kanika: see, you are a successful business man and young and handsome, and may be a dream of everyone'. Girls tried to keep their smile on their lips only.. and you are our reference in many of the discussion classes.. I do believe one's personal life has its influence on success too..

Maan: ok.. then ask me..

Kanika: there is a saying that in every man's success there is a woman's hand behind it.. so who is that hand behind you, that we are unaware of..

Maan: I don't think there is anybody like that..

Kanika: I don't want to believe this..

Maan with a thought: ok, if there is anybody then it is my Daadi..

Kanika: what happened to Simran? The girl who was with you when you were at the college and who was with you when you were building up your business world..? where is that girl? Did you forgot her name?

Maan: what is the need for bringing her name up here now.. she doesn't have any connection with my business.. unknowingly his eyes scanned among the group to see Geet. Her reaction..

Kanika: So is it that easy for a business man to break a relationship.. because few magazines talked about your budding relationship..

Maan: I don't think I need to answer that question..

The lecturer from the side tried to signal her to stop.. For Maan his heart was beating faster to see his Geet, reacting to this now'

Kanika: so you are afraid of answering to my question..

Maan with a confident voice: Maan Singh Khurana is not afraid of anything or anyone.. With his firing eyes on her..

Kanika; then why don't you just tell us that how you felt when you break that relationship..

Maan: I didn't feel anything. If I felt something at that time, I am sure I won't be standing here like this. So maybe I felt sad, but it never went into my blood, to drain it out to take my life away.. If I ever felt that way, then that relationship always stay with me.. forever'I won't let it go easily.. I may give my life to get her back'... so i should say, it never that deeper to affect me at all....

Kanika stood there with parted lips'

Maan: so is that all your question' .. but by then his eyes spotted his geet, who was sitting with her head down.. wrting something on the notepad.. he was unable to make out her reaction..

Kanika: one more.. what about the secretary who was working under you.. few years back.. Is she alive or is she dead?

Maan got curious too: interesting.. Do you know her name.?.

Kanika: yes, Ms. Geet Handa..

Principal who was listening to this argument, just stood from the seat and tried to stop her.. But MSK asked him to stop by signaling him with his hand and looked at her straight.

Maan:: so you are more into my personal life'

Kanika with a cunning smile : after all it's all business Mr. Mann Singh Khurana..

Maan: Interesting', so atleast you know her name.. good.. so what do you think? did you do any search of the rest...? i mean beyond knowing her name as Ms. Geet Handa.

Maan looked at Geet who still scribbling over her notepad..

Kanika: I think, you should answer that. I heard you were about to marry her but she walked away..

Maan: I told you, if I any relationship get into my blood, I keep them closer to me, because without them I can't live..

Kanika: that means ,she was also not your life..

Maan: There is no place ALSO there dear yound lady because i clarified your first question clearly.. but If Ms. Geet Handa is the one for me, then defenitly she should be with me..

Kanika: then where is she?

Maan with a witty way: Do you know any Geet up here?

Kanika: ha,, we do have a Geet with us? in a very normal way

Maan looked at Geet who was looking at Kanika with her firing eyes.... as if enough is enough.. he noticed her scribbling hard on that page.....
***************************************** ok dear.. did you expected this? i mean the college scene... but its all predictable. right? hope you read my previous note... ok then... catch you all soon or later.. but please.. i need that response, just to know if i am boring you guys... evenhtough i don't have any intention to end it with next part... but i am going towards there only.... so your comments are valuable.. last part mostly on tuesday... but before that there is time to fill up some more.. so i thank you for your response..may you don't like this.. yes it is all drama.. but i will come to know only through your response....thanks.
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Edited by avi4rubi - 14 years ago

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