SR FF DMG3 Phir Bhi Saath Hai Hum Part 53 Page 128 - Page 21

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Posted: 15 years ago
Awesome parts DJ !! I love, love, love your story and your writing style......you have me totally hooked !! Seriously, this story is amaaaazing !!

I won't be able to find a thing to criticize even if I wanted to. But haan, I'd love to see Shilpa happy again. And seriously, maybe you'll hate me for this, but I want Riddhima to suffer for everything's she did, she should know what she threw away so callously and how it feels to have your heart broken.

Completely, totally fabulous !! 😃 😃

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Posted: 15 years ago
@aditi . . . . .either of your wish will be granted but i really request you not to quit reading in between . . . . I fear all of you will soon quit have patience please and read riddhimas parts carefully you get some hints
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Posted: 15 years ago
HATS OFF TO YOU YAAR👏
DJ U R SUCH A TALENTED WRITER👏👍🏼
ALL THE BEST BUDDY😊


HAPPY NEW YEAR🤗

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Posted: 15 years ago

DJJJJJJ

Criticism!!!! there is nothing to criticize😃...it was awesome👏
Ok i dn't know why but i feel that Sid married Shilpa😕😕😕
Yaar update soon na...this suspence is eating my head🤓😆
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Posted: 15 years ago
DJJJJJJJ

Awesome update !!!
SidShi bond is indeed special
Loved it !!

And Ur asking of constructive criticism but I hav nothing to criticise.
Ur FF is too good & I am thoroughly enjoying it

Continue soon....

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Posted: 15 years ago
@ Moumi363

whether she is thinking of sid or not you will know if you read Riddhima's parts more carefully ..........

let me know your best guess by PM

@ mknageswari & nine2 & jasangel.........

sorry about Sid Shilpa fight but its required I had mentioned something in Sid thoughts about something happened ..........i am now disclosing the reasons now............

@ nine2 .........well aren't they like bro and sis????😊

@ indian_beauty & jasangel & Moumi363

Sid has done Shilpa's kanyadaan so he cannot marry her ...............kanyadaan jo karta hai woh pita ke audeh ka ho jaata hai if he is not one

Thank you to all of you Zeenia Monty jacobharry10011 Prithi vidyashree mknageswari sidma_love
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Posted: 15 years ago

Question hai shoot karo ............I will try to answer if I can without disclosing the key points.........😆

As for this part I sincerely request you to please read Riddhima's dialogues carefully Requesting you all not to rapid read her dialogues. .........Ab kya kare addat se majboor Riddhima se mujhe Pyar jo hai ..........correct Reshu 🤣

If you like the part please hit the like button This is only to understand that the part is not irritating for you to read.............Yes constructive criticism welcomed But pucca leave some comments at least like or not chappal jhoote mojdi ...........Shoe size bata doo kya 😆



Part 14

Riddhima's thoughts kept drifting ...........She could not keep hold on them. This was quite unusual as she had trained herself to focus on her priorities. Except for some spare moments where she was herself.

She started to think about the horrid nightmare. It's been two hours since she was up but for those two hours since she was up. Straining her memory she questioned herself What did I see........??? She was trying hard to recollect but could not. Had something bad happened? She was tried to place the finger but all that returned now was a reassuring feeling that all indeed is well nothing untoward has happened. In those past two hours her mind did not wander towards the nightmare. Finally she just concluded that it indeed was a just a strained mind which was working up and all is fine..........

She finished her coffee and got up to take a shower and get ready for the day. It was 8 am in the morning.

She got ready for the day and decided to go to the kitchen thinking she will some breakfast for everyone. As she walked into the kitchen she saw Padma was up and ready making breakfast.

Riddhima: Maa aap kyu kar rahi hai mein aane hi wali thi breakfast banana. Riddhima would make breakfast whenever she was at Gupta house.

Padmi: Nahi theek hai soocha ...........tum raat ko der se aayi ho toh mein bana deti hoon. Tum baito ho chukka hai ........Padma had noticed the coffee mug ..........Tum wapis coffee peene wali hoo kya.....

Riddhima: Haan maa ek aur cup ........par ko kaise pata mein coffee pee chuki hoon ........

Padma indicated to the cup. Riddhima smiled and sat down at the kitchen table.

Padma set the breakfast at the breakfast table for Riddhima and was going to call Shashank for breakfast. Suddenly she turned and looked at Riddhima .............tum kitne baaje uthi .........

Riddhima: 6 baake kyu............

Padma looked at Riddhima and said 'Nahi .........kuch nahi and walked out. Riddhima looked refreshed today. Padma was surprised she had not seen Riddhima like this in many years.

Riddhima started digging into the plate placed in front of her casually going through the paper. After calling Shashank Padma came back to make coffee.

Riddhima: Aaj wapis todi der ho jayegi ane mein..............

Padma gave a dissaponted sigh and just nodded. ...............

Just then the land line rang. Padma went to pick up the phone. While Riddhima picked up the coffee mug and let to go the bedroom. She wanted to avoid any further conversation pertaining to her stay.

She finished her coffee and picked her bag to leave for work. On her way out she dropped into the kitchen to place the coffee mug back. When Padma spoke 'Tumhara phone shayad switched off hai...........

Riddhima checked her phone but it was fine. Nahi maa ............shayad network nahi mil raha hoga.....

Padma: Hmmmmmmmm usne call kiya tha ............

Riddhima just nodded and turned to leave. She took a couple of steps and turned back. Maa usne kya kaha woh kaha hai .........woh kal Mumbai mein toh nahi tha nah..............

Padma now visibly irritated.............But controlled her temper. Nahi woh abhi bhi wahi hai ..........aur 2 din rukega wahi pe uske baad woh directly .........while saying this Padma turned and noticed that Riddhima was in her own thoughts was walking out of the kitchen.

Padma: Pata nahi aur kitne din aise chalega...............

Riddhima still in her own thoughts suddenly turned back 'Maa ........mein pandit se baat kar loongi ........ aur khane pe mera intezar mat karna Bye see you in the evening ............she waited for a moment and 'Love you maa Take care.'

She turned and left from the kitchen. She went out and hailed a cab to leave for the hospital.

Trying to occupy her mind by looking at the morning hustle bustle did not work. Her mind had again started posing the same questions.

He was not here yet I could sense him? But the feeling was definitely different though Definitely not like what I had felt when I last sensed him. It felt nice. Did I actually miss him? It not at all possible. I felt good How can I feel good ..... Or............ But I did sense him ............... No !!!!! Thats not possible or is it possible? .............No .............How can this be possible.........????? Absolutely not............ Nooo...........But I did sense .............is he here? Does he not want to me to know that he is here? Maybe ............. if that's the case so be it.................

Sweat started forming on her brow even in these chilly winter months and for the nth time the question again popped in her mind. Why did I still feel pleasant?


Link to the next part


https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/37636667

Edited by DJ.. - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
DJ

I know ur love 4 Ridz & even I loved her at some pt of time
But after what she did wid Sid I only pity her

Coming to d update
Awesome as usual !!
I ve read dis update twice & I THINK I hav an idea what ' priority ' Ridz is talking abt but reading ur previous updates I can't b sure abt my guess lolzz

Though I hate cliffhangers lol but I am thoroughly enjoying reading ur updates

Continue soon....
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Posted: 15 years ago
I hate cliffhangers but i love ur FF....Awesome update
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Posted: 15 years ago
DJ...
reshu is totally right........🤣
riddhima ke liye tumhara pyaar kabhi khatam hoga hi nahin........😆
Riddhima ko jitna tum samajh paaye ho utna shayad sid bhi samajh nahin paaya hoga........🤣
i read all line carefully......& i don't want to do any prediction.let's see what happen in next part.........😳
update soon.

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