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Apoorva

@0o.Leah.o0

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Posted: 14 years ago

#51

Oh, and I shall reply to all your comments tomorrow. I am really sleepy right now.

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natashu

@natashu

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Posted: 14 years ago

#52

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Another wonderful chapter! =D I'm loving the pace of this FF. Moreover, I'm loving the Abhay-Aarav convo's!

And, honey, the emotions came across just right!

Poor Aarav though, I guess I do understand where he's coming from! But, I still don't understand why he's looking for Piya. Also, he doesn't seem to know about Maithali. Hmm. Interesting!

So, the Trishna lady showin up soon, eh? Can't wait!

I'm guessing Abhay will come and save Piya, again. Sigh. 😆

I really do feel bad for Abhay. The guy needs a hug. Chuck that, he needs many hugs! And, loads of love!

..I hope Piya would't act all jasoos-like here. It's sad that Abhay's got a hoard of past memories still haunting him, and we don't need a Sherlock-Piya going about doing her research! But, one can't blame her completely...

Anyway, I deviate from the purpose of this post!

Honestly, I'm lOving this! =D

As for your question, about using something other than 'Abhay growled'. You could always say something like, "blah blah" replied Abhay irritably, anger rising in his voice.

Just a suggestion =]

I myself am a new writer. So, I am in your position as far as that goes. I just try and pick up stuff like that from the novels/books I read. So, as we continue to do that, I'm sure we'll start incorporating the same in our writing.

Once again, awesome stuff!

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Ritzie Ring'gghania

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Posted: 14 years ago

#53

Lovely chapter. But yes you are right, i am missing Abhiya scenes.

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Apoorva

@0o.Leah.o0

Rocker

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Posted: 14 years ago

#54

@ Pratibha - Thank you ! You really boost up my confidence !😆

@ Swathi - Really? You think so? Thank you!

@ Mugdha - Sure thing !

@ Ritz - All these chapters were what you can call filler Chappies. LOL. The REAL strory starts from Chapter 6 onwards ! Thank you for reading ! Added you to the PM list.

@ Antara - Thank you!

@ Devyani - luv_wacko ! You are really 'wacko' 😆 Nice lil rhyme you made up there !

@ Natashu - I love your comments, when I see the 'Reserved =D' comment of yours, it makes me so happy ! I keep waiting anxiously for your to edit your comment, just to see what you think of the chappie.

Since you made me wait for the 'Bonnie thing' so long, I am going to make you wait too ! :P You shall know who Danny is and why he is after darling Piya in the coming chapters !

I really like Pacchi in the show, so I want a Pancchi-Aarav relationship in the FF. Bro-Sis type. And I am also aiming for a Abhay-Misha bro-sis relationship too ! They are sho cute !

AbhIya coming up ! Thank you for reading !

@ Moully - Thanks hun, yes, I have added you the PM list !

@ Humaira - Thank you jaani !🤗 Trishna is definately scary, in an awesome way of course.

Haha ! Abhay -Aarav, lobe writing interactions between these two. Even though they hate each other, they look out for each other too!

Oh lol thank you, I wanted my username to...stand out. LOL.

I shall reply back to your comments on Chap 5 before putting up chap 6 !

Thank you all for commenting.

Aapki,

Leah

Edited by 0o.Leah.o0 - 14 years ago