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Wanderbug

@Wanderbug

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#11

nice yaar...but somehow i can't garner much energy today...such action packed episode and it left me cold...didn't even feel excited or apprehensive for tomorrow...what yaar...maybe i need good nights sleep with tashaful dreams.

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Zubi

@misssmily

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#12

First when i read seema's name... i was reluctant...
but i must say what a wonderful OS.

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Sona

@sparikh

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#13

Nice one Liz!

Hopefully something similar will be in the show...& CVs, this time, won't drag too much! But knowing their track record, it doesn't look good.

-Sona

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Gauri

@sunshine21

Explorer

Posted: 14 years ago

#14

very well written and exquistely developed emotions....I think the CVs should take a page out of your book(literally) and put their creative caps on.... if theychurn out the gheesa peeta amnesia track, then i wouldn't blame MR for trying to leave, I'd run for the border too....

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bfunofbb123

@bfunofbb123

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#15

Oh liz tanx u wrote it beautifully & v.realistic i can almost c it happen i hope cvs do it this way & as u said get over with i love love what u write dear it is very soothing & positive so refreshing tank u tank u dear pls keep writing!😊

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prettywoman

@prettywoman

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#16

simplicity at its best here.. very realistic and what we all expect D to do.. hope the show also shows something similar.. i dont even want to see D in a conversation with Seema..u have shown the way he pardons her perfectly and i so wish this is what happens!

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mozart66

@mozart66

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#17

OMG Liz!!! It feels as if THAT IS EXACTLY how things are going to happen in the serial too!!! I felt as if I am reading LTL script in advance! Brilliant work indeed!!

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dhlgirl

@dhlgirl

Inactive

Posted: 14 years ago

#18

wow Liz - you have given us a new ray of hope! just wish it happens like the way you mention - that would be truly amazing

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Rose

@stranger2rose

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 14 years ago

#19

brilliant updt u always leave me speechless...very well written👍🏼

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Chinchinchoo

@Prinsesse.Suvi

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#20

Awesome OS, Liz👏

Its like you understand the characters so well, give us an insight to the emotions that we thought are actually missing on the show...(does that make sense?)

Loved the story...hope it happens in the same or similar way in the show itself

Great work!

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